【2019-2020】雅思移民类小作文关于投诉信的解题思路-优秀word范文 (1页)
【2019-2020】雅思移民类小作文关于投诉信的解题思路-优秀word范文
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雅思移民类小作文关于投诉信的解题思路
投诉信一直是移民类小作文常考的话题，根据笔者多年的教学，发现投诉
信一般可以从以下四个思路去发展。
投诉理由：服务不周
投诉信中投诉服务是经常会考到的话题，一般主要集中在对于饭店，宾馆，餐厅，旅行社等服务性行业的投诉，此类书信一般在结构上可分为以下几个部分：
自我介绍，表明投诉内容以及与收信人的相关性。
陈述投诉内容，如时间、地点、人物、事件等，并指出对方服务问题所在以及由此而产生的对自己或者家人的影响。
提出整改建议或者希望得到对方的赔偿或补偿。
让我们结合真题来分析一下：
You just returned from a tour . However , you were dissatisfied with the service you received from the travel agency . Write a letter to the manager of the agency .
1. give the details of your tour
2. explain why you were unhappy with the service
3. say what you want the company do for you
题目并无指明具体投诉内容，因此考生选择余地较大，一般来说，建议考
生可以考虑旅行社安排的住所不好，比如房间脏等。具体写法如下：
The room was not cleaned on a daily basis and that my bed was made up only every three days .
英文投诉信范文
英文投诉信 【写法指要】 投诉信（letters of complaint）通常是写给厂家、商店、消费者协会、报界或厂家、商店的上级主管部门，揭发产品质量的低劣、服务态度的糟糕，抱怨不应出现的情况或问题等，以求得解决的信件。写投诉信要实事求是地把问题讲清楚，态度要冷静，做到有礼貌，不能恶言伤人。 这封信的作者用的是对比法，先写学校的地理位置和原先学校的优美环境，后写化工厂建起后对学校造成的污染，最后提请报界呼吁保护环境的问题。写得有理有据，令人信服。英文投诉信怎么写 投诉信结构公式 右上角：日期 左上角：称呼 正文： 第一段：表明自己的身份，说明写信目的，因何事投诉何人或机构。 第二段：具体阐述投诉的内容和投诉的理由。 第三段：提出解决建议并期望尽快解决，表示感谢。 右下角：署名 下面是一封日常投诉信的范例，请大家体会一下。 Dear Sir/Madam, Please send us a correction on part of our order WP-11. All the items we ordered arrived in excellent condition except for one model. It you refer to our original order (see the copy attached), you will note that we requested your fluorescent desk-lamps, Model 606. However, Model 608 reached us instead. For details, please see the inspection certificate issued by the Tianjin Commodity Inspection Bureau. Will you kindly take back those you sent out and substitute them with an equal quantity (120 items) of Model 606? We would appreciate your attention to this matter promptly. Yours faithfully 英文投诉信模板 Dear_______, I am ______ (自我介绍) .I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_____. The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(总体介绍). In the first place,_______(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ___________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ________ (感觉)_______(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果). I appreciate it very much if you could _______(提出建议和请求), preferably ______(进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ____(设定解决事情最后期限). Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming 英文投诉信格式
作文范文之雅思小作文真题
作文范文之雅思小作文真题
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英语投诉信范文.doc
英语投诉信范文 Directions: You found something wrong with the telephone bill you have received from the local post office. You made a call to inquire about this; however the person who answered the call was very rude. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the post office, explaining the situation and giving your suggestions for improvement. Your letter should be no less than 100 words. You do not need to write the address. Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Donna instead. 英文投诉信模板 Dear ______, ①I am ______（自我介绍）. ②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about. ③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______（总体介绍）. ④In the first place, ______（抱怨的第一个方面）. ⑤In addition, ______（抱怨的第二个方面）. ⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感觉）to______（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）. ⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建议和请求）, preferably ______（进一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（设定解决事情最后期限）. ⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 范文 Dear Sir I am writing to let you know the deplorable attitude of one of your staff member. I received my telephone bill for the previous month from you and thought there were some errors in calculation: I had been overcharged for two overseas calls. However, when I called your Complaints Department, the girl who answered my phone was very rude. For one thing she interrupted me continually, for another she even said that the fault was my own. Needless to say, such a way of dealing with customers is unacceptable. I would like to suggest that the girl in question should be disciplined, and instructed on the proper way to deal with clients. And I hope she can make formal apology to me. An early response will be appreciated. Sincerely yours,
雅思6.5分 小作文范文参考
●批改By Will 本次批改严格按照ILETS小作文评分标准进行。ILETS小作文评分项：TA (内容的完整性), CC (连贯性及一致性), GRA (语法范围及精准度), LR (词汇资源)。文末会进行总评及打分。 ●文中标识： 用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加 The graph provides the information concerning the average temperatures on a month basis in three major cities.(介于有两张图，都要提一下。此后可加一句：In addition, clearly demonstrated in the table are the time of sunshine on an annual base.) (补充：在下一段看到了你对于后一张图的总结，这样的话建议你在开头强调一下“the first graph”) As can be seen from the graph, there is a similar trend in terms of average monthly temperature between London and New York during the period from January to December. (可加入连接词：To be specific) The average temperature in London (介于你后面写的是两个城市的数据，这里改为：for both of the cities) gradually rises from January to July both in London and new york, reaching a peak at 25 degrees and 20 degrees respectively. After that, the following 4 months witness a dramatic decrease both in London and new york. In comparison (这里不妨分段), an opposite trend is found in Sydney. It (这是悉尼的第一句，建议写出来具体的量词至少：The temperature) keeps stable at 25 degrees from January to march, after which the average temperature undergoes a considerable descent, reaching the bottom point at approximately 15 degrees, before there is (there is 没必要了，可以去除) a steady ascent by 10 degrees. It is obvious that the table depicts the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. As we can see from the statistics, when it comes to the total annual hours of sunshine, new york ranks first, followed by Sydney ,London lies last. Specifically, people who live in new york enjoy 2,353 hours of sunshine every year, which is similar to people living in London with 2,473 hours (不是人和人像，是时间长短像，改为：which is similar to the amount of sunshine for those in London). However, only 1,180 hours of sunshine are found in London annually. 总评6.5（TA6.5 CC6.5 LR6.5 GRA7.0） 1.语法变化上从句数量可以了，分词的使用还可以多一些。偶尔试试一到两句倒装，如我在开头给你的那个。 2.趋势等词汇变化可以，试着多换换题目话题词汇，如people=residents=citizens
英语投诉信模板和范文
英文投诉信模板以及范文 一、英文投诉信模板 Dear ______, ①I am ____（自我介绍）. ②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about____. ③The reas on for my dissatisfaction is __（总体介绍）. ④In the first place, ___（抱怨的第一个方面）. ⑤In addition, ___（抱怨的第二个方面）. ⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感觉）to______（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）. ⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建议和请求）,
preferably ______（进一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（设定解决事情最后期限）. ⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming ^
二、英文投诉信范文 (Letters of Complaint) 【例一】 ; Dear Sir: With reference to our order No. W 98, the 120 computer sets supplies to the above order were delivered the day before yesterday, but
作文范文之雅思小作文table
作文范文之雅思小作文table
雅思小作文table 【篇一：雅思小作文表格图实例分析】 雅思小作文表格图实例分析 朗阁海外考试研究中心 表格图是雅思小作文的常考图形之一，也是烤鸭们在备考时必须要准备的一类题型。那么烤鸭们具体应该如何准备表格图呢？下面，朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家将以一道具体的实例，就这一题型的解题思路和步骤做出详尽的分析和解答。 the table below shows personal savings as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1989, 1999 and 2009. personal savings as a percentage of personal income 一、审题，决定大体写作方式 首先，读题目，了解到这幅表格图是关于“几个国家的人民个人收入中存款的百分比”以及三个时间点（据此，正文部分描述存款率是时态基调为过去时）。表格上方的title和题目表述一样，没有额外信息，因此，读一遍即可。 然后，审具体表格，决定大致写作方向和方式，即分段方式。表格的审图需要注意以下几个方面：横轴，纵轴和总体数据特征。此图中的横纵轴分别是时间和7个研究对象——7个国 家。横纵轴中间有一栏为时间，那说明，此图原则上应该按曲线图原理来写——即，描述7个国家存款率上升或下降趋势；但是，经过下一步对表格中数据总体特征的总结发现：7个国家的存款率在这一段时间内总体呈现下降趋势。这一发现说明，如果继续按照曲线图原理描述，文章会非常单调，而且对比的空间也不大；相反，同一年份里，
投诉信回信(complain letter)英文
View：This page can be viewed as a slideshow: Introduction:Letters of complaint usually include the following stages: Background Problem - cause and effect Solution Warning (optional) Closing Background This section describes the situation; e.g. I am writing to inform you that the goods we ordered from your company have not been supplied correctly.I attended your exhibition Sound Systems 2011 at the Fortune Hotel (22-25 January) and found it informative and interesting. Unfortunately, my enjoyment of the event was spoiled by a number of organisational problems.I am a shareholder of Sunshine Bank and I am very concerned regarding recent newspaper reports on the financial situation of the bank. Your company is listed as the auditor in the latest annual report of the bank, so I am writing to you to ask for an explanation of the following issues.I am writing to inform you of my dissatisfaction with the food and drinks at the 'European Restaurant' on 18 January this year. Problem 1.Cause: On 28 March 2011 we placed an order with your firm for 12,000 ultra super long-life batteries. The consignment arrived yesterday but contained only 1,200 batteries. Firstly , I had difficulty in registering to attend the event. You set up an on-line registration facility, but I found the facility totally unworkable .You sent us an invoice for $10,532, but did not deduct our usual 10% discount .We have found 16 spelling errors and 2 mis-labelled diagrams in the sample book. 2.Effect: This error put our firm in a difficult position, as we had to make some emergency purchases to fulfil our commitments to all our customers. This caused us considerable inconvenience.Even after spending several wasted hours trying to register in this way, the computer would not accept my application.I am therefore returning the invoice to you for correction.This large number of errors is unacceptable to our customers, and we are therefore unable to sell these books. Solution I am writing to ask you to please make up the shortfall immediately and to ensure that such errors do not happen again.Could I please ask you to look into these matters.Please send us a corrected invoice for $9,479I enclose a copy of the book with the errors highlighted. Please re-print the book and send it to us by next Friday. Warning (optional) Otherwise, we may have to look elsewhere for our supplies.I'm afraid that if these conditions are not met, we may be forced to take legal action.If the outstanding fees are not paid by Wednesday, 13 April 2011, you will incur a 10% late payment fee. Closing:look forward to receiving your explanation of these matters.I look forward to receiving your payment.I look forward to hearing from you shortly. Politeness；he tone of complaint letters should not be aggressive or insulting, as this would annoy the reader and not encourage them to solve the problem. In addition, questions such as 'Why can't you get this right?' should not be included. Content The content should contain enough details so that the receiver does not have to write back requesting more. Legal action is not normally threatened in the first letter of complaint, unless the situation is very serious. Adjustment letter Acknowledging receipt of a complaint letter ；hank you for your letter of … regarding / concerning / in connection with … I refer to your letter of … about / relating to … Apology for the error or fault；We must apologise for …；We sincerely apologise for … ；Please accept our apologies for … ；I would like to apologise for the error made by our company in (verb+ing)； Accepting the Complaint We agree that the usual high standards of our products / services were not met in this instance. ； A short explanation of the fault ；Introductory phrase；As a result of our investigation, we found that... (Not: After our investigation...) Causes :The error was caused by … / was due to … ；Apparently, the problem was the result of … / resulted from … ；The cause of / reason for the mistake was …
英语投诉信万能句型
英语投诉信万能句型 英语投诉信万能句型40句 开头：写明目的：投诉。 1。i'm writing to you to plain about。。。 我写信是投诉。。。。。。 2。i'm li hua。i feel bad to trouble you but i'm afraid that i have to make a plaint about your restaurant。 我是李华。很不想给你添麻烦。可是，恐怕我不得不对你们餐馆进行投诉。 3。i want to expresmdissatisfaction about the woolen scarf i bought from your pany。 我想要表达我对从你们公司买的羊毛围巾的不满。 中间：说明投诉问题、后果，并提出合理提议。 1。in the first place，the food itoo saltand the water isn't served in
time。in addition，the music you broadcast itoo noisy。under these circumstances，i find it hard to sit here having dinner quietly。 首先，食物太咸，水没有及时端上来。并且，你们播放的音乐太吵了。在这样的环境下，我很难安静的坐在那里吃饭。 2。it arrived on time the dabefore yesterday。but when i checked it，i found a hole in the middle。i waastonished because the hole waobviouand i didn't think you should neglect thideficiency（缺陷）。 它是前天按时到的。可是当我检查时，我发现中间有个洞。我很震惊，因为这个洞和明显，我认为你们不应当忽略这个缺陷。 3。while i waon holidain hong kong about a week ago，i bought a green shirt for 300 hk dollarin your shop，but there seemto be something wrong with it。when it'washed，it fadein colour。now i can't wear it。 大概一周前我在香港度假的时候，我在你们店里花300港元买了一件绿色衬衫，可是看上去似乎有一些状况。当被洗的时候，它会掉色。此刻，我不能穿了。 4。i have dialed your service number for several timebut it waalwaybusy。
投诉信英语作文100字
投诉信英语作文100字 complaintJuly 30,2013 Dear manager: As a part-time employee，I feel sorry to trouble you .But I am afraid that I have to talk with you about my salary. I think there is a mistake about my pay for the work on summer holiday . It had promised that I would receive ,2000 a month for this job. However ,I just got ,1800 after a month hard work . I don’t know what happened. I always try my best to do the best one among those employees and never violate the company’s rules since I come here. Therefore I hope you can give me a reasonable explanation , otherwise you have to return me another ,200 .It would be appreciated that if you can deal with this within 3 days . Yours sincerely Li Ming 篇二:英语作文投诉信 Sep.9, 2013 Dear Sir/Madam, 1 I am writing to complain about a Microcomputer I purchased from your company.
雅思小作文大全及范文1
101. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Test Tip Check the horizontal axis to find whether the graph refers to past, present, future or all three. We use the present simple to describe the graph: The graph shows… , We can see… If the graph refers to past period of time, we use the past simple, and if the graph includes future times, we use will or it is predicted that. Look at the line graph and complete the text with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets and the correct prepositions. duag.
英文投诉信表达及例文
投诉信写作 写信投诉抱怨的题型很常见，怎样才能合理的表述不满，又能显得理由充分？下面介绍下这类书信的常用词汇和句型 Complaint Letter 词汇： complain against sb. about sth.投诉...... dissatisfaction with不满于...... put up with / bear / tolerate忍受 awful 糟糕的 poor service糟糕的服务 inconceivable不可思议的 out of one’s expectation令某人大失所望 look into / go into / investigate调查 incident / matter 事件 sanitary situation卫生条件 bad manners 不礼貌 disturbance干扰 nuisance 麻烦事 remedy 补救 solve解决 recurrence再次发生 句型： 1) I am writing to you to complain about ... 2) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with... 3) There are some problems with the flat that I wish to bring to attention. For one thing, there is…For another,... 4) I can hardly bear /tolerate /put up with it any more. 5) I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can. 6)I sincerely hope that it will review its management system, with the view to providing, better service to the public. 7) We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind. 8) We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss. 考研英语小作文模板：投诉信 投诉信1 结构要点投诉信是对产品或服务表示不满的信件，一般分三个部分： 1. 提出投诉内容；
雅思写作真题及高分范文2
2009年2月21日 Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to deal with. Others, however, think that each individual should take some actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 考题分析：本题是一道典型的雅思环境类写作考题。在历届雅思写作环境类话题中，出题思路主要有以下三个方面： 1.环境保护是谁的责任？考题给出的选项通常会有个人、公司、国家、国际合作等（例如04年5月15日，0-7年2月3日考题）。 2.如何保护环境？考题通常会给出某个方案问其正确与否（如06年6月17日，08年6月14日考题）。 3.为什么人们明知环境正在被破坏却无动于衷例？（如08年9月13日A类议论文） 如果考前对以上三方面的雅思写作真题都思考过，相信本题一定会变的很简单，实际上只要把一些理由进行组合就可以了。由于考题的提问形式是“Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ”所以，既要讨论到个人能够采取何种行动解决一些环境问题，也要讨论为什么有些环境问题个人无法解决（即只有政府或公司才能解决）。Sample Answer: It is true that our tiny individual actions often seem insignificant compared to the scale and complexity of global environmental problems such as pollution, deforestation and depletion of natural resources. But that does not relieve our duty as individuals to do as much as we can to deal with these problems. Individual actions, small as they may be, can prove more effective than we realize. We can avoid driving the car, and take public transit, walk, or bicycle instead. This will reduce the use of fossil fuels and cut pollution. Saving energy at home, like turning on the air conditioner only when we have to, or turning water heater down a few degrees, is also ultimately good for the environment. Individual actions can also turn into united powers when, for example, the whole neighborhood is mobilized to participate in a local campaign to oppose environmentally damaging policies. There are, however, obstacles that stand in the way of individual action towards environmental conservation. The first obstacle is the lack of professional knowledge needed to cope with serious environmental issues like soil erosion and salinity, which require a significant amount of investigation and research. Another obstacle which makes individual action almost impossible is when an environmental emergency or accident happens, e.g. an oil spill near the bord der line, which would necessitate government intervention or even international coordination.
英文投诉信8篇完美版
《英文投诉信》 英文投诉信（一）： To Whom It May Concern， ①I am writing to plain about the poor service of yourI received when。 ②The causes for my dissatisfaction lie upon three points as follows: 1) _____ (抱怨资料的一个方面); 2) _____ (抱怨资料的另一方面); 3) (抱怨资料的第三个方面)。③Under these circumstances， I find it difficult to(客观的评论)。 ④I am sure that you are able to thoroughly understand my discontent，which you are bound to replace with a satisfactory solution。⑤I would be grateful if you could _____(表达本人的愿望)as soon as possible。 Yours sincerely， Li Ming 英文投诉信（二）： Dear_____， ①I am ______（自我介绍）。②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a plaint about。 ③The reason for my dissatisfaction is _____（总体介绍）。④In the first place，______（抱怨的第一个方面）。⑤In addition， ______ （抱怨的第二个方面）。⑥Under these circumstances， I find it_____（感觉） to _____（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）。 ⑦I appreciate it very much if you could _____（提出推荐和请求），preferably ______（进一步的要求）， and I would like to have this matter settled by _____（设定解决事情最后期限）。⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply。寻范文上gongwen。1kejian。 Yours sincerely， Li Ming 英文投诉信（三）：