1名校校园正成为旅游新热点

06-1 cet4 campus tour

1．名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同

3．我认为…

should the university campus be open to tourists?

University campuses, especially those of the renowned universities, have recently become the new tourist attraction. Pros and cons have been put forward concerning this new phenomenon.

Some people are quite in favor of the campus’ opening to tourists while others are opposed to it. The opening of campus will stimulate the tourist industry, but the easier access to campus will lead to some accidents or safety problems which will interfere in students’ life.

In my opinion, campuses can be open to tourists once a week, say, on Saturday or Sunday. This suggestion, I believe, is quite feasible because it will kill two birds with one stone. For one thing, campuses could attract many tourists on weekends, thus boosting the tourism. For another, restricted opening of campus will beneficially narrow the gap between campuses and outside world. Furthermore, this will also attract more public attention and build a great reputation for the university.

评分方法：

一读定分，对内容和语言进行总体评分（global scoring）。采取奖励

性评分（大学），而不是惩罚式评分（中学）。

分5个档计分：

1）14分段：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语言错误，或仅有个别小错。

2）11分段：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。3）8分段：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中一些是严重的语言错误。（2—3个）

4） 5 分段：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重的语言错误。(4—5 个)

5） 2 分段：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

什么是严重的语言错误?

A)句架结构：e.g. If no disappointed of failure, what does it

has exciting of success.

Firstly, the quantity of canteen too few and

students too many. So the canteen too crowded and

the waiter too busy.

B) 汉式连动词：e.g. To begin with, you at least have known a

way can’t do the work successfully.

Because we only see the phenomenon do not deeply

think about it, we fail.

There are some problems need to be solved.

C) 词性：e.g. With the development of econimic, computers are

popular with college students.

D) 一致关系：e.g. I think the canteen in our school are good.

E) 时态语态：e.g.

F) 汉式英语：e.g. Some waiters treat women good and treat the

man bad.

If we don’t pass wind and rain we can’t see the colour rainbow.

(If we have not gone through one storm after another/ the test of many failures, we can not

achieve success.)

G) 逻辑：e.g. I’m a student of university, because reform of

rear service on campus nowadays, so I want to talk with

you about our Canteens.

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