2012考研英语作文范例(V2)

原则：尽量简单，用以前背过的词汇，没有必要的生词，就删掉

黄金句型：

The fact that the American girl wears traditional Chinese costume indicates that national culture can be accepted internationally.

It is well-known that …../There is no denying that …..

（一）第一段：引言/起始/淘金段，图画描述，3句

1、总体描述：人物/动物/事物＋动作＋环境，1句

As is vividly illustrated in the picture/ statistics,

The set of pictures vividly depicts that 多用进行时

2、挖掘细节词、串连成句：1－2句(细节与多越好)

独立主格：

Tools left behind and legs bound together, they are supporting each other with their firm hands.

补充说明：

The flower soon fades, with the petals cast about on the grounds.

3、文字说明/象征寓意：1句

The caption indicates that

It is obvious that

Undoubtedly, the spider web serves as a symbol of Internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each other.

（二）第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句

1、主题句：象征寓意，1句

Simple as it is, the drawing does reflect a thought-provoking phenomenon that (同位语从句) in China.

The impressive drawing has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.

It is apparent that the cartoonist aims at reminding us of the importance of cooperation in our daily life.

2、论证：3--4句

1）因果论证

With the rapid social and economic development, the number of the young who ……sharply decreases/increases.

With the rapid development of market economy system, ……

If we let this situation go as it is, we don’t know where the aged will be in the future.

2）举例论证

As a college student, I get on line every day to discuss news with other people on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses, to chat freely through MSN Messenger with my friends.

作为一名大学生，我每天上网与他人在BBS上讨论新闻，通过注册网络课程来学习英语，借助MSN和我的朋友们免费聊天。

As an illustration of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people respond to the call to help the victims of the deadly earthquake in Sichuan Province. Although their incomes are still low by international standards, people all over the country do not hesitate to contribute to their needy fellow partners.

举一个例子证明爱心的力量，我们应该记得中国人民如何响应号召去支援四川地震中的受难者。尽管他们的收入按照国际标准衡量还是处于低水平，但是全国人民毫不犹豫捐款给那些

受难的同胞们。

Take basketball hero Yao Ming for an example, he can slam the dunk smartly because all his teammates contribute more or less to his outstanding performance. Likewise, the successful launching of Chang’e No.1 lunar probe should be attributed to the Chinese scientists’ join t efforts instead of individual accomplishment.

Take track hero Liu Xiang for an example, he can come back to the field and run faster because his spirit contributes to his outstanding performance. Likewise, the successful host of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games should be attributed to the Chinese joint efforts instead of individual accomplishment.

以篮球英雄姚明为例，他能够潇洒地扣篮，是因为他的队友或多或少成就了他杰出的表现。同样，嫦娥一号探月卫星的成功发射要归功于中国科学家们的集体努力，而不是个人成就。Take us for example; the entrance exam for graduate students even seems to be a horrible monster before us. Some people give up, some persist. So, with confidence and the right assessment of the difficulties, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems.

以我们自己为例，研究生入学考试似乎是我们面前的一个可怕的怪物。有些人放弃了，而有些人则坚持了下来。因此，拥有信心和对困难的正确估计，并且竭尽全力，我们就将解决所有的问题。

3）联系现实

The American girl represents a great many foreigners（定语从句）.

The traditional Chinese costume symbolizes Chinese culture（定语从句）.

The fact that the American girl wears traditional Chinese costume indicates that national culture can be accepted internationally.

Undoubtedly, the spider web serves as a symbol of Internet, both connecting people and isolating them from each other.

The delicate flower is naturally associated with young people, to be specific, the only children in our current society; the greenhouse represents parents’doting care and abundant material supplies that can protect the children from the storms, or the harsh reality.

4）正反论证

On the contrary, while, however/On the one hand, on the other hand

3、小结：1句，概括论证，总结本段

（三）第三段：结论段，建议措施，4句

1、结论句：1句

2、针对双方提建议：2句

3、包装结尾、展望未来：1句

Accordingly, it is essential for us to gain positive implications from these impressive cartoons. On the one hand, we can frequently use them to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents/authorities should be sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems. Only by undergoing more challenges and toils in trouble can young people cultivate strong personality and ability, and only in this way can they become winners in this competitive world.

It is my view that

名言：

Just as an old saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.”

Just as an old saying goes, “God only helps those who help themselves.”（天助自助者/自助者

天助之！）

Rome was not built in a day.冰冻三尺非一日之寒。

Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成。

关联词：

顺序：1. to beginning with, moreover, last but not least

2. Firstly, in addition

转折：On the contrary, while, however

On the one hand, on the other hand

原因:For one thing, for another

书信常用语

I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a girl who has just started schooling

I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.

书信格式：

（一）称呼

1、题目无人名：Dear Sir or Madam,

2、题目有人名：Dear＋人名,

（二）正文：3段、7句、100－120词、3－5关联词、3－5从句

1、第一段：1－2句

1）自我介绍(可不写)

（1）I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time.

2）写作目的：（2句，总分）

（1）道歉：I’m writing to apologize for having forgotten to return the CD to

you when I left Canada.

（2）I am writing to inform you that I wish to request if you could help me

find a potential beneficiary of the Project Hope.

3）表示感谢（可不写）

I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.

2、第二段：3-6句（总分-看水平了，主动被动结合，关联词）

1）改写提纲一：1句

2）改写提纲二：1句

3）改写提纲三：1句

3、第三段

1）表示感谢（私人建议信除外）

I really wish to have a more comfortable library. Thank you for your time and consideration.

I really hope that you will accept my sincere apology. (hope sb to do ×)

2）期待回信(可不写)

（1）Your prompt attention to my inquiry/suggestions would be highly appreciated.

（三）落款（左对齐）

1、结尾客套：Yours sincerely,

2、签名：Li Ming