广州市面表达汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·宁夏银川二中中考模拟）假设你是李华。上周末你和同班同学去绿色农场郊游,大家玩的很开心。请你通过e-mail将此活动过程告知你的好友Tom，并简要谈谈你的感受。要点如下：

参考词汇：get close to the nature（亲近大自然）

写作要求：1、词数60－80；（开头和结尾已给出）

2、文中不能出现真实的校名或人名；

3、所给的要点必须都用上；

4、紧扣主题，适当发挥。

Dear Tom,

How’s it going? Last weekend, I went to_______________

Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom

How’s it goin g?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my classmates.We set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd April.We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon.We met at the school gate.We went there by school bus . We had a picnic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so on.The teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything alone.We had a chance to get close to the nature.We had a good trip.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己上周末和同班同学去绿色农场郊游,大家玩的很开心。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

2．（·河北中考模拟）书面表达

初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......

请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示：（1）What was the event?

（2）How did you make it?

（3）What’s your feeling?

要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win

Hello,

everyone!_______________________________________________________________________ ____

Thank you for your listening.

【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win

Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.

When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.

To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.

Thank you for your listening.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行

表达。句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

3．（·黑龙江中考模拟）Writing

现在视力不好的人越来越多，有的孩子很小的时候就戴上了眼镜。从小保护好眼睛很重要。六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。请你结合实际生活写一篇题目为“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。

内容：（1）眼睛的重要性；

（2）保护眼睛的措施：①不要长时间读书看报；

②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书；

③坚持做眼保健操。

要求：（1）词数在80?100词之间。

2）要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

It’s important to protect our eyes

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

_______________________________________________________________________

【答案】It’s important to protect our eyes

The eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.

How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not

read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary.

Fo llow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】

根据题目要求可知，本文说的时态是一般现在时。人称是第一和第二人称

英语作文一般是三段式

第一段：开篇点题，交代写作目的——保护眼睛的重要性，以及提建议

第二段：文章主体部分——保护眼睛的措施：

①不要长时间读书看报；

②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书；

③坚持做眼保健操。

第三部分：再次点题，并提出号召——现在开始养成保护眼睛的好习惯。

4．（·四川雅安中学中考模拟）书面表达。

假如你们学校要开展主题为：“如何保护地球”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。

提示：1. 现在存在的环境问题。

2. 采取措施，保护环境。

1）关闭工厂，不乱扔垃圾。

2）节约用水、用电的方法。

3）使用购物袋代替塑料袋, 尽量乘坐公共交通。

4）回收利用废品等。

要求： 1.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。

2.词数80--100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不记入字数。

Hello, everyone!

The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.

Thanks for listening!

【答案】How to Protect the Earth

Hello, everyone!

The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.

However it becomes dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature.

It's time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don't litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.

I hope our home will become better and better.

Thanks for listening!

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It's time to do，first of all，the method of，instead of，try to do，and so on，better and better等。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等词语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

5．（·江苏中考模拟）世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。年全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关注重点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。以下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做的调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack，请根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，陈述学校调查结果，并表明你自己的观点和理由。

参考词汇：近视 nearsighted

注意： 1. 内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 词数：80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in

China.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。所提供的表格中列举了近视的原因和建议。主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的视力对每个人都很重要。

本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth.

【高分句型二】

And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书的时候，你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺。

when you read是由when引导的时间状语从句。

6．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。她在信中诉说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.

_______________________________________

All the best!

Betty

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.

In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.

However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.

In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.

All the best!

Betty

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.

/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意

总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

7．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达

李华所在的国际学校正在开展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活动，假定你是李华，请你向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节，内容包括：

1. 今年庆祝时间（6月18日）

2. 节日由来：纪念（be in memory of）屈原

3. 吃粽子，赛龙舟，挂菖蒲和艾草（calamus and Ay Tsao）……

4. 欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日

注意：1. 词数80~100；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

4.开头已写好，不计入总词数。

Dear fellows,

The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.

_____________________________________________

【答案】Dear fellows,

The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We welcome to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了今年端午节庆祝时间，接下来介绍端午节的由来以及庆祝活动，最后欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日。此处according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

8．（·武汉外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达

长跑是人们热衷的体育活动之一。武汉马拉松（Wuhan Marathon）因独具特色的赛道及赛事组织已成为一年一度的全程盛事。假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom想知道关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。请用英文给他回一封电子邮件，介绍这项赛事。内容包括以下要点：

1.马拉松是非常流行的国际体育项目；

2.通过马拉松，人们可以强身健体，还可以结识新朋友；

3.首届马拉松于年举行，吸引了很多人的关注；

4.赛通途径多个武汉著名景点,如：中山大道、东湖绿道、黄鹤楼，被视为最美的马拉松赛道；

5.补充一至亮点个人想法。

注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

2.次数60-80，邮件的开头已给出，不计入总次数；

3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译

参考词汇： event n.项目 track n.赛道 Greenway n.绿道

Hi Tom，

I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.

Li Hua

【答案】Hi Tom，

I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me something about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information. Marathon is a very popular international sport. Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.

I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.Most of them want to take part in it.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，给他介绍关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。题目中给我们列出了具体的写作内容，我们可以按照这些提示来组织语

言，并增加一些内容，使文章更加充实。其中第五条需要学生们自己发挥想象力，补充一到两点的个人想法，这一部分是不受限制的，学生们可以自由发挥，但需要注意内容需要与全文大意连贯起来。通过审题可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主，根据表达需要灵活运用，并使用适当的人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时需注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译题目中的内容，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型。在文章中还应使用一、两个高级句型或复杂句式，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达流畅。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Tom写电子邮件，介绍了关于武汉马拉松的事情。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，并对信息进行加工、处理和补充，使文意更加清楚、连贯。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态为主，个别句子使用了过去时态，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。文章句式以简单句为主，表达简洁、明了，穿插使用了复杂句式，如宾语从句、定语从句等。调整文章节奏，提升了文章档次。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.等。

9．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达

假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

写作要点：

1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。

2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：

（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。

（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。

（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。

3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。

写作要求：

1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear Billy,

It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.

___________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Billy,

It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.

I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exerci se, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.

Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

10．（·重庆中考模拟）假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。

要求：

1.80—120 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点：

1.活动情况简介（时间、内容……）;

2.遇到的困难（如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……）；

3.请求帮助的事项。

Dear Nick,

How’s everything going?

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Nick,

How’s everything going?

Our school is holding an English reading festiva l this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. F irst, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?

I expect to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。首先要注意书信的书写格式，文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作时，要注意理顺要点，防止漏写；注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。

参考要点：

1.活动情况简介（时间、内容……）;

2.遇到的困难（如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……）；

3.请求帮助的事项。

11．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

86. 上周日下午，你去天津图书馆读书，发现了一些不文明现象。请根据以下提示点，写写你的经历和感受。

1. 在图书馆二楼，有一个大约四岁的小男孩，在大声喧哗、跑跳；

2. 他的妈妈没有阻止他，而是在一旁大声接打电话；

3. 你走过去，告诉他这样做是不对的；小男孩表示歉意然后悄悄回到座位。

4. 对此现象，你的感受和想法……

参考词汇： some uncivilized phenomena一些不文明现象

1. 字数80-100个；

2. 开头字数已给出，不计入总字数；

3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。

Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there.

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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there. When I was on the second floor, I found some uncivilized phenomena. I saw a boy who was about 4 years old sho uting and running noisily. He didn’t read the books at all. What’s more, his mother didn’t stop him and just talked on the phone loudly. What should I do then? I walked towards the little boy and told him that it was wrong to do so. The boy said “sorry” an d went back to his seat quietly.

In my point of view, this mother set a bad example for her child. It is important for her to tell his son some public rules. As long as everyone follows these rules, all of us will be in a civilized society.

【解析】

【详解】

上周日下午，你去天津图书馆读书，发现了一些不文明现象。请根据以下提示点，写写你的经历和感受。这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称和第三人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如：He didn’t read the books at all. What’s more, his mother didn’t stop him and just talked on the phone loudly. 学习中注意总结,

牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

12．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达

提示：转眼间三年的初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习与生活中一定有些让你难忘的人或事物。请以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。

要求：1. 请先将题目补充完整后再作答；

2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4. 将短文写在答题卡上。写在本试题卷上无效。

【答案】Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.

when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇话题作文。根据以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。文章时态用一般过去式时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

13．（·长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达

健康的生活习惯是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是怎样的呢？请根据以下的信息提示，写一篇短文。

内容：1、健康饮食；

2、早睡早起，不熬夜；

3、参加运动，强身健体。

要求：

1、必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2、80词左右；

3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

_______________________________________________________________________________ __

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【答案】Healthy habit

I think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?

First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.

As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，阐述你认为健康的生活习惯是什么样的。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及last but not least。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

14．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达

A Special Day

提示：在每个人的生活中，总会有些特别的日子。请根据所给题目“A Special Day”写一篇英语短

文，记叙你特别的一天。

要求：1、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。

2、文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。

3、请将短文写在答题卡上，写在试题卷上无效。

【答案】A Special Day

Today is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise. My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如such a special day，give him a surprise，a lot，make a dish，want to do，with the help of，return home等。而复杂并列结构My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want.和Today is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise./ I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. / With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. /When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

15．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达

某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇题为"Thank you，my teacher!"的短文参加此次活动．要点如下：

（1）严格要求

（2）耐心指导

（3）热情鼓励；

注意：（1）词数80～100；

（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称．

（4）…

注意：（1）词数80-100；

（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称

【答案】Thank you，my teacher!

Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat

us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（严格要求）【高分句型一】

During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指导）

Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（热情鼓励）

Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!（表示感谢）

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇抒情记叙文。

【详解】

英语作文一般分为三个部分

第一部分：开篇点题，交代写作目的——感谢老师为我做的一切。

第二部分：交代感谢英语老师的原因

老师是一个认真工作的人。

老师对我严格要求。

在我考试失利时鼓励我。

第三部分：再次点题，对老师表示由衷的谢意。

高分句型一：

It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因为你的课非常生动有趣，对我们来说学好英语很简单有趣．

句中"because your class is very interesting and lively"为原因状语从句，主句为"itis+形容词+for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事…"结构．

高分句型二：

When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．当我考试失败的时候，你鼓励我不断努力．

句中"When I failed in an exam"为条件状语从句，主句"you encouraged me to keep trying"中有短语"encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事"、"keep doing sth一直做某事"．

提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．

16．（·甘肃中考模拟）发明创造改变了世界。作为一名中学生．假如你梦想当一名发明家，应该怎样做才能实现梦想呢?请根据下面的漫画提示，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。

要求：1. 80词左右，可适当发挥。（文章标题和开头已给出不计人总词数）

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。

How to Become an Inventor?

【答案】How to Become an Inventor?

With the development of science and technology, inventions have played an important role in the society and even changed our world. As a student in middle school, I want to be an inventor like Edison. But how can I let my dream come true? In my opinion,First,studying hard is the basic method.It is clear that only when we study hard to acquire the knowledge about the science and technology can we fulfill the need of innovation.Second,interesting is the best teacher.Hardly can we imagine a child without passion of exploring will get progress in innovation Third,we need the spirit of creativity which provides us different thoughts to solve the problem.What's more important,Never give up.Keep our belief.That's the key to success for all scientists,such as Madame Curie and Darwin.

What I have list above is my answer to how to become an inventor,and that is what I'll persist doing in the future with my whole passion.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇话题作文，以“How to Become an Inventor”为题，写一篇短文。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to be……，studying hard is……，we need……，That's……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要成为一个发明家；接下来介绍为了成为一个发明家，应该如何做；最后指出为了成为一个发明家，我要坚持做下去。此处play an

important role in, come true, give up, such as等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

17．（·北京中考模拟）4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。

提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important

提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?

Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read mor e books and read good books.

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。

句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

18．（·天津中考模拟）手机在生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色，许多中学生沉迷于手机无法自拔，比如你的好友Miller.请根据以下提示点写一篇短文：

1. 去年，Miller对手机游戏非常入迷，而且花大量时间用手机聊天看电影；

2. Miller与家人和朋友交流甚少，离开手机会很焦虑；

3. 昨天还因为走路看手机被自行车撞了，膝盖受伤；

4. 你的建议……

参考词汇：mobile games手机游戏anxious焦虑be crazy about对……入迷要求：

1字数80-100个2开头已经给出不计入总词数3要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥

Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was

【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to（沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.

In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a l ong time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.

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这是一篇给材料作文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；再紧扣要点，动笔写作，可适当发挥。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

19．（·江苏中考模拟）三年的初中生活即将结束，你一定对初中生活留下了很多美好的回忆。下周五你班要召开毕业班会，请根据下面的英文提示，并适当发挥，以“I remember ”

为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，分享你校园生活中的一次活动或经历。

要点如下：1. What’s the event?

2. When and where did it happen?

3. How did you feel at that moment?

4. How has the event changed your life?

注意：1.短文需包含以上要点，并适当发挥。

2.短文中已给出的部分，不计入总词数。

3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。

I remember

How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end.