【英语】中考英语书面表达知识点总结经典

【英语】中考英语书面表达知识点总结经典

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1．书面表达

“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。

1.种植花草树木；

2.遵守交通规则；

3.公共场合不大声喧哗；

4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）

参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守

【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.

As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For

e xample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.

Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what's more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华

夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。

注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: civilized 文明的

Dear Danny,

I’m gla d to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.

All the best,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here ar e the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.

China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.

All the best.

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。

【详解】

文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。

【点睛】

写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then 等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一个礼仪之邦。

3．假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。

要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。

Dear Bill,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?

Tell me about your ideal job!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】

首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bill提出问题，结束全文。

【点睛】

本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。

4．临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告．

要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等

Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.

【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.

I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

5．书面表达

初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求写一份发言稿，内容包括：

1. 普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试

2. 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习

3. 我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；……

要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Less Pressure Makes Better Life

Hello, everyone!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much

pressure. _____

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

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【答案】Hello, my classmates!

Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.

I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.

I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.

Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾

语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。

6．书面表达

难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。

注意:1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;

2.短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺;

3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.

【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.

In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题，结合本题

所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了自己愿望与想法，使文章增色不少，值得学习。

7．书面表达

为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：梅西 Messi

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.

Thank you for your attention.

【答案】Dear classmates，

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．

I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．

Thank you for your attention．

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second等使得短文层次清楚。

8．环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。

某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。

提示词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action

提示问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?

Now there are many environmental

problems._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.

I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.

I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better pla ce to live.

【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。

例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100词．

丰富的校本课程可以让你的生活更精彩．请根据下列图示中所提供的特色课程，按内容及要求，用英文完成写作．

内容包括：

1．Which course（s）do you like？

2．Why do you like it/them？

3．What can you learn from it/them？

写作要求：

1．依据你的兴趣选择课程（数量不限）；

2．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3．文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名．

Of all the courses，I like __________

________________．

【答案】例文

Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.

I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.

I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.

I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读。本题属于材料作文，主要讲述你喜欢的学科、原因以及你从你选择的学科中学到了什么。注意时态的运用，灵活运用所学单词、短语和句型。切记不要遗漏要点。

2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，很好地完成了试题中所规定的内容。条理清晰。前三段分别讲述他所喜欢的学科（体育、剪纸和厨艺），并解释愿意以及收获，最后一段讲述这些学科对他的生活的意义。

3.高分亮点：

单词短语：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面。高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引导的表语从句。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

10．近期某英文报纸就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）”这一话题展开讨论。“扫雪机

式父母”的特征是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到的一切障碍，解决一切困难，以便他们可以轻松拥有成功的人生。

请从下表的两种观点中选择一种观点，并结合此观点阐述自己的看法，用英文写一篇短文投稿。

要求：

1、词数：60-80词。

2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点，可适当发挥。

3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

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____________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

I really can't understand the snowplow parents.For these parents,they control everything.They clean all the obstacles in children's lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life.

In my opinion,parents shouldn't do all the things for children.Because they also need the experiences in their lives.And these experiences play an important role in a successful life.In this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.Meanwhile,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）” 这一话题展开讨论，并根据表格中所给出的提示内容选择一种观点，结合此观点阐述自己的看法。在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，然后再动笔写作。

2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称，辅以第一人称。文章首先说明不理解扫雪机式父母的原因，接下来说明自己的观点，并阐述自己观点的原因。

3.高分亮点：

短语：in one's lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。

句型：

高分句型一：In this case，they think children have a successful life easily．In this case在这样的情况下；这句话意为：在这样的情况下，他们认为孩子会更加轻松拥有成功的人生。

高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves

when they are in trouble. be in trouble 陷入麻烦，这句话意为：当他们陷入麻烦时他们知道他们需要他们自己尽力去解决问题。