高考英语书面表达一：建议信模板

写作一：建议信 (A Letter of Advice)

[ 题型特点 ]

建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可

能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。

具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议，具体结构为：

①表明写作意图

建议信②具体的建议及理由

③指出采纳建议的好处

[ 常用句式 ]

1．开头常用语

①I know you have trouble in ... after reading your letter. I am writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.

在读了你的信后，我知道你在??上有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。

② You’ ve asked me for advice with regard to/regarding ...and I’ ll try to make some useful suggestions here.

关于??你向我征求建议，在此，我将尽力提出一些有用的建议。

③I’ m sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in doing ... at the moment.

得知此刻你遇到??麻烦我深感遗憾。

④I’ m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how ...

非常高兴收到你的来信，在信中，关于如何??你向我征求意见。

2．主体部分常用语

① When it comes to /As for ... I would like to suggest/recommend ...

涉及 /关于??我想建议??

②The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.

我的建议如下。

③ In my opinion /Personally/ As far as I ’ m concerned, it would be wise to take the following action.

在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。

④You may/might as well do ...

你不妨做??

⑤I would like to suggest that ...

我想建议??

⑥If I were you, I would ...

如果我是你，我会??

⑦It seems to me that you could ...

我认为你可以??

⑧I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...

我想如果你能??可能会更有利。

3．结尾常用语

①I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.

我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。

②I hope you will take my advice into consideration. If you have any questions or requirements, please do not hesitate to tell me./If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.

我希望你会考虑我的建议。如果你有任何问题或要求，请毫不犹豫地告诉我。/如果你有任何问题，请随时问我。

③I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.

我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。

[ 黄金模板 ]

Dear ________ ， (建议对象 )

I’ m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to____________.(引出对方需要建

议的主题 )

Here are a few suggestions.( 引出作者建议) First, it is important to________.Then, it also helps

to_______________. Besides, it should be a good idea to__________________.You can also________.

可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下：

As to________ ， I suggest ________.( 需要具体到某一方面) In addition ， __________.( 其他的建议 ) I ’ m sure _______________.( 预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)

I hope __________.( 表达愿望 )

Yours sincerely ，

Li Hua

[ 范文鉴赏 ]

Dear Peter,

I’ m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. (引出建议主题) Here are a few suggestions. (引出个人建议 ) First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as

you ’ ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV, and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you ’ ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.( 具体建议 )

Try and write me in Chinese next time

Yours sincerely ，

Li Hua [ 模拟写作 ]

Dear Headmaster,

As a student of this school, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning

the basic conditions of our dormitory

Generally speaking, the dormitory building is well equipped. However, there are two unpleasant aspects that cause inconvenience to us: First, because the heating system is in need of improvement it

practical manner. There is no shelf to place books.

I would be very grateful if my proposal could be considered and positive changes could take place in these regards.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

假设你是李华 ,你的好友李明在交友过程中遇到了困难 ,请你根据以下提示用英语给他写一封信,给

他提一些建议 :

1.帮他分析原因

2.给他提出建议

3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算

注意 :100 词左右

短语再现 : in order to

Join in

Be concerned about

Get along well with

Communicate with

Last but not least

微写作

1.In order to have friends, you have got to be an honest person.

2.First, you’ d better join some clubs and join in some activities to meet new friends.

3.Second, once you have friends , learn to be concerned about them.

4.Don ’ t ignore them at any time.

https://www.360docs.net/doc/5e10729772.html,st but not least , you should get along well with them and often communicate with them.

Dear Li Ming,

In your letter, you said you are not good at communication with others and often feel lonely. I think you can just make it so good as you can follow the advice below.

First, you should learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Second, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. The friends with more people. Third, it will be a good idea to help.With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Yours,

Li Hua

假设你叫张伟 , 你的一位朋友李华刚刚被一所中学聘为美术老师 , 因为刚毕业没有

教学经验 , 担心教课不受学生欢理 , 特写信向你征求建议 , 回信应包括如下内容

1.鼓励他不要有顾虑 , 要向经验丰富的老师学习 , 认真教学

2.多与学生交流 , 请课要尽量生动活泼 , 多讲些学生喜欢的

内容注意 :1. 词数 100 个左右

2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好 , 不计入总词数

Dear Ii Hua

I am delighted to have received your letter and heard about your present situation with you.

Firstly,I should express my congratulations on your working as a teacher. As you know, it is

very normal for a new teacher to feel nervous in class. Secondly, being a young teacher, you'd better learn from experienced teachers and devote more time to studying teaching methods. Thirdly, since you just graduated from university, you have a lot in common with the students. In other words, you can easily communicate with the students. Last but not least, you should teach them more about what they like to know.

By doing so, I think you would certainly overcome the worry

Good luck to you every day

Faithfully yours

Zhang Wei

假设你是李华 , 曾在伦敦奥运会上担任志愿者 , 你的英国笔友杰克逊想当 2016 年奥运会的志愿者 , 但他不知道作为一名志思者需要什么条件以及要干些什么 , 请你根据以下要点给杰克逊回信 :

1.志愿者必须热情 , 具有率献精神

2.为来自世界各地的运动员及官员当向导

3.提供信息、翻译、急救以及运动场地的其他服务

4.帮助运动员们提东西

Dear Jackson,

It's nice to hear from you. I'm glad to hear that you'd like to be a volunteer of the 2016 Olympic Games.

As a volunteer, you must be enthusiastic and devoted.First, you should act as a guide for the officials and athletes from all over the world. What's more, you should also provide information, translation, first aid and other services around the competition venues in the city. If necessary,

you may help the athletes to carry luggage. The job is simple, but tiring. However,it is very important and meaningful.

Best wishes

Yours,

Li Hua

假如你叫李华 , 你的好朋友李明英语听力水平不高 , 每次考试因此失多分 , 他很苦恼 , 特向你求助 , 请给他写一封信提出可行的建议 , 词数 100 个左右

Dear Li Ming

I sorry to hear that your English grade is low in each test. As for this. you'd better co

The and follow my advice.

First. do you have a good vocabulary? You ’d better make a plan to recite vocabularies every day. How much time do you spend listening to English materials every day? On average, the time ranges from10to20. Third, how well do you make use of skills? In fact, mastering such basic skills is and necessary, like going through the questions and answers quickly, predicting what the title is about. trying to decide its main idea and so on.As you know. practice makes perfect. So long as keep on trying, you are sure to make great progress.

Looking forward to your good grade next time.

Yours,

Li Hua

李丽华是某校高二年级学生 ,看到本市要修建新车站 ,想给总工程师写一封 100 个词左右的信 , 提出几点建议 :

首先 ,建议在车站内为老人、小孩、残疾人设计特殊的座位,以便他们及时得到体息

第二 ,对于洗手间的设计,要考虑到方便小孩和残疾人,如轮椅能够进入洗手间,自来水开关要设计得低一些

第三 ,从休息室到站台设置轮椅通行的通道

Dear Sir,

I hear that you are to be the architect for the new station.Would you mind me giving you some advice? I would be very glad if you could consider the following things in your design.

Special seats should be arranged for the old, the kids and the people with disabilities, so they can have a rest in time.Washrooms should be built with aisles wide enough so the disabled in the wheelchairs could go in and out easily. The taps should be low enough for the disabled and the children to wash . Aisles should be built to the buses. Therefore, those in wheelchairs can go to

the buses directly.

That’s all. Thank you!

Yours sincerely,

Li Lihua