独立写作句型思路等 (模板)

独立写作句型参考

仅供参考，可以从中选取句子做自己的模板，也可以自己根据要求发挥创意模仿。

开头句型：

If parents want their students to perform well at school, they should limit the time their children spend on watching TV.

开头功能：背景+引题+主题句

Never does the influence of television on children fail to fascinate us in modern society. It is widely accepted that watching TV should not be encouraged for children, because it has a lot of drawbacks. From my perspective, too much TV watching will adversely affect students’studying efficiency, so children’s time spent on it is supposed to be restricted.

结尾功能：重申主题句+概括分论点+（展望/建议）

All above reasons taken into account, we can safely reach the conclusion that_ parents should allow their children to spend as little time as possible in watching TV（主题句重申）. It is because watching TV will distract children from studying efficiently, and some unhealthy content in TV programs will affect children’s behavior at school（分论点概括）. Besides, teenagers’ physical health will thus be negatively influenced.

开头范例

题目：If parents want their children to perform well at school, they should limit the time their kids spend on watching TV.

（背景）Never does the influence of television on children fail to fascinate us in the modern society. （引题）It is widely accepted that (It is commonly held that) today children waste too much time watching TV, which has exerted a negative influence on their academic study. （个人观点）Therefore, from my perspective, the time they spent in watching TV should (is supposed to) be restricted/controlled.

练习：

Young people should try different jobs before they decide which job or career they will do in the long term.

Never does career choice of youngsters(填词或词组) fail to fascinate us in the modern society. It is widely accepted that changing jobs is not something unusual（句子）. From my perspective, the young are supposed to experience a variety of jobs before they choose their final career（句子）.

All above reasons taken into account, we can safely reach the conclusion that trying different jobs benefits young people for their long-term career choice.（主题句重申）It is because A, and B. Besides, …C（分论点）

Traffic jam/Food safety has become a global problem, afflicting millions of people.

题目：Many countries are paying attention to environmental problems.

But the attention is not making the environmental situations better. The environmental problems have attracted global attention over the past few years.

题目：

The advertisements on children have been an issue of debate for decades.

题目：It is easier for parents to raise their children than 50 years ago. Time is fleeting and has changed almost every aspect of the society in a profound but quiet way, and one of the most controversial parts lies in whether it is an easier task for parents to bring up their children.

第一句：引背景，交代主题（与题目相关即可）。(选一句做自己的模板，空格处填写相关话题)

1. Never does ___________ fail to fascinate us in the modern society.

2.________ has attracted global attention over the past few years.

3.________has become a world-wide concern.

4.________has become a global problem, afflicting millions of people.

5.________has been an issue of debate for decades.

6.Time is fleeting and has changed almost every aspect of the society in a profound but quiet way, and one of the most controversial parts lies in _____ (今昔对比题)

第二句：引出观点（省略号的地方填入观点）

比较题：Some people hold the opinion that…, while others think that…

Should题：It is widely accepted that…/It is commonly held that…, because

绝对词题：Although the majority of people may claim that…, it is not always the case/it is not necessarily the best way/the most important factor.

今昔对比题: It is a mainstream argument that …

社会现象题：We are not surprised to find that…

第三句，表个人观点，给出主题句

I am fully convinced that…(我坚信)

I am one of many advocates/opponents for the latter/former because of following reasons.

From my perspective/As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/Personally speaking…

结尾句型：

重申主题句+概括分论点

1. All above reasons taken into account, we can safely reach the conclusion that__主题句重申____.It is because A, B and C.

2. To summarize, _______主题句重申______________, since/as A and B. Given the seriousness of the problem, we have no alternative but to take effective measures to deal with it.

3. To conclude, it is because A and B that _________主题句重申______________。（强调句）

4. To sum up, there is growing evidence that A and B are too primary causes for the phenomenon that_____主题句重申________.

Because of填词because 填句子

因果推论会用到的句型：

There is increasing evidence that 原因may contribute to 结果。

Substantial evidence exists to show that A原因and B 原因are two major causes of 结果。Ample evidence shows that the three factors leading to 结果are A, B and C.

原因is often viewed as a root cause of 结果。

原因is a major contributor to 结果。

结果can be attributed to 原因。

解释：

Telecommuting is environmentally friendly. By this I mean, if some people opt for working from home, there will be fewer cars on the roads and the air will become cleaner.

Homeschooled kids lack adequate social interaction. In other words, they fail to develop social skills.

每个主体段段末总结会用到的短语：

1.Simply put, …

2.Obviously, …

3.Needless to say, …

主体段段落结构：分论点+理由+例子+小结句

几个重要构思分论点的万能理由：

政治——政府的主要作用就是政策+拨款

经济——生活富裕了，人们也有了更多选择权，幸福感更强

科技——对衣食住行产生了全方位的深刻影响

教育----让人们对社会各方面有了更深层次的了解，更开明，更文明，更关心他人，国家和整个社会

观念----从保守到开放

生活方式----快节奏的生活方式，导致人际关系疏远，生活习惯不健康等

The advertisements on children shouldbe banned.

Never does _the advertisements on children__________ fail to fascinate us in the modern society. It is widely accepted that there are lots of disadvantages that advertisements on children will bring.

There are lots of disadvantages that advertisements on children will bring.

There are lots of advantages that clean energy will bring

There are lots of disadvantages that environmental pollution will bring.

Many people believe that the biggest disadvantages of technology is that it may give rise to some unimaginative negative influences.

The fact that computers deprive people of their imagination and creativity makes me believe that they are a curse rather than a blessing.

It goes without saying that the eye-catching development of the Internet makes many people believe that it is cure-all solution.However, it is not always the case.

It cannot be denied that museums can play an educational role for the simple reason that they provide the public with a good opportunity to study their countries’ history and tradition.

Many people fail to take into account the vital fact that the diversity of languages will enhance the cultural development and that is why so many languages are on a verge of extinction. Nothing has received more praise and abuse than TV.

There is no doubt that the relationship between family members is not as close as it used to be. The reason why advertisements are so prevailing is that they are informative.

So prevailing is the Internet that nobody can avoid being influenced by it.

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