2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(十)现代技术通讯

2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（十）现代技术通讯

一．与专题相关的话题项目

通讯 (Communication) 、科普知识与现代技术（Popular science and modern technology）

二．与专题相关的知识准备

1. 相关单元：7BU6 Electricity, 8AU1 Encyclopedias, 8AU2 Numbers, 8AU3 Computers,

8AU4 Inventions, 8AU7 Memory, 8BU7 The unknown world

2. 相关词汇：

高频词：rule, anyone, reply, foolish, connect, moment, cooker, fridge, lock, test, tidy, touch, human, dinosaur, inventor, musician, scientist, born, countryside, intelligence, ability, perhaps, invention, notebook, include, even, however, suddenly, nobody, win, dollar, number, check, son, chess, wise, promise, prize, amount, rest, gold, instead, realize, copy, traffic, accident, order, type, brain, control, expensive, tiny, depend, speed, railway, company, price, sell, popular, funny, telephone, comfortable, invent, since, lose, improve, mind, silly, letter, worth, spell, unless, trouble, manager, unknown, receive, hill, loud, quiet, round, wonder, refuse, knife, pleased

高频短语：in a way, switch off, tidy up, in the countryside, human being, die out, find out, go for a walk, a long time ago, and so on, copy down, work as, depend on, in addition, look forward to, since then, keep in touch with, in the daytime, keep… off, at the same time, instead of, take out, keep quiet, because of, as soon as possible, agree with, disagree with

拓展词汇：electricity, conversation, identify, wire, cable, battery, bulb, Italian, artistic, fossil, compare, operate, total, create, particle, mobile phone, special, memory, corner, mention, mile, step, similar, wallet, damage, frightened, terrible, explain, washing machine, a packet of, be connected to, power station, air conditioner, challenge …to…, be unaware of, grand total, pour out,

3. 经典句型：a. It is + adj. + for sb. +to do/ It is+ adj. + that 从句

b. Sb. spend time on sth./ in doing sth./ It takes sb. + time+ to do.

c. One advantage is that …. Another advantage is that ….

d. On one hand, … On the other hand,

e. I think/believe that…

二、经典例题：

随着互联网的发展，越来越多的学生开始使用网络。最近，你的学校进行了一个关于中学生是否应该上网的调查，大都数同学赞成上网，少部分同学反对上网，请根据以下表格内容，把同学们的讨论结果整理出来，并就如何正确使用网络提出你自己的观点，写成一篇80字左右的短文。(注意：文章的开头已给出)

With the development of the Internet, it has become more and more common among the students. Should students use the Internet? Recently, our school did a survey on it. According to the survey, 60 percent of the students agree to use the Internet because…

解题思路：

1.审题：

a. 本文共有 6 个要点

b. 时态主要采用一般现在时

c. 人称是 _we/The Internet_

2.可能用到的短语和句型be useful to, change people’s life, communicate with, search information, share information, a waste of time, be harmful to, in one’s opinion

a. It is + adj. + for s

b. +to do/ It is+ adj. + that 从句

b. Sb. spend time on sth./ in doing sth./ It takes sb. + time+ to do.

c. One advantage is that …. Another advantage is that ….

d. On one hand, … On the other hand,

3.成文：

With the development of the Internet, it has become more and more common among the students. Should students use the Internet? Recently, our school did a survey on it. According to the survey, 60 percent of the students agree to use the Internet because the Internet is very useful and it change people life. It’s also more confident for us to communicate with each other and we can share information with ours friends. There is a lot of information on it, so when we don’t understand sth. We may find the explain on it. But 40 percent of the students against. They think play computer games is harmful for teenagers and waste a lot of time and money. Although Internet has some problems, I think it is good for us. If we use the Internet correct, we will learn a lot.

点评：

整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。部分句子的结构不够完整，缺发主语或谓语，词类误用的现象比较明显，表达也过于中式，略显生硬。此外，

应适当使用连接词，是文章过渡更自然。

4. 分项分档评分表

5. 检查思路：

完成作文自查表：

1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。

2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。

6.参考例文：

With the development of the Internet, it has become more and more common among the students. Should students use the Internet? Recently, our school did a survey on it. According to the survey, 60 percent of the students agree to use the Internet because it is very useful and it has people’s life. One advantage is that it is more convenient for people to communicate with each other. The other advantage is that we can search a lot of information on the Internet and share it with our friends in real time. The Internet helps make our life easier, but it can also be dangerous. 40 percent of the students think that it is a waste of time and money to surf the net. Some students spend too much time on the net playing games. It’s really harmful to teenagers.

In my opinion, the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages, we should make good use of it, but at the same time, we should also learn to control ourselves when we use it.

三．练习：

随着科技的发展，人们会选择不同的方式去和朋友沟通。过去，很多人会相互写信，后来，有了电话，而现在，人们会使用网络进行沟通，如QQ、博客或者微信，请根据下表的提示，比较一下这几种沟通方式的异同，80字左右，文章的开头已给出：

With the development of the technology, people have more and more ways to communicate with each other. …

解题思路：

1. 审题：

d. 本文共有个要点

e. 时态主要采用

f. 人称是_________

2. 可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）

_________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

3. 可能用到的句型

_________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________

4. 成文：

_________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________

检查思路：

完成作文自查表：

1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打√。

2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。

参考例文：

With the development of the technology, people have more and more ways to communicate with each other. In the past, people had no other ways but writing letters. It often takes a long time to get a letter from a friend. But it is a good way to practise writing. For a long time, people prefer to make phone calls to their friends because you can hear the voice. However, it will cost you a lot of money. Nowadays, more and more people choose to use the Internet to communicate, such as QQ and blog. They are much faster than writing letters and much cheaper than making phone calls. But some people don’t like using blog, because it is not always safe to use the Internet. Sometimes your personal information will be easily got by strangers and you may be in trouble.