2017初三二模作文模板汇编

2016-2017 学年初三二模写作

文体区县二模写作话题

长宁 A story about______ 一个关于??的故事记叙文

徐汇 A party for /to _______

黄浦??是好习惯

虹口我的生活乐趣

普陀Our last class meeting in junior high school

奉贤______ make me a better person 议论文崇明I am an independent boy (girl)

静安______,a new way of life!

松江Something I want to do for my family

嘉定I like reading English ______

浦东I enjoy (reading, traveling, doing sports...)

杨浦Things we can do make our city a better place

金山I am special

应用文假设你是小明（ Xiao Ming ），是美国中学生 Tony 的闵行笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给 Tony 写一封回信，

回答他的问题，介绍上海良好的公共交通服务。

写作一般联系学生生活实际，由上图可知，考试作文偏向议论文，因此本文将着

重分析静安、虹口、黄浦、浦东、奉贤这 5 个区的作文范例，并罗列出学生写作可

以直接用的开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意。

【静安区】

94.Write at least 60words about the topic “ ______,anew way of life!”(以请“ ______，一种崭新的生活方式”为题，从以下图片中选择其中一张图片，举例表

述你的思考和理由，写一篇不少于 60 字的短文，标点符号不占格）

Weixin

Mobike

Points for reference:

1.Which way do you choose to write about ?

2.Why do you think it a new way of life?

3.Could you give some suggestions in order to make better use of it?

【参考范文】

As we all know, we are enjoying the convenience of our new ways of life, including mobike . We can easily find a public bike everywhere in Shanghai now and we never worry about where to park it. Riding a bicycle does good to our health and the environment as well. However, We should use a public bike properly. We can't use it if we're younger than 12.We should take good care of it instead of damaging it. We should park it in a parking spot after using it.

Public bikes bring us a lot of advantages, so we should protect them so that

they can serve us longer.

【虹口区】

94.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“My joy of living （”以“我

的生活乐趣”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

生活有艰辛，也有乐趣，你的生活乐趣是什么？你为何觉得这是你的乐趣所在？

你是怎么想的？怎么做的？

【参考范文】

There is no doubt that we all have to face difficulties and stress in life, so we should develop a way of joy in our daily life. In my opinion, my joy of life is to listen to light music. Whenever I am stuck in trouble or feel depressed, I will spare myself some time to listen to light music because it can help me adjust myself and make me

calm down again. I think only in this way can I deal with the problems I’m faced with

better or treat other people more properly.

Above all, that ’ s my joy of livingIthinkand that you can have a try next time. I

hope you will get benefit from it.

【黄浦区】

94. In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“?is a good（以“??habit是好”.

习惯”为题，写一篇 60-120 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

一个好的习惯会让我们终身受益。什么是好习惯？请分享你的一个好习惯，说

说你是怎么养成的？它给你带来哪些好处。请结合生活实际，谈谈你的体验或

想法。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予

评分。）

【参考范文】

Saving Money Is a Good Habit

Speaking of good habits, saving money is undoubtedly one of themInstead. of

spending tomorrow ’ s money, I prefer to save money. In order to learn to cut down unnecessary cost, I will think twice before spending money on those clothes that may

not suit myself, which benefits me a lot. First of all, the sense of saving money helps

me arrange my daily life properly. What ’ s more, saving money, to a certain extent, means I can handle emergency quickly.In addition, saving money is not only a

traditional virtue but a useful strategy in life. Just as the old saying, a penny saved is

a penny earned, so saving money makes me feel safe about tomorrow.

【浦东】

94.Write at least 60 words about the topic “ Ienjoy (reading, traveling, doing sports...)”

请以“我喜欢做??”为题目，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文。要求内容贴切，

意思连贯。

请在答题纸上补充完整题目

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）

Use the following as your reference:

＞What do you enjoy doing?

＞Why do you enjoy doing it?

＞What can you get/learn from it?

【参考范文】

I enjoy playing basketball

Hobbies are important for our lives. Some enjoy reading, others enjoy travelling, collection, and so on.

I enjoy playing basketball, a competitive and exciting ball game. When playing basketball, I need to keep running and jumping, so it consumes a lot of energy, and

does good to my heart and lungs. Besides, I need to work well with other team

players in order to win the game. In this way I ’ ve learnthow to cooperate with

others and how to play by the rules. In a word, playing basketball, as an important

part of my life, helps me become stronger both physically and mentally.

【奉贤区】

94. Writing at least 60 words on the topic“ ______ make me a better person”(以“ _____成就更好的自己”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占

格)

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）

【参考范文】

Understanding other people makes me a better person

As is known to all, everyone is a special unity that has his own mind and story.

When facing the similar circumstances, they may make different choices. Every

decision we make and every action we do make us be a different person from others.

So it is very important to understand others especially when we get along with other

people.

There are several reasons. First, understanding can avoid quarrels among people.

If we put ourselves in other people shoes,’ we can understand others better, which can avoid misunderstandings that may break other people ’hearts. Second,

understanding is also a self-cultivation. Everyone has their own difficulties, which means that we can’ t impose our minds on other people.

I always remind myself of understanding others and from what we have

discussed above, I think that understanding other people makes me a better person.

分析：

【静安区】

As we all know, we are enjoying the convenience of our new ways of life,

including mobike.

分析：这句话点题概括了我们的现状，引出话题

Public bikes bring us a lot of advantages, so we should protect them so that they

can serve us longer.

分析：这句话点题总结了自行车的好处，比较级的运用恰到好处。比较级其实每

篇文章都可以运用，去描述现在和过去的对比。

【虹口区】

There is no doubt that we all have to face difficulties and stress in life, so we

should develop a way of joy in our daily life. In my opinion.

分析：这句话概括了我们都会遇到困难，引出我的观点

Above all, that’ s my joy of living and I think that you can have a try next time. I hope you will get benefit from it.

分析：这句话总结并展望未来

【黄浦区】

Speaking of good habits, saving money is undoubtedly one of them.

分析：这句话点题好习惯，引出观点

Just as the old saying, a penny saved is a penny earned, so saving money makes

me feel safe about tomorrow.

分析：这句话用谚语进行总结

【浦东】

Hobbies are important for our lives. Some enjoy reading, others enjoy travelling, collection, and so on.

分析：这句话点题爱好的重要性

In a word, playing basketball, as an important part of my life, helps me become

stronger both physically and mentally.

分析：这句话总结概括我的爱好：打篮球

【奉贤区】

As is known to all, everyone is a special unity that has his own mind and story.

分析：这句话一句话点题

I always remind myself of understanding others and from what we have discussed

above, I think that understanding other people makes me a better person.

分析：这句话总结

通过上面节选出来的开头结尾可知，好的开头结尾都有共性。

开头总的概括一下文章要写的内容，结尾进行总结，切记不要一开头就写内容。

就像笔一样，最上面是笔套，最末尾有笔塞，这样才完美。其实这些开头我们稍

微将里面的关键词变动一下就可以使用，我们可以不用将范文全部背诵下来，只需要将它的开头结尾多读两遍，自然而然就会直接运用了。同学们，以后不妨将

范文中的开头结尾摘抄下来哦！

最后：

注意事项之复查：

名词检查单复数

动词检查时态、语态、主谓一致

形容词、副词检查比较级和最高级

连词检查逻辑

代词检查人称、数、格

介词检查固定搭配和习惯用法