四种常见的十句作文模式及其句型

四种常见的十句作文模式及其句型

十句作文法是由有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高成绩。为此有必要向考生加以介绍，目的是使一些对作文没有把握的考生找到一条可行的解决办法。

需要指出的是所谓十句作文并非一定10句，从很多考生的高分(200词以下)来分析，句子数量在8句至12句(依句子长短和结构不同而不同)。如以每个句子平均10—15个单词计算，便能用8—12个句子完成一篇要求120—150字的作文。

其基本模式为：

┌─主题句句 1

第一段─┤

开头└─扩展句句 2

┌─主题句句 1

第一段─┤

正文├─扩展句句 2

├─扩展句句 3

├─扩展句句 4

├─扩展句句 5

├─扩展句句 6

├─扩展句句7

├─扩展句句8

└─扩展句句9

第三段──结尾句句10

结尾

第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，必须提出，通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，须进一步说明和支持主题句。或是将关系倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。

第二段为正文，共七句。第一句(句3)为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关和一致。第二句至第七句(句4一句7)为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。

第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句，它将前面内容总结为一结果，表明自己的论点。

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这个模式主要用于：题目是给出一个图表，或提出一种社会现象，要求说明解释这个图表或现象。其结构如下：

S1 Topic ： S2 Problem ： S3 Thesis ： S4 Cause I ： S5 Details ： S6 Cause II ： S7 Details ： S8 Cause III ： S9 Details ： S10 Conclusion ：

[句型]

S1

. S2

in 1997 the

of

S3 There are for this .

S4

点题，即概括所要求评论的问题或现象。 具体(如用数据)描写这个问题或现象。 论点句，即对这一问题或现象的基本看法。 造成这一问题或现象的第一个原因。 具体说明第一个原因。 造成这一问题或现象的第二个原因。 具体说明第二个原因。 造成这一问题或现象的第三个原因。 具体说明第三个原因。 结尾。

a a an in

According to has compared with .

S5 S7 S8

Perhaps the

is…

S9

S10 From what has been discussed above, we may safely/reasonably

the conclusion that…

Rising Divorce Rates in China

In recent years China has experienced a dramatic increase in the divorce rate.

According to the chart, during the last decade, the divorce rate in big cities has increased as much as it had in the previous thirty years.

The upward trend in divorce seems to be a mirror of some important changes in Chinese society. First, legal changes have simplified divorce procedures, and removed barriers to divorce. More and more people, both young and old, are now benefiting from, even taking advantage of the new law which for the first time in history allows a couple to get divorced merely for love's sake. Second, there has been a significant change in social attitude towards the divorced persons. The act of divorce is no longer considered a social stigma. Finally, the change in personal economic activities also facilitates divorce. The unprecedented social mobility in the last l0 years both within the country and across the land has placed severe strains on married couples, not only in terms of geographic separation, but also psychological change.

Whatever changes leading to the rise in divorce rates, the fact and the statistics alone reflect the change in people's traditional view of marriage and family life.

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The World is Getting Smaller and Smaller

(1) Most of us may have such experiences: when you go to some place far away from the city where you live and think you know nobody there, you are surprised to find that you run into one of your old classmates on the streets. (2) Perhaps both of you would cry out, "What a small world!"

(3) Why is there a feeling that the world is getting smaller and smaller? (4) First, faster and safer means of transport have greatly reduced distance. (5) In the past it took people two months to cross the Pacific Ocean, but now an air journey from Shanghai to New Y ork City takes only twenty hours. (6) Second, the advance in communications technology makes it possible for us to know everything happening in the world without leaving our homes. (7) Just pick up your telephone or press the keys of your computer, you can talk to anyone within a few seconds. (8) Finally, political and business activities have brought people into frequent contact with each other. (9) For example, an American congressman talks with the Japanese Prime minister in the morning, attends a conference in Australia in the afternoon, and appears in a dinner party in Shanghai at night.

(10) Obviously, the more advanced technology and our society, the smaller the world will be.

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