雅思写作范文赏析之犯罪是人的天性
雅思写作范文赏析之犯罪是人的天性
有些人认为犯罪是人的天性，而有些人认为我们可以在小孩小的时候停止他们的这种倾向，你有什么看法？
crimes undermine human society. reasons for committing a crime are varied and complex, so we could not say that violation of law is just human nature and that people’s tendency to break t he law could be stopped when they are young。
we are still not sure what causes people to commit a crime. the reason seems to be clear in cases in which a thief steals money to make a living or buy things normally unaffordable. many thieves, when caught and interviewed, reveal that they come from poor families and have very little education. therefore we could establish a relation between less privileged family background and low level of education. many people used to believe that parents could teach their children the harms of wrongdoing by showing them the consequences of such action and the obligation of complying with social norms. such method works for most children who are aware of what they are doing and what would happen from their action. but we also learn from news or other sources that many high-level officials take bribes or abuse power for their own benefit. such people with high income and good education clearly know what they are doing and the possible consequences. such crimes would not have happened if tendency to commit crimes could be stopped when people were young。
moreover, we know that people tend to act for their own benefit, but we do not know if this is due to human nature or other causes such as ideas learned later in life. if it is human nature, people live in faraway places without much education would commit crimes at a higher rate than people with schooling in cities. by contrast, people in remote places are more honest and kind, and the crime rate is significantly lower than that in city. from such evidence, we could not conclude that the above assertion is true。
while we continue to explore what causes crime and how to prevent it, we need to bear in mind that it is far more complex than we normally think. accordingly, measures for crime prevention should also be multidimensional。
to sum up, the conclusion that it is human nature to commit crime and that people’s tendency to break the law could be stopped when they are young is not well supported. people become criminals for many reasons and we should adopt more effective methods for crime prevention。
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8. Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Television screens, newspapers, buses, and almost all city streets are flooded by all kinds of advertisements. This has both advantages and disadvantages to consumers who are unavoidably influenced, though the degrees vary from person to person. Because of the advertisements placed by many competing companies, consumers are able to learn about certain new products rapidly. If a product happens to be what some consumers need, they might be attracted to make a purchase and have trial use. If it turns out to be really good, people would set about recommending it to friends and the sales of this product will go up very quickly. So, we see this is a win-win situation both to consumers and manufacturers and we also see that consumers are not just influenced profoundly all at once. It takes time for them to establish faith in the advertised products. In most cases, the advertised products are good and worth buying. But there are also cases where the effects or functions of a certain product are much exaggerated and it will definitely fool some people when they are attracted all at once and go to buy it. Since a product can only win the market through its quality and its long established fame, there’s every reason to believe that those fake or much exaggerated products will eventually lose their market shares and die out. Thus, we see that the market is selective and consumers are sensible in the long term. In developed countries, there are strict censorship and supervising systems regarding advertising. If the advertisement put up by a company fails to honor the advertised effects, it would be termed as fraud, thus violating the law which could lead to really serious result. In most cases, the manufacturing company would be fined so heavily that it would be difficult for it to survive any longer. From the foregoing discussion, we can see that advertisements influence consumers both favorably and unfavorably and the degrees of this influence differ from person to person. To protect consumers, governments can follow the practice of developed countries by enforcing really strict censorship and supervising laws in regard to advertising as a whole.
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