2018年天津市中考英语作文写作高分技巧及作文汇编

中考英语作文写作技巧及万能模板

第一部分写作技巧

话题一：写人记事

例文：初中阶段你印象最深的又是哪位老师？请用英语写一篇题为“The Teacher I Never Forget”的作文。内容包括：1.简要介绍老师的性格或特长；2.列举一个事例，说明老师是如何在学习上帮助或鼓励你取得进步的；3.感谢老师，祝愿老师。

The Teacher I Never Forget

How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is Mr. Zhang, an English teacher. He is very kind and friendly. He helped us not only in class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr. Zhang noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved.

I must say many thanks to Mr. Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future!

例文：假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事情让你印象深刻。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。

要点：1. 一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；2. 你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边；3. 孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；4. 你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。

On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and a violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus.

When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.

话题二：环保污染

例文：节约资源, 保护环境. 从我们身边的小事做起，假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生, 请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。提示: (1)每天步行上学; (2)离丌教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3)不用水时, 记住关水龙头，循环使用水；（4)充分使用纸张；（5)不使用塑料袋。

My Low-carbon Life

It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, so we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps, fans, TV sets and lights in time when we don’t need them. What’s more, water should be reused by us. Third, it is good to make full use of paper. We should use the both sides of the paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.

Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

例文：目前，我们的家乡正在实施“城乡清洁工程” (cleaning project).请你根据以下信息，给某英文报写一篇短文，就清洁卫生和食品安全两个方面谈谈你的看法和建议。状况：1.垃圾到处可见，污染空气、土地和水源。2.摆卖不安全食品，危害人们的健康。建议:1.城乡统一堆放垃圾。2.禁止生产不合格食物，不卖不买有害食品。

Presently, a cleaning project is carried out in our hometown. It is necessary for us to clean our living environment, because rubbish can be seen everywhere. The air, the soil and the water are all polluted. Some kinds of unsafe food which is harmful to people's health appear in the stores and some supermarkets.

I think we must stop the pollution and the harm. People must throw the waste into the rubbish bins. Don't allow anyone to produce and sell any unsafe food. Pay attention to the food before eating, sure it is safe. If we can do that all, our hometown will soon be cleaner and more beautiful

话题三：体育健康

例文：每个人都有不同的生活习惯，养成良好的生活习惯，会使我们拥有健康的体魄。良好的生活习惯有哪些呢？例如：每天按时起床和睡觉；饭前洗手；多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品；多参加体育锻炼；不乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰；不要再马路上玩耍，横过马路注意交通安全等。

How to Develop Good Living Habits

Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can make us keep healthy. As teenagers, what should we do?

In my opinion, everyone should get up and sleep on time every day. Don’t play or watch TV all night. That is bad for our health and affect our work. We should eat more vegetables and fruit, and eat less meat. I advise everybody to take more physical exercises. Don't eat junk food, for example instant noodles. Don't litter and spit. Don't play on the road. Remember to obey the traffic rules. No jaywalking.

In a word, if we want to keep healthy and happy, we must develop good living habits.

例文: 请以I Love Sports为题写一篇英语短文。1.你喜欢的体育活动有哪些？2.进行体育活动有哪些好处？3.你最喜欢的体育活动是什么？

I love sports

I love swimming, running, ball games in my spare time. I think it is good for us to do some sports. Sports help to build up our body and make us strength. It can also keep illness away. By doing sports, I’m becoming stronger and more confident(有信心的) than before. My favorite sport is swimming. I like swimming because I like playing with water. Also I think swimming is more popular than other sports and it’s easier to learn. I feel relaxed when I swim. I love sports! I think everyone should spend some time on sports every day because health is more important than other things in modern life.

话题四：语言学习

例文：假设你校要举办一期英语墙报,交流学习英语的感受,请你按下面表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为“Find your own way to learn English” ,介绍你学习英语的体会。

1.最初的情况:学习困难。如：拼写听力差、语法出错、阅读速度慢。

2.现在的情况:学习方法。如：记

单元词汇表(vocabulary list) 多听磁带借书阅读3.学习体会:学好英语的关键。如：专心致志、自有方法。

Find your own way to learn English

There are many ways to learn English, but everyone should have his or her own way.

At first, I had many difficulties in Learning English. For example, I couldn’t spell some English words, and couldn’t understand what people said when they were talking fast. I often made mistakes in grammar and read very slowly.

Now I have found some ways to improve my English. I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in my mind. I listen to English tapes every day and I can understand mostly what people talk about. I often borrow English books and read them after class.

The most important thing to learn English well, I think, is to keep your mind on it, so that you can find your own ways to improve your English.

例文：假如你是张华，你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法，清根据以下要点用英语写封回信。除以下外再提出一条建议。

要点： 1.加入汉语班学习，可向老师学习并与同学练习汉语；2.看中文电视、读中文书、报纸、杂志；

3.听、唱汉语歌，有助于汉语词汇；

4.交中国朋友，即可练习口语又可了解中国。

Dear Dave,

I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice. First, As a foreign, you need to go and join a Chinese learning activity group, the most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible.

Second, if you want to improve your listening ability, you’d better read Chinese books, listen to the tapes and radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs.

Third, you make some Chinese friends. Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some Chinese festivals to you, too.

In a word，I think we will have a good time .write to me soon.

话题五：旅游及交通安全

例文：越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？内容包含：1.遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example ,we must walk on walk side .when we cross zebra -crossing ,stop and look right and left ,then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on walk side.

例文：目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。要点：一、不重视课外阅读的原因：1. 作业太多2. 没有读书习惯3. 时间花在电脑或网络上。二、课外阅读的好处1. 更多地了解世界2. 学会如何思考3. 生活更加丰富多彩。三、对学校或同学的建议（至少一点）

At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.

First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.

However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colorful.

Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.

话题九:提出解决问题

例文：保持健康的体魄，拥有健康的生活方式对于我们每个人来说都是重要的。请以How to keep fit为题，从健康饮食、体育锻炼和养成良好的生活习惯等方面写一篇文章。

How to keep fit

As we all know, it is important for us to keep healthy and have a healthy life. How to keep fit? First, we should eat healthy food, such as apples, vegetables and so on. We mustn’t eat junk food, which is bad for our health. Second, to do sports is necessary for us. It is a good idea to run and play ball games. Last, it is useful for us to have a good living habit. We should go to bed early and get up early. We must wash our hands before meals. What’s more, we should brush our teeth twice a day.

例文：你的笔友Tom上周来信想你倾诉了他在班上学习成绩很好，但朋友很少，感到孤独的烦恼，并向你寻求帮助。请根据提示给他写回信，给他以帮助。

写作要点提示：1）简述Tom的烦恼；2）针对他的烦恼提出几点建议；3）表达你对他的鼓励与祝愿Dear Tom,

I got your letter last week. I hear that you do very well in all the subjects. Congratulations！But you have few friends. You feel lonely. You don’t know what you should do. I give some advice:

First, you should help the students who are in trouble, both in study and in life. They think you can get on well with them.

Then, join them. You can play and sing with them. Doing that can make you a member of them.

Last, after class you can talk with them. Share the sadness and happiness with them.

I hope you can make more friends and become happy.

Yours,

Lisa

例文Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。

Learn to Smile

I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile.

First, we should learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself. Smiling at yourself brings

back your confidence. Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.

Second, it is important for you to learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes you happy as well.

In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile, every day will be shiny.

例文：假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Lucy计划今年暑假来江西度假，她向你了解江西城市生活和农村生活的情况，以便选择度假地点，给她写一封邮件，先介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点，然后说说你自己更喜欢哪种生活，并说明理由。

Dear Lucy,

I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday. There are some similarities and differences between city life and country life. Both in the city and in the country, people's life is getting better and better. They pay more and more attention to keeping fit. However, there are some differences. In the city people go to supermarkets to buy what they need. They eat at home or in restaurants. They live in apartments and travel around by car or bus. After work, they go to cinemas, clubs or parks to relax themselves. In the country, people grow vegetables and rice by themselves. They live in houses and ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around. In their spare time they would like to visit their neighbors or watch TV at home. As for me, I prefer to live in the city because there are more places to enjoy myself. I often go to libraries, bookstores and science museums, where I can learn much about the world.

I am looking forward to meeting you! Best wishes!

作文训练

一、在初中三年的学习生活中，父母、老师给了我们很多帮助。假设你是李明，在即将毕业之际，用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情。感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一。

内容必须包括以下提示点：1、感谢的对象及原因；2、举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果；3、你的感受和打算。

注意：1、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；2、词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。Dear __________

Words can’t show my thanks to you,

___________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】

Dear Mr/Mrs/Miss X,

Words can’t show my thanks to you.You’ve helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school.When I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and give me some advice.At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it.You came and cheered me up.You told me some good ways to improve English.With your help,I’ve made great progress in English.I’m so thankful to you for your kind help that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming

Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad,

Words can’t show my thanks to you.You’ve taken good care of me in the past three years.When I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my classmates and I didn’t know how to deal with it.You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others.With your help,I’ve become a popular boy/girl and made a lot of friends.I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes

Yours

Li Ming 【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩。如：in trouble；At one time；make great progress in; take good care of; argue with; talk with; work hard等。短文中还用了一些连词如：

when，that，and等，使句子结构更加复杂化，增加了文章的亮点。

二、英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2015年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。

内容要点及要求：

1. 表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；

2. 你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；

3. 词数：80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词（可选用）：learn from, respect, care for, do some housework, study hard

Monday, June 30 Sunny This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2015 ”.

【答案】

Monday, June 30 Sunny

This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.

I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill.

I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope

I can become a filial piety youth like them.

(88 words)

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:set an example for为……树立榜样；used to do sth过去常常做某事；take care of照顾；try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事；强调句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

三、为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：梅西 Messi

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.

Thank you for your attention.

【答案】

Dear classmates,

I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.

Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. Playing football has lots of advantages. First, both boys and girls can take part in it. Second, it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health.

I’m a football fan. Messi is my hero. He has a gift for playing football. My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi. I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.

Thank you for your attention.

写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people

all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同

时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second

等使得短文层次清楚。

四、每年夏天，溺水事故频发。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。

内容包括：

1.我们应该如何防止此类事故发生？（两点建议）

2.如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何施救？

3.呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。

作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中提到出现的学校真实姓名。

2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?

【答案】

Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?In my opinion, we shouldn’t go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little abou, such sa reservoies and rivers . Second , we had better not swim when we feel tired or hungry.

If we see someone fall into the water, we shouldsave him in a perpor way . For example , we

can shout loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him.

Life is valuable . We should take it seriously. We must remember that safety should always

come first while swimming.

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。如提建议的句式：

In my opinion, we shouldn’t go…, we had better not swim….条件状语从句等。

五、假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思，请根据下列提示回

一封电子邮件。

●点赞（Dianzan）：赞同、喜爱

●任性（Renxing）：随心所欲

●秒杀（Miaosha）：快速达到目的

●土豪（Tuhao）：很富有

●。。。。。。

注意：1. 词数80-100；

2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；

3. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；

4. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created

in Chinese. Here are some examples.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Peter,

As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created

in China. Here are some example.

One of the most popular words is Dianzan,which is often used when you quite agree with someone.

Another example is Renxing. When you say somebody is Renxing,you mean that they will do whatever

they like. The phrase Miaosha first came from online shopping, which means you can complete your

shopping order before others. But now it’s widely used when you achieve your purpose in a very

short time. If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.

You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning , you’ll know more about our language

and culture.

All the best!

Yours

Li Hua

写作亮点：这篇短文语言无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。在具体的写作中句式丰富，如：定语从句which is

often used when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing.，宾语从句; you mean

that they will do whatever they like,条件状语从句: If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean

that he is very rich.等。

六、你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。

Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. …注意：1. 参考词汇：模型制作 model making

2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；

3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

【答案】

Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. These courses will help students relax themselves after school. There are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making. Here is more information.

If you want to improve your oral English, English drama may be the first choice. It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills. If you are interested in football, take the football course. It is good for your physical health. Besides, you can learn more about teamwork. What about model making? You will be amazed by the science world and become interested in it.

For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much. I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here!

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目的要求给我们介绍了学校即将开设的三个特色课程的活动内容，又发挥想象力补充了第四个课程painting course,内容完整，要点全面，语句通顺，符合题目要求。短文中作者使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达符合英语的规范。作者还使用了丰富的句型和句式，如here are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making、It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills.、Besides, you can learn more about teamwork、For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much等。这些句型的使用从整体上提高了作文的档次，显示了作者较高的写作能力。七、假设你叫李磊，请你针对这封信的内容，给这位父亲写封回信，谈谈你的看法。要求：条例清楚，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。词数80左右。

Dear editor,

I'm sorry to trouble you. I have a daughter. She is 13 years old. She likes making telephone calls. As soon as he gets back from school, she picks up the telephone and calls her classmates. She talks and talks, sometimes for 2 or 3 hours. We can't use it. I tell him not to do it, but she is unhappy. What should I do?

A worried father 【答案】

Dear Sir,

Don't worry. You can have a word with her and tell her what to do. As a student, she must put her heart into the study. Making telephones too much is bad for her study. If she goes on doing it, you can tell it to her teachers. I think they can help you.

You can also find out whom your daughter calls up. You may ask their parents for help.

You may buy a telephone for her. She can make telephone calls with her own telephone, but she must pay for it by herself.

Yours,

Li Lei 书面表达做题策略：

1.详细审题，判定体裁→

2. 明确题材，确定时态、人称→

3. 按照要求，锁定要点→

4. 根据要点，选定词句→

5. 文笔流畅，结构紧凑—→

6. 一气呵成，誊写清楚→

7. 审慎推敲，消灭遗漏→

8. 单词拼写，时态、语态、语气，主谓、标点皆须细致→

9. 遵我八法，水到渠成！

八、卫生健康饮食：健康一直是人们关注的问题。我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下面提示内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的发言稿（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

主要内容有：保持健康的重要性，保持健康的方法或结论，你对健康的看法（如：多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡，多锻炼以健身强体，减少不良习惯）

Dear boys and girls，

【答案】

Dear boys and girls，

Here is my advice about how to keep healthy．As a middle school student , first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope．Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals．Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit．Third you need enough sleep or rest．Next keep yourself happy．As people often say smiling makes younger．Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke．They are bad for your health．That is my advice．I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life．Thank you, bye!

九、人生要经历很多次考试，很多人都有不同程度的考试压力，请你根据表格中提示的内容以“How to Deal with the Exam Stress”为题写一篇英语短文。