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toeflibt高分作文

【篇一：李笑来ibt高分作文】

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toefl.ibt 高分作文思路＋范文完美重排版目录

1. why people attend college?

people attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). why do you think people attend college or university? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)：

增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野

为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)

为了保证将来的就业机会

父母要求子女上大学

别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书

找不到工作

(无知，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。上大学如是[1]，去博物馆如是[12]，从事危险运动亦如是[43]。) 相关题目：[168]

『范文』

after graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work force. most

students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs (they attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market.

before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. after obtaining a specific college

degree a job applicant can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. for instance, applicants with computer science degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. with a larger range of

potential jobs to choose from, degree holders are more likely

to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.

additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. for example, many

companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract them. even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores, employers may still place

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a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a well-known university. because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more jo

b offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.

finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement. a b.s. in biology, for example, could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. the same major could also be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. both of these avenues would be unavailable without taking the first step of

an undergraduate degree in biology.

2. are parents the best teachers?

do you agree or disagree with the following statement? parents are the best teachers. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

因观点绝对而不能同意。

不是所有的父母都是好老师

最好的老师不仅仅是父母

有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知

有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响

『范文』

obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally most concerned

about the development of their children. however, it is not completely true to say that parents are the best teachers.

first of all, not all parents are good teachers. as normal individuals, some parents more or less have some bad habits. even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves

to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to

be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from

their parents. another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of education. all too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. ironically, when their children do not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. in fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses.

toefl.ibt 高分作文完美重排版 edited by lost lawyer moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. when children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school. but the situation will not last long. we live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. no parent is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. wise parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. they are aware of the possibility outside the family.

parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. most parts of children education are virtually beyond teachers reaches. it is parents that supplement. psychology studies have shown us that parents love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. albeit einsteins mother and that of forest gump are both good examples. on the other hand, parents might do

their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. the natures of those children whose parents have divorced are

often severely distorted. in a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.

3. does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?

nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. has this change improved the way people live? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

总体上，―食物变得越来越容易准备‖是一种进步[37]，所以自然会

带来improvement。使人们的生活方式发生了一些变化：

好的：

节省时间，越来越方便，一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了

出来

也有不好的变化：

准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度

上使家人在一起的时间减少

了，比如―速冻饺子‖[quick-frozen dumpling]

快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是，人们普遍变胖了，尤其是孩

子

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『范文』

people today can prepare their meal much easier than has ever been before. to prepare a single dinner, provident housewives usually had to work for hours in the past: they

had to buy home dirty vegetables which had

toefl.ibt 高分作文完美重排版 edited by lost lawyer to wash, meat which had to slice, and so on so forth. each and every step of preparation was a time-consuming task. but now, things are entirely different. supermarkets provide

vegetables and meat clean and neat, some of them even

have relevant ingredients and need only a few minutes to

be made into delicious meals. and this change has indeed greatly improved the way people live.

in a sense, food preparation is no longer a tedious task, at least much easier to tolerate. such a change has liberated many women and given them chance to do more meaningful things, for example, a higher pay job or a more respectful one. on the other hand, more men are becoming willing to do the thing that they once hated so much, and in some cases such

transformation of men brought dramatic positive impact on the family. today, its not hard to imagine a wife comes home after a days hard work and how delightful she is to find out his husband has already prepared her several her favorite dishes! children can more easily become independent—at least they can make themselves breakfasts or dinners when parents are occasionally not present.

but such a change has also brought some unexpected consequences. girls nowadays are becoming more and more reluctant to deem household work as their responsibility. the reason is quite straightforward: it was once really ridiculous to insist men do trivial household work rather than go work and earn money to support family, but conditions have altered now, girls might think: i can work as well, or maybe i can earn a higher salary than you do, dear boy friend, if you want to marry me, answer me one question first, will you prepare me breakfast and dinner every day? and some boys, on the other hand, are becoming hesitant to get married, or simply remain solitary, among miscellaneous reasons they do so is one thing: i can take care of myself, at least i dont really need someone prepare me dinner!

anyway, such a change is positive and it did improve the quality of peoples life. at least it has brought girls, boys, husbands, wives, children and everyone else who has to prepare food an opportunity, no matter what kind of opportunity it is.

4. which is more important, book knowledge or experience?

it has been said, not everything thatis learned is contained in books. compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. in your opinion, which source is more important? why?

『分析』

注意一定要先进行比较

从书本中获取的知识

优点：

题材、范围更多

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有更多的深度

更加的系统

缺点：

有时过于教条

也不见得完全准确

从经验中获取的知识

优点：

获取直接、简单明了

更加地实用

有些知识无法从书本中获得

缺点：

不系统，很大的随意性

很容易产生片面理解

不一定要说a比b更重要，或者b比a更重要。也可以选择在不同的情况下，有不同的比较。学习抽象的知识，书本是最好的来源。学习游泳，这只能靠经验。另外，大多数的知识要书本经验相结合才可以。

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有些科目或者知识适合通过实践学习，比如，语言，体育

有些科目或者知识适合通过阅读学习，比如，物理、化学、历史、地理

有些科目或者知识适合通过与别人交流来学习，比如销售技巧；管理技巧

所以不能一概而论(treat different things/problems/matters] as the same)，要看学什么，以及学习的阶段。『范文』

in general, knowledge gained from books has a wider range than that gained from experience. we now live in a world that typophile is no longer exorbitant, and that printed matters are readily available. in libraries, we can learn nearly everything only if we have already acquired basic reading skills, philosophy, history, literature, physics, mathematics, chemicals, biology, geography, anthropology, and the list will go on. unlike the experience of an individual that is limited by the range of that individual, books seem to have almost no limitation. sitting in the local library, we virtually can travel everywhere through an interesting geographic encyclopedia, and certainly, with nearly no expense at all.

on the other hand, it can be argued that sometimes knowledge gained from experience is much deeper and more

comprehensive than that gained from books. it is quite true that not every thing is contained in books. how

【篇二：托福满分作文范文】

托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（１）

which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice?

as knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in

problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to neuton, siiting formany years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’widsome through their ad vice, just as in the case of benjinin franklin, gatheringgreat minds under one roof and

then establishing a most world-renown libray. both ways work. when a practical goal is involved, however, benjimin franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respectand asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.

experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be

obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. a single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group’s wisdom. that exp lains the famous old saying that one seesfurther when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance

capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.

asking others’ advice instead of getting ever ything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. in terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may

concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. in terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.

admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, ifnot the best solutions. as is paraphrased from john f kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.

托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(2)

case of benjinin franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. both ways work. when a practical goal is involved, however, benjimin franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.

experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. a single thought in someones mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with groups wisdom. that explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized

in the 21st century. brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance

capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.

asking others advice instead of getting everything done on ones own promotes democracy and communication too. in

terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may

concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. in terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.

admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. as is paraphrased from john f kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.

托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(3)

after they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. others live in different towns and cities. which do you think is beterr? give reasons for your answer.

after they complete their univerrsity studies, some students preferr to live in their hometowns while others choose to live in different towns or cities. everybody has his own reasons for his preference. after my graduation, i will go back and live in my home city. i have made this decision because of the following reasons.

firstly, my home city is a big city that can offer a lot. there are plenty of opportunities for work, many big libraries for studies, several differrent musiums for visit, and numerous cinemas, theaters and centers for entertainment. when i go back there, i will have no difficulty in finding a job suitable for me and i can make use of all the facilities available there.secondly, if i go back to my home city, i can look after my parents. i take this into consideration because i am their only child and they are now weak and getting on in age. if i live in the same city with them, i can visit them very often and help them whenever it is necessary. thirdly, if i live in my home city, i will have a lot of friends, schoolmates and relatives to visit and to turn to for

help when i need. of course, i could get acquainted with many people and make many friends if i were to go to live in a strange place, but that takes time. if i go back to my home city, everybody will be waiting for me and i will be able to settle down comfortably without any trouble and waste of time.

in short, my choise is based on a careful consideration of my home city and my family. i think it is a better or sensible choice; in a certain sense, it is a must.

托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(4)

neighbors are the people who live near us. in your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? use specific details and examples in your answer.

if you have a good neighbor, you are a lucky person. you have someone who cares about your needs and your property, who is helpful in the little day-to-day situations that come up, and who is supportive in times of crisis.

a good neighbor is someone who, for instance, understands that your children may occasionally run across his lawn,- even though you tell them not to. hell realize that children can be careless about things like that, and he wont make a big fuss about it unless it becomes a regular thing. in the same vein, he knows that youll

understand if some of the trash from his trash cans blows across into your yard. in other words, he is sensitive to the unintentional things that can happen. he doesnt make a big deal about them.

a good neighbor is also respectful of your property. for example, she asks your permission before doing anything that interferes with whats yours. this means she wouldnt plant a huge tree in between your houses without asking how you felt about it. if she wanted to put up a fence, she would let you know first. she might work with you to decide where it should be placed. maybe the two of you would even split the cost.

a good neighbor would lend you some milk if you ran out. shed give you a ride to work if your car was broken, and let your children stay at her house in the evening if you got stuck working overtime. you would do the same for her. both of you would help make the others life easier.

when something really awful happens to you, like a death in the family, a good neighbor will volunteer to help in any way

he can. this could mean something small, like making some casseroles to put in your freezer to feed visiting relatives. or it could mean something big, like helping you get through the sadness of the funeral.

i think only someone who has experienced a bad neighbor can really appreciate a good one! a good neighbor can be a good friend. he or she can make all the difference in the world to

your life.

【篇三：托福满分作文范文第六篇】

do you agree or disagree with the following statement: a person’s job has more effects on his or her happiness than

this person’s social life does.

同意前者

1. 一个人工作上有成就，表明他是非常有能力的一个人。同时，圆

满地完成工作也会给一个人

带来成就感，这些都是能影响一个人的情绪的一些因素

2. 当我们在工作中做得很好的时候，我们可以挣到更多的钱。从现

实的角度来说，一个人工作

大部分的原因还是为了钱。因为钱能买到自己想要的东西，让他们

在物质上得到一定的满足，同时也能给我们和我们的家人一定程度

的快乐。看到他们快乐了我们自然也很快乐

3. 在工作中如果能和同事，老板处理好关系，也能给我们带来快乐。如果我们有一个良好的人

际关系，当我们遇到困难时，可以得到同事的无私的帮助，我们会

感到很快乐。当他们需要帮助时，我们也能提供帮助，自己也感到

非常快乐长此以往形成一个良性循环。和同事之间保持良好关系很

重要，因为我们一天中有三分之一的时间是和同事相处的，如果我

们能和他们维持良好的关系，对我们工作的顺利开展有非常大的促

进作用，也能让我们在工作中有一个很好的心情

happiness index as an eye-catching measurement has ranked all the nations to score the countries happiness factors.

judging from the cultural value and traits, we can obtain the coincidence that what we consider the country where civilians have more pressure from their jobs has lower happiness index in the investigating from statistics. biased and superficial seems the judgment made, but the trend could still be speculated through the numbers. i comprehensively combine

different rational factors with irrational own feelings, concluding that job apparently has more effect on happiness than social life, reasons and examinations will be explored to break down the controversial issue. initially, the achievement from the work means a person has a great capability and they regard this kind of succeed in professions as the ultimate happiness in life. many successful people are fully involved in their business, namely steve jobs, some of which even do not have the social life. however they feel much happiness because they can see their small company developing into a big one, just as their kids. for example, my father is a manager in a company. all his life is to work and he often work until midnight in order to sell more machines. even though he was so tired and do not have a social life, he still feels happiness in the work and will work harder next year because the achievement from the work gives him a sense of accomplishment. he proved his value in the company. all of these mentioned above can be important factors that affect people’s happiness.

moreover, when we really do a good job in the work, we can earn much more money. from the prospective of reality, the biggest motivation that people work is their salary because we can buy whatever we want with money and have a sense of satisfaction materially. besides, we can guarantee our family a better life with more money so that they can be happier. as they are happier, why don’t we? for example, previously i did not work very hard on my job and i only earned a little money. i started to work much harder since i had a girlfriend because i wanted to give her a better life and buy whatever she want. now my salary is five times more than that time. on the contrary, if we only get happiness in our social life but do not do very

well in our vacation, what we get is something mentally, like some spiritual food. but in order to get the happiness, we should first satisfy our basic needs, like food, cloth and so on according to th e maslow’s hierarchy of needs. therefore the vocational accomplishment weighs more than social life.

is important for us to get along well with our workmates because we spend one third of our life time in working and living with them. therefore, a good interpersonal relationship is

advantageous in our working and provides us a good mood in the work.

in conclusion, i strongly agree that the job can offer us much more happiness than the social life for reasons mentioned above.