高考作文之2014湖北高考英语作文范文

2014湖北高考英语作文范文

【篇一：湖北卷历年英语高考作文及范文】

2010年

请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个实例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。

the best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. a smile can help us get through diffident situations and find friends in a world of strangers. a smile can open doors and tear down walls.

注意：

①无须写标题；

②内容只需涉及一个方面；

③词数为100左右。

范文：

one possible version

i still remember how nervous i was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when i found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first english class. the teacher spoke english throughout the class, which was totally different from the lessons i had taken before.

in the morning class the next day, the english teacher came to me while i was reading the text aloud as other students. after listening to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. the smile shone on the whole day and the following days. a week later, i volunteered to take charge of english study in my class.

thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class, i began to be confident.

2011年

请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。

working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn about team work．teamwork shows us how other people’s roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people．

注意：

①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；

④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；

⑤词数为100左右。

范文：

one possible version

years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me.

in fact, i didn’t realize its importance until i was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. at first, i did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities. as a result, i was tired out and depressed. then i turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. thus i began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class.

it is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.

2012年

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

you cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.

注意：

①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数为120左右。

范文：

one possible version

three years ago i failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. disappointed as i felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, i found the teachers patient and considerate. besides, i enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. i decided to make the best of it. i worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. whenever i had difficulties, they were always available. soon, i became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.

my experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.

2013年

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

we all know that sticks and stones may break our bones, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.

注意：

①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数为120左右。

【思路点拨】本文以“我们应该意识到，言语也可能会伤害别人”为题，让学生写一篇短文。体裁可为记叙文、议论文和说明文。但根

据考生的实际情况，还是记叙文好些，可以通过自己的亲身体验来

证明这句话。考生成文时应注意：1.结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题；第二段讲自己的亲身体验；第三段说自己的认识，回归

主题。2.时态：以一般过去时为主。3.人称：第一人称。4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。

范文：

one possible version

my classmate admires my fluent english very much and i usually feel encouraged by his compliments.

one day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. i volunteered to do it by saying “my classmate is an ec centric boy

whose clothes never fit him.” hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my classmates face turned red. after class, i learned from the teacher that my classmate would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others. my mindless words must have hurt him deeply.

not until then did i realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative. we should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak.

2014年

请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。

small things make a big difference. the small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

注意：

①无须写标题；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

【考点】考察开放性作文

【写作指导】

本文属于开放性作文，要求我们就：我们做的微小的事情都可以对我们的社会产生很大的影响。告诉我们要关注生活中的小事。仍然

属于议论文，可以使用一般现在时和第三人称。当然也可以写成记

叙文，叙述一件小事让我们懂得要关注细节。

要点：1.叙述生活中发生的一件小事；以及这件小事对我们产生的影响。2.说明任何一件小事都会对我们的社会产生很大的影响。告诉我们要重视这样的小事。

首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择

合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

范文：

one possible version

it isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.

i can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy sunday afternoon. i was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. a man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and i joined in without hesitation. luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. compared with the escaped driver, i am proud of what i did.

as a member of the society, i am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

附 : 评分标准或原则

（1）评分时，按5个档次给分。根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该

档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

（2）词数少于80词数，降一个档次。紧扣主题，适当发挥（多于120词）不予扣分。

（3）评分时，关注点：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准

确性、上下文连贯性

及语言的得体性。

（4）语法、拼写和标点符号等是语言准确性的重要方面，评分时，

应视其对交际的影响

程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

（5）如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

2．各档次的给分范围和要求：

第五档（很好）：（20-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。

-覆盖所有内容要点。

-应用较多的语法结构和词汇。

-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高

级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。

-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档（好）（15-20分）

完全完成了试题规定的任务。

-虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。

-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语

法结构、词汇所致。 -应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档（适当）：（10-15）

基本完成了试题规定的任务。

-虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。

-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

【篇二：2014年湖北英语高考满分作文事例作文模板】 2014年湖北高考满分作文

---- 王祖元武汉市新洲区第一中学

去年写了一篇文章，号召湖北高考不要出事例作文，然而，今年还

是事例。我心好烦。再次用去年的模板把今年的高考作文写一遍。

as is widely acknowledged, whatever small good deeds we do can definitely make a big difference in our life. i learned this from one of my experiences that i went through during my senior one school life.

one day, when i was wandering through the street, i suddenly witnessed an old man fall to the ground. without hesitation, i hurried to help him stand up and rested him in a street chair nearby. what surprised me most was that some classmates warned me not to do it again as the family might mistake me

for the offender. i was so frustrated that i almost accepted the fact that i had really done something improper. it was my parents’ approval and the teachers’ praise as well as the family’s gratitude that helped me the good deed i had done. from then on, whenever possible and wherever necessary, i am always willing to give a helping hand to those in need. it wasn’t long before i was chosen as one example in our school for helping others.

from this story, i am absolutely convinced that small kind deeds are worth doing in spite that we may be wronged for this. only in this way can we contribute to building a harmonious society.

【篇三：2014年全国高考各地英语作文及范文】

假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广

告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：住宿-accommodation

范文：

i am a student in china and i plan to go to britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. i’ve seen your ad, and i’d like to know something more about your six-weekenglish course. first, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? besides, wish there would not be

too many student in a class, ’d also like to knowhow much i have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. would there be host family or university dormitory?

i am looking forward to your early reply.

一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要

求和你的想象完成短文、

1、家庭

2、工作

3、业余生活

注意：1、次数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好i often imagine what my life will be like in

the future.

范文：

i often imagine what my life will be like in the future. i think my life will be very different in ten years. i will be twenty-eight

years old by then. i will have my own family. probably with a

lovely child. i hope i will work in a computer company as a program designer. i will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, i will do a good job in whatever i do. in my free time, i will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. on my

为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了heart-to-heart专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie，收到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了你自己的困扰；近日容易发脾气，使正常的

学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点

如下：

1. 表示理解并给予安慰；

2. 提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1. 词数120左右；

2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪

hi worried,

i’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.

_________________________________________________

yours,

jamie

范文：

hi worried,

first, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. this is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. and third, remain optimistic about your future. such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. i hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. yours,

jamie

第一节 (15分)

你给英国朋友chris写一封信，内容包括：

1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；

2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；

3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

注意： 1.词数不少于50.

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

dear chris,

______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ _____________________

yours,

joe

第二节（20 分）

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。注意： 1. 词数不少于 60.

2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

there was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.

范文：

第一节

dear chris,

how is everything going?

i remember we planned to visit yunnan in july but now because my left foot was injured, i cannot go with you as planned.

i’m sorry about it. can i suggest that we put it off until early august? i wish you could understand.

i’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

yours,

joe

第二节

there was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, i noticed the entrance

was small and almost blocked. so my classmates and i had a discussion and wrote a report. then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. he accepted our suggestions. soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. now it is easy

如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。

“success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.

- sir winston, churchill

内容要求：

1．你对该引语的理解：

2．你的相关经历：

3．恰当的结尾。

注意：

1．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数：

2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：

3．词数：120左右。

this quotation from winston churchill tells us

that__________________________

范文：

this quotation from winston churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures. rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.

at the age of twelve, i got a nice bike as a birthday gift. so excited was i that i couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.

however, it was harder than expected. the bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. worse still, i took many falls off the bike. i was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. with more practice, i did better and better. looking back, i feel i wouldnt be able to ride a bike had i lost heart.

第一节基础习作

你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。

［写作内容］

［写作要求］

只能用5个句子表达全部内容

［评分标准］

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

richard avis, a british, was born on december 1st, 1974. in order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. with the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.

第二节读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）

阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

oseola mccarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. as a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when miss mccarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the university of southern mississippi.

the money was i me savings. she could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. she never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. she never flew to anywhere till the donation （捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the south only once. the house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. only after she became known in america did she begin to travel all over the country. since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the white house.

her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. she herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. she said to the reporters that the idea

of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.

[写作内容]

1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 用约120个词就miss mccarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括：（1）你如何看待她的捐助行为；

（2）你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响；

（3）如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。

[写作要求]

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的

内容，但不得直接

引用原文的句子。

2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

范文：