英语写作范文---提建议.

英语作文范文---提建议

1.08年一模写作

在我们小的时候，父母和老师们就告诉我们要对别人有礼貌，你是如何做的呢？请举出三个以上的例子，并谈谈你对有关讲礼貌的看法和提出建议。

提示词语：young, tell, polite, for example, think, the 29th Olympic Games

Our parents and teachers told us to be polite to others when we were very young. Now I am doing things as they tell me. For example, I always wait in line while doing shopping and give my seat to the old on the bus. I never forget to greet teachers when I meet them in or out of the school. And I also say the words “Thank you”, “Sorry”and “You’re w elcome”to others whenever necessary.

In my opinion, politeness is very important to us all because it can help us not only get on very well with each other, but also make the society better and warmer, especially in the year of 2008, when the 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. So I strongly suggest that we all should be polite to each other.

2.08年一模写作

你的笔友Kate 昨天给你写了一封e-mail, 向你诉说她与好友之间发生了矛盾，相处很不愉快，希望你能帮助她。假如你是刘梅，请你给她回一封e-mail, 告诉她你也有类似的经历，对她的问题提出你的建议，并谈谈你对朋友之间应如何相处的看法。

注意事项：

1）提示的词汇供选用；

2）词数不少于60；

3）信的开头和结尾已给出，文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。

提示词语：experience, fight, talk, write a letter, help, share

I can understand you. I have the same experience as you. Friendship is important to us. But the best friends may have fights. I think you need to have an honest talk with her when there is no one around. If she doesn’t want to talk, you could write a letter to her. I think as good friends we should listen to their complaints when they are in trouble, and do our best to help them. We should make each other happy and share our lives.

3.08年一模写作

你的笔友Kate 昨天给你写了一封e-mail, 向你诉说她与好友之间发生了矛盾，相处很不愉快，希望你能帮助她。假如你是刘梅，请你给她回一封e-mail, 告诉她你也有类似的经历，对她的问题提出你的建议，并谈谈你对朋友之间应如何相处的看法。

注意事项：

1）提示的词汇供选用；

2）词数不少于60；

3）信的开头和结尾已给出，文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。

提示词语：experience, fight, talk, write a letter, help, share

I can understand you. I have the same experience as you. Friendship is important to us. But the best friends may have fights. I think you need to have an honest talk with her when there is no one around. If she doesn’t want to talk, you could write a letter to her. I think as good friends we should listen to their complaints when they are in trouble, and do our best to help them. We should make each other happy and share our lives.

4. 08年一模写作

根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。

假设你叫露西，昨天收到了朋友Nick的e-mail，得知他马上就要期末考试了，但是每次考试之前他总是紧张，不知道做些什么。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍一下你在考试前的一些做法或体会，并提出你的建议。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的短文内。）

提示词语：have a plan, work hard, rest, not to worry, sure

Dear Nick,

Thanks for your letter. You asked me for some advice about revision(复习). First, I think you should have a good plan. Keep notes of what you want to revise each day. Second, don’t try to go over too much at a time. Work hard two or three hours and then have a short rest. Then do some more studying. When I was preparing for my exam, I also tried to eat healthy food and get plenty of sleep. I went for walks and sometimes I met my friends to talk about other things. And last try to keep calm and not to worry. I’m sure you’ll be fine.(94word)

Yours,

Lucy

5. 08年一模写作

学校的英语报正在就倡导节约进行征文。请你列举身边出现的浪费现象（如：浪费学习用品、食物、水、电等），分析造成的原因，并提出你的改进建议。

注意事项：1）必须包括三个方面的内容；

2）提示词汇供选用；

3）词数不少于60。

4）请不要写出真实校名和姓名。

提示词语：good living condition, the only child（独生子女）, waste，habit, make full use of (充分利用)

We are having good living condition. And most of us are the only child in the family. Our parents love us so much that we can have what we want. But some of our classmates don’t take good care of these things. They throw away their pen and paper. Some of them even waste food.

I think it is bad habit. As students, we should make full use of what we are given. If we don’t need something, we can give it to those who are in great need. It’s important to save the resources and it’s also our duty.

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6.08年二模写作

根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。（字数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用）

有些学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢的食物。但有些食品并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。

参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough. In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.

7．08年二模写作

根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。（词数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用）

一家英语俱乐部准备在假期组织同学们去国外举办夏令营，请你就此发表自己的意见。内容包括：你是否愿意参加本次夏令营，你对夏令营的活动有哪些建议，以及你的理由。

提示词语：be glad, hear the news, would love, take part in, the summer camp(夏令营), hold parties, visit, relax, help

I’m very glad to hear the news. I’d love to take part in the summer camp. Here are some suggestions. First we’d better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better. Next we can visit some museums, places of interest to open our eyes. Finally I hope we will have a chance to live in foreign families. I think it’s a good way to understand the different culture between two countries. I really want to make friends with foreign students because we’re in the same world. At the same time, the activities can help us relax after the examinations and improve our English.

05年中考大纲卷写作

假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail, 得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail, 介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。

(信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的短文内。)

提示词语; Chinese, be, useful, many foreigners, learn, now, difficult, different from, it is important…., listen, talk, read, write

Dear David,

I’m goad you’ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. ____

Dear David,

I’m glad you’ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It’s difficult for you because it’s quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It’s also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I’m sure you’ll learn Chinese well. （90词）

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

06年中考大纲卷写作

假如你叫李玲，是英国中学生露茜的笔友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，告诉她应该做什么，不应该做什么。

Hi Lucy,

Nice to hear from you. __________________________________________

Yours,

Li LingHi Lucy,

Nice to hear from you. Everyone has his favorite stars and there’s nothing wrong with that.

I understand you. But I don’t think what you do is right since you are a student. You’d better read more interesting books and have more sports in your free time. Stop writing to him and watching his films. You may also tell your problem to your parents and teachers. I’m sure they’ll help you. Running away to Hollywood is a wrong idea. Work hard on your lessons and get ready for the exams. Your future is in your hands. （91词）

Yours,

Li Ling

根据以上命题得出中考写作分为规定动作与自选动作两部分。规定动作要让学生根据中文叙述内容与英文提示词语进行具体的描写。无论是学优生，还是学困生都有的可写，基础相对较弱的学生也可以写出一些句子，得到5-6分。出题时规定动作的语言中文叙述要具体，参考词汇对学生要有帮助。自选动作部分(多为自身收获、感受部分)的比重不超过全文的三分之一。