雅思写作的常见基本问题与解决方案

雅思写作的常见基本问题与解决方案
雅思写作的常见基本问题与解决方案

雅思写作的常见基本问题与解决方案

问题1:没话可写

有些同学拿到雅思作文题之后头脑中一片空白,完全没有想法。终于想到一个理由,

写了两句话就停下来数数有多少个字,然后又开始苦苦思索。雅思的考题确实非常广泛,

有些话题没话可写也正常。不过雅思是一个语言考试,不是专业考试,所以它需要的只是

一些常识。如果坚持积累和学会思考的方法,其实雅思作文写到250个单词是不难的。

首先要积累和储备一些素材,这样到了考场上能够有点现成的材料可供使用。支持或

反对的理由是什么?好处和弊端是什么?这些东西如果想不到,就去雅思范文里收集一些。

其次需要进行论证和展开。分析的角度包括事物的前因后果,它的正反两面,它的相关例子,或者把某个事情进行分类。掌握了正确的方法,思路一旦打开,也许你还停不了笔呢!

问题2:词汇量小

典型症状是认识很多词,但是写不出来。或者会写某个词,但是不会造句。其实你不

是认识的词汇量小,而是会用的词汇量小。你以前背单词都是一天背几百个,只求认识不

求运用,结果发现一直没有形成自己的核心词汇。

以后请你改变背单词的方式,不要光背中文意思,还应该把这个词的用法记住了。包

括这个词和别的词如何进行搭配collocation。建议你从范文当中去收集写作词汇,这样

一篇文章能收集到几十个有用的词,还能掌握词汇的用法。多看多积累是很重要的。如果

你是模仿型选手,你的用词都是老外常用的搭配,你的文章分数一定很高;如果你是创作

型选手,你的用词搭配全是自创表达,考官只会觉得你的英文不靠谱。

要想扩充你的写作词汇,可以找一个本子自己积攒。写作词汇无需多,但是一定要精。这个词汇本是你的财富,代表了你的用词偏好。无论是日常表达,还是雅思考试,你肯定

会用自己最熟悉最擅长的那些词。随着你的核心词汇不断扩大,你的表达能力也会越来越强。

问题3:语法不好

语法不好的同学通常有以下两种情况:一种是中学英语没学好、讨厌学语言;一种是

跟着老外学英语,比如去了国外,或者上了国际学校。第一种情况很好理解,第二种则是

由于老外比较忽视语法教学造成的。如果你从3岁就一直跟着老外学英语,你可以不用学

语法。如果你都十多岁了,然后跟着老外学英语,你还不学语法,那你的英语会比较混乱,尤其是在写作这一块。语言是有规则的,而不懂规则是容易犯错的。老外可以不用学语法,因为那是母语,你也把自己当老外?

不要被厚厚的语法书吓到了,很多语法细则在写作中完全用不上。但你一定要明白英

文的基本语法原则,否则你的文章真的会无法无天。你需要补一补基本语法,并且通过造

句练习来熟悉这些语法规则。如果你经常粗心犯错,那就做一些专门的语法改错练习,提

高你对语法的敏感度。

问题4:缺乏逻辑

很多同学写的文章前言不搭后语,句子之间缺乏连贯性。个别同学可能属于先天性的

思维跳跃,不讲逻辑,但大多数的同学还是因为英语水平的问题。他们把背过的句子拼在

一起,或者硬塞一些句子在文章里。很多时候不是因为需要写这句话,而是因为他们背过

这句话。

如果你写中文有逻辑,写英文没逻辑,那么你只需要提高英语能力就可以了。如果你

中英文都缺乏逻辑,那么你可以和有条理的朋友多多交流,虚心接受他们的意见。不过思

维跳跃并不是坏事情,也许你在专业方面或生活方面很有创意呢!

问题5:使用模板

有些同学喜欢背模板,用模板拼凑出一篇文章,并且还沾沾自喜,等到考试成绩出来

就悲剧了。模板文章的特点是很假、很空。有些句子貌似写得不错,可惜和文章主题无关,属于万能型的句子。有些句子和文章有关,是你自己写的,但是写得很烂。整篇文章严重

不协调,容易会引起考官反感、恶心或者哭笑不得。你也许会奇怪,我自己怎么没这种感觉?因为考官的母语是英语,所以他们看到写得很烂的英语会有感觉;而你的母语是汉语,

英语又学得不好,所以你对英语的好赖没感觉。

扔掉模板也许是一件很纠结的事情,因为自己写句子会很辛苦,或者写不出来。其实

从刚开始学写作,你就应该学着造句,哪怕造简单的句子。等到你自己句子写得不错了,

再背一些开头结尾的模板套句也是可以的,考试的时候能帮你节省一点时间。但是如果你

本末倒置,从最开始就背模板,不练习基本的造句能力,你就走上了一条歧途。当有一天

你发现自己被模板绑架了,离开模板写不出句子,你的写作也就完了。

问题6:不想写啊

如果你不想写,讨厌写,那就对了。雅思写作是应试写作,不是有感而发,而且还是

用外语写,所以很少有人会喜欢写雅思作文。你有拖延症,你不能坚持,你觉得逛街看电

影聊天打游戏比写作文有意思,说明你是正常人,正常人都和你一样。

但是请你想想练写作的好处:能够提高雅思成绩,有了好成绩才能出国,才能上名校。能够锻炼英语技能,这些技能对于你今后出国读书写论文、进外企工作、和老外交朋友都

有着巨大的好处。练习写作就像减肥或者健身,过程非常痛苦,但是有一天,当你看到自

己完美的身材和棒棒的体格,你会发现原来一切付出都是有回报的!

对于那些刚开始写不出文章的同学,或者写出来质量很差的同学,建议你从收集写作词汇开始,然后练习写句子;也可以去仿写或改写他人的文章,然后写类似的题目,最后再写新的题目。等到你脑子里储备了很多东西,能够随时进入提笔写文章的状态,你离雅思写作的好成绩也就快了。

对雅思作文审题、内容和结构的安排、如何使用连接词来使文章连贯都能有比较明确的了解。但是这两项并不能保证能够拿到六分或以上。除此之外还要求烤鸭们用词准确,语法无误或少错误。

雅思写作高分必备丰富词汇+漂亮句式

对雅思作文审题、内容和结构的安排、如何使用连接词来使文章连贯都能有比较明确的了解。但是这两项并不能保证能够拿到六分或以上。除此之外还要求烤鸭们用词准确,语法无误或少错误。而丰富的词汇和漂亮的句式则是帮助学生跨过到6分,6.5到7分的关键雅思写作要求学生完成两篇内容准确合理,文章连贯,词汇准确丰富和语法正确句式多元的文章。哥总结就一个词“锦上添花”。内容准确合理和连贯,表达正确是作文的“锦”,而词汇丰富和句式多元是“花”。

在和许多烤鸭接触的过程中,发现很多烤鸭去背诵一些所谓的雅思词汇却不知道如何正确使用,就会出现表达生硬,用词不当的情况。其实的所谓的难词、难词并不是帮助学生在词汇方面获得高分的决定因素,而是准确恰当,符合英语表达习惯的词汇和词组才是关键。

来看看一些烤鸭用错词汇的例子:

缓解冲突:不恰当solve the conflict修改resolvethe conflict

分析观点:不恰当pinpoint the argument修改analyse the argument

分析事件:过分复杂anatomies剖析theissue修改analysethe issue

致命疾病:不准确deathful disease修改deadly/fataldisease

严重的问题:不正式terrible problem修改pressing/urgentproblem

光临店铺:不准确patronage the shop修改patronize/frequentthe shop

上升趋势:不准确an increase trend修改agrowing trend

要学会如何准确用词,首先要了解这个词汇、词组使用的语境,而不是望文生义的记背单词,然后按照中式思维,生搬硬套,胡乱搭配,往往出错。如何去恰当的用词呢?首先,雅思阅读。在阅读一篇文章的时候,烤鸭可以看到一些词汇是如何搭配,在什麽样的上下文中准确使用,在什麽语境下意思不同等等。唯有如此,才能完全掌握一个词汇或者词组的使用方法。

雅思写作中科技类话题常用词组

雅思写作中科技类话题常用词组 雅思写作“科技类”话题必备短语 1 ,登月moon landing 2 ,国家安 全national security 3 ,核武器nuclear weapon 4 ,科学成 就scientific achievement 5 ,科学仪 器scientific instrument 6 ,可再生资源renewable energy sources 7 ,能源的耗损depletion of resources 8 ,能源危 机energy crisis 9 ,人工智 能artificial intelligence 10 ,踏足于set foot on 11 ,太空研 究space exploration / space research 12 ,天然资 源natural resources 13 ,现场直 播live TV broadcast 14 ,濒危物 种endangered species 15 ,环境恶 化environment deterioration 16 ,机械劳 动mechanical labor 17 ,家庭电 器household appliance 18 ,全球变 暖global warming 19 ,寿命life expectancy, life span 20 ,处于灭绝的边缘be on the verge of extinction 21 ,促进人类社会的发展 promote the development of human society

,恶劣的环境 hostile environment ,降低成本 lower the cost ,降低风险 lower the risks , 破坏社会稳定 undermine the social stability ,提高工作效 率 improve work efficiency ,提高生产力 increase the productivity ,下岗工人 laid-off worker ,不合伦理道德的 ethically and morally wrong ,改善生活质量 improve the quality of life ,出现、产生 come into being ,机器翻译 mechanical translation ,不可避免的趋势 an inevitable trend ,大量的知识储备 vast stores of knowledge ,个人优缺点 individual strengths and weaknesses ,个性化的改变 personalised shift ,老师指 导下的学习 teacher-directed learning ,有深远的影响 have a profound effect on ,环保的 environmentally friendly ,散布信息 disseminate information ,身心健康 physical and mental health ,受到普遍欢迎 gain widespread popularity ,有深远的影响 exert a far-reaching influence on ,在线金融交易 online financial transaction ,直接的反馈 instant feedback ,把虚幻当现实 take fantasy for reality 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46

2015年9月3日雅思写作真题回忆【附答案】

2015年9月3日雅思写作真题回忆备考雅思写作考试,考生除了掌握写作技巧之外,每一次的考题回顾也是要看的,这样才会知道考试都考了哪些内容,心理也有一个准备。下面,我们一起来看2015年9月3日雅思写作真题回忆吧。 Task 1 The bar chart shows the information about the favourite subjects of 60 students from 2 schools, school A and school B. 分析: 本次的小作文考查了柱状图,且为静态图。配图是根据网友回忆所做,数据仅供参考。纵轴代表人数,时态在回忆的图中没有明确显示,范文用过去式为主。在写作时,要注意数据内和数据间的比较。 范文:

The bar chart shows the students’major preference between school A and school B. The optional subjects are social science, science, language, sport and craft & drawing. In school A, more than half of the students (36) chose sport as their favourite subject, compared with 5 in school B. By contrast, the rest subjects are all not very popular among students in school A. In school B, 25 students enjoyed craft and drawing, which was more than five times as many as the students number in school A.(4). Also, the figure in language came second in school B, roughly reaching 18 and narrowly beating social science into third place. In addition, no matter in school A or school B, students were not quite interested in social science and science, with less than 10 persons in both. Overall, students in school A and school B had different major preference. Students in school A liked sport the most and disliked craft and drawing while students in school B were more fond of craft and drawing taut were not much crazy about science. Task 2 题目: Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 题型: 论述类议论文

雅思写作常考话题

雅思写作常考话题 这10类的话题跨度非常大,难度也有较简单和偏难的。同学们在备考雅思写作的时候,可以把写作分为不同类型的话题进行分门别类的备考。今天给大家带来了雅思写作10大常考话题,希望能够帮助到大家,一起来学习吧。 雅思写作10大常考话题 一、教育 1. 教育应该包括哪些内容? 母题: It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? (050312) 提示: 本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开(个人与社会),准备好这篇*,即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支-教育的功能,做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度,可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性

(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开,对于个人,可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。 子题: 大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能?大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益?准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验?大学要不要扩招?中学 阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育?要不要延长义务教育年限?要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学?老师要教学生如何判断是非吗? 2. 学校的科目谁来选择? 母题: Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916) 提示: 这类题目采取的策略就是"双批判",因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。 子题1:

雅思作文写作常见错误

作文写作十大类常见错误 一、句子不完整 ?1. 一个简单句有2个基本成分:主语和谓语动词,两者缺一不可。 ?错误: ?In china has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television. ?正确: ?China has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television. ?错误: ?One of the many benefits of travelling overseas learning how to cope with the unexpected. ?正确: ?One of the many benefits of travelling overseas is learning how to cope with the unexpected. ?2. 如果一个句子有从句,也必须保证从句的完整。 ?错误: ?Those who overweight or indulge in unhealthy diets are candidates for heart attacks. ?正确: ?Those who are overweight or indulge in unhealthy diets are candidates for heart attacks. ?3.介词后面一定要加名词、代词或从句做宾语。 ?错误: ?A marked character of cooperative learning is that personal success only springs from. ?正确: ?A marked character of cooperative learning is that personal success only springs from group success. ?4. 大多数情况下,比较级后面一般要加than,并且清楚指明所比较的对象。 ?错误: ?Divorce is more common. ?正确: ?Divorce is more common than it was one generation ago. 二、句子成分多余 ?1. 一个简单句通常只有一个主语,如果主语超过一个,要使用连词构成并列主语。 ?错误: ?Smoking, drinking are banned in many places of work. ?正确: ?Smoking and drinking are banned in many places of work. ?2.如果一个句子中出现多个谓语动词,要使用连词连接结,构成并列动词,或在一些句子中使用关系代词构成复合句。 ?错误:

历年雅思写作真题

The leaders directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. What do you think? 2015年1月17日雅思写作真题 Some people think that the amount of noise people make have to be controlled strictly, others say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 2015年1月29日雅思写作真题 Currently, some scientists or travelers like to travel to remote natural environment such as south pole, do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. 2015年1月31日雅思写作真题 Some people argue that too much attention and too many resources are given to protection wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2015年2月7 日雅思写作真题 Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why? What can be done to attract local people? 2015年2 月12 日雅思写作真题 Some people think that the age limit for driving should be increased in order to make driving safer. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2015年2月14日雅思写作真题 The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile should be banned like smoking.To what extend do agree or disagree? 2015年2月28日雅思写作真题 Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages? 2015年3月12日雅思写作真题 some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area which in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do agree or disagree? 2015年3月14日雅思写作真题 Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for their children, others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 2015年3 月21 日雅思写作真题 Some people believe famous people's support towards international aids organizations draws the attentions to problems. Others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 2015年3月28 日雅思写作真题 Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have side effects on young people's writing and reading skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2015年4月11 日雅思写作真题 Older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problems will be caused? And what are the solutions? 2015年4月18日雅思写作真题 Some people think only best students should be rewarded, others think we should reward students who make progress.

雅思写作常用话题

雅思写作常见话题 一.学生生活 1、大学生交学费:一些人认为大学生应该支付他们的学费,另外一些人认为政府应该支付 学费,你的观点是什么? 2、考试:一些人认为考试对学生有负面的影响,一些人认为考试对教育有正面的作用,讨 论双方的观点并且给出你的见解。 3、出国留学:最近几年,许多年轻人决定出国留学,你认为出国留学利大于弊吗? 4、大学生找不到工作:目前大学毕业生难就业,分析个人和社会的原因,并提出解决方法。 5、大学宿舍与校外公寓:大部分大学都有很多居住方式供学生选择,他们可以选择大学宿 舍或校外公寓,讨论两种不同发做法并且给出你的见解。 6、学术课程和实用技能:人们常说,学校学科的定位过于学术化,而孩子们如果能学习到 有关家政管理、工作及人际关系技巧等方面的实际知识会对他们更有用,你是否同意此观点? 7、学生评价老师:一些人认为,为了提高教学质量,应该鼓励学生对老师进行评价和批评。 其他人则认为这将导致课堂上对老师的尊重和良好纪律的缺失。讨论双方的观点并且给出你的见解。 8、自学和跟老师学:一些人认为,没有老师,他们凭自己会学得更好,其他人认为有老师 的指导总是有利的。你的观点是什么? 9、学生兼职工作:许多国家的学生会在课余时间做许多不同的兼职。一些人认为这是错误 的,但是其他人相信这样的工作将能够拓展学生的知识并且增加他们的责任感。你的观点是什么? 10、不同的朋友和相似的朋友:有些人喜欢与自己性格不同的人交朋友,有些人喜欢和 自己性格相似的人交朋友,你喜欢和哪种类型的人交朋友呢?请说出理由。 二、家庭生活 1、照看老年人:有人认为老年人应该被在家中赡养,另外有些人认为他们应该被送到养老院,你的观点是什么? 2、孩子缺少父母关注:有些人认为现在的孩子不像以前的孩子那样能得到父母很多的关注。在多大程度上你同意或反对此观点? 3、家庭成员关系不亲密:人们现在普遍承认家庭成员的关系不像过去那样亲密了,请给出可能的原因并提出你的建议。 4、父母和学校:有些人认为父母应该教育孩子如何成为好的社会成员。然而另外一些人认为学校应该做这件事情。讨论两种见解并给出你的观点。 5、孩子早送幼儿园:现如今孩子们很早就被送到幼儿园,这样母亲们就可以回到她们的工作中去,而且孩子们也可以从小适应社会。你是否同意这样的观点? 6、体罚孩子:很长时间以来,体罚孩子是家庭中的一个惯例。但最近几年,人们对这一做法的观念发生了巨大的变化。现在有很多人强烈地反对这一观点。你的观点是什么? 三、现代科技 1、科技影响人们之间的交流:现在,因为科技,人们相互交流的方式已经发生了改变。科技怎样改变了人们相互交流的方式?这是一个正面的还是负面的发展? 2、计算机对孩子的影响:电脑并没有帮助孩子更有效地学习。另外,电脑的使用对青少年的身体和心理健康都有着负面作用。在多大程度上你同意或反对此观点呢? 3、太空研究:大量的钱花在太空研究上。一些人认为这些钱花得不应该。你是否同意? 4、私家车:你认为日益增多的私家车有哪些益处和弊端? 5、互联网:你认为互联网利大于弊吗?

雅思写作常见语法错误主谓一致问题

雅思写作常见语法错误主谓一致问题 传说中的雅思学霸是你吗?带着高分去出国的烤鸭们有你的一席之地吗?这些其 实都是建立在你克服重重困难,攻克雅思最难点的时候才能够达到的,本文为大家讲 解雅思考试最难的部分—雅思写作之雅思写作常见语法错误主谓一致问题,希望大家 能够关注。 雅思写作常见语法错误8大点如下: 雅思写作常见语法错误语序问题 雅思写作常见语法错误主谓一致和冠词的用法 雅思写作常见语法错误固定搭配 雅思写作常见语法错误词性(主语,动名词) 雅思写作常见语法错误双谓语 雅思写作常见语法错误时态 雅思写作常见语法错误单复数,冠词 雅思写作常见语法错误标点问题 错例1:Apart-time job offers you chance to demonstrate your ability and applywhat you have learned in school. 正解:Apart-time job offers you a chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.

错例2:Booksare of the various kinds and have different contents. 正解:Booksare of various kinds and have different contents. 改错练习: 1. The problemsthat are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. 2. The governmentsof all countries on this planet is beginning to realize the severity of watershortage. 以上就是雅思写作常见语法错误主谓一致问题的汇总介绍,希望能够帮助大家尽量避免这些错误,后面我们会一一为大家分类介绍这八大语法易错点。更多出国考试信息请继续关注前程百利雅思考试频道,我们会为你带来最新的雅思考试资讯和信息。

雅思写作真题总汇

雅思写作真题总汇_IELTS雅思 学术类: 1. The tables compare the amount of students who study at different levels of education in different countries? ( 比较不同国家的教育水平) 2. Compare people's income and tax in different countries. ( 不同国家人民收入与税金之比较。) 3. Compare the different household tasks and who does them. ( 比较男女在家事上的内容不同及其分担比率。) 4. Compare the difference between the rates of car theft, insurance costs and number of policemen. ( 比较各国之汽车被偷率、保险金高低和警察人数多寡之不同。) 5. Describe what kind of jobs people do in relation to their university major . ( 描述毕业生工作职务与大学在校主修之关系。) 6. Describe how water is gathered? ( 试描述水之取得) 7. Compare the construction of houses and how well they insulate the houses in summer and winter. ( 比较三个房子在冬天.夏天的结构及隔热情形) 8. The tables compare the amount of students who study at different levels of education in different countries? ( 不同国家之学生修读的教育程度总额之不同,教育水平之比较) Task 2 : 1现代生活中,许多人认为现在的工作压力比以前大了,闲暇时间更少,你的看法如何?Many people think that work nowadays is more stressful and less leisurely than in the past, how about you opnion? 2有人认为现代科技的不断发展,传统文化和技术必会灭亡,继续保持传统的文化和技术已经没有意义了,你的看法? As the development of modern science and technology, some aspects of traditional culture are being lost, so some people think that the traditional culture and technology will be replaced by

雅思写作十大常考话题和例子

雅思写作十大常考话题 1.学生生活 例: University graduates receive higher salaries than those who have a lower education. Therefore, some people say such students should pay for all their tuition fees. To what extent do you agree or disagree 2.家庭生活 例:Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree 3.现代科技 例: Computers do not help children to learn more effectively. On the contrary, their usage has a negative effect on both the physical and mental development of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree 4.媒体 例:Advertisements are getting their way into people’s lives. Discuss the effects of advertisements on people. Should all ads be banned 广告充斥人们的日常工作和生活。讨论广告对人们的影响。广告该不该禁止。 5.传统与发展 例:In the course of urban development, we often find ourselves confronted with the old building problem. Some people think we should pull down the old houses and buildings in the way; however, others argue that it is a very rash decision to tear them down without full consideration. What’s your opinion 6.动物 例:Should experiments be conducted on animals for the benefit of human beings 7.平等 例:In some countries, sports and entertainment personalities earn higher salaries than professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens

雅思写作中常见问题汇总

雅思写作中常见问题汇总 时间:2011-04-25 16:41:25 浏览次数:55次 在雅思写作的教学过程中,有机会批改了大量学员的雅思作文,且在这些作文当中发现雅思学员写作部分普遍存在离题,词汇贫乏,语法错误多等问题,现从雅思写作(大作文)的评分标准入手谈几点教学心得,以期对学员的雅思写作有所帮助。 雅思写作的评分标准之一是: Task Response(任务的完成情况)。在这个方面最重要的是字数和审题。 字数的问题相对比较小些,很多学员认为字数是硬件,但就因为认为只要是把字数写够,再用一些比较高级的词汇和复合句就算完成了任务,而最后由于没有把握论证的方向,造成写作扣题不严密的学员比比皆是。有的甚至把问题解决型的文章写成了辩论式的文章。如有学员在一篇讨论为什么有许多民工进城,如何解决的文章的引言段里写到:“As the number of peasants who are flooding into metropolises for jobs is increasing continually, vast changes await this society. The speed of the development in those cities, for example, is rising faster than ever before, which is partly due to their hardworking. However, this phenomenon has also exerted some negative impacts on our society such as traffic pressure, over-population and housing problems.”这位学员犯了答非所问的错误,题目要求答的是原因和解决办法,不是分析其所带来的正面及负面问题,最后无论语言质量多高,也拿不到好的分数。可见审题是非常重要的,它是学员通向高分的第一步。 笔者认为审题可以分为读题和解题两步骤。上述学员所犯的错误属于读题不仔细,没有认真看,而解题主要体现在如何把握题目所争论的焦点。很多学员看到题目中认识的单词,就开始发挥想象力,真可谓是下笔千言,离题万里。但是殊不知只有把握题目争论重心,才能保证论证有的方式放矢,获得高分。例如题目为:“Will computer replace human teacher?”的文章中,有的学员在论述的过程中所提出的观点是:“In my opinion, teacher is more necessary than computer.”该学员在继续论述老师为什么比电脑重要的同时其实已经偏离了重心,应当考虑的重点是,电脑不能取代老师,因为老师很重要。

【16-25天】18个高频雅思写作话题思路分析与素材汇总

最近考试高频的十八个写作话题思路分析与素材汇总!只有7页,共18个话题,中英双语结合给出了关键思路和素材,给出了关键的高分词汇与表达!老是在考试时理不清思路、想不出素材的同学,看了一定会有帮助的!大家加油加油! ----------------------------------------------我是分割线--------------------------------------------------- 一、跳槽的原因及解决办法 1、相关词汇: fierce competition heavy pressure job-hopping is looked upon to move upward quickly keep skill fresh and up to date acclimatize themselves to the rapidly changing society 2、原因: (1)社会压力大,人们的竞争意识增强,不断改变以适应社会的变化。 (2)处于个人发展的需要,寻求升职,更新知识。 (3)金钱的诱惑,不在乎在哪儿工作,做什么职业,只要挣钱多。 (4)家庭原因,spouse工作地点改变或孩子去其他地方上学。 3、解决方法: (1)要理性看待,一般来说,stability equals success。

(2)chronic job-hopper将被questioned integrity and loyalty ,not reliable。 (3)政府和mass media应该鼓励人们扎根一个地方,扎扎实实干事业,并且尽可能提高welfare,改善城市和community的环境,留住人才。 (4)公司应该提高工资待遇,给employee创造一个良好的工作环境,在保证企业利润的同时要考虑员工个人发展,增加培训,扩充员工的知识。 二、大学是否应该根据就业教授学生知识,大学的主要功能是什么 平衡写: 1、认为应该提供实际知识的: (1)大学生毕业就要找工作,因此要培养学生掌握future job的技能。 (2)有人甚至声称理论没用,不是每个大学生都要做科学家。 2、反对方: (1)It will definitely be shortsighted to…目光短浅理论知识非常重要,理论指导实践,大学的职责不仅是教会学生一门技术,更重要的是教授一种方法。 (2)不学理论只学实际知识,会使学生变成utilitarian,narrow-minded,lack of imagination,如果学生要学的只是生存的技能,那就去vocational school。 3、总结 总之,我认为大学的功能是versatile的,促进学生all-around development,培养学生具有creative mind in some special field,而不只是教授该领域的实际知识,可以通过一些part-time job来获得。 三、个人不能对环境保护做不了什么,同意不同意 This is just an excuse for the ignorance of environmental protection. 1、分析环境恶化原因是缺乏环保意识。 2、给出解决办法。 四、维持博物馆是否是浪费金钱? 1、提出自己的观点(反对)。 政府应该spend a lot of money to enrich the collection of museums to cater for different tastes or needs of different people.有的人认为是浪费钱,我认为是很有必要的。 2、博物馆很重要(博物馆的作用)。 (1)illuminate the culture,history and arts of the world. 比如,世界上最大的British Museum provide visitors with all-round knowledge about the world culture and arts,collections in it trace the development of civilization throughout the history of mankind. Definitely a heartquake! (2)shoulder the responsibility to preserve and carry forward a country‘s traditional culture. (3)serve as a significant mean of adolescent education,benefit both the present and future generation. 教育学生什么是美,purify their heart,也可以作为第二课堂,提供教学参考

20150425雅思写作A类考题回顾朗阁官方

雅思考试写作A 类考题回顾 朗阁海外考试研究中心 丁仡然 Task 1 考试日期 2015.04.25 类别 Bar (旧题) 题目 The bar chart compares the changes in the places where people used to surf on the Internet in the years 1998, 2000, 2002 and 2004 in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 题目翻译 以下柱状图比较了1998年、2000年、2002年和2004年英国人在不同地点上网的情况。 要素回忆(数据仅供参考) 写作指导 这次考的柱状图和几个月前的比较相似,考生们要注意趋势的表达和几根柱之间的对比。 1. 注意时态的表达(一般过去式) 2. 可按照不同上网地点进行归类,并写出几个地点之间不同百分比的比较和差异 102030405060 701998 2000 2002 2004 Home Work College Library p e r c e n t a g e o f p e o p l e

3. 注意是动态类型的柱形图 4. 一定要写overview 重点表达式Two times, three times as much as that of ..., double, triple, more than that, less than that... 题目评价难度一般 推荐练习剑桥5-6里的柱形图+高分范文的流程图 考试评价与备考建议本次考试为2015年比较常考的一种柱形图考试,柱状图依然会是考试主流,也可以多关注地图题的出现。

常见雅思写作语法错误

海口朗阁名师解析常见雅思写作语法错误 朗阁海外考试研究中心杨晔 一、语序 从句不使用疑问句语序,而使用陈述句语序,即主语在前,谓语在后的顺序排列。 错例1:Can you tell me how many students are there in this class? 正解:Can you tell me how many students there are in this class? 错例2:They were more worried about how far did they have to walk to get to the train station and could they catch the train before it left. 正解:They were more worried about how far they had to walk to get to the train station and if they could catch the train before it left. 改错练习: 1. It’s hard to decide whe n and where will we hold the sports meeting. 2. If you want to learn about the latest developments and discoveries from around the world, you will read about them in journals and research reports published in English, no matter whether are the scientists who wrote them from China or Norway. 二、主谓一致和冠词的用法 错例1:A part-time job offers you chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school. 正解:A part-time job offers you a chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.

历年雅思写作真题

2015年1 月10日雅思写作真题 The leaders directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. What do you think? 2015年1月17日雅思写作真题 Some people think that the amount of noise people make have to be controlled strictly, others say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 2015年1月29日雅思写作真题 Currently, some scientists or travelers like to travel to remote natural environment such as south pole, do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. 2015年1月31日雅思写作真题 Some people argue that too much attention and too many resources are given to protection wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2015年2月7 日雅思写作真题 Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why? What can be done to attract local people? 2015年2 月12 日雅思写作真题 Some people think that the age limit for driving should be increased in order to make driving safer. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2015年2月14日雅思写作真题 The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile should be banned like smoking.To what extend do agree or disagree? 2015年2月28日雅思写作真题 Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages? 2015年3月12日雅思写作真题 some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area which in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do agree or disagree? 2015年3月14日雅思写作真题 Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for their children, others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 2015年3 月21 日雅思写作真题 Some people believe famous people's support towards international aids organizations draws the attentions to problems. Others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both

相关文档
最新文档