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读后续写导练2学案

“Will you come with us, Susan?” cried several girls to a schoolmate. “We are going to the woods; do come, too.”

“I should like to go with you very much,” replied Susan, with a sigh, “but I can’t finish the task grandmother set me to do.”

“How tir esome it must be to sty at home to work on a holiday!” said Rose, one of the girls, shaking her head. “Susan’s grandmother is too strict.”

Susan heard the remark, and, as she bent her head, she wiped away a tear, and thought of the pleasant afternoon the girls would spend gathering wild flowers in the woods.

Soon she said to herself, “What harm can there be in moving the mark grandmother put in the stocking? The woods must be very beautiful today, and how I should like to be in them!”

“Grandmother,” said she, a few minutes afterwards, “I’m ready now.”“What, so soon, Susan?” Her grandmother took the work, and looked at it very closely.

“True, Susan,” said she, laying great stress on each word, “true, I c ount twenty turns from the mark; and, as you have never cheated me, you may go and amuse yourself as you like the rest of the day.”

Susan’s cheeks were red, and she did not say “Thank you.” As she left the cottage, she walked slowly away, not singing as usual.

“Why, here is Susan!” the girls cried, when she jo ined their company; “but what is the matter? Why have you left your dear, old gra ndmother?” the y asked.

“There is nothing the matter.” As Susan repeated these words, she felt that she was trying to cheat herself. She had acted a lie. At the same time she r emembered her grandmother’s words, “You have never cheate d me.”

“Yes, I have cheated her,” said she to herself. “If she knew all, she would never trust me again.”

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1: When the little party had reached an open space in the woods, _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2: “Now, Susan,” said Rose, “Put on the crown of flowers, for you are to be our queen.”

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导学1：原文内容摘要

情节1:

Susan was invited to the woods full of flowers but couldn’t go, not finish the work of

grandmother

情节2:

Susan moved the mark in the stocking, cheated her grandmother

情节3:

Susan was allowed to go, with red cheeks, feeling guilty

导学2：续写情节推理

Paragraph1:

可能的情节发展

从上文情节1和3可推知：other girls enjoy themselves, Susan not happy

从Paragraph2的段首语可知：they made a crown, the crown was for Susan

合理的细节增加：the reason why the crown was for Susan

可用词汇及篇章技巧

1.可用的关键词：

flowers, Rose

2.其它可用的词语：

enjoy oneself, but (Susan和她的伙伴们的心情对比)

Paragraph2:

可能的情节发展

从情节3和Paragraph2的段首语可推出：

Susan would refuse to wear the crown and explain the reason

go back home and apologize

可以详细描述的情节：

Susan拒绝佩戴花冠的情节及情感表现

可用词汇及篇章技巧

1.可用的关键词：

cheated, tears, grandmother, home

2.其他的可用词语：

not deserve, place on the head, apologize

3.在描述Susan的错误时，可以引用原文中的相关语句：

remove the mark grandmother put in the stocking

导学3：续写微作文

1.她的伙伴们都在到处跑着，自我娱乐，可Susan却独自坐在草坪上，希望此刻她能在家中，和奶

奶诉说自己的过错。（用wishing作伴随状语，注意其后用虚拟语气）

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2. 当大家说着这些话的时候①，花冠戴到了Susan的头上。Susan立刻摘下了花冠，扔到了地上，说：“不要给我花冠，我不配！我欺骗了我的奶奶。”当她说这些的时候，泪水滑过了她的脸颊②。（①中用被动语态；②中用flow down或run down,注意down要用介词）

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参考答案：

Ⅲ. 续写微作文

1.Her companions were running about enjoying themselves, but Susan sat alone on the grass,

wishing she were at home this moment telling her fault to her grandmother.

2.As these words were spoken, the crown was placed on her head. In a moment Susan took it

off, and threw it on the ground, saying, “No crown for me; I do not deserve it! I have cheated my grandmother.” While she was saying, tears were flowing down her cheeks.

Ⅳ. 根据前面的指导，完成读后续写

Paragraph1:

When the little party had reached an open space in the woods, her companions ran about enjoying themselves, but Susan sat on the grass, wishing she were at home admitting her fault. After a while Rose cried out, “Let us make a crown of flowers, and put it on the head of the best girl here.” Soon the crown was finished. All the girls agreed Susan was the best girl both in school and at home, so they decided she was to wear it.

Paragraph2:

“Now, Susan,”said Rose, “Put on the crown of flowers, for you are to be our queen.”

As these words were spoken, the crown was placed on her head. In a moment she took it off, and threw it on the ground, saying, “No crown for me; I do not deserve it.”The girls looked at her with surprise. “I have cheated my grandmother,” said she, while tears flowed down her cheeks. Quickly Susan left the other girls, went back home and apologized to her grandmother. “Susan,”said her grandmother, “I am so happy you have realized your fault, and you are still my own little girl!”

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