2020年雅思远程教育范文

2020年雅思远程教育范文
2020年雅思远程教育范文

雅思远程教育范文

ATTENTION

如果你是已经雅思7+在努力刷8分的大神,你可以关掉这篇文章了。本帖仅适用于基础一般目标分数在6.5-7分的孩子。虽然我觉得考7.5也只需要这样的努力加一点刚好的运气。

首先是本人的考情报告:

基础:

cet-4裸考560,cet-6裸考539,虽然之后二战雅思的时候顺便考了一次六级是564,但是当时开始准备雅思的时候英语就是这基础,不上不下,顺便说一下我觉得大学六级和雅托没有什么太大关系(注意是六级,四级都过不了考雅思肯定挺吃力),我身边六级没过一战雅思6.5的还挺多的。

一战:

去年8月8号的考试,上xdf的6.5分的30人课上了一个月(做题方法的梳理,可上可不上),自己复习了20多天,第一次考

口语,非常紧张,当时如果口语小分能提到6,总分就能上7,不过怀揣着想继续学英语的一腔热血,我放弃了申诉(人傻钱多

二战:

去年12月19号的考试,中间有几个月没有碰雅思,最后大概冲刺了两周口语,基本没有复习别的。所以除了口语勉强到6,其他的就呵呵了,听力因为缺少练习直接下降了1分

三战:

今年7月16号的考试,中间又有几个月没有碰雅思,实习结束后零零碎碎复习了一个月,考前冲刺了大概半个月

我最后的分数并不是很高,所以我觉得我的经验作为反面教材可以帮助大家少走弯路。

以下是鲜血换来的教训,现在说出口都很疼:

1,考雅思的时候不要做别的事!

考雅思的时候不要做别的事!

考雅思的时候不要做别的事!

我现在最后悔的事情就是去年大二的暑假没有抓紧剩下的时间把雅思考完,拖了一年多,可是这一年多里我两次复习的时间加起来大概只有两个多月,大三上去拍了微电影,大三下跑去实习了,做这些事情都非常分心分神,战线拉得太长人容易疲惫,另外你会发现,更好的实习实践机会来了,你的雅思却还没考完,耗在那里一块心病。

两次雅思报名间隔的时间不要太长了,你以为给自己留够了复习时间,结果还是从考前半个月一个月才去找书看。

2,所有参考书烦请物尽其用

囫囵吞枣写三本题目没有认认真真写一本来得有用,如果剑桥都没做完就不要到处打听刷什么别的题,我一开始做真题都是一边吃早餐一边做听力,各种乱涂乱画,做阅读写一篇空一篇,简直是暴殄天物,题就这么多浪费一点少一点,大家做真题,第一遍最好把答案写在答题纸上,不要弄脏卷面了,因为你迟早会刷第二遍或者第三遍。

3,心态要好

给你们讲个鬼故事吧,第二次考试安检完准备进教室了,我突然反应过己没有手环(完全没有工作人员告诉我要拿手环),这个按指纹戴手环是后来加的套路,我不清楚,看到大家都有 ___就问了一句,结果老师直接说那你就进不去了,我赶紧跑到一楼按指纹的地方,好容易找到一个工作人员补采指纹。后来进场后很快就放听力了,我一直心情不太平静那次听力就考砸了。第三次考试考听力,section1放完之后我十分满意做得很顺利,然后等section2,等啊等,听力设备没反应,直接挂了,监考叫了别的考务过来围着就地修了20分钟,再放section2的时候,我感觉自己大势已去集中不了注意力了。

是的,我们大陆考生除了要面对压分的外国人还要应对这些很想骂脏字的莫名其妙的状况,除了自己要准备充分遇事波澜不惊还有什么办法呢,不过还是希望你们不要遇到这种乌龙。

干货

1,听力:

材料:剑桥4-11雅思真题

使用方法:单独练习或者和阅读作文一起做作模考

不管怎么做,都请在早上8点半-9点之间开始写听力,一定要让大脑习惯在早上听英语

每次对完答案之后,记录好本次的答题情况,我自己有一个专门的记录表单,长这样:

这个记录表多打几份钉在一起,你能够很清楚地发现自己的听力弱在哪里和成绩起伏。这个表会在资料合集里给大家。

一般听力也就差两块:

念得太快/太长我回不过神和单词不会写/不敏感

前者做精听,后者做听写

精听大家应该都很熟悉了,雅思听力要到7.5+精听真的很有帮助,方法就是找个本子,把做得不好的S3S4一边听,一边把句子快速写下来,一句一句地听写,每一句重复听个几次,听完一整个session然后比照听力材料用红笔修改,是不是听落了”s",是不

是听错了单词,有没有生词不会写,然后记在自己的“精听本”上。

做听写的材料推荐王陆的《807词汇》和《雅思听力真题语料库》,先听写807再听写语料库,我把807听了两遍,但是语料库只听写了其中几节,因为那个实在是太磨练意志力了,听写方法是不按暂停键,拼命地听写单词,然后把没有听出来的单词圈出来,再重听一次,重听的时候要重新写单词,如此反复直到你能下意识写出90%以上的单词。

一直错的单词我都会抄在本子上特意地记。

如果基本做题方法还没有掌握,可以去做一下北语的《黑眼睛》题型特训。

下面特别安利给大家一个敲好用的APP:朗易思听!!

大家可以开个会员,我用的功能是:1.5倍速/1.2倍速做真题;利用单句循环做精听;有807和语料库的材料可以听写单词;大量的BBC名人演讲美剧泛听材料。几乎可以辅助所有听力训练。

第三次考试虽然听力受挫,但恢复过来后我明显感觉,即使是语速很快的配对题,我都听得非常清楚,这类题也都做对了。大概我习惯1.5倍速,在考场上听原速跟放慢了似的。

2,阅读:

阅读是最让我郁闷的一科,因为我平时做题目基本在8.0-8.5之间的成绩,但是考起来无论题目难不难永远都是7.5。这里有个教训就是大家平时做阅读,一定要养成用答题纸一边写一边誊答案的习惯。规定自己一定要提前写完。

阅读是我花功夫最少的一门,我觉得正确的技巧加适当的真题练习就够用。

技巧真的太多太重要了,请移步知乎搜索“雅思阅读部分如何提高”,得票数最高的罗文寒的答案,这答案基本就是xdf老师教的那些东西的精华汇总,白捡一千块。

我想说说精读,对于词汇量还不太够的孩子,精读是条捷径。

一般精读的目的是:

找出生词和学科关键词

了解文章中的逻辑联系,段落构架,找出段内中心语

找出与解题有关的同义替换

长难句分析

建议每次读都只抱着一个目的,然后细细读四次。完成这四个任务,说到同义替换,就是这个:

雅思阅读和听力的解题过程很大程度上是一个找同义替换的过程。都是套路,你会明白的。

通过精读你可以积累到某个学科,比如动物,植物,水资源,考古的专业词汇,只要精读完一篇,再碰到这类文章就不用担心词汇了。最重要的是,你会感悟到那些议论文,说明文的结构和出题逻辑,长难句的分析还能帮助我们读得更快。另外,阅读的表达可以抄下来作为作文素材,比如剑4的42页《消失的语言》是对语言多样性被损害最好的素材补充。

我第三次碰到的雅思阅读爆难,考完大家在微博上哭爹喊娘的难,不过最后还是有7.5,所以说平时扎实的练习还是有用。(其实我只精读了4篇哈哈)

3,写作:

其实这次写作能上6.5完全意料之外,考过雅思的人都知道,写作是最难提分的,6分和6.5之间隔着一道坎。特别是经历了听力失利,阅读爆难之后,我写小作文的时候在考场里都要哭了,泪水在眼眶里打转,特别是我一看大作文,climate change,天哪,劳资准备了所有的topic,唯独在环保类话题里省掉了这个(因为气候真的不算常考话题,水资源动物保护常见多了)我真是满腔悲愤一顿乱写,字都是飘起来的……我现在仍然觉得,考官给我6.5是看到我模板都难过得忘了用,各种反问排比义愤填膺,觉得我好单纯好不做作,和外面那些妖艳贱货完全不一样...

考完当天顾家北在微博上质问雅思作文出题太学术而不是在考语言,我整个人备受安慰,就有种高中班主任说不是学生的错是月考试卷太变态的感觉。

至于写作的准备,我觉得《慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作》和《顾家北手把手教你雅思作文》这两本书也还算有用,慎小嶷的急救短语

还有小作文值得一看,其他部分都是看了舒缓心理压力的,顾家北最好的部分是他给出的典型的大作文范文,每一篇都写得太好了,还有小作文的用法归纳。

我个人觉得最有用的资料是前考官simon先生的大作文写作方法和他给出的大作文素材,都是从他的网站上汇总好了的,如果不是时间特别充裕,就这两份资料就够了,不要去看他的网站了,内容太多了。

大家另外可以准备一本范文集,灰蓝色封面的《雅思写作官方题库》。

好了,下面说说我的备考建议。

首先什么题都别做,先去看simon先生的大作文写作方法,要理解好各种提问方法的作答方式,怎么分段,怎么写中心句,怎么避免表达重复和表达不足,我写了很多大作文,看到这个资料之后,才恍然大悟我的框架都是错的。

掌握透了方法之后,前40天,按《雅思写作官方题库》来,3-4天一个话题,我还记得第一个话题是教育类,把教育类的范文抽取典型的浏览一遍,自己每篇范文中的观点和素材。比如“远程教

育”是一块,“要不要男女分班”又是一块。我这么做主要是我觉得simon的大作文素材不够全面,没有时间的孩子可以直接看simon素材里对应的教育类部分。

接下来,在顾家北的书里找一个教育类话题,规定自己40分钟内写完一篇大作文,写完之后自己先改一遍,然后再看顾家北的范文,分析自己的差距,我都会再把范文抄一遍,然后用订书机把自己的作文和范文钉在一起,范文里的好的表达用红笔圈出来。

这个流程是积累--表达--修改--积累,我觉得任何语言的写作想要进步都是这个过程。

然后我就有了一个独属于自己的素材库和作文库,我会把这些资料都装在一个大文件袋里,临考前只需要回访这个文件袋的东西,冲刺的时候如果没有信心,可以拿出慎小嶷的急救短语和simon的大作文素材再看一遍。至于小作文,我通常考前一周才会准备,看慎小嶷的小作文方法和顾家北的小作文表达,然后自己按图表题,流程图,地图的分类来,配合大作文多模考几次就行了。顾家北的小作文表达归纳特别特别受用。

ATTENTION

关于改作文:要改,但是我在淘宝上找的都不靠谱,大家可以找个厉害的老师给改

关于模板:早扔早超生,我现在回过头看四六级模板雅思作文模板都特别傻,考官一看就是之前记的,大家记住一些地道的连接词就可以了。当然如果基础特别差,那还是准备几篇痕迹不重的模板吧。

4,口语

口语我是稳打稳扎从5.5到6到6.5,我觉得口语是最不能裸考的,首先如果发音太差,推荐两个视频教程:

《BBC教你英式音标》和安迪克雷格的《英语口音纠正教程》

我说英语一直很像日本人...但是后面这个视频真的拯救了我,效果立竿见影。

发音之外的三个评分标准,流利度,语法,词汇可以放在一起练习,没有别的诀窍,就是积累积累再表达,天知道我为了口语背了多少东西,考完第二次雅思开始,我就是无论你问我什么话题我能

给你扯一堆出来。你说得不好是说得不够多,说不出就是积累得不够多。

每个季度的口语题库和素材都很容易搞到,也就那么多,p2的话题写不出就买答案背啊。

目前买过的比较好的口语答案是淘宝的趴兔雅思,他们家出了一个七悠雅思APP很好用,里面有p1,p2,p3所有的答案素材,我考试前把p3的问题都瞄了一眼,考试考到了原题,虽然记不太清答案,但是思路还是清晰的。

但是素材是这么用的:首先合并题目,我喜欢的一个聪明的人和我喜欢的一个领导,完全可以用同样的素材啊,就这样50多个话题可以合成20来个,然后素材是可以反复利用的,p2背了没用到可以放p3用。必须练习,找外国人陪练,找不到找同学,再找不到自己录音给自己听。

我的练习过程:合并题库--熟读几遍素材--按答题要求写下框架--背框架和好的表达--自己说出来--听录音--反复修改变成自己的答案

除了买的答案,报班,慎小嶷的口语书都能给到一些漂亮的

p1p2p3的表达。我考口语之前上了一个老师的微信p1课,上得很好,笔记会在资料夹里给大家,虽然考试的时候抽到了老师没讲过的题目,但是那些表达我觉得在生活中也非常实用。最后口语要6.5+,重点是P3。

语言永远都是有输入才有输出。但是口语不是背出来的,是说出来的。

一碗糖水

再写下去就太长了,一些很细的问题都没有涉及,大家有疑问的话,可以在后台问我,我会尽量解答。可能对于马上就要考雅思的孩子来说,最有用的就是打打气。

有时候我会想,如果我第一次考完去申诉,成功拿到了7,我这一年会怎么样,我想绝对不会有第三次绝处逢生的开心。这一年我放弃了看书,旅游,拍片子,很多比赛和实习,以及一些社交。在朋友圈看到大家满世界玩,也只能苦笑着继续在蒸笼似的自习室刷题,第三次用尽全力仍然考砸后,我觉得我的人生是越努力越倒霉。好在结果还是好的,听力阅读虽不理想,但总分7分,作文小分6.5,够我用了。如果我考前那些日子,不是那么努力地早出晚

归,每天早上走楼梯到八楼自习室,晚上闭馆以后,一个人听着卡梅隆的演讲走回宿舍,如果不是那样的话,我不可能在第三次考试抓到一手烂牌的情况下打赢。

最最感谢的是,我终于变成了一个说英语非常轻松不再怯场的人。身边几个朋友曾经对我说“你说英语好奇怪。“她们说不出来哪里很奇怪,我却因此很自卑。可是 ___说英语很奇怪的我,也在今年暑假做了国际活动的英翻志愿者,我问那些外国人能不能听懂我的英语,每个人都告诉我:”Why not?Your English is very good."

不知道能不能带给你们一些振奋,我觉得准备雅思是一件能够迅速提升英语和培养良好学习习惯的事情。如果你是考了很多次也不要泄气,学的扎实的好处,可能出guo之后才会发现。

Why not?Your English is very good,加油。

有用,值得考,都是国家承认的学历

剑桥雅思4-12系列,每一本、每一套题、每一篇作文,都配备了“范文”。

而且,这些考生范文的样本,很有意思。

不仅仅集中在7.5或是8分的高分优秀例子,还包括了不少5分4.5分这样的扑街“示众”。

小伙伴们看真题后方范文的时候,很容易挑高的看,然后进行背诵,忽略低分作文。

这样“用”范围,非常浪费。

首先,别忽略“低分”。官方煞费苦心选择出的“低分范文”,其中的很多错误,是非常具有典型性、代表性的,很多考生都容易中招的这种。比如说长写错的单词quilified(少了a),比如大家经常用不好又心痒痒总想用的从句。

所以,看一看低分实例,对照一下自己有没有类似的问题,有则改之无则加勉。

其次,范文前面有附一段很宝贵的“考官评述”。这个考官的评述里,会有整体解释, ___给7分或是给5分,语法用的很好、词汇实在不行,还会有针对某个具体细节的描述,哪个句子写的好、哪个句子错了。

比如这篇7.5分范文,评分老师是这么说的,很多高阶词汇用的非常恰当、自然:

preferred method of transportation, ever-expanding urban populations等等。

要知道,有时候看一段评分考官的说明,可能胜过十篇优秀范文,因为很可能是盲目背诵范文、其实不明白究竟哪里好,而后面这段考官述评的作用,就在于给与点透“究竟哪里好”。

再次,死记硬背范文,作用真的不大。多琢磨一下范文的结构、写作思路,适当背诵一下好用的句型、词汇,多思考多练习,比“强行背诵”要有用很多。毕竟考试时遇到同类型痛话题、这种“瞎猫装上死耗子”的概率,实在太小,况且,大部分考官都不会中意死记硬背的一看就是“范本”的所谓范文。

雅思考试说来说去,最终还是几个重点。

一,巧劲。要明白考试的结构、特点,掌握。相应的技巧,有针对性地进行取舍。

二,实力。要提高英语的硬实力,尤其是基础不好、词汇不过关的同学,没有英语语言能力、纯凭技巧完全不现实。

三,坚持。那些刷到8分8.5分的“考神”,没有谁是一拍脑袋背了一篇范文就大功告成的,所有的方法和积累,最终都要落在坚持上。

大家好,我是谭老师。

远程教育当然要去考试啦!

远程教育有以下几方面的考试:

1.入学测试。机考或者笔试

2.课程考试。网上操作

3.期末考试。笔试或者机考,目前很多学校机考需要刷脸验证。

4.统考。专升本需要考统考,分别是计算机和大学英语,需毕业前考过。

谢谢!

远程教育又叫网络教育,优势太多了!

一是学习形式灵活,利用业余时间就可以完成,不影响工作,不用到校集中学习,时间和空间上都可以根据个人情况自定!

二是录取相对容易,高中或者中专学历就可以升大专,大专学历可以升本科,课程考试寓于平时,不像自考、成考那样,毕业也相对轻松。

三是学校都是好学校,能够开远程教育的都是985,211高校,实力派,在国内口碑好,牌子亮,这一点也是自考无法比的!

四是目前社会上助学机构多,很多考生苦于不懂怎么报名、录取、选课、修学分、做论文、参加答辩等等,这些问题,都可以由助学机构帮助你解决(比如长城培训,详情可以加我或留言咨询)。所以相对而言,网络教育更容易拿到毕业证书。

远程教育毕业很容易,但想要拿到学位证书必须考过英语4级,不然就没有学位证书,学位证书与毕业证比不关联。(学士相当于英语三级半,学位证书相当于英语四级。)

远程教育本科,一般学校都是211或者985。有入学考试,不过相对不难,入学后平时的课程考试要看主考学校和所在学习中心了,如果他们要求的松,很容易就能过,如果要求严,就相对难一些,但比自考要容易点,学制一般是2.5年,在有效学制内,必须要参加两门统考课(英语B和计算机应用基础)考试,这两门考试相对难些,只有通过了,并且全部的期末考试成绩以及毕业论文都合格了,才可以申请毕业。(远程教育考华中科技大学,中国石油大学,北京外国语大学的可以私聊我)作为在职人员来说选择远程教育是特别合适的,因为不用去上课,除了两个考试之外其他的都是电脑上操作,相对简单的多。

首先声明一下,只要你统招毕业以后,就不存在有全日制学历这么一说,有的院校需要是国家认可的助学机构,也是只是全日制助学,全日制和全日制助学是两个概念,请认清这一点,而且远程教育是必须报国家认可的公立院校才可以报考公务员。

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