高中英语 轻松阅读 Lady Gaga“黑雕”雷人造型现身芬兰素材
Lady Gaga“黑雕”雷人造型现身芬兰
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She’s worn some bizarre outfits in her time, so it wasn’t a shock for fans as Lady Gaga emerged from her hotel in Finland yesterday dressed as a giant bird.The eccentric performer, who regularly sets tongues wagging with her outlandish take on fashion, has stunned fans with outfits ranging from Kermit the Frog to a piece of meat。
Wearing a long black dress, teamed with a black cape, Gaga stepped out onto the streets of Helsinki in true dramatic fashion, greeted by a sea of screaming fans.The Just Dance singer decided to cover her heavily made up face with a strange feathered head piece, her eyes barely visible beneath it.With what looked like real bird feathers covering her entire head, face and neck, she had the appearance of a large crow。
Gaga embraced her Gothic look, complete with blood red lips, by staying stony faced and using her trademark growl.Clearly in a theatrical mood, she certainly gave her fans a treat, drawing a number of excited gasps from the crowd as she breezed past them.In the Finnish capital as part of her Born This Way tour, the star was clearly trying to grab as much attention as possible during her short stay, bringing a bit of her stage show to the streets of https://www.360docs.net/doc/ae7591640.html,ter in the evening, the extravagant star even went as far as to flash her bottom on stage, leading fans to draw comparisons with Madonna’s similar on-stage flash in Italy a few months ago。
2020高中英语读后续写-技巧专题10 读后续写高分技巧综合训练(解析版)
专题10 读后续写高分技巧综合训练 一、请运用所学技巧翻译下面的段落。 （一） Jim 看到袭击者逃进了黑暗中，他想到了那个姑娘。Jim 仍然喘着粗气，朝着她走去。那姑娘坐在灌木丛后面哭着。尽管Jim在黑暗中几乎看不清那姑娘，他还是能确定地感觉到她惊魂未定。Jim不想再吓着她，他隔开一定距离和她说话。Jim轻轻地告诉她袭击者已经逃跑了，她安全了。姑娘许久没说话，接着他吃惊地听到姑娘问道：“是你吗，爸爸？” 【参考范文】 Seeing the attacker flee/disappear/run into the darkness, Jim thought of the girl. Still breathing heavily, Jim walked towards her. The girl was sitting behind the bushes, sobbing. Although in the darkness Jim could hardly see the girl clearly, he could sense her trembling alarm with certainty. To avoid frightening the girl further, Jim spoke to her at a distance. In a soft voice, Jim told her that the attacker had run away and that she was safe. There was a long silence and then in astonishment he heard the girl ask, “Dad, is that you?” 【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词和介词短语，丰富了表达形式，使情感描写和动作描写更加细腻生动。 （二） 第二天，Meg去跟Mrs.Gilson 解释了她为什么不交回家作业。为了不让同学知道这件事，她趁没人注意时悄悄地溜进了Mrs. Gilson的办公室。Meg低着头，她告诉了Mrs.Gilson她的回家作业找不到了。“我保证我完成了回家作业。。。。。。”她解释道，眼里含着泪。见此情景，Mrs. Gilson 打断了她。她笑着告诉Meg 她已经在上一天把她的作业和试卷一起交起来了。她知道Meg不会因为偷懒而说谎。听到Mrs.Gilson的话，Meg 如释重负。她开心地笑了，眼里的泪水落了下来。 【参考范文】 The next day, Meg went to tell Mrs. Gilson why she couldn’t hand in her homework. To avoid being known by her classmates, she secretly slid into Mrs. Gilson’s office without being noticed. Her head drooped, Meg told Mrs. Gilson the truth that she just could not find her homework. “I promise that I did finish my homework and…” she explained, tears welling up in her eyes/ eyes brimming with tears. Seeing this, Mrs. Gilson interrupted her. With a smile, she told Meg that she had handed in her homework with her paper the day before. She knew Meg was not lying because of laziness. Hearing this, Meg felt a surge of relief. She smiled brightly, drops of tears rolling down her cheeks. 【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词、介词短语、情绪表达和独立结构，尤其是独立结构。文
高中英语读后续写积累素材积累(一) (1)
续写积累 _______________ 班级：姓名：______________ 一、环境描写的素材环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描 写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。客观环境描写：adj环境描写的要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道Part 1 the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣）（鸟鸣）蓝天）the songs of birds the blue sky(（青the green grass;娇嫩的花）（the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）the fragile flowers (…/冉冉升起的太阳）落日草）the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）; the setting/rising sun(）要求verb Part 2 环境描写的（vi&vt blow/click/howl/wail/roar)一．Wind （）1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.冷风吹拂过我的头发）(The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift. （今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。）Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter)．二)1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.声音：在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear 颜色surface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。 3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank.有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。,离此不远 4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. 似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。(action, sound, colour)三)．Sky (stand/ appear/turn)The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. 1.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云2.Blue skies stood tall and far 蓝蓝的天空高高耸立 1 主观环境描写：1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done... 某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done 被）//听到感到/闻到某物（状态/动作/某人看到3.It was so adj that we find/feel ....以至于它是如此4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed// /惊讶景物使我如此陶醉sth held sb entirely in their power景物让我完全惊呆了5.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like …景物看起来像… （来自原著：追风筝的人）二、场景描写的素材. like paper sharks roaming for prey1. At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, , and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun the number doubled Within an hour, was perfect for kite flying, The wind A cold breeze wafted through my hair. in the sky.
高中英语作文专题：读后续写亮点积累实用
续写亮点突破系列 一、主句，+ 简短状语（介词短语，分词，状语从句的省略，形容词，副词） 1.At last he came, with his hands in his pockets 2.He was stunned there, staring at me with wide eyes. 3.With apparently unwilling affection, he nodded. 4.With a mixture of surprise and confusion, he managed a forced smile. 5.When coming back, he still folded his arms with a little anger on his face. 6.With an impatient look, he listened to me reluctantly. 7.He was numb with shock, staring at me. 8.Then the next second his eyes were shining like diamonds, with a bright smile on his face. 9.Curious, he approached to find a silver balloon. 10.With tears in her eyes, he decided to help Desiree. 11.Touched deeply, he decided to tell a white lie. 12.With heart beating wildly, she hurried to show it … 13.Holding back my tears, I tried to squeeze a smile. 14.Bathed in a festival atmosphere, he was in high spirits. 15.He attempted to find the owner, but all in vain. 16.Her eyes began to water, with her stomach uncomfortably twisting. 17.Looking at each other, we smiled, hiding ourselves in the car and expecting his reaction to the gift. 18.Obviously confused at the sudden disorder around, Rafael turned to me for reasons in written words. 19. Surprisingly, my explanation put a smile on his face. 20.Greeting us with a confident smile, Rafael shared his story in a magnetic voice, which left me surprised. 21.Feeling a lump in the throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined never to judge a book by its cover. 22.He gave me a bright smile, with his eyes sparkling. 23.To our delight and relief, Tom recovered quickly. 二、形容词、副词的恰当使用 1.Cherish every single moment when you can stay with her. 2.I turned to him and said gently. 3.He looked at me with a broad smile. 4.I praised him sincerely. 5.Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines 6. A thunderous applause burst out. 7.I’m firmly convinced that … 8.with a burning desire to win, he … 9.So excited was he that he held it tightly, rushing into the house. 10. 11. 12.
高中英语读后续写好句素材整理-英语续写素材整理
What is a climax of a story?（什么是故事高潮?） More tension=satisfying climax 文学故事中的高潮（climax）----故事的主要场景（key scene）也通常是故事的转折点（turning point），是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的 "危机" 点。有时候, 它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点, 发生了一些事情, 或者主角必须做出决定, 从而导致一个结果或其他。我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。 常见故事高潮示例： 1. A little girl has been searching for her lost dog. All of a sudden, she hears a bark coming from around the corner, and she looks around to see . . . 2. Kevin has worked very hard to try out for the soccer team at school. The coach has posted a list of this year's team members on his office door. Kevin walks forward to look at the list . . . . 3. Mary's parents have been discussing whether or not to move to another state. They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about their decision . . . 4. Lois has performed in the state gymnastics finals. She waits anxiously to hear the names of the winners. The announcer says, "And first place goes to . . ." 文学名著中的一些故事高潮 1. The deaths of Romeo (who kills himself because he thinks Juliet is dead) and Juliet (who kills herself when she awakes and sees Romeo dead). Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare （罗密欧和朱丽叶，莎士比亚） 2. When Gaston and the townspeople come to attack the beast, and Belle admits her love for the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney （美女与野兽，迪士尼） 3. In "The Three Little Pigs," suspense builds up until the confrontation between the third pig and the wolf. This confrontation is the climax.（三只小猪） How to create a climax of a story? (如何营造故事的高潮？) 方法1.增加外部冲突 增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。 1）角色之间的冲突(人物观点差异, 竞争需要等) 如：2017年11月浙江英语高考：On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why
2020年浙江Snow-2020年高考英语读后续写素材库之环境描写
专题01 The Description of Snow ——本专题聚焦于雪景、适用于冬日户外的环境描写 ?1-1 The street glistened with fresh snow and the sky was a blameless blue. Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of the stunted mulberry trees that lined our street. Overnight, snow had nudged its way into every crack and gutter. 街上白雪皑皑，天空一片湛蓝。雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在我们街两旁发育不良的桑树枝上。一夜之间，雪就挤满了每一个裂缝和水沟。 glistened闪光; 闪亮; glisten的过去分词和过去式；这里形容雪铺在路上亮晶晶的样子 blameless无过错的; 无可指责的；blameless blue 湛蓝，蓝得毫无瑕疵 blanketed以厚层覆盖; blanket的过去式，blanket有毯子的意思，隐喻雪像一层毯子 weighed有…重; 重; 称重量，量体重; 认真考虑; 权衡; 斟酌; weigh的过去分词和过去式 这里指雪压弯了树梢。 nudged轻推，轻触; 轻推，渐渐推动; 用胳膊肘挤开往前走; nudge的过去分词和过去式 stunted发育不足的; 生长不良的; 未能充分发展的; 阻碍生长; 妨碍发展; 遏制; stunt的过去分词和过去式rooftop屋顶外部; 外屋顶 mulberry桑树; 桑葚; 深紫红色 gutter檐沟; 天沟; 路旁排水沟; 阴沟; 恶劣的社会环境; 道德沦落的社会最低阶 ?1-2 The park was covered in a thick blanket of white, statues peeked out under their new white caps, footsteps and paw prints crisscrossed each other around the labyrinth of paths. Aside from the brown of the denuded trees, the only other color was the vivid saffron staining around the base of each lamppost, tree and shrub. 公园像是被一层厚厚的白色毯子覆盖，公园里的雕像从它的崭新的白色帽子下露出头来，在迷宫般的小路上，足迹和爪印交错。除了光秃秃的树的棕色外，唯一的另一种颜色是每个灯柱、树和灌木底部的鲜艳的橘黄色。
高考英语写作新题型：读后续写好词好句积累
读后续写好句积累 He had time to reflect on his successes and failures. 他有时间反思他的成功和失败。(reflect on...反思；仔细思考...) Environmentalists are alarmed by the increase in pollution. 不断加重的污染引起环保人士的担忧。(be alarmed at/by...对...感到担忧；惊慌) He was alarmed to discover that his car was gone. 他惊慌地发现自己的车不见了。（be alarmed to see /hear...惊慌地看到;听到...） Tim was a clumsy boy, always bumping into the furniture. 蒂姆是个笨手笨脚的孩子，老是撞到家具上。(bump into sb/sth撞到...) I dragged myself out of bed and into the bathroom. 我吃力地下床走进浴室。 (drag yourself to /into /out of...费力地走到/进/出某处) He paused for breath, then continued up the hill. 他停下来歇口气，然后继续上山。
"No," he replied, without pausing for thought. "不是的。" 他不假思索地答道。 Charles was overcome with grief. 查尔斯悲痛欲绝。 His eyes fell on her bag. "Are you going somewhere?" 他的目光落在她的包上。"你是不是要去什么地方？"(sb's eyes / gaze / glance fall(s) on sth 某人的目光落在某物上) Only one man tried to help us, the rest just looked on in silence.只有一个人尽力帮助我们，其余的人都只是一声不吭地袖手旁观。 He sprang to his feet and rushed after her. 他腾地站起身，冲过去追她。(spring to one's feet一跃而起) Tears rolled down her cheeks. 泪珠顺着她的脸颊滚落。 Thunder rolled in the distance. 远处雷声隆隆。
高三英语读后续写细节描写素材
读后续写细节描写素材二：心理描写 开心 My heart is full of joy. 我的心里乐开了花。 My heart is as sweet as honey. 我心里像喝了蜜一样，甜滋滋的。 The surface of the calm lake stirred the waves, and my mood was as cheerful as a wave.平静的湖面激起了浪花，我的心情也像浪花一样欢腾。 I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。 We were very pleased to hear this encouraging news. 听到这个令人鼓舞的消息，我们十分高兴。 He was delighted to receive such impressive recognition for his achievements.他的成就获得大家的认可，他很开心。 悲伤 be in tears 含泪 have tears in one’s eyes 眼里含着泪水 burst into tears 放声大哭，突然哭起来 fight back tears 抑制住泪水 be close to tears 快要哭了 He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears. 她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。 It was a time of great sorrow. 这是一个非常悲伤的时刻。 Words cannot express my sorrow. 言语无法表达我的哀伤。 As he looked at Katherine, great sorrow clouded his eyes. 他看着凯瑟琳，满眼忧伤。 Their reunion after a long separation brought mixed feelings of joy and sorrow to them both. 两人久别重逢，悲喜交加。 This article brought back sad memories for me. 这篇文章使我想起了伤心的往事。Separation from his friends made him sad. 与朋友们分离使他伤心。 愤怒 fly off the handle 勃然大怒 lose one’s temper 发脾气 His anger has cooled. 他的怒气平息了。
2020高中英语读后续写-技巧专题09 高分情绪描写技巧(原卷版)
专题09 高分情绪描写技巧 一、情绪描写之笑 smile brightly; grin at sb; laugh; beam; light (sth) up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing；wear a bright/broad smile; give sb a smile 学一学： beam: smile very happily 例：获胜者满意地笑了。 译法一：The winner beamed/smiled with satisfaction. 译法二：The winner wore a satisfied smile on his face. light up: if someone’s face or eyes light up, they show pleasure, excitement etc light up with：His eyes lit up with laughter. Her face lit up with pleasure. light sth up: to make someone’s face or eyes show pleasure or excitement Suddenly a bright smile lit up her face/eyes. 练一练： 看到直升飞机，Jane 高兴地笑了起来。 判断正误：Seeing the helicopter, a bright smile lit up her face. 二、情绪描写之高兴激动 V.dance; whistle; jump/leap with joy; feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy/excitement; be overcome with happines/delight/joy/excitement;(one’s eyes) twinkle；(one’s heart) beat/pound wildly Adj.happy; delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; wild with joy 练一练： 当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。 三、情绪描写之生气 feel/get angry/furious; feel a surge of anger(rage/fury); eyes blaze; storm out of/into/off ; storm(say angrily); sth. makes sb’s blood boil(sth makes sb extremely angry); clasp one’s hands; clench one’s fists/teeth; speechless 练一练： Sam 感到非常生气。 四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦
最新高中英语读后续写积累素材积累(一) (1)
续写积累 姓名：______________ 班级：_______________ 一、环境描写的素材 环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。 客观环境描写： Part 1 环境描写的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道 the blue sky(蓝天）the songs of birds（鸟鸣）the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣） the fragile flowers (娇嫩的花）;（the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）the green grass（青草） the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）; the setting/rising sun(落日/冉冉升起的太阳）… Part 2 环境描写的verb （vi&vt）要求 一)．Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar） 1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。 2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。 3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。 4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair. (冷风吹拂过我的头发） The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift. （今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。） 二)．Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter) 声音：1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley. 在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。
【新高考】高考英语读后续写： 这些细节描写素材,必须掌握!
高考英语读后续写：这些细节描写素材，必须掌握！ 今天和大家分享的是可以运用在读后续写中的细节描写素材，大家赶紧学起来吧！ 《考试说明》中评分原则部分规定，读后续写阅卷时按5个档次给分。参考最高档次第五档（21-25分）的描述并考虑写作部分评分的其它因素，可以认为一篇优秀的读后续写具备以下特征： 1. 内容丰富充实，与所给短文融洽连贯； 2. 连接成分应用得当，行文结构紧凑一体，与所提供各段落开头语 的衔接紧密合理； 3. 使用并用下划线标示5个以上短文中标出的关键词语； 4. 词汇丰富高级，语法准确多变（主被动句式、各类从句、特殊句 式、非谓语动词等的使用情况灵活恰当、不拘一格、游刃有余）； 5. 词数充分，150词左右。评分细则规定少于130词的，从总分中减 去2分； 6. 拼写准确，英式或美式拼法皆可； 7. 标点合理，使用得当。 读后续写基本是以记叙文为主，而记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。一般来说，完成一篇完整的记叙文写作，需要选取合适的角度、按照一定的顺序组织素材进行叙述，其中包括六个基本要素：时间、地点、人物，事情的起因、经过和结果，即我们通常所说的五个“W”（what,
who, when, where, why）和一个“H”（how）。除此之外，鲜明的主题和生动的语言，也是一篇优秀的记叙文所不可或缺的。 描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用，它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节，有时还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。一篇好的作文往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。同样地，议论、抒情的表达方式对记叙文主题的展现也发挥着重要的作用。 一、情感心理描写 在写作中，对人物情感的描写常常能使人物的形象显得生动鲜活。人的情感可以分很多种，如喜悦、满意、失望、悲伤、憎恨、愤怒、惊讶、恐惧、赞赏等等。在英语中有很多不同的词和句式来表达这些不同的情感。 喜悦 1. He is very happy and sweet. 他又高兴又甜蜜。 2. They didn’t know what to do with themselves for joy. 他们高兴得不知道怎么办好。 3. He jumped for fun. 他高兴得跳了起来。 4. Her face brightened up. 她喜形于色。 More examples: 1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 2. His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 3. I was wild with joy. 4. I was pleased beyond description.
高中英语读后续写好句积累88句.doc
读后续写好句积累 1. She tried to hide her anger. 她试图掩饰自己的愤怒。 (hide your disappointment/anger...掩饰...) 2. She laughed to hide her nervousness. 她笑了笑以掩饰自己的紧张。 3. The treatment offers a ray of hope for cancer sufferers 这种治疗方法给癌症患者一线希望。 (a ray of hope/light 一线希望/光明) 4. Rays of light filtered through the trees. 一束束光线透过树丛照射下来。(透过?f?lt?) 5. His statement was greeted with cries of astonishment and anger. 他的这番话被报以一片叫喊声，有震惊，也有愤怒。（be greeted with /by sth被报以...) 6. Complete silence greeted us as we entered the room. 走进房间，迎接我们的是一片沉默。 7. I felt a rush of excitement when she arrived. 她来到的时候，我感到一阵激动。(a rush of anger / excitement / gratitude...一阵...)
8. A rush of jealousy swept through(over) her. 她心中突然涌起一阵嫉妒。(妒忌?d?el?si) 9. The smoke hung in the air. 烟在空中缭绕。(mist/smoke/smell hangs in the air在空中缭绕) 10. A thick mist hung over the town. 小镇笼罩在浓浓的雾霭中。 11. Joe's been ill for weeks now - it's really dragging him down. 乔已经病了几个星期了，这使他很沮丧。(drag sb down 使人感到不愉快) 12. Forester stared at his car, trembling with rage. 福里斯特盯着他的汽车，气得浑身发抖。(trembling / shaking with rage 气得浑身发抖) 13. Sobbing with rage, Carol was taken to the hospital. 卡罗尔气得呜呜哭，被送往医院。 14. His face was red with rage. 他气得满脸通红。 15. The child was quivering(trembling) in her arms. 那孩子在她怀里发抖。 (抖动?kw?v?) 16. Her mouth quivered slightly as she turned away. 她嘴唇微微哆嗦着，转过头去。 17. I lay there quivering with fear. 我躺在那儿，害怕得直发抖。
2021高中英语一轮复习新高考版专题十 读后续写(试题部分)
专题十读后续写【考情探究】 考点所给信息特点 浙江考情分析 2019.62018.112018.062017.112017.062016.10 读后续写 体裁故事类记叙文 话题 爸爸带儿子去朋 友家农场游玩迷 路的故事 和父母一块去旅 游的故事 和朋友一起骑车 游玩,野外遇狼的 故事 小两口野外露营,因小事发 生争执,女主人独自走进森 林迷路,在野外独自过夜的 故事 所给文章长度320338344332 标 示 词 名词(词组)7778 动词(词组)2032 形容词、副词1300 分析解读 1.考查方式 提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容和所给段落开头语进行续写 (150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。 2.考查能力 读后续写主要考查学生以下四个方面的能力: ①宏观把控语篇结构的能力:学生需要掌握上下文逻辑关系,所续写的短文与所给短文 及段落开头语之间要有连贯性,所续写的短文语句要连贯、有序。 ②熟练准确运用语言的能力:学生能准确、恰当地使用所学词汇和语言结构,还能够根据 内容需要使用较多较复杂的词汇和语言结构,使语言表达丰富而又有感染力。 ③把握故事情节和语言特点的能力:学生需要了解所给短文的主要内容,并通过续写短 文表现出来。 ④进行创造性思维的能力:学生所续写的短文要具有较丰富的内容,包含详细和生动的 情景、态度和感情描述。 【真题探秘】 真题再现
One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away. With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!”she cried.“Help!” No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. Paragraph1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Paragraph2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 阅读点拨 这是一篇情节自然,但是有冒险色彩的故事。原文讲到Tom和Jane 因琐事吵架,后来Jane意外迷失在森林里。根据原文及所给的段首句,续写部分的构思不会太难。根据第一段的首句可知,本段应该描述当天晚上Jane的心态和行动。而根据第二段的提示句可知,本段主要叙述Jane最终是如何获救的。当然,在续写中,一定要反映出Jane 的坚韧和聪明,同时,最后一定要有Tom努力救援的信息,这样的续写故事结尾才有正能量。 本文的矛盾冲突为Jane在森林中迷失这个问题,表现的是人与环境之间的冲突。故事情节围绕该矛盾冲突展开。 问题的产生(在森林迷路) 问题如何解决(试图走出森林,试图向直升机求救) 问题的解决(获救) 该矛盾冲突推动了故事情节的发展,依照 Before getting lost While getting lost After getting lost 这一时间线索串联出文章的叙事逻辑主线。其中,After getting lost 为文章的重点展开部分。 流程详解 1.梳理记叙要素,归纳文本大意 who Jane,Tom what Jane was lost where in the forest when one weekend in July why a quarrel with Tom,her husband 主旨大意Jane was lost in the forest and survived in the end. 2.厘清叙事情节,助推故事高潮