2017考研英语二作文精品预测资料- 付博

Part A: 图表作?段落功能范例

第?段趋势及数据

The bar chart clearly informs us the trend that cell-phones become increasingly popular in China. In 1999, the number of such communication equipments in use remained only2 million, but the figure reached its peak at 9 million in 2010, which was twice that of 2005.

第?段原因或影响

Several contributing factors are lying behind this trend. For one thing, higher average income and lower price cell phones directly contribute to the boom of mobile-communication market. For another, these “marvelous machines” attract people because they are not merely phones, but boxes full of games, movies, pictures and songs.

第三段影响或建议

We should not either ignore the advantages or miss the disadvantages of this trend. On the one hand, the wide use of cell phones makes our daily life more convenient and comfortable. On the other hand, overdependence on them may result in numerous problems, such as isolation from face-to-face communication, psychological illnesses, and so on. Therefore, we should use them reasonably.

?、常用素材

（?）图表类型

1.Table

2.Bar chart / Column chart / Histogram

3.Pie chart

4.Line chart / Curve graph

5.Ring chart / Circular diagram

（?）常用句式

第?段:描述图表句式：

1.From the chart, it can be inferred/ estimated that ….

2.As is illustrated/ demonstrated/ exhibited/ manifested in the chart, ……

3.The chart reveals/ unveils/ demonstrates a noticeable trend that ……

4.The chart above clearly mirrors/ ec hoes a noticeable trend that ……

5.Emerging from／listed in／described in the chart is a noticeable trend that ……

6.Have you ever anticipated the prospects of …… in the coming decade? Let us just have a look at the figures

of …… as listed in the chart above.

变化趋势常用词汇：

“缓慢”、“逐渐”

slowly, steadily, gradually, slightly, insignificantly, gently, moderately, marginally

in a moderate way, step by step

“急剧”、“?幅”

rapidly, greatly, suddenly, quickly, obviously, considerably, sharply, steeply, dramatically, enormously, i ncredibly, amazingly, by leaps and bounds, by a wide margin, by a massive leap

“上升”、“下降”

rise, increase, ascend, accumulate, drop, decrease, descend, shrink

shoot, soar, leap, skyrocket, collapse, nose-dive, plunge

“峰值”、“稳定”、“波动”

touch the top, reach the peak

remain constant, stay unchanged

fluctuate moderately, fluctuate violently

第?段：原因分析句式

1.This kind of phenomenon is not entirely a coincidence. There are several factors behind this trend. First things

first, …. Apart from this, …. Last but not leas t, ….

2.The trend in … seems to have been triggered by the following factors. To begin with, …. Apart from this, ….

Last but not least, ….

3.The trend in …… can be attributed to several factors, of which the following one are not to be ignored. …..

4.It is tra ditionally accepted that …can account for this trend, but that is not the key point. A deeper insight into

this matter would reveal that what really counts is ….

5.From the statistics we can see that …, behind which there should be explanations. First of all, ….. However,

not all the reasons are so noble. …

6.What can account for the changes in …? I have to mention the fact that …. Meanwhile, ….

第三段：观点建议句式

1.Neither the advantage nor the disadvantage of … should escape our attention. On one hand, … On the other

hand, … Therefore, we must have a right attitude toward…

2.Considering the seriousness of the … problem, it is high time that we took initiatives to …. For the

authorities, …should …. For the general public, …should …. I am confident that…

（三）课堂练习

Write an essay based on the following table .In your writing you should

1) describe the table ,and

2) give your comments

You should write at least 150 words on ANSERE SHEET 2.(15 points)

Exercise 1

Changes in the Numbers of Immigrant Worker in X City (Thousand)

Exercise 2

不同年龄段亚健康?数比例

Exercise 3

Exercise 4

（四）经典语料

2016

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1)interpret the chart and

2)give your comments

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

Listed in the pie chart above are different motivations of traveling among college students. Students traveling to make friends or to be independent are minorities, accounting for 9% and 6% respectively. However, those for sight-view are in the lead, accou nting for an alarmingly large proportion –37%, with those for relief close behind –33%.

From the statistics we can see that students tend to travel more for pleasure or relief than other factors, behind which there should be explanations. First of all, beautiful sceneries are highly valued in modern life less because they entertain us, and more from its indication –being embraced by the nature and polished by beauty. However, not all the reasons are so noble. As an escape, traveling can temporarily se t students apart from tests, interviews or other forms of competition.

I am confident that whatever purpose it is, traveling is largely a sign of social improvement. It helps to broaden students horizon, to make them refreshed, or even to inspire them equi p themselves with more knowledge to explore the unknown world. Therefore, it would be wise for students to devote spare time to traveling.

2015

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1)interpret the chart and

2)g ive your comments

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

Described in the pie chart above is the distribution of expenses during Spring Festival in a certain city in China. The spending on meals, traffic and other items keeps normal, 20% r espectively. However, of all the expenses, the share spent on new-year gifts is in the lead, accounting for an alarmingly large proportion –40%.

From the statistics we can see that people tend to spend more on presents than other parts, behind which the re should be explanations. First of all, gifts are highly valued in our mind less because of its utility as stuff, and more from its indication –respect and kindness to relatives or friends. However, not all the reasons are so noble. People’s vanity, the desire to show off their wealth, is another driving force behind the alarming spending on gifts.

I am confident that the trend of “gift-boom” is largely a sign of social improvement –people are thrifty to themselves but generous to friends or relatives. H owever, too much emphasis on the value of gifts may spoil friendship or the noble affection. Therefore, we should present gifts in a rational way.

2014

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1)interpret the chart and

2)give your comments

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

Described in the column chart above are some significant changes in the ratio of urban residents to rural population among in the past two decades. In the 1990s, the rural population kept almost three times that of urban one. However, the past twenty years witnessed the steady cl imbing of urban population and the constant shrinking of rural one. Ultimately, the two proportions look almost equal by the year of 2010.

From the statistics we can see that an increasing number of people are shrugging off their rural status and becomin g city residents. Some reasons can be found behind these changes. First of all, with the quick pace of urbanization, most people who used to live in the outskirts of cities are automatically transformed into urban residents. Moreover, in a society where op portunities are open to the talented, people in mounting numbers –even those who were in remote areas –can crowd into cities for better employment and more decent living.

I am convinced that this trend is a sign of social improvement –with this migratio n, people can find chances to share better education, employment, social security and other facilities. This trend will benefit the migrants as long as social administrations do a good job in arranging the floating population.

2013

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1)interpret the chart and

2)give your comments

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

某?校学?兼职情况

Described in the column chart above are some differences in the proportion of the s tudents from various grades who having par-time jobs. Freshmen are not the group who are most enthusiastic about side jobs, nor are sophomores or juniors. However, seniors do show the most sideline zealousness.

From the statistics we can see that seniors who are about to start their careers place comparatively more emphasis on concurrent post. Some reasons can be found behind their preference. First of all, by taking such jobs they can build working skills, with which they can impress their would-be employ ers. Moreover, after being tempered by hardships in part-time jobs, they can also steel themselves in the blow.

As a senior, I have been occupied in preparing for the National Entrance Tests for Masters for a year. This process has toughened me up in academic performance. But I am determined to take a part-time job after the tests, so that I can also get prepare d in terms of practical skills.

2012

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1)interpret the chart and

2)give your comments

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

某公司员??作满意度调查

年龄/满意度满意不清楚不满意

小于等于40岁16.7% 50.0% 33．3%

41-50岁0.0% 36.0% 64.0%

?于50岁40.0% 50.0% 10.0% The chart above clearly mirrors the overall picture of employment satisfaction among different age groups. Specifically, employees over the age of 50 report the highest level of job satisfaction, with approximately 40% of them voicing their positive feeling towards jobs. However, none of those between 41 and 50 expresses such feeling, contrarily, with 64% of them frankly showing their distaste.

Where does such a difference come fr om? It may take roots in such factors. For those who are at their forties, heavy burdens, ranging from child-rearing, parent-caring to occupation-competition, are imposed on them. And these burdens deprive them of their joy of life, and even their delight of work. However, those over their fifties have stepped over this awkward stage of life, enjoying their life and work of great ease.

Clearly, “the forties” are working under pressure, be it from families or companies! The pressure could have negative influ ence both on their job performance and their well-being. Therefore, to achieve a better satisfaction among employees, companies or firms should pay special attention and care to these “miserable forties”.

2011

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1)interpret the chart and

2)give your comments

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

This column chart demonstrates us the significant changes in the market share of car industry. To be specific, the past two years has witnessed the rapid increase in the share taken by domestic car brands, from 25% in 2008 to nearly 34% in 2009, which was accompanied by the drop of share owned by Japanese car brands, from 35% in 2008 to 25% in 2009, with that of America keeping stable.

What can account for the changes in car market in these two years? I have to mention the fact that Chinese enterprises have endeavored to develop self-owned technologies, which not only bring them outstanding products, but also earn them credibility. These achievements in turn increase their market share. Meanwhile, Japanese cars, which used to be highly praised by the world market, are now losing their competitiveness due to their price-disadvantage and recall-crisis.

Here is my suggestion for domestic brands – “from the people, and for the people”. Since Chinese enterprises benefit a lot from the general public, they have the duty to keep producing cars of great quality and stability for the people!

2010

Directions:

Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1)interpret the chart and

2)give your comments

You should write about 150 words on the AN SWER SHEET.

This column chart exhibits us the trends on mobile phone subscriptions both in developed countries and in developing ones. The former experienced a steady increase in subscriptions from 1990 to 2007 and then a standstill in 2008. Meanwhile, t he latter, developing countries, have witnessed a gradual increase in the first five years and then a great surge in the following four years.

Largely, the number of mobile phone subscribers in developing countries surpassed that in developed ones since 2003, and the gap kept widening. How did that happen? At the beginning, mobile communication was a luxury and only the minority, people from the developed countries, can afford this service. But latter this communication service was no longer an unaffordable dream for a large population of civilians in developing countries. So, the subscription there began to boom.

In my opinion, this trend will continue for a while in the future and be beneficial for both individuals and society of developing countries. The reason is self-evident: in an era of “info & tech”, mobile phones as the source of information are indispensible for any of us.

附录：课堂练习范?

Exercise 1

Emerging from the line chart is a noticeable trend that immigrant workers in mounting numbers are swarming into X city to bring home the bacon. As is illustrated, the first five years has witnessed a moderate increase in the immigrant population, whic h was followed by a dramatic rise of the following five years.

There are a huge number of reasons behind this phenomenon, of which the following two should never be ignored. To begin with, the growth of rural population brings about the problem of sur plus rural workforce, which drives them into cities to seek a day’s work for a day’s pay. Apart from this, many job vacancies emerge during the course of urban expansion, and these vacancies are appealing to them.

We should not either ignore the advant ages or miss the disadvantages. On the one hand, huge amount of migrant workers accelerate urban constructions. On the other hand, they pose a heavy pressure to department concerned to

solve their problems of medical care, lodging, and schooling of their c hildren. Therefore, we call for a well-managed and reasoned mechanism of recruiting immigrant workers.

Exercise 2

The circular diagram provides us the general information about the proportions of sub-healthy people of different ages among their peers. Comp aratively, those in their twenties face least threats of sub-health-status. However, the most striking fractions of the chart involve the mid-age and retiring groups, who are those in their thirties and fifties and whose health causes most concerns.

The co ntributing factors behind the distribution may be complicated, but the following ones may not be excluded —body vitality and immunity, life pressure, and living style. Youngsters, the minority of sub-health population, are at the peak of body vitality and organism immunity, are faced with least stress and are free enough to enjoy physical exercise. However, the thirties and the fifties, the majority of the sub-healthy, tend to be overburdened in work as workers or leaders, sparing no time for physical exer cise and experiencing functional decline of the body.

There is no doubt that physical health is essential to the quality of life and job performance. Therefore, the young, the aging and the aged all should spare some time for relaxation and workout, so tha t they can step out of the shadow of sub-healthy status and enjoy their work and life.

Exercise 3

In a survey conducted among subscribers of online education from both America and China, growth is found among users from both two countries. In China, the growth started from 18% in 2013, and shot to 34% in 2015. However, that of America was slight.

What are the explanations for this growth? It occurs to most of us that network is increasingly popular among us, and in turn triggers increasing n umber of online-users, including online educational users. This chain of cause-and-effect makes sense but cannot cover all the factors. Actually, the universal acceptance of online education is the major contributing factors to the growth.

From the statistics and analysis above, we can foresee that online education can endow us long-term benefits, or various conveniences. This comfort is not merely a matter of lower cost of study, but the comfort of learning anywhere and anytime as well, both of whi ch are important elements of improvement in education.

Exercise 4

In a survey conducted among people with various degrees of education, a positive correlation is found between index of happiness and educational background. Among those with postgraduat e education, the index shoots 4.32, while the value of happiness among those who merely experienced primary schools stays low, only 3.17.

What are the explanations for this correlation? It occurs to most of us that less education may lead to lower inco mes, inferior social status or fewer opportunities to improve living standard, thus in turn less sense of happiness. This chain of cause-and-effect makes sense but cannot cover all the aspects. Actually, other by-products of higher education, such as bette r social network and more broad view of the world, are the major contributing factors to the sense of happy life.

From the statistics and analysis above, we can draw the conclusion with certain degree of confidence that higher education can endow us long-t erm benefits: better life-satisfaction. This satisfaction is not merely a matter of gratification of wealth, but the contentment of social achievement as well, both of which are important elements of happiness.

Part B:应用?写作

书信总公式

24th, December, 2016称呼：

1.Dear XXX,

2.Dear Sir or Madam,

3.To whom it may concern,

第?段

1.道明来意；

2.说明背景、自我介绍。

第?段

罗列：建议、意见、观点、困难、看法、原因

第三段

1.重申来意；

2.适度拓展。

Yours Sincerely,

Li Ming

Sample 1

Suppose you won a translation contest and your friend, Jack, wrote an email to congratulate you and ask for advice on translation. Write him a reply to

1) thank him, and

2) give your advice

You should write about 100 on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Li Ming instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)

Dear J ack，

Please allow me to extend my sincerest gratitude for your congratulations on my winning the contest.

What follows, as you requested in your letter, is my advice on translation skills. First of all, translation forces us to understand the sentence str ucture, urges us to choose proper words, and asks us to decorate our expression. All the factors demand our attention and patience. Secondly, it would be wise to accumulate translation experience by reading translated works by experts.

I hope my advice can cast some light on what we discuss. I look forward to sharing more with you next time we meet.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Sample 2

Suppose your friend, Trump, just recovered from an illness, wrote an email to congratulate him and give him advice on keepin g fit. Your letter should include

1) you congratulations to him, and

2) give your advice

You should write about 100 on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Li Ming instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)

Sample 3

Suppose your friend, Trump, failed in an English examination, wrote an email to console him and give him advice on learning English. Your letter should include

1) you comfort to him, and

2) give your advice

You should write about 100 on the ANSW ER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Li Ming instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)

书信常用句式

1. 感谢信

【道明来意】

I am writing to express my gratitude for……

I am extending my appreciation by this letter for …...

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks for……

I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.

My gratitude is beyond any expression.

On behalf of my whole family，I would like to e xtend my sincere gratitude for……

Words fail to express my gratitude to you on …….

【重申来意】

Nothing could convey my gratitude to you for …

Please accept my cordial thanks for your assistance, which I will always bear in mind.

Please accept my thanks, now and always.

Thanks again for your kind help / generosity / hospitality….

Were all the people as generous as you, the world would be increasingly harmonious!

2. 道歉信

【道明来意】

I am indeed terribly sorry for what I did, but do believe I did not mean to insult you.

I am writing to apologize for the inconveniences caused by what I have done.

I regret to tell you that what I have done, unintentionally, may have caused troubles to you.

Please accept my humblest apologies for …

Please accept my sincere apology for……

【重申来意】

I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

I am sorry to have put you into so much trouble.

I hope you can forgive me! I did not do that intentionally. Once again，I’m really sorry for any inconvenience / trouble caused.

Ple ase forgive me for a stupid choice of words.

3. 介绍信

【道明来意】

I recommend Zhang Wei without hesitation to be your assistant and I am confident that he will be helpful in your office.

I take pleasure in introducing to you the bearer Zhang Wei.

I would like t o resent Zhang Wei for your consideration in your search for a quallifed teaching assistant. Please allow me to introduce Zhang Wei, one of my college classmates in Beijing University.

The bearer of this is Zhang Wei whom I personally know to be a most des erving person for your position.

【重申来意】

I hope the above information will help you to know Zhang Wei. If you need any further information about his qualification, please do not hesitate to contact me at LiMing@https://www.360docs.net/doc/805293245.html,.

I would again apply myself to convinc ing you that Zhang Wei is a right candidate.

It would be appreciated if you can offer help to him/her.

Thanks for your attention and hope to receive your reply at your earliest convenience.

Therefore, again, I do not hesitate to recommend Zhang Wei as the right person for your consideration.

4. 申请信

【道明来意】

I am writing in response to your advertisement in Beijing Weekly of July 7……

I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of……

I believe I am the right person for the job you advertised，because……

I feel quite qualified for the position you advertised.

I would like to apply for the vacancy of……

【重申来意】

I welcome increasing responsibilities in a quick-paced setting.

Should you grant me a personal interview，I would be most grateful.

Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

If you need to know any more about me, please contact me at mail@https://www.360docs.net/doc/805293245.html,.

Enclosed is my resume.

5. 投诉信

【道明来意】

I am writing to make a com plaint about……

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about …

I have been pleased with your services/products for years，but now I feel very disappointed.

I would like to draw your attention to the problem/fault……

One irritating aspect of your service i s……

【重申来意】

It would be highly appreciated if you could……

I trust you will take my complaints seriously and……

I hope you will give due attention to this matter.

I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.

To offer customers a satisfactory answer, you are supposed to follow my advices.

6. 咨询信

【道明来意】

I am writing to enquire…

I wonder if you could provide me with the information regarding……

I would appreciate it so much if you could send me information conce rning……

I wish to request materials for……

I would like some detailed information about …

【重申来意】

I would be really indebted to you if you did me the favor. I am looking forward to your reply.

I look forward to your immediate response at your earliest conven ience.

Thank you in advance for your cooperation/assistance.

You prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.

Would you please be kind enough to send me the materials necessary for my … so that I can begin the … procedure?

7. 邀请信

【道明来意】

As you are a close friend of us, we would like you to participate …and share the joy.

I would be delighted that you would accept our invitation to …

It is with the greatest pleasure that I write to cordially invite you to attend ……

It gives me t he greatest pleasure to invite you to visit …

Will you give the pleasure of … with us at …?

【重申来意】

If you do not have any prior appointment, we look forward to the pleasure of your accompany.

I am looking forward to your coming and share with us the great pleasure of …

Will you be so kind enough to share the joy with us and ….?

Would you love to join us in …?

Your attendance would honor all of us!

8. 祝贺信

【道明来意】

I am writing to extend my hearty congratulation on ……

I would like, on behalf of …and in my own name, to express to you our warmest congratulations …

It is with the greatest pleasure that I offer you my sincerest congratulations on …

Please accept my sincerest congratulations on ……

We feel happy to learn that you have reached such a milestone!

【重申来意】

This is a special moment not only for you, but also for every one who shows concerns.

At this moment, I feel as happy as you do now.

You have achieved …and lived up to the public expectation.

Your long suffering and braveness has been rewarded today.

Aga in, I join all our …in offering the heartiest congratulations and best wishes.

9. 建议信

【道明来意】

I am writing with my proposals about…

I am writing to suggest that ……

I am writing, after 7 days of pondering, to express my views on the matter you mentioned las t week.

I would appreciate it so much if you can accept my suggestions on……

I would like to give you some suggestions about …

【重申来意】

If I were you, I would ….

I hope you can follow these suggestions and ….

If you need more detailed interpretation of my pro posals, I would be available any time for you.

I feel what I suggested would be beneficial for you.

What mentioned above is the suggestions with regard to …..

10. 倡议信

【道明来意】

By this letter, I am to advocate that ….

I am writing to call on …, since some of you may know…

I am writing, on behalf of the student union, to appeal for…, given that …has become a serous issue.

I would appreciate it so much if you could pay attention to the matter mentioned in the letter. Through the letter, I am to inform you …and ask for……

【重申来意】

Knowing his difficulties, how can we continue to stand with arm folded?

It is high time that we take actions to …..

Hopefully you will join us in the action and extend worm to help those needy persons.

Feel free to contact us when you have come to a decision.

Your participation donation will be highly valued.