考研作文(刘畅~武汉新东方)

考试分析19分大作文：

As is vividly depicted in the picture, two disabled men are running fast through teamwork although each of them has only one leg. Obviously, it is teawork that makes it possible for them

to go anywhere they want go.

Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is becoming increasingly fierce. It is impossible for anyone

to finish a work all by himself. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on teamwork. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.

Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the sense of teamwork in our society. We should bear in mind that teamwork is of great significance to both our siciety and ourselves. Every one should have the ability of teamwork. Only in this way can we achieve success and only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in.

参考作文：

The spirit of mutual help and cooperation, an extraordinarily essential factor which motivates people much more than individual competition does especially in this 21st competitive society, is of the utmost importance and necessity for us youngsters.（中心主线：此段可以省略——主题词+同位语+从句+观点）

According to this inspiring and vivid picture, there are two handicapped adolescents continuing their new journey on the ground, supporting each other with their powerful hands. Crutches left behind, they have successfully conquered the difficulty of lameness which might have

confused the majority of the disabled. The caption under the cartoon indicates,―You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel extensively to everywhere.‖（图画描述：there be+倒装+with伴随状语+分词伴随状语+虚拟语气）

Undoubtedly, this cartoon arouses deep concern over the issue of mutual support. The message conveyed in it, I suppose, is twofold. In the first place,in today's world, if one wants to achieve something or intends to fulfill one of his ambitions, he has to work hard, make efforts and get prepared on the basis of his team. Otherwise, he will take no advantage of opportunities when they come to visit him. Secondly, the difference between a man who succeeds and one who does not lies only in the fact whether or not he could cooperates successfully with others. The successful person always achieve accomplishments in his career with the assistance of his colleagues and partners. The unsuccessful person, on the other hand,works merely on himself and just waits to see pass by.（主题句+过渡句+必要性+重要性）

To specify this statement, I would like to take an example. To demonstrate,the students who are in the process of preparing for the National Postgraduate Entrance Examination – great many in number, doubtful about their chances and choices in mind – motivate and encourage each other to get rid of the overwhelming pressure from that exam, through which they soon regain the confidence and courage after cheering each up, for they know it clearly that only cooperation and

teamwork can make it possible for them to go through in face of anxieties and insecurity.（举例论证：主题句+关联词+细节例子）

It is my view that, first of all, this drawing has to be frequently used to enlighten the juvenile to learn the significance of cooperation with each other in order to interact smoothly with others in a team. Furthermore, this spirit can be extended to the historical truth that the rise and fall of a nation depends on how citizens are united by one heart. When people strive collectively for their nation, the country is bound to step towards prosperity. Just as John Adams, the second U. S. president quoted from the ancient Greek Aesop’s Fables, ―United we stand, divided we fall.‖（评论写法：个人+社会；若不会写，直接写建议措施。）

小作文高分作文：

Dear Bob,

I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I have come back from Canada and I found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.

The CD which I borrowed from you is made in Canada, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find the similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And it there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.

I am sorry again for my carelessness. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

小作文参考作文：

Dear Bob,

I am that tenant from China who had been living in your house in Canada for two weeks. And I am writing this letter to you to express my apologies because I have mistakenly brought back the Beatles CD I borrowed from you during my stay in your home.（首段：个人介绍+写信目的）

I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn’t have made such a silly mistake. To solve the problem, I would like to send this CD back to you by Express Mail Service, or alternatively I can compensate you at a reasonable price, and if you don’t mind, I may bring it back to you next time I go to Canada.（中间段：覆盖情景信息点）

Once again, please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience I have caused. Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I’m looking forward to your reply.（末段：感谢/道歉+盼复）

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming