打造高分英语作文五步曲

打造高分英语作文五步曲
打造高分英语作文五步曲

打造高分英语作文五步曲

高考英语写作,只要有意识地科学训练是可以快速有效提高的,比其他部分的提高会

花到更短的时间。以下是,我们一起来了解下:

第一步,写作的内容,要求做到两点—内容完整、相关。

这两点只要考生不粗心,基本都能做到。比如2021年陕西考区的题目,要求写暑假

的安排,是一篇正反观点类的议论文。必须注意题目的要求,第一要提出讨论话题,Recently there has been a heated discussion about what the students should do during the summer

vacation.这是一个经典的模版开篇句型。

第二要写出一方面的观点,然后是另一方面的观点,最后提出自己的看法,根据要

求缺一不可,否则就会被扣掉相应的分数,这就是完整。再比如,2021年广东考区的成语寓言故事,不仅要描写整个守株待兔的过程,还应该根据要求点名寓意,否则也是不完整,这点只要在课堂上强调,学生是很容易做到的。所谓相关,也就是不要过多出现文中没有

的信息,不能过分发挥,一般学生犯此类错误的较少。

第二步,写作中的语法。

在高考阅卷中,一般三个小的语法错误会被扣掉一分,一个大的语法错误关于谓语的

错误会被扣掉一分。所以,学生应该尽量避免犯语法错误。我在课堂中会强调,对于语法

基础薄弱的同学,除了加强自己的语法功底外,就是去背诵我给出的50个最高频用到的

句法结构。这些结构不仅正确,而且一定是高考中的有效得分点,即使语法偏弱,记住这

些句子然后在考试中使用也能避免学生自己造句中的语法错误,一举两得。比如,倒装句

在考试中就很少有同学主动启用,但是一旦正确启用就会收到意想不到的效果,所以我会

给出四组倒装句,然后让学生加强运用和练习。这些句子包括:

1、Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection, can we solve the problem of pollution.

2、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.

3、Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.

4、By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smocking.

第三步,连接词的运用,使文章连贯、流畅。

我把这些词分为8类,叫做“畅词”,往往学生由于中西方语言的差异,会忽视这一点,所以在授课中会通过大量的练习巩固和加强学生的印象。而且不仅要写,还写出高水

平的畅词,因为高考是选拔性考试,要做到“人无我有,人有我优”。比如,“首先”这

个表示次序的畅词,一般同学一定想到的是firstly 或者first of all。可是我建议学

生启用to begin with,

或者initially 这个是建议水平较好的启用。“然而”,绝大部分启用but, however,我建议学生采用 on the contrary 或者 oppositely。

第四步,也是整个课程的核心部分,要强化“复杂、高级”两个概念。

为什么是核心呢?因为学生在这一部分没有正确的认识,在平时的学习中老师也没有有意识灌输和训练总结。大部分学生以为只要写出来、写正确就可以拿到高分,其实80-120个单词包括大概10个句子,如果全部是简单的词汇和句型没有办法达到最高档作文的要求。因此,我们强调高级的词汇和高级复杂的句型,不是说全部必须高级,而是必须出现一些才能符合高考作文大纲的要求。在这一步中,我总结的“高分词汇选择原则”、“简单句到复杂句的瞬间转换”、“高分句子写作策略”以及“钻石得分50句”,通过这些理论和实践结合的讲解,学生会感觉成绩的快速提升,效果明显。

举其中“高分词汇选择原则”为例:

1、词组优先原则。如:

[原文]A new railway is being built in my hometown.

[修正]A new railway is under construction in my hometown.

2、地道原则。如:

[原文]Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge.

[修正]Through traveling, I gained\obtained a lot of knowledge.

3、避免重复原则。如:

[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

4、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇。

原词替换词

hard diligently

very rather\ extremely

pay attention to attach importance to

happy delighted\ enjoyable

more and more the increasing number of \ increasingly

第五步,书写和卷面。

这点其实很重要,高考阅卷是扫面试卷然后在电脑阅卷,所以书写和卷面显得尤为重要。这点也是学生自己多加注意就可以做好,标准很简单:clean and clear。

高考英语写作,只要有意识地科学训练是可以快速有效提高的,比其他部分的提高会花到更短的时间。希望所有考生能够按照这五步的方法来书写自己的高考作文,同时坚持下去用同样的坚毅去书写自己美好的人生。

感谢您的阅读,祝您生活愉快。

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