雅思写作讲义汇总(完整资料)
雅思写作精编2011上半年讲义
——张凯轩
目录
I. 写作评分标准
II. 小作文类型介绍
III. 小作文线状图及变化
IV. 小作文表格图及变化
V. 小作文多图结合
VI. 小作文地图流程图
VII. 大作文类型介绍
VIII. 大作文常用学术词
IX. 大作文单边论现象题句型，思路及范文
X. 大作文单边论观点题句型，思路及范文
XI. 大作文双边观点题句型，思路及范文
XII. 大作文原因解决论句型，思路及范文
XIII. 大作文杂论（个性化议论文）句型，思路及范文XIV. 张老师2011年下半年总预测24题，部分题思路分解XV. 对学员的期待和继续学习的方法
XVI. 附件一：小作文图集
XVII. 附件二：大作文真题集
写作评分标准以及考试要求
知己知彼我们首先了解雅思写作考试方需要什么
IELTS Writing 首先分2个section
Section I: Figure Writing or Diagram or Maps
通常评分比例：40%
考试理想时间安排10-15minutes 最多耗时不超过20minutes
字数要求：150
Section II：British Essay Writing
通常评分比例：60%
考试理想时间安排30-40minutes 最多耗时不超过45minutes
字数要求：250
雅思作文有4大评分标准
Task Response就是回答问题，具体来讲，在最理想的状态下要做到以下3点
1. 明确主题
2. 全面论证
3. 事实论证观点
以下题为例
2010-12-04: In the past, important knowledge about culture and history was stored in museums. Nowadays, information is freely available on the Internet. Therefore, there is no longer any need for museums.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
明确主题：不太同意
全面论证：有正方—确实有越来越多的‘虚拟博物馆’，他们还有好处…；另外也有反方—传统博物馆除了让人看，还保存文物，有些还是历史性或地标性建筑…。
事实论证：不可替代的博物馆：大英伦敦博物馆，法兰西卢浮宫，中国四大古代园林
备注：另外，对于‘…现象/趋势好处多还是坏处多？’的题目很多人喜欢用‘有好有坏’来回答，这是一个误区。
主要原因是这样的问题严格来讲是‘一般疑问句’，意识到这一点就可以看出‘有好有坏’这样的回答是荒谬的：如果问题是另外一个‘一般疑问句’比如‘你是男的吗？’，而有人回答‘我半男半女！’。
So, 英式议论文对于一般疑问句最好是回答为‘总体是好的’或者‘我认为好多于坏，只要做到…’，这就是既有‘辨证’又有‘明确观点’的答案。
Coherence and cohesion就是连接（形连和意连）
其实我认为‘形连和意连’在英文中都是看得出来的，所以与其去想怎么让人看不出来，还不如先做到让人看明白，因为作文的目的是‘让读者看得舒服明白，觉得有共鸣’。那么，简单讲我们通常将连接词分成3类
段落连接
句间连接
句内连接
还是以上题为例：
段落连接：写正方观点，可用如下类似的句子：
There are some arguments in favor of the view.
Admittedly, this view makes sense in some ways.
而写反方观点，可用如下类似句子
On the other hand, there are strong arguments against this view.
However, this does not necessarily lead to the assumption that museums would not be in need any longer.
句间连接则要看关系
最常见的并列关系：first, moreover, finally; first and foremost, in addition, last but not the
least
类似的递进关系：To be specific; in other words; By that I mean; That is particularly the case…
因果关系：therefore; henc e; thus; so…
转折关系：however; Nevertheless; Nonetheless;
句内连接：
状语从句：if/provided that/as long as/not…until…; especially when/where...; because…
定语从句：when=在那时；where=在哪里；which=这/那；the reason why …=…的原因…
Lexical Resource词源：词汇3大标准，依次为：
1. 准确性
2. 学术性
3. 多样性
要做到以上3点，首先要破除‘大词，难词，换词’是‘考高分’最重要的因素。因为，有这种观点往往会导致一些坏处：
可能因为想词影响考生的‘思维顺畅和逻辑合理’，因为想‘单词’的时间太久了大词难词不见得合适
举个例子：在生活水平类题目（比如‘时尚/旅游/留学行业发展的好坏’）中，我们很可能用到‘有助于相关行业就业机会的增长，这就形成了一个良性循环’。对于该句的划线部分，很多考生的第一反映是favorable/beneficial/wonderful这些词，但是其实这些词都‘过大了’，我们完全可以用‘a good circulatio n of economy’ 。在这里‘good’就是准确的，一定要学术的话，‘sound’这个词或者‘positive’都比较好。
对于涂色的部分‘形成’，我曾经问过同学，大部分人第一反映是‘form’，这就是明显‘中文翻译和英文应用不符合’的现象，应该用make up, 如果想好看点可以用‘contribute to’, 如果说既准确又学术的，要数‘constitute’。
备注：
i. 大家可以查看‘剑6test2。Do advertisements show people’s real
demand s?’ 其中‘advertising/advertisement’这两个同ii. 根词被反复iii.
使用12次，iv. 该范文评分7.5；
v. 另外‘剑6test3，vi. 流程图‘the life cycle of silkworms and the production of silk cloth’ 中，vii. ‘飞蛾产卵’的‘产’，viii. ‘蚕虫吐丝’的
‘吐’，ix. ‘制造丝布’的‘制造’全部都使用的‘produce’一词，x. 这是考官范文。
xi. 还有一个例子是‘(2007.10.13) Some employers focus on academic qualifications, paying less attention to life experiences and personal
qualities. Why is this phenomena?Is this development positive or
negative? (社会现象类)’
xii. 面对这个题很多考生绞尽脑汁找到‘同xiii. 义词比如certificates, degrees, diplom as’ ，xiv. 时间花去了不xv. 少，xvi. 哪知道这3个词严格来讲都
无法替代‘academic qualifications’,因为‘academic qualifications’包括以
上3者，xvii. 这个词是‘不xviii. 能换’的。
那么如何做到多样性的词汇呢，我认为应该和思路结合，比如说‘相关政府部门relevant government departments’可以改为‘相关权威authorities related’.
而且更多的多样性体现在动词上，而不是关键性的名词，比如说‘经济可以被促进’可译为：
The economy can be promoted/ helped/ enhanced/ improved.
小作文中的‘上升’一词可以写为: increase/rise/grow
Grammar and Accuracy：语法精确性
1. 写对的句子
2.句型的变化
如何写对的句子，主要检查‘完整性’，因为中文很多情况下都‘只可意会不可言传’
比如说‘去博物馆比上网有更有感觉’
考生1翻译可能是：visit museums has more feeling than surf the Internet.
考生2翻译可能是: Visiting museums can offer visitors more feeling than surfing the Internet can.
划线部分是改变‘词性’和补充‘结构完整’的
其实2个都不对，真正的意思首先要从中文改，改为‘人们可能感觉更好当他们在博物馆欣赏真实的展品，相比在网上看照片而言’，那么翻译就变成了：Visitors may feel
雅思ENVIRONMENT类写作素材
Growth in air travel harms environment(飞行增多危害环境) Climate change experts from the Tyndall Climate Research Centre in Britain have said urgent action（紧急行动）is needed to curb the rapid growth in air travel（抑制飞行的快速增长）if the government is to meet its commitments（实现承诺）on tackling global warming（处理温室效应）. This report from Stephen Evans: Falling ticket price and rising incomes are leading to rapid growth in global air travel.（导致国际航空业迅速发展的原因是机票价格的下降和收入水平的提升。）According to the British government, the number of British air passengers, for example, will more than double in the next quarter of a century（下一个25年）. Increases of such an order would mean much more aviation fuel（燃油）being burned and aviation fuel may be more harmful to the environment than other fuels because the resulting smoke is emitted at high altitudes（高海拔）. A group of scientists at the environmental research group, the Tyndall Centre, says that if Britain is to meet its overall target for cutting damaging emissions（减少有害气体排放）, other uses of fuel like for heating homes or driving cars would have to be cut dramatically. The British government wants the use of aviation fuel covered by international agreement on the environment. The difficulty for any individual government（任何政府）is that taxing fuel used at its own airports might push airlines to move their operations to competing airports in other countries. https://www.360docs.net/doc/997646448.html,/worldservice/learningenglish/newsenglish/witn/2005/09/050921_aviation.sh tml Calls to control low-cost flights（限制廉价航空） Cheap flights（廉价航空）on no frills airlines may not be a burden on our wallets but they will dearly cost the UK's environment（严重危害环境）, campaigners believe. Scientists predict that if carbon dioxide emissions continue to increase, global warming will bring higher annual temperatures and heavier rainfall（温室效应会带来更高的气温以及更大的降水）- with all the associated problems（相关的问题）. +将来时）it is . Agencies such as the Sustainable Development Commission (SDC) want our air tickets to reflect "the true cost of flying" to the environment. To green groups, this involves the aviation industry having to pay tax on the fuel（航空业应该为燃油使用赋税）it puts in planes.
雅思写作话题分析整理
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【16-25天】18个高频雅思写作话题思路分析与素材汇总
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（2）chronic job-hopper将被questioned integrity and loyalty ，not reliable。 （3）政府和mass media应该鼓励人们扎根一个地方，扎扎实实干事业，并且尽可能提高welfare，改善城市和community的环境，留住人才。 （4）公司应该提高工资待遇，给employee创造一个良好的工作环境，在保证企业利润的同时要考虑员工个人发展，增加培训，扩充员工的知识。 二、大学是否应该根据就业教授学生知识，大学的主要功能是什么 平衡写： 1、认为应该提供实际知识的： （1）大学生毕业就要找工作，因此要培养学生掌握future job的技能。 （2）有人甚至声称理论没用，不是每个大学生都要做科学家。 2、反对方： （1）It will definitely be shortsighted to…目光短浅理论知识非常重要，理论指导实践，大学的职责不仅是教会学生一门技术，更重要的是教授一种方法。 （2）不学理论只学实际知识，会使学生变成utilitarian，narrow-minded，lack of imagination，如果学生要学的只是生存的技能，那就去vocational school。 3、总结 总之，我认为大学的功能是versatile的，促进学生all-around development，培养学生具有creative mind in some special field，而不只是教授该领域的实际知识，可以通过一些part-time job来获得。 三、个人不能对环境保护做不了什么，同意不同意 This is just an excuse for the ignorance of environmental protection. 1、分析环境恶化原因是缺乏环保意识。 2、给出解决办法。 四、维持博物馆是否是浪费金钱？ 1、提出自己的观点（反对）。 政府应该spend a lot of money to enrich the collection of museums to cater for different tastes or needs of different people．有的人认为是浪费钱，我认为是很有必要的。 2、博物馆很重要（博物馆的作用）。 （1）illuminate the culture，history and arts of the world. 比如，世界上最大的British Museum provide visitors with all-round knowledge about the world culture and arts,collections in it trace the development of civilization throughout the history of mankind. Definitely a heartquake！ （2）shoulder the responsibility to preserve and carry forward a country‘s traditional culture. （3）serve as a significant mean of adolescent education,benefit both the present and future generation. 教育学生什么是美，purify their heart，也可以作为第二课堂，提供教学参考
雅思写作素材Crime
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雅思写作基础词汇翻译练习(有提示版) 001. 现在，越来越多的孩子都是从小学开始学习外语，而不是中学。 002. 在许多国家，青年人通常要用四年时间完成本科学习，两年以上时间完成研究生学习。
004. 大学的课程总体是由必修课和选修课组成的。 005. 诸如经济学(economics)之类的科目是大学商科类(business)课程的重要组成部分。 006. 大学应当为学生同时提供理论性知识和实践性知识。 007.在大学的第一年学习中，学生主要获取公共基础知识，而不是专业知识。 008. 有优秀(excellent)学习成绩的学生通常都对基础的理论和原理有比较好的掌握。 009. 以学生为中心的教学方法很关注学生的实际需求(real needs)。 010. 教师应当鼓励学生积极地(actively)参与到课堂活动中来。 011.网络资源(online resources)可以有效(effectively)激励学生对学习外语的兴趣。 012. 各个学校应当尽最大努力(make every effort to)培养孩子们的全面发展。 013. 孩子们的身心健康和他们的学习成绩是同等重要的(of equal importance)。(倒装结构) 014. 鼓励独立思考(independent thinking)能帮助培养孩子们的创造力和解决问题的能力。 015. 道德教育能帮助孩子们形成(shape)积极的(positive)性格特征。 016. 雄心，热情和坚持是我们事业成功的三个重要因素(important factors to)。 017. 对于应当培养(foster)孩子们的合作意识(a sense of )还是竞争意识一直存在争论(there exists a debate)。018. 家长和学校应当一齐努力(make a concerted effort to)教育孩子们分辨是非。 019. 被家长溺爱的孩子会在长大后缺乏(without)对他人的尊重。 020. 家长也应该为孩子设立适当的行为准则，以防止(prevent)行为问题(behavioral problems)的发生。 021．老师应当多关注(pay more attention to)一下那些缺乏自律性的学生。 022．糟糕的家庭教育会导致孩子产生各种行为问题(behavioral problems)。 023．家长应当给予孩子更多情感的关怀与支持，而不是以物质的方式(in material ways)满足(meet)他们的需要。024．学校有责任(have a responsibility for)教育(educate)学生成为良好的社会成员。 025．大学的基本功能(basic function)之一是教授与工作相关的知识和技能。
雅思写作范文100篇(完整资料).doc
【最新整理，下载后即可编辑】 范文的思路好了。这样好的东西，可惜不是我整理的，是一个叫landfish姑娘收集的，厉害！ v105 Some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than the advantages,do you ag ree or disagree? 范文1 The birth of cars has made an enormous change to our life. In the past, we travelled fro m one place to another only by foot, nowadays, cars can do the same job . It goes withou r saying that the invention of cars bring great benefits to all of us. but as an ancient prove rb goes, no garden without weeds. Car is no exception. Owing a car has a lot of advantages. For one thing, car provides us the most convenient wa y of transportation. we can get around freely without spenting a lot of time. Emotionally, I always found driving is so exciting. For another , it is comfortable to drive a car.in winte r.Drivers always can stay warm and dry even in rainy weather .In addition, drivers are saf er in their cars when they are out at night. While cars bring the human a large number of merits ,their side-effects gradually come t o the surface .Firstly, running a car needs a lot of oil,which is getting less and less.The incre asing number of cars contributes the lack of energy.Secondlly,as more and more cars are util zed,the traffic ecpecially in big cities is getting heaver and heavier,which leads to the seriou s traffic jam.Moreover,the inceasing numbers of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantitie s of carbon monoxide into atmosphere.It makes the air of cities unbreathable, it strips peop le’s contact with fresh air. Therefore, the new energy should be explored to replace the oil so that our envionmental p ollution can be avioded , and the strick law should be issued to keep the numbers of cars un der control. Thus, our heavier traffic can be solved!
雅思大作文专项突破：追随时尚
雅思大作文专项突破：追随时尚 本文收集整理了雅思大作文专项突破：追随时尚。这是目前常见的、高频的雅思写作话题，同学们在备考时可以边写边学，积累写作素材，以便在考试中更胸有成竹。 Topic 24: Fashion is difficult to follow, and some people argue that we should not follow it. They think that we should dress what we like and feel comfortable. Do you agree or disagree? 解析: 支持追随潮流(following fashion)的观点： ? 时装是自我表达( a means of self-expression)的一种休现，表现人的性格和喜好(reflect one's personality or likes)，让人们在生活巾体验不同角色(allow people to try on many roles in life)，同时便世界更加丰富多彩(diversity and variety of the world in which we live); ? 新时代的时尚(fashion in the new era)并不一定意味着高消费，也并非一定穿某种款式的衣服才算时尚;
? 时装源于生活(root in daily life),反映生活趋势(reflect that life)，充分考虑了消费者的需求C consider consumer demand)，不像人们想的那样肤浅(not as superficial as some people think) 反对追随潮流(following fashion )的观点： ? 潮流变化太快，盲目追求潮流(follow fashion blindly)是浪费时间和金钱; ? 失去了自己的喜好和判断(dwell too much on what others think); ? 鼓励人们将衣服和地位、社会阶层还有财富联系在一起(associate clothing with status, social class and wealth),这是一种歧视。 范文 Fashion refers to a style of clothing worn by most people of a country. The growing concern about fashion in recent years comes as no surprise, considering the fact that fashion is very often at odds with the traditional function of clothing, protecting wearers from the extremes of weather. In my opinion, fashion is not a betrayal but an indicative of a principle that wearing clothing is for both functional and social reasons. Fashions are linked to personal style. Fashions allow wearers to express emotion and solidarity with other people. People dress to their mood and according to circumstances. Buying fashionable clothes is a
雅思写作7分官方评分标准解析
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Foreign languages have increasingly gained popularity among students these years, given that the world is shrinking and each country now has a more frequent contact with the outside world. Many people[c1]argue that children should begin learning a foreign language at elementary school, instead of waiting until [c2] they enter secondary school. There are several reasons for this. Firstly, despite the fact that parents do not want to put too much pressure on their children, they also do not want them to lose at the starting line. This means, if the kids start to learn a foreign language early, their parents are relieved from the thought that their kids will have to catch up later on, which is true to some extent. On the other hand, it is scientifically proved that children tend to learn a language faster before the age of 12. As far as I know, my friends who started to learn English when they were six or seven now have a much more satisfactory English level than those who started at12 or 13. So it is wise to have foreign language course in primary school curriculum. Additionally, learning a foreign language at an earlier age can lay children a solid foundation for future studying.Rather than just learning a language itself, children learn a lot more about the learning methods. As a result, when they enter secondary school, they can explore more languages and enrich their knowledge by extensive readings.