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①高兴：

②非常兴奋的：

③大喜过望的：

④欣喜若狂的：

⑤欣喜的：

⑥愉快：

⑦喜悦：⑧心情好：

⑨高兴的，快乐的：

⑩满足的，满意的：

11高兴的：

12非常高兴：

13使振作起来，使高兴起来：

二：句式表达

14麦克一家感到十分开心。

15.当从飞机上跳下来的时候，他感到一阵兴奋。

16在场的所有人都沉浸在欢乐的气氛中

17这情景令她像孩子般兴奋起来。

18他激动得不能自己。

19他的微笑让她感到一股兴奋的暖流涌遍全身。

20他们握手时，她全身一阵激动。

21我激动得全身一阵颤抖。

22他忍不住咧嘴一笑。

23他满脸笑容。

24她很高兴被选中。她激动得两颊通红，脸上露出灿烂的笑容。

25他咬着自己的下唇，以抑制即将爆发的笑声。

26当她的脸上露出灿烂的笑容时，她的眼睛消失在深深的皱纹中。

27她坐了下来，一脸心满意足的表情。

28他脸上露出了灿烂的笑容

29在他的陪伴下我母亲似乎很高兴，但尽管我很小，我也能看出穆德斯通先生一点也不喜欢我。

30绽放出灿烂的笑容

31她觉得自己好像站在世界之巅，一股幸福的光芒在她身上蔓延开来。

32她心跳加速，双手颤抖，撕开了信封。

33他心中释然。

34她心花怒放。

35他非常开心以致于一次又一次地高兴地大声喊叫。

36他顿时感到十分欢乐。

37一阵喜悦涌上她心头。

38她努力保持平静，但心里却高兴得直想跳起来。

39我心中的花已经盛开了！

40露丝停下来吸吸气，她的嗓音掩饰不住激动的心情。

41她来到的时候，我感到一阵激动。

42孩子们激动万分。

43当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动得心砰砰跳。

44人群欣喜若狂。

45那天早晨他醒来时情绪亢奋。

46他望了一眼老妇人，流泪感激的泪水，然后走出了屋子。

47他获得了冠军，激动得流下眼泪。

48我和杰克站在那儿看着他完成的所有的工作，心里充满了感激与钦佩之情。49宣布她获奖时她感到非常自豪。

50他看着女儿领奖，心中充满了自豪。

51随着婚礼的临近，她越来越兴奋。

52人群哄堂大笑，大家都松了一口气。

53他大笑了一声，笑声响彻整个房间。

54她把嘴唇紧紧地合在一起，以抑制喉咙后面的咯咯笑声。

55当笑声在他喉咙里爆发时，他的肩膀颤抖着。

56她喜悦的尖叫声在空中荡漾。

57空中荡漾着孩子们的笑声。

58他们跳到空中，兴奋地尖叫。

59“叔叔！”我激动地叫道：“我抓到了一条鱼！”

60他试图掩饰自己的激动，但声音却在颤抖。

61她那双明亮的眼睛笑得手舞足蹈。

62她低头看着他，眼里闪烁着笑声。

63她向前倾身，蓝眼睛里充满了兴趣和兴奋。

64他兴奋得两眼发红，不停地从一只脚转到另一只脚。

65喜悦从他的眼睛里照出来，就像火炬发出的光。

66当他冲进房间时，他兴奋得睁大了眼睛。

67尽管她没有笑，但她的眼睛里闪烁着幽默的光芒。

68她的双眼闪耀着幸福的光芒。

69孩子们盯着屏幕，兴奋地睁大着眼睛。

70她打开信时激动得双手颤抖。

71她激动得向阿里扑过去。“谢谢您！阿里。”他们紧紧地拥抱在一起，眼里涌出喜悦的泪水。

72她搂着他的脖子，高兴得尖叫起来。

73她丢下电话，一跃而起。她尖叫着用拳头抽着空气。

74他步履轻盈地走着，脸上露出热切的笑容。

75她在人行道上蹦蹦跳跳，笑得合不拢嘴。

76他冲进房间，狂笑着，高兴地拍手。

77他满脸笑容地张开双臂。

参考答案：

1)delighted

2)thrilled

3)overjoyed

4)ecstatic

5)joyful 6)pleasure

7)delight

8)be in a good mood

9)cheerful

10)content

11)pleased

12)be over the moon

13)cheer up

14)二：句式表达

15) A great feeling of happiness swept over the Zuckermans and the Arables.

16)He felt a thrill of excitement as he jumped from the plane.

17)All the people present were enveloped in an atmosphere of joy.

18)The sight filled her with childlike excitement.

19)He was so excited that he could hardly contain himself.

20)His smile sent waves of excitement coursing through her.

21) A feeling of excitement ran through her body as they shook their hands.

22)I felt a quiver of excitement run through me.

23)He couldn't help breaking into a wide grin.

24)His face was lit up by a huge smile as broad as his face.

25)She was thrilled to be chosen. Her cheeks glowed with excitement and her face broke into a

wide, beaming smile.

26)He nibbled at his lower lip to hold back the laughter that was threatening to erupt.

27)As her face lit up in a wide grin, her eyes disappeared in deep wrinkles.

28)She sat down with a contented expression on her face.

29)His face brightened up and he broke into a wide smile

30)My mother seemed to light up in his company, but even though I was very young, I could tell

Mr Murdstone didn't like me at all.

31)Shmuel looked up and his terrified face broke into a broad smile

32)She felt as if she was on top of the world and a glow of happiness spread through her.

33)With heart pounding and hands shaking, she tore open the envelope.

34)Relief filled his heart.

35)Her heart leaped with joy.

36)He was so overwhelmed by his great happiness that he shouted again and again with joy.

37) A feeling/rush of total joy swept over/overwhelmed him.

38) A sudden wave of joy swept over her.

39)She tried to stay calm, but she was secretly jumping with joy.

40)The flowers in my heart are already in bloom!

41)Ruth paused to draw breath,her voice barely hiding her excitement.

42)I felt a rush of excitement when she arrived.

43)The children were overwhelmed with excitement.

44)When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement.

45)The crowd was going wild with excitement.

46)He woke up that morning with a feeling of excitement.

47)He glanced at the old woman, weeping with tears of gratitude and then he went out of the

room.

48)When he won the championship, he was moved to tears.

49)Jack and I stood there watching him finish the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in

my heart.

50)She felt a glow of pride when her name was announced for the prize..

51)His heart swelled/was filled with pride as he watched his daughter collect her prize.

52)Her excitement grew as the day of the wedding came nearer.

53)The crowd roared with laughter and they all heaved a sigh of relief.

54)He laughed a big, hearty laugh that echoed around the room.

55)She pressed her lips tightly together to smother the giggles that were bubbling in the back of

her throat.

56)As the laughter exploded in his throat, his shoulders shook.

57)Her screams of delighted laughter filled the air.

58)The air was filled with the sound of children's laughter.

59)They jumped into the air,screaming with excitement.

60)"Uncle!"I cried,looking back in uncontrollable excitement,"I've got a fish!"

61)He tried to hide his excitement,but his voice was shaking.

62)Her bright eyes danced with laughter.

63)She looked down at him with laughter shining in her eyes.

64)She leaned forward, her blue eyes bright with interest and excitement.

65)His eyes burned with excitement and he kept shifting from one foot to the other.

66)The delight shone from his eyes like beams from a torch.

67)As he burst into the room, his eyes were wide with excitement.

68)Even though she was not smiling, there was a glint of humour in her eyes.

69)Her eyes shone with happiness.

70)The children gazed at the screen,their eyes wide with excitement.

71)Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the letter.

72)She threw her arms around his neck and shrieked with joy.

73)She dropped the phone and leapt into the air. Screaming, she pumped the air with her fist.

74)He walked with a bounce in his step and a wide, eager grin on his face.

75)She skipped along the pavement, grinning from ear to ear.

76)He burst into the room, laughing madly and clapping his hands with delight.

77)He held out/opened his arms with a broad smile.

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