浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练读后续写

写作提升练(四) 读后续写

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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

(2017·11浙江)

A Vacation with My Mother

I had an i nteresting was filled with surprise and amusements,all because of my mother—

loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.

My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our knew if we’d ever see them againFinally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded

suitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get t he purse and travel er’s checks Mom had forgotten.

David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨) while I go,and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey,where are the kids” “What! Oh,Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a stran ge city,but we wer en’t about to take any chances.

On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent thereDavid and I became our great relief,Dad turned down the never could understand our objections(反对).If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep,Mom would have been thinks everyone in the wor ld as as nice as she finally found a vacancy in the next town.

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.?

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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.?

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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Jack,a clerk at the local bank,was wandering alone on the was a cold,silent winter mind was on his wife Linda,who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed,waiting for more money for her had sold everything he had,and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the pople and banks he the real world is large amount of money was still Jack,it would mean a great deal of suffering to se e his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left,”Jack said to he went to the bank,his workplace, several days,he observed the bank and planned a next day,he went to work as seemed normal:he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work,instead of the small one he always 5:00 pm,the bank closed,and the clerks and the guards had all gone ,at that moment,Jack was in the bathroom,and the guards didn’t notice him,of the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and e verything turned dark,Jack came out from the first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his n ew was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 a special key and some other tools,he then easily opened the doors of the bank’s security system wasn’t very good,which allowed Jack to take a lot of minutes later,Jack left the bank w ith a heavy bag filled with money.?

注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.?

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写作提升练(四)读后续写

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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with then we were half an hour away from the hotel,where the tent was left recommended buying a new one,while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it,saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly,so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally,we got back the tent and hit the road Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded,it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.

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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the day,towards evening,we found a great camping site at the foot of a high and I helped Dad put up the tent,and Mom was busy preparing the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains,the tent was set up and the meal was around the camp fire,we talked and time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s fa ce.

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After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to police arrived at the bank very quickly,only to find no one next day was a really special day for the town,which was filled with newspapers and TV reporters covering the strange clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case,of course,including police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible,even though no clues had been found yet.?

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But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his last,with enough money for her operation,Jack’s wife was ,Jack felt guilty about the manager of the could not forget what he had done to the old guilt deepened as time went ,he turned himself into the police and accepted his punishment.