中考作文之上海中考英语作文范文
上海中考英语作文范文
【篇一：上海近几年中考英语作文范文】
09上海中考英语作文题i want do sth for my school
i want to make school clean. you may think it is very simple. but i dont think so. our teacher said, school is your home, you should keep it clean.but i have never done anything to make school clean. for example, i have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. i also threw the rubbish on the ground. so i want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. during this summer holiday, i will go to school to make school clean. of course, i will do it with my classmates. we will make school clean every weekends next term as well. now, do you think it is simple?
10年上海中考英语作文im proud of myself
i am a boy of less confidence.i always hate running.but as we all know,the students of grade nine have to take part in the sports exam.at that moment,i just wanted to give up.but my parents encouraged me:impossible is nothing,you could challenge yourself!so with the encouragement of them,i tried my best to run and insisted on running.when i got to the finishing line,i felt proud of myself,though i didnt get the good mark,i knew,i won.i created a miracle for myself and i was so proud of myself!
11年上海中考英语作文i am a member of ...
in this world , every family has a mother.a father.a daughter or a son.for plenty of people ,families are very important .when you are very said ,you can found one or two persons to make you feel happiness ,this is you family .
i am very gold to become my family member,beacuse i have a pertty good parent and a fairly younger brother . when i come back,i always feel freedom and relaxed.my mother is a kind cook ,she has lots of experience in cooking ,so my brother and i are heathly.
as a daughter,l shouldnt make my parents worry .as a sister ,l should look after my brother .l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family.
12年上海中考英语作文 a letter to
knowing that you care too much about the result, i am quite worried. actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. there are some effective ways to calm down. above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful. besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports. finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you. as is said by steve jobs, “the journey is the reward.” i am sure you will get through this situation.
【篇二：上海初三中考英语作文范文】
2010上海初三
中考英语作文范文（一）
林宏的笔友莉莉今年夏天将来沪旅游。林宏去信表示欢迎，并准备
去机场迎接。
还告诉她上海有不少值得游玩的地方，他将陪同参观旅游。（用书
信体写）
june 7, 2010
dear lily,
i’m delighted to learn that you will be coming to shanghai during the
summer holidays. i will meet you at the airport and be your guide during
your stay.
i believe there’s a lot for you to see in shanghai. yu garden
and the jade
buddhist temple will show you traces of our ancient architecture and
culture. the bund — the glory of modern shanghai, — has
been an
attraction throughout the 20th century. modern constructions are also
very popular with tourists. you will be impressed by the grand theatre,
where world-famous musical concerts are often held. you really shouldn’
t miss the symbol of shanghai—the oriental pearl tv tower. the bird’s
eye view of the whole city from there is really wonderful.
excited? i am sure you will have a good time in shanghai.
i can’t wait to see you!
yours,
lin hon
2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（二）
国际青年艺术节（the international youth arts festival）即将举行。作为
一名志愿者，谈谈你的打算。
the international youth festival will be held in shanghai soon and i am
honoured to be a volunteer.
as a volunteer, it is my duty to do my best for the international youth
festival. first, i’ll help to organize the festival. for example, i
can send
out leaflets and put up posters in the streets. i can offer my suggestions
to the festival organization committee. second, i have a good command
of foreign languages. i can speak english and japanese. therefore i am
capable of being a guide and translator for the visitors. i’d like to answer
their questions to help them solve problems so that they can have a
good time during their stay in shanghai.
also, i can benefit from the work as it can eich my social experience
and broaden my horizons.
i hope the international youth arts festival will be a great success and
make a deep impression on the foreign visitors who attend.
2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（三）
how to make wise use of the computer
with the rapid development /fast growth of modern science
/new
technology, the computer has played a more and more important role in
our society. meanwhile, how to make wise use of the computer is also
very important.
first, i will learn what is happening / have access to immediate international events through the internet to widen my knowledge. what’
s more, i can depend on the computer to write my blog and down load
pop music.
with the help of the computer, i find my life interesting and fascinating.
2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（四）
有些学生喜欢报刊阅读，有些学生喜欢电脑了解新闻信息，我的选择。
nearly one-third of the students still prefer the traditional reading
pattern---newspaper while the rest have turned to the computer.
i take the newspaper. first, compared with the headline reading on the
net, newspaper cove rs a wider range. what’s more, newspaper reading
does less harm to eyes than on-line reading because the computer
screen flashes from time to time. finally, we can take the newspaper to
read wherever there is no electricity or no web signal.
so, i have developed the habit of reading newspaper to learn what is
happening all over the world.
2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（五）
以假期去做一名志愿者服务为内容，字数不少于60字。
as a junior three student, i think i should not only study hard, but also
serve the society well if i am given a chance. the end of the junior school
life will provide me with a good chance to work as a volunteer in the
coming summer holiday.
what i most want to do is to take care of the old living alone without
relatives， i can read newspapers and interesting stories to them, help
them wash the clothes, and cook for them. besides, i will try my best to
collect the rubbish in my neighbourhood to make the surroundings clean
and beautiful. finally, i can follow the adult volunteers to advise those
who smoke in public not to smoke.
i believe i will have interesting experience as a volunteer.
2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（六）
以“我最难忘的一课“为题，不少于60字
last summer i went to u.s.a to spend three weeks study with the local
students, where i learned a lot of new things and i will never forget the
astrology class.
that morning we went to the local space museum to have my first lesson
abroad. during the class, we had a discussion on whether we should
carry out the space project. with the advanced teaching materials and
the experienced professor, we had a general idea of our space success
and failure as well. i first realized how serious the population explosion
and the pollution was. what’s more, i learned the earth was faced with
more difficulties than ever before.
this class was not only my first class abroad but also helped me learn
how important space exploration was to us.
2011上海初三中考英语作文范文（七）
化名李明向李老师写一个请假条，因淋雨感冒发烧下周不能参加学校的春游。时
间为4月6日
april 6,2011
dear mr. li, i’m very sorry that i can’t follow the class to go on
a trip next week. i
have to ask for a sick leave because i was caught in the heavy rain on my
way back home yesterday. when i felt uncomfortable, my mother took
me to the hospital. the doctor there took my temperature and told me i
got a high fever. so the doctor asked me to have a good rest at home
and have some medicine.
i hope my classmates will have a good time while travelling. what a pity i
can’t go with you.
yours truly,
li ming
2012上海初三中考英语作文范文
【篇三：2014上海中考英语作文范文和点评】
中考作文点评
今年的中考英语作文题是“明年此时”(this time next year )，黄浦区初中英语教研员周加有分析，这道题比较抽象，给予了考生一定的
想象空间，可以说是在“意料之外，又在情理之中”。周加有表示，
前几年的作文题比较多的是从学生的角度对某些事物谈感受，或者
对一些事情进行评论，比较容易套题。但今年的这道题不是很具体，加上时态是将来式，因此对学生来说不太容易套题，要写好必须有
自己的想法，所以有一定难度。不过，今年的这道作文题依然延续
前几年的特点——以“我”为出发点，谈的还是学生自己，这点方便
了学生有话可说、有情可抒。 2014年中考英语作文：
题目：this time next year
this time next year i will be enjoying my senior school life
1.which i have expected for a long time. the life then will be
2.as colorful as flowers.i will take an active part in all kinds of activities in hi gh school
3.because the saying goes ”all work and no play makes jack a dull boy”. in addition, making friends
4.will be on top of the list since a real friendship
5.is of great importance to me. as for me, i will be definitely
6.turning a new
leaf of my fut ure life this time next year, and i’m really looking forward to it. ? 精彩亮点分析：
亮点一：定语从句修饰对高中生活的向往
亮点二：用as...as的比较级结构，抓人眼球
亮点三：用到了idiom，而且用的极为恰当
亮点四： on top of the list永远放在第一位
亮点五：be of great importance 名词结构更高端
亮点六： turn a new leaf of my future life 翻开未来生活的新篇章 ? 写作小tip：
今年中考是篇看似记叙却要叙中带议的文章。全文的时态应全部运
用一般将来时，对未来生活进行展望。全文应表达积极阳光的信念。 2014年上海中考英语范文1 this time next year
its exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like.
at this time next year, i will be a senior high student, and i will make a lot of new friends. i hope to be more independent so
that perhaps i will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken english. also i will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when i am alone.
life will be totally different, but im really looking forward to it.【解析】
这篇作文需要涉及三个方面：变化、期望和自己的作为，因此文章
中需要涵盖着三点。
第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化，第二句是期望及第一个作为，
紧接其后的是第二个作为，而最后表达出了作者对变化的想法及态度。
2014年上海中考英语范文2
this time next year
life is changeable, and thats why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope.
perhaps i will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in english. basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. then, i will benefit from reading
english books. what is more, going abroad is of great use in improving my oral english. only in this way can i progress in english endlessly.
make plans and go for what i want. and i believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.
(110 words)
文章的标题告诉我们文章内容应该是与未来的生活相关的，生活在变化，一年后我将进入高中，但是学习还在继续，所以我仍有自己的目标。文章主要立足于两点，我对未来的计划或者期待，以及我要如何去实现。作为一名英语学习者，我会从三点去提高自己的英语。英语学习是一个持续的过程，只有不断努力才会有收获
2017上海中考英语写作模板(附常考短语句型)
) be glad to do sth. 很高兴做 2017 上海中考英语写作模板（附常考短语句型） be back/in/out 回来 / 在家 / 外出 be at home/work 在家 / 上班 be good at 擅长 be careful of 当心，注意，仔细 be covered with 被??覆盖 be ready for 为??作好准备 be surprised (at ) 对??感到惊讶 be interested in 对??感兴趣 be born 出生 ) be on 在进行，在上演， (灯)亮着 ) be able to do sth. 能够做?? )be afraid of ( to do sth. that ?) 害怕(做) ) be angry with sb. 生(某人)的气 )be pleased ( with ) 对??感到高兴(满意) ) be famous for 因??而著名 )be strict in ( with ) 对事(人)严格要求 ) be from 来自?? ) be hungry/thirsty/tired 饿了 / 渴了 / 累了 ) be worried 担心 )be ( well ) worth doing (非常)值得被?? ) be covered with 被??覆盖?? ) be in ( great ) need of (很)需要 ) be in trouble 处于困境中 1) 2) 3) 4) 5) 6) 7) 8) 9) 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24
中考作文之2013上海中考英语作文
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上海中考英语作文范文3
COMPOSITION 1 I Would Like to Be a Polite Person I am pretty sure that I would like to be a polite person throughout my life. I am brought up in a family whose members are polite to each other. My parents share the same quality with me. I am taught never to be rude to anyone else even if he behaves badly enough. I am aware that a polite person should have an air of tolerance. My mother always says, “Ignore the ill-mannered people because they do not know what they are doing. Be polite to those who deserve your respect.” I also hold many other good manners to be a polite person，such as being friendly and helpful to others, keeping graceful postures all the time, trying to be understanding, talking in a modest way and so on. All in all, my family’s motto, never stop being polite, will stay with me forever. (146) COMPOSITION 2 I Would Like to Be a Soldier My dream changes all the time. But the other day, I happened to hear an English song named Tell Me Why, which tells something about poor kids whose country is in war. At that moment, I made up my mind that I would like to be a soldier in the future. If I become a soldier, I can fight for people’s freedom. I can help those who suffer a lot in war, especially the innocent kids, who are supposed to sit in class studying, just like the ones living in the peaceful world. I will do whatever I can to realize my dream. (103) COMPOSITION 3 I Would Like to Be a Singer The other day, I was on my computer going on You Tube to listen to music. I happened to find out that one song had almost five hundred million views. At that moment, I decided that I would like to be a lead singer in the future. I think it would be awesome seeing tons of fans wearing a shirt with my face right in the center. How great it is to hear my song played on the radio that billions of people will listen to! What a delightful sense to have my face appear on the cover of a magazine! Then I can afford to tour the world purchasing expensive and nice clothes. Maybe I will be rich enough to buy a cruise ship. All in all, being a rich and famous lead singer is my dream. I really hope it will come true someday. (146) COMPOSITION 4 On Helping with Family Chores Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they do not have time to help their parents with the housework. I do not think it is true which make them appear to be all excuses. In my opinion, doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility. We cannot depend on others all our life. Doing housework can make us independent. Thus we can take better care of ourselves when growing up. Besides, sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents. What’s more, I am aware that trying to do some housework, among which hard work can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise, can keep us healthy and strong. On weekdays, I often clean my bedroom every morning and wash dishes after supper. At weekends, washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty. Also I offer to carry heavy bags from the supermarket. Just as the saying goes, “One cannot make a big success without being self-reliant.” Therefore, I hold the opinion that it is necessary for students to share the housework. (194)
最新2018上海中考英语作文范文预测
最新2018上海中考英语作文范文预测 2018上海中考英语作文篇1 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 如何学好英语 How to learn English well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions。 First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible.
Don't be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you'll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It's good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries。 In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well。 2018上海中考英语作文篇2 近年来我国的发展世人瞩目，中国的传统文化正越来越受到各国朋友的关注。请根据提示，以"The Spring Festival"为题写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍我国的春节。 要求：1、字迹工整，规范; 2、80词左右; 3、根据所给要点及参考词汇，可适当发挥。
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2015 年上海初三一模英语作文题目及范文精选 宝山区2014-2015 学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷 初三英语 ”in your class. Recently there has been a discussion about the topic “ Water Is Precious Please write at Host 60 words about the topic "Water Is Precious" to express your point of view,( 请以 “水是珍贵的”写一篇至少 60 词的作文，标点符号不占格） ( 你的作文内容须包含以下几点) 1） Why is water very important in our life? 2） What are the causes of the water shortage? 3） How can we protect our precious water resources? 范文（ 1） Water is precious Undoubtedly , no man can live without water. When we begin the new day, we need water to drink, wash things, work. Farmers need water to make the crop grow healthily. The factory needs water to process the production. Animals need water to live their lives. However, polluting and wasting make precious water less and less. Some immediate actions must be taken to protect water resources. As students, we should have the sense of saving water. Saving a little day by day, it would make a big influence on protecting water. Given all of its importance and urgency, we must spare no effort to do what I have suggested you. 范文（ 2） Water is precious Water is the birthplace of life and it plays an indispensable part in our daily life，so water is very vital for us human. Although the ocean covers 71% of the surface of the earth ,there are many people who can ’ t get access to water in the world. But how can this be? Above all, the water shortage results from the huge number of people on the world who take it for granted using the water immoderately. Another reason for water scarcity is water pollution caused by farming and chemistry industry. Facing these two main reasons, we are supposed to save water in our daily life and reuse it. Only in this way can we protect our precious water resources.
上海中考英语作文范文,背诵
Writing Material Trip / unforgettable experience / weekend / Last year, I was lucky enough to visit … with my ….. Before we went there, we had got a lot of information from the Internet. XXX is a beautiful city and it is famous for XXX. Luckily, when we got there, the sun was shining and the wind was blowing gently. We visited some places in good mood. We climbed the hill and we were all attracted by the beautiful scenery on the top of the hill. We also taste a lot of local snacks. We had a wonderful time there. What an unforgettable experience it was! Change / difficulties / how to learn English As we all know, English is one of the most widely used language all over the world. It's important for us to study English well. I like English as well as maths and physics. But many times, the marks I got in English tests were not as good as those in my Math tests. I thought it over and over. At last, I decided to change my way of study. From then on, I have began to pay attention to listening. In my spare time, I also often read English magazines and newspapers In addition, I reviewed the English notes after class every day. By doing this, I made great progress in English and got a good mark in the final exam last term. Love / thank you, xxx There's some love around me, such as my parents', my teachers' and my classmates' and so on. I feel happy and warm whenever I get love from them. My mother looks after me better than anyone else. My teachers are always kind to me. They have done their best to let me know more. And most of my classmates are always ready to help me when I am in trouble. In return for this, I also prepare to help them at any time. I think if the world is full of love, it will become more beautiful. What can I do for our environment? / green consumer / protect the earth Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person to leave the classroom, I will always remember to turn off the lights. Besides, in order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. What's more, I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because of they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in 和谐社会/ a lovely Shanghainese As middle school students inShanghai, what should we do? Firstly, we should love our motherland, and we should love our hometowns and take an active part in our school activity. Secondly, let's fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those who in need. More importantly, all of us must be honest in our daily life. What's more, let's work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.
上海初三一模英语作文题目及范文
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