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1. My mother （我的母亲）

My mother is a kind and gen tie woma n. She is very busy from morning till ni ght. As a teacher she works diligently and efficiently. As a mother, she takes good care of me and gives me every comfort.

My mother teaches En glish in a middle school. She loves her stude nts. She treats them with patie nee and teaches them well. For her excellent qualities and very good teaching results, she is always praised and respected by both her stude nts and colleagues alike.

My mother is great i ndeed, and I always feel proud of her.

我妈妈是一位亲切和善的女人。她从早晨到晚都很忙。作为一名教师，她工作勤奋并有效率。作为

母亲，她对我关怀备至，给了我所有的安慰。我母亲在一所中学教英语。她很喜欢她的学生。她耐心对待他们并且教好他们。对于她优质的品质和优秀的教学成果，她总是受到赞美和尊重，她也总是称赞她的

学生和同事。

我母亲的确很伟大，我总是为有这样的母亲感到自豪。

2. The man I love most in my life （我最爱的人）/ My father （我的父亲）

The man I love most in my life is my father. He is my first teacher and my dear friend. When I was a little child，I used to sit on my father ' s knees，listening to his stories.

When I was seven years old，I started primary school. I was young，so my father picked me up from school every day. On the way，I told father everything that happened at school. He listened carefully and always smiled happily. He is always proud of me. I ' m sure my father ' s love will lead me to my success

will love him forever.

我生命中最爱的这个人是我的父亲。他是我的启蒙老师，我亲爱的朋友。当我还是个小孩子的时

候，我常常坐在父亲的膝盖，听他讲故事。

当我七岁时，我开始上小学。因为小，所以父亲每天接送我放学。在路上，我告诉父亲在学校所发

生的一切事情。他听得很认真，总是高兴地笑着。他总是以我为荣。我相信父亲的爱能让我获得成功，我

将永远爱他。

3. My beloved gran dpare nts （我亲爱的祖父母）

My grandparents are important people in my life. I was brought up by them when I was young. My parents used to work in another city. It was my grandparents who took care of me. My grandmother cooked delicious food for me and taught me how to read and write. My gran dfather sent me to school and picked me up every day.

My gran dmother is now 75 years old and my gran dfather is 76 years old. They are now livi ng n ear us. They are always proud of me. Now it ' s my turn to take goodmat^oft my grandparents so much.

在我的生命中我的祖父母是很重要的人。我小时候是他们养育的。我的父母曾经去另一个城市工作

了。这时候就由我的祖父母照顾我。我的奶奶煮好吃的食物给我和教我如何读和写。我的祖父每天骑车

送我到学校。

现在我的祖母75岁了，我的祖父是76岁。他们现在住在我们附近。他们总是以我为荣。现在轮到我了，我要好好照顾他们。我非常爱我的祖父母。

4. My best schoolmate （我最好的同学）/ My Classmates （我的同学）

Liu Kai is my schoolmate. He is a good stude nt and always ready to help others. One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road when a car nearly hit her. Just then Liu Kai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When Liu Kai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begu n less on. He told the teacher why he was late. He was the n praised for what he had done.

刘凯是我的同班同学。他是个好学生并乐于助人。一天在他上学的路上，他看见一个小女孩过马路，当时一辆汽车差点撞到她。就在那时，刘凯冲到她跟前用双臂抱起了她。小女孩得救了。她告诉他住的地方，然后他就把她送回家了。当刘凯急匆匆地赶到教室时，老师已经开始讲课了。他告诉老师他

迟到的原因。然后他就因此受到表扬了。

5. My teacher of English （我的英语老师）/ My Teacher in High School （我的高中老师）My

Teacher / A （good） teacher to remember （我的老师/难忘的老师）

My En glish teacher （in high school） is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. There is always a smile on her face. Miss Huang likes singing. She is good at play ing the pia no. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is a good dancer, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing. Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favorite color is blue, because blue is the color of the sky and the sea. She is my favorite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

我的英语老师（高中）是黄老师。她是一位美丽的女士。她脸上总是挂着笑容。黄老师爱唱歌。她

擅长于弹钢琴。晚上她总是坐在钢琴前，弹奏动听的音乐。她也是一个好的舞者。有时她教我们跳舞。黄老师非常喜欢狗因为狗友好又可爱。她最喜欢的颜色是蓝色，因为蓝色是天空和大海的颜色。

她是我最喜欢的老师，我们的同学都很喜欢她。

6. （My） School life （我的学校生活）（同my first year in college 大学生活的第一年” My Study

Plan（学习计划）

English study was the most important thing in my school life. / （in my first year in college. ）In order to

study En glish well, I make a study pla n. I would like to share my study pla n with you. First, remember 20 new words everyday, and n ever give up. Second, go over the grammar points I have lear nt in En glish class regularly. Third, read an English article in China Daily every day. Fourth, write an English composition every week and ask teacher to revise that for me to improve the writing level. Through these ways, I have made a lot of improveme nts in En glish.

英语学习是我学校生活/ （大学一年级）最重要的事。为了学好英语，我制定了学习计划。我愿意和你分享我的学习计划。第一、每天背20个生单词，从不放弃。第二、定期复习英语课上学习的语法

知识。第三、每天阅读一篇《中国日报》的英语文章。第四、每周写一篇英语作文，并让老师修改，以此来提高英语写作水平。通过以上办法，我英语学习有了很大进步。

7. How to lear n En glish well? （如何学好英语？）/My en glish study （我的英语学习）本篇内容

与上篇内容基本一致，学会套用。

En glish is always my favorite subject and I am good at En glish. I would like to share four good study ing habits with you. First, remember 20 new words a day, and n ever give up. Second, go over grammar points I have learnt in English class regularly. Third, read an English article in China Daily every day. Fourth, write an English composition every week and ask teacher to revise that for me to improve the writing level. If you do things above, I am sure your En glish will also be improved.

英语是我最喜欢的科目而且我英语比较好。我想和你分享四条好的学习习惯。第一，每天记忆

20个生单词，永远坚持。第二，复习定期在英语课上学到的语法点。第三，每天坚持阅读中国日报的一篇文章。第四，每周写一篇英语作文，请老师批改以提高写作水平。如果你做到了以上几点，我相信你的英文一定会有所提高的。

8. Why I study English? （我为什么学习英语？）/ 或者:Why do students like learning English?

（为什么学生喜欢学习英语？）Why I Like Learni ng En glish （为什么我喜欢学英语）

Why do I study English? / （Why do students like learning English?） Firstly, English is very useful. En glish is the most widely used Ian guage in the world. If we make a visit to foreig n coun tries or do bus in ess with foreig ners, we n eed to com muni cate with them in En glish. Secon dly, with China beco ming stron ger and stron ger, we have more cha nces to go abroad. We can know the En glish-speak ing coun tries much better if we know English. Both China and English-speaking countries have realized the importanee of the culture excha nge. Above all, En glish is useful and importa nt, we must master En glish.

我为什么喜欢学英语呢（学生们为什么喜欢学习英语）？首先，英语有用。英语是世界上应用最

广泛的语言。如果我们去国外旅游或者和外国人做生意，我们就需要用英语和他们交流。其次，随着中

国越来越强大，我们有更多出国机会。如果我们懂英文，就可以更深刻地了解英语国家。中英文国家都

已经意识到文化交流的重要性。总之，英语既实用又重要，我们必须学好英语。

9. Self-study （自学）/How to achieve success of dista nee learni ng （如何在远程学习中获得成

功）

As adult stude nts in Shan ghai TV Un iversity, self-study becomes very importa nt. Accord ing to me, there are several pieces of tips of self-study.

First, I always make a study pla n in the begi nning of a new semester. Second, preview every un it before the less on. Third, try to finish the homework after class. Fourth, go over what I have lear nt in class regularly at home. Without review, you will a bsolutely forget what you ' ve learnt as quickly as possible. So reviewing is

helpful in understanding and memorizing what you ' ve learnt.

作为上海电大的成人学生，自学很重要。对我来讲，我有下列自学方法。第一，我总是在学期初制

定好学习计划。第二，课前预习每个单元。第三，课后完成作业。第四，定期在家里复习所学过的知识。不复习，你绝对会很快忘记学过的知识。所以，复习在理解和记忆所学知识方面很有帮助。

10. My expectation of the Ion g-dista nee educatio n （我对远程教育的期望）

Now, I am a student in Shanghai TV university, in other words, I am a distanee learner. I have a lot of expectations on my distanee education. Firstly, I hope to improve my spoken English. I work in a foreign in vested compa ny. My boss is a foreig ner.

I n eed to talk with him in En glish every day. So I would like to improve my spoken English very much. Secondly, I hope to improve my English writing ability. I need to receive and an swer emails in En glish every day, but I don 'tk now many En glish words. These above are my

expectati ons of the Ion g-dista nee educati on.

现在我在上海电大学英语。换言之，我是一名远程学习者。对远程教育，我有许多期待。第一，我希望可以提高我的英语口语。我在外企上班，老板是外国人，每天我都需要和他用英语交谈，所以我非

常想要提高英语口语。第二，我希望提高英语写作能力。每天我都需要收发英语邮件，我词汇量不大。以上这些是我对远程教育的期望。

11. My Favorite Book （我最喜爱的书）/ The Book I Like Best

My favorite book is A Dream of Red Mansions. It was written by Cao Xueqin. The book tries to tell us that there are differe nt kinds of love, only one kind which should be con sidered as True Love. In our life, we should marry the true love in stead of

wealth and good looks. From this book, we also get to know a part of the n oble people ' s life in Qing Dynasty and find some life philosophies from it. This book is very instructive to people. I can leann a lot from this book. So it is my favorite book.

我最爱的书是《红楼梦》。是曹雪芹写的。这本书试图告诉我们，有许多种不同的爱，但只有一种才是真爱。在我们的生活中，我们应该和真爱结婚而不是和有钱的或是长得好的人结婚。从这本书中，我

们也可以了解到清朝贵族的一部分生活并从中找到一些生活哲学。所以这本书对人很有指导意义。我们

可以从中学到更多，所以这是我最喜欢的一本书

12. My Favorite course （我最喜欢的课程，需要加上划线的一句）/ The course I like best of the

Iong-distanee education （我最喜欢的远程教育课程，不需要加划线一句）

Among all the courses I have taken in TV University, I like English courses best. The reasons are as follows.

Firstly, there are many on li ne courses and sources, which en ables me to study any where and any time I like. I can download many useful materials from the website and practice them all the time. Secondly, English is one of the most useful la nguages in the world. My job is also related to En glish. Therefore, En glish lear ning helps me to deal with my job better. Last but not least, our school has many good En glish teachers, who are willi ng to help us whe never we meet with difficulties.

In short, En glish is my favorite course, but I also have to work hard to lear n other courses.

在我学习的电视大学所有课程中，我最喜欢英语课程。原因如下。首先，有许多在线资源，这使我随时随地

都能学习。我可以从网站上下载许多有用的资料。其次，英语在世界上是非常有用的一种语言。我的工

作还涉及到英语。因此，英语学习能帮助我把工作做得更好。最后，我们学校有很多优秀的英语老师，都愿

意帮助我们解决学习问题。

总之，英语是我最喜欢的课程，但我也必须努力学习其他课程

13. The course I hate most of the Ion g-dista nee education （我最讨厌的远程教育课程）// Difficulty

in Studying English 英语学习的困难（改第一句划线部分）

English is the course that I hate most of the long distanee education and I am bad at English. English is really very hard for me, as it is so differe nt from Chin ese. First, I can 'remember a lot of new words . Secon d, I weak in grammar. Third, my listening is poor. Fourth, I can ' t speakvErygweil, and I don 'have any

cha nee to talk with foreig ners. With so many difficulties, I am afraid of lear ning En glish and hate lear ning this course very much.

英语是远程教育中我最不喜欢的课，我英语学得很差。英语对我来讲很难。第一，我记不住很多单

词。第二，我语法很差。第三我听力不行。第四，我英语讲不好。有这么多困难，我畏惧英语，非常讨厌这么课程。

14. My favorite season （我最喜欢的季节）

Among the four seas ons, my favorite seas on is win ter. It lasts from December to February. Although win ter means cold weather, I love it all the same. In win ter, the days are very short. When it comes, the leaves fall from the trees. When it snows, the ground is white with snow. Every time it snows, I will remember an old saying, "When winter comes , can spring be far away?

” Wacawarm clothes and go outside to make

sno wme n. It is a good seas on for skat ing. Therefore, I like win ter best.

一年四季中，我最喜欢的季节是冬天。它是从十二月到二月。虽然冬天意味着寒冷，但我仍然热爱冬天。

在冬季，日子很短。当它到来时，树上的叶子会掉下。当下雪的时候，地上都有白色的雪。每次下雪，我都会

想起一句格言：“冬天来了，春天还会远吗？”我们都可以穿暖和的衣服，出去堆雪人。这是一个很适合滑

冰的季节。因此，我最喜欢冬天

15. My Hobbies （我的爱好）/ My In terests （我的兴趣爱好）/ How I spend my spare time （我如

何度过闲暇时光）/My Favorite Hobby （我最喜欢的爱好/ My hobby （我的爱好）/ My activities in

leisure time（我的休闲生活）

I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, play ing the violi n and keep ing a diary. I like sports very much. I go running at five o'clock in the morning. After classes in the after noon, I play table-te nnis with my frien ds. These sports have kept me healthy. At home, I like to sing and play the violi n. I practice singing and play ing the violin every day. Busy as I am, I am quite happy. Of all my hobbies I like reading books best. In my bedroom there are n early six hun dred books. There are story books, textbooks, magaz in es, and others. All these books have en riched my kno wledge.

我有许多爱好，例如运动、唱歌、拉小提琴和写日记。我非常喜欢运动。我每天早上五点去跑步。

下午上完课后，我和朋友们一起打网球。这些运动使我保持健康。在家我喜欢唱歌和拉小提琴。我每天练习唱歌和拉小提琴。在忙得同时，我也很快乐。在所有爱好中，我最喜欢读书。在我卧室里有将近600本书。有故事书、教科书、杂志和其他的书。所有这些书都丰富了我的知识。

16. An Un forgettable Day （难忘的一天）// A Day to Remember 或An Un forgettable Experie nee

（一次难忘的经历）划线部分不写

When people ask me what day you always remember in your life, I can an swer the questi on quickly. It was March 12th, 2009. Our teacher Mr. Zhu led us to a park near the school. We went there to take part in voluntary labor. We got there at 9 a.m. Mr. Zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working. Group One was responsible to plant trees and water flowers. Group Two were busy collecting litter left by the tourists. I was in Group Three. We went to the children ' s playground aiqchiplmame dhereheV e

worked very hard. After a day 'work, I felt tired but very happy because I offered my service. I will n ever forget the day in my memory.

当问到我在生命中什么日子最难忘时，在你的生命中，我可以很快的回答。这是2009年3月12日，朱老

师带我们去附近的公园。通常我们去公园是度假的。但是今天，我们去那是参加义务劳动。我们九点钟

到达，朱老师把我们分成三组，然后我们开始劳动。一组负责种树、浇花。二组忙着收集游客丢弃的垃圾。我在第三组。我们去了儿童游乐场，清扫那里的设备。我们工作很努力，大约11点，我们结束了

劳动。我们都很累，但很高兴。我永远都不会忘记记忆中这天。

17. 上星期天你打电话叫Jack和你去公园。在公园你们看见……，你们玩得很高兴。（要用如下

词汇：get up late, call, get to, many people, do exercise, read, lake, fly ）

Last Sun day, I called Jack to go to the park with me. I got up late. We got to the park n ear our school on foot. We saw many people there. Some old people were doing exercise. Some middle-aged couples were dancing. Some young people were readi ng. The park was big and there was a large lake in it. It was such a beautiful day. Some children were flying kites. Jack and I also joined them. It was so much fun. We enjoyed ourselves very much.

上星期天，我叫杰克和我一起去公园。我起床晚了。我们来到我们学校附近的公园里散步。我们看

到很多人在那里。一些老人们正在做运动。一些中年夫妇在跳舞。一些年青人正在看书。公园有一个很

大的湖泊。这是一个美丽的一天。有些孩子正在放风筝。我和杰克也加入了他们的行列。它很有意思。

我们玩的很开心。

18. Cha nges in My life （我生活的变化）

There have bee n many cha nges in my life. With the developme nt of the economy, my life is better off. For cloth in g, I have spare money to buy all sorts of pretty clothes. But in the past, there were fewer clothes in my wardrobe. For food, I usually had traditional Chinese food for every meal, rice, noodles or a steamed bun. Nowadays, I can afford any delicious food, in clud ing wester n food. For hous in g, I moved from a cramped and gloomy room to a big and bright flat. For getting around, I rode an old bike on my way to work a year ago. At present, I drive my private car to travel. I believe my life will become better in the near future.

在我的生活中有很多变化。随着经济的发展，生活就会更富裕。比如服装，我有多余的钱买各种漂亮的衣

服。但在过去，在我的衣柜只有很少的衣服。比如食物，过去我通常吃传统的中国食物、米饭、面条还有

馒头。如今，我能支付起任何美味的食物，包括西餐。比如住房、我从一个狭窄和阴暗的房间换成了一个又大又亮的房间。比如出行，一年前我骑着一辆旧自行车去上班。目前，我开着我的汽车去旅行。我相信

我的人生将来会变得更好。