小升初英语作文例.doc

英语作文，获得高分的方法

书面表达是考查学生英语综合水平的一个重要途径，很多孩子英语口语好，却无法写好英语

作文。而现实情况却是从初一甚至从小学开始就已经有了对书面表达的考查，所以练习英语写作也

是我们学而思小升初课程的重要环节，帮孩子们打好基础。

现将写好英语作文的重要要素，总结如下：

1、格式：拿到作文题，一定要把握好题目的要求，看清是哪种类型的题目，确定好相应的

格式。

常考的题如日记，日记的格式就是需要在第一行左方顶格写上日期和星期，右方写上天气，

然后再开始写正文。成功英语需要提醒大家的是，日记基本上都是描写已经发生过的事情，

所以孩子们注意一定要用一般过去时哦!

2、语法：这是现在孩子们在英语写作中丢分最多的一项。

(1)写完作文后要记得检查：语法知识需要靠我们平时一步步积累，但是孩子们要注意在写

完作文之后一定要细心检查自己的作文，一些学过的语法点不要再错了。

(2)避免使用自己拿不准的句子：很多孩子喜欢用长句、复合句等。可是又对这些句子掌握

得不是很牢固，所以很容易出错。一切拿不准的词和句子，都应该使用自己会的简单句和简单

词，这样才能给考官留下好印象。

3、词汇：如果在文章中能够正确使用一些高级词汇和词组，而不再是简单词汇，这会让老

师耳目一新。例如：如果要孩子们来写 holiday。很多孩子们一开始就会写 I went to last year. 用 went 就很大众化了，但是如果用 take a trip 这个词组就会显得你的英语水平跟其他人

不一样了 !对于词汇这个点，成功英语向孩子们提两点建议：

(1)词汇需要平时积累，但是大家积累的时候一定要注意灵活使用学过的词。大家已经学过

很多词组和单词了，可是大家都不会拿出来用，原因就是在于大家学的时候只记得了它的意

思，没有认识该怎么使用，该在什么情况下使用。所以大家以后学习词汇的时候一定要翻翻词

典学习例句，自己也拿来造个句子，要知道自己以后该怎么用。

(2)学习语言并不是纸上谈兵，练习写作也应该要多加练习。熟能生巧，练得多了，自然也

就会知道什么时候用什么词，该怎么写作文了。

4、书写：这一点看似不重要，却最影响老师对你作文的整体评价。我们不要求要做到美观，

但那是一定要整洁、认真。这样老师也能很快读懂你的文章，更能对你作文产生好的印象。

小升初英语作文范文10 例

（1）I have a best friend.

She has long straight black hair big black eyes and a small nose. She is very thin and kind, she

is cute too. Her English and Chinese is very good. She ishard-working.

She favorite season is summer, because it's hot ,she can eat ice- cream. She like playing the

piano ,reading books and singing songs.

Who's she? She is my best friend ---Sun Meng Qi. She has a very good English name, too---Angle.

我有个最好的朋友。

她有着长长的黑色直发，大大的黑眼睛和一个小鼻子。她很瘦，对人非常和蔼，她也很

可爱。她的英语和语文非常好。她学习十分认真。

她最喜欢的季节是夏季，因为夏天很热，她能吃冰淇凌。她喜欢弹琴，读书和唱歌。

她是谁 ?她就是我最好的朋友——孙梦琪。她还有一个很好听的英文名——Angle.(安琪

儿)

（2）My Family

This is my family. There are four people in my family. My grandmother, my father, my

mother and me.

My grandmother has short white hair. She looks very nice. My father has short black hair and

small eyes. He looks very fat, so I of ten call him “ fat man ” . He works at a factory. My mother works at a L.D.T. My mother has long black hair. She likes sports and traveling, so I often go on

sports with my mother. On holidays my family often go to travel. I study at Guiyuan Primary School.

We are very happy.

家人

这是我的家 . 有 4 人在家里 . 奶奶、爸爸、妈妈和我.

奶奶短白发. 她看起来很漂亮. 爸爸小眼睛,短黑发 . 他看起来很肥,所以我常常称呼他

为 " 肥人 ". 他在一家工厂工作 . 妈妈在工程船名妈妈早已黑发 . 喜欢运动和旅游 ,所以经常去体育与

妈妈 . 假日经常到我家旅行 . 我念小学的同志 . 我们感到非常高兴 .

（3）自我介绍的英语作文

Everybody is good, my name is called He xuan, my English name is called Angle. Everybody

knew that Angle is the angel meaning, I hoped that I forever can look like the angel equally happily, joyful, is carefree all day! I in the sixth grade, faced with rose the middle school now, father and

mother, grandfather paternal grandmother, teacher schoolmates place the very big expectation to me,

I will certainly not disappoint their expectation, will study diligently, passes an examination junior

middle school's key class! In the future will become social a person of great ability and tremendous potential, will make the contribution for the motherland!

中文：

大家好，我的名字叫何璇，我的英文名字叫Angle。大家知道吗，Angle 是天使的意思，

我希望我永远都会像天使一样开开心心，快快乐乐，整天无忧无虑的！我现在上六年级了，

面临升中学了，爸爸妈妈，爷爷奶奶，老师同学都给我寄予很大的期望。我一定不会辜负他

们的期望，努力学习，考上初中的重点班！将来成为社会的栋梁之才，为祖国做出贡献！

（4）感谢帮过你的人

Last week I saw a young man giving up his seat to a woman with a baby in her arms on a bus. To

my great surprise, the woman did not thank the young man; on the contrary, she glared at him coldly, which made him embarrassed.

This incident set me thinking. If everyone acted like that woman, who would like to help others?

And what would our society be like?

If anyone gives you a hand, you should express your sincere gratitude to him or her. Only in

this way will everyone be ready to help others and feel satisfied with it.

上周，我在公共汽车上看到一个年轻人给一个怀抱婴儿的妇女让座。让我感到奇怪的是，这位

妇女没有感谢这位年轻人，反而用冷淡的目光盯着他，使他感到困窘。

这事令我深思。如果每个人都像那个妇女那样，谁还愿意帮助别人 ?我们这个社会将会变成什么

样子 ?

如果有人帮了你，你应表示衷心感谢。只有这样，大家才会愿意帮助别人，并从中得到

满足。

（5）感恩节英语作文： Earthquake love Thanksgiving

Human love, love compatriots, and in a race against time. We believe that life can not be separated by mountains and rivers of love, can not be buried ruins of the love of life, heavy rain pouring on the life

of the immortal love, dark clouds overhead can not be the love of life.

When disaster comes, we can not avoid, we can do only with strong and smiles to the world that we

are strong, no difficulty can make us lose the hope of Health.

地震·爱·感恩

人性之爱，同胞之爱，在和时间赛跑。我们相信，山川阻隔不了对生命的爱，废墟掩埋

不了对生命的爱，暴雨浇不灭对生命的爱，乌云遮蔽不了对生命的爱。

我们是坚强的，

当灾难来临时，我们不能逃避，我们能做的只有用坚强和微笑去向世人证明，

任何困难都不能使我们失去生的希望。

（6）英语作文关于爸爸想念爸爸(I Miss My Father)

I am a girl of ten, and I live in a small mountain village far from Taiyuan. The only person

that lives with me is my mother, because my father is away for eight years, working in a city.

During the Spring Festival, my father came back home. He looked thin and tired. He gave my mother two thousand yuan, and told her that he would work even harder, earn more money, and then he could take us to the city He stayed at home for only ten days. We are living a poor life now. But what I want most is not money, but my father. I miss him very much!

【参考译文】

我是一个十岁的女孩，我住在离太原很远的一个小山村。和我共同生活的唯一的人是

我妈妈，因为我爸爸离家已经八年了，他在城里干活。

春节期间爸爸回家了。他看起来瘦瘦的，很疲倦。他把 2，000 元交给妈妈，并告诉她说

他要拼命地干活，多赚点钱，然后把我们接到城里去。他在家只呆了十天。

我们的日子很苦，可是我最需要的不是钱，是爸爸!我很想念他 !

（7）Planting Trees 植树

Spring is coming. It is the season for planting trees. On Sunday, our teacher led us to the suburb to plant trees. We brought some spades, pails and saplings with us. On arriving there, everybody went into action in no time. We dug square pits first. Then two persons were needed to plant a tree. One held the sapling carefully and the other put the soil in. I wish the saplings would grow up quickly.

【译文】春天来了，又是一个植树的季节。星期天，老师带领我们去郊区植树。同学们拿着

铁锨、水桶和小树苗上路了。到了目的地后，大家不由分说，争先恐后地干起来。我们先挖

坑，然后两个人合作，一个扶着小树苗，一个培土。小树啊，你快快长大吧。

（8） My winter holiday

This winter holiday, I went to Kunming with my family. Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think. The

sky is blue and the air is clean. You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere. The weather there is great. It ′ snever too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it "Spring City". Kunming is surrounded by beautiful scenery. And one of the most famous views is "The Stone Forest". It is really scenic. We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I

like Kunming very much.

译文：这个寒假，我和我的家人去了昆明。我觉得，昆明是一座非常美丽的城市。昆明

的天空蓝蓝的，空气是那么清新。到处都可以看到许多种类的美丽鲜花。那里的天气也非常

棒。全年都不会太热或太冷，所以人们都称昆明为“春城”。昆明周围有许多美丽的景

观。最著名的风景就是“石林”了。那可是真正的天然景观。我们虽然只在昆明待了六

天，但是我觉得非常快乐，而且我非常喜欢昆明。

（9） My winter holiday

my winter holiday was very interesting. As that day i got back to my native hometown, cousins

and cousines took me to ski. My skiing skill isn't well, got down for 15 times, they laughed at me

behind, i can't help smiling too. The day of Spring Festival was the most happiness day, we had meal

for the first, a table of delicious food, that made me so glad. Then we played the fireworks. The

childrens waving the lightening ticket while watching the adults playing the fireworks. That was so

beautiful! Like the stars rainning down the world. At the end, it was time to get the red bag. we were

very exciting, and satisfied. Sometimes, we also go shopping and buying something we like. Winter

holiday life was really abundant!

我的寒假生活非常有趣 .刚回老家那天,哥哥姐姐弟弟妹妹就拉着我去溜冰场溜冰 .我技术不好,摔了

15 个跟头 ,他们都在那边笑我 ,我也情不自禁的笑了 .大年三十那天最开心 .先是吃团圆

饭 ,一桌子的美食 ,让我大饱口服 .然后就是放烟花 .我们几个小孩一边拿着荧光棒甩 ,一边看大人们放

烟花 .好美啊 !像降落在人间的星星 .最后就是拿红包拉 ,我们都很兴奋 ,也很满足 .有时 ,我们还会去逛

街 ,买一些自己喜欢的东西 . 寒假生活真美好 !

（10） My Family Members 我的家人

I am student of Southwest Weiyu Middle School. I am in Class Two Grade Six. I ’ m a girl.

I ’ m twelve years old. I ’ m tall and thin. I like to sing and dance. I can sing POP music very well. I

like to eat meat, because I think it ’ s goodvery deliciousatEnglish,.I because I’like it very much.

I like to write a composition and I like to read many nice books. I think it ’ s good fo drawing, but I can ’ tdraw very well. I like cats very much, but I can ’ thave them, because my

mother doesn ’ t like them, she think they ’ re very dirty. I want to travel around the world, but I haven ’ t enough money. But I ’ m happy, because I have many friends and a happy family.

My mother is a shop assistant. She -six years’thirtyold. She ’ s tall and thinShetoo’. s

pretty. Her hair is short and straight. She likes to sing and she likes Zhang Xueyou ’ ssongs and

English songs. She likes to eat crabs. She always goes shopping with me. She’ sgood at Maths.

When I have problems with Maths she will help me. She doesn ’ t like pets; because she thinks they

are dirty. I like my mother very much.

My father is a manager. He -six’yearsfortyold. But he looks like very young and handsome.

He always goes to park with me. He likes to smoke. But I think smoke is bad for himself. He likes

English songs. He ’ s good at Chinese. He sometimes helps me to write a composition. My father

likes pets very much. I like my father very much.

My grandmother and my sister live together. My grandma is sixty-three years old. She’ s

retiring. My sister is a student of fourteen years old. She has two big eyes and long straight hair.

She’ s a small famous singer in her city. She likes to sing and dance. She can sing very well. She joins

in many competitions and she always be champion.