英语六级作文评分标准

英语六级作文评分标准
英语六级作文评分标准

英语六级作文评分标准

英语六级考试还有十多天就要开考了,考前除了安心复习,还有一些规则性的东西大家需要提前了解,这里为2015年6月英语六级作文评分原则及标准的内容,希望对大家考前冲刺作文有一个方向性的帮助。

(一)四六级作文评分标准

1. 本题满分为15分

2. 阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。

3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为所阅文章与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为所阅文章稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。

4. 评分标准

5. 2分——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。

5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。

11分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。

14分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺、连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。

[注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。]

5. 字数不足应酌情扣分:

(二)字数与分数扣分比例

1. 如题目中给出主题句,起始句,结束句,均不得计入所写字数。

2. 规定的内容未写全者,按比例扣分。

3. 如要判为0分,需慎重处理。

6. 为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准,现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分,列表如下,称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60分(相当于百分制的60分)。

(三)四六级作文评分原则

1. CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求,对作文的评判应以此为准则。

2. CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而和合适地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

4. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分给高分,包括满分;该给低分给低分,包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。

5. 所发样卷一律不得翻印,严禁出版,一经发现,必予追究。

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1. in view of the practical need of society, …

鉴于社会的实际需要,……

【例子】In view of the practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English。

【译文】鉴于社会的实际需要,愈来愈多的人对学英语有兴趣。

2. in other words, …= to put it differently

换言之,……

【例子】In other words, I will try my best to attain my goal。

【译文】换言之,我会尽最大的努力达成我的目标。

3. As a matter of fact, …= In fact, …

事实上,……

【例子】As a matter of fact, it is health that counts。

【译文】事实上,健康才是最重要。

4. … for this reason, …

基于这个理由,

【例子】For this reason, I have decided to take teaching as my future career。

【译文】基于这个理由,我已决定把教书作为未来的职业。

5. Besides (In addition), we shou ld not neglect …

此外,我们不应忽视…

【例子】In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society。

【译文】此外,我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。

6. That is to say, …= That is, …= Namely, …

那就是(说)……;亦即……

【例子】We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking

and drinking in the daily activities。

【译文】我们生活需有规律。也就是说,早睡早起,戒除烟酒。

7. What is more serious is (that).。.

更严重的是,……

【例子】What is more serious is that we do not cherish the wildlife。

【译文】更严重的是,我们不珍惜野生动物。

8. on the other hand, …

另一方面,……

【例子】The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public also should

develop the good habit of reducing pollution。

【译文】政府应严格执法,另一方面,大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。

9. In this light, if…, there can surely be no doubt (that) .。.

这样说来,假如...,当然毫无疑问地…。

【例子】In this light, if we can make good use of time, there can surely be no doubt that we will

get somewhere。

【译文】这样说来,假如我们能善用时间,当然毫无疑问地我们会成功。

10. 举例说明:

… for example, …例如

take … for examp le 拿……做例子

【例子】For example, we elevate the living standards blindly, but lower the quality of life。

【译文】例如,我们盲目地提高生活水准,却降低生活品质。

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