2020届高三英语专题复习之求助信

英语作文专题复习（三）求助信

（2016新课标全国卷Ⅰ）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请和个人简历（resume），给外教Ms. Jenkins写信，请她帮助你修改所附的文字和格式（format）。

注意：1. 词数100词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

满分优范文（感悟范文并背诵）：

Dear Ms Jenkins,

（说明写信目的）I am writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.

（说明求助内容）In order to gain some social experience and improve my work ability, I am going to take a part-time job during the summer vacation. So interested in a position in a foreign-captured

so….that…倒装句是满分佳句

company am I that I have already written an application letter and my resume all in English.（引入问题）However, I am afraid that there might be some grammar mistakes or inappropriate format in the materials that prepared.

（提出请求）Would you be so kind as to correct the mistakes and improve the format of the

非常礼貌地用so…as to …提出求助

application and the resume for me? I would appreciate it if you could take my request in consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

我写信是想问你是否能够帮助我。

为了能够获得一些社会经验并且提高我的工作能力，我将在这个暑假期间参加一份兼职工作。我对于这家外资公司的一个职位是非常的感兴趣，我已经写好申请和个人简历。然而，我害怕在我所准备的材料中有一些语法错误或者不合理的格式。

你能否帮我改善一下我申请信以及个人简历的格式？如果您能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。

你的朋友，

李华

经典句子背诵：

夺人眼球开头句：

1. I am a middle school student and I am writing to tell you my problem which has troubled me.我是一名中学生，我写信告诉您一个困扰我的问题。

2. I am writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor.我写信是想问你是否能够帮助我。

3. My name is Li Hua and I am writing this letter to seek your help.我是李华，我写信想寻求您的帮助

4. I am sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要您的帮助。

5.I have some difficulty in doing…whi ch bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做…方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。

亮点出彩篇中句：

1.I seem not to be able to fit in well with others here.在这似乎我不能与他人融洽相处。

2.I do not feel quite accustomed to the life here.我觉得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活

3.I long to learn English well, but I do not know how, which makes me upset.我渴望学好英语，

但我不知道怎么学，这使我很烦恼。

4.I can not concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries

me a lot.这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。

5.I often feel left out in this school, and I do not know how it has come about在这所学校我经

常感到受到冷落，我不知道这是怎么回事。

6.Facing/Faced with so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.面对如此多的问题，我

不得不向您求助。

结尾句：

1.I am eager to get your timely help. / I am eager for your timely help我渴望得到您及时的帮

助

2.I would be very grateful if you could help me. /I would appreciate it if you could do me a

favor.如果您能帮助我我会非常感激。

3.I would appreciate it if you take my request into consideration/account.如果您能考虑我的请

求，我将不胜感激。

I would be grateful if you really give me a hand.如果您能帮我，我将十分感激。

【实战演练】假如你是李华，最近在写一篇关于北美原住民(native American)文化习俗的论文，但国内有关的英语参考书较少。请给你的美国笔友Mike写封信，请他帮你买几本这方面的书。内容包括：

1.买书的原因；

2.对书的要求(如数量、寄送时间等)；

3.付款方式。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【实战演练】参考范文

Dear Mike,

I am sorry to bother you, but I have to ask a favor of you in the hope that you will be so kind to help me.

Recently I am writing a paper about the culture and customs of native Americans, but I am stuck as not many English reference books are available in China. Therefore, would you please buy some for me in America if it is convenient for you? Two or three books are just enough, and I would appreciate it if you could send them to me before Nov. 9.

As to the expense of books and postage, I will transfer them to your account via online banks. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua