写作须遵循的5Cx

写作高分须遵循的5C法则

1、字迹清楚，段落明朗(clear)：字体不要太大，也不要太小，以行间距的三分之一到二分之一为合适;另外，大小要一致，不要忽大忽小;字母的倾斜方向要一致，不要东倒西歪;要抵着给出的虚线写，不能上窜下跳;总之，要给阅卷人清楚、工整的感觉。段落一般为三段，采用段首缩进式，即每段开头空4至8个字母的格，每段段首缩进的量要一致，要让阅卷人一目了然。

2、内容完整，紧扣提纲(complete)：一般来说，六级写作都会给出三点汉语提纲，考生应严格按照三点写成三段。不要有遗漏，也不要随意改变提纲要点的顺序。因为阅卷人要在30秒左右的时间打出分数，所以不希望看到与提纲严重背离的作文。

3、首保正确，再求闪光(correct)：这一条是最核心的，因为在写作时间和篇幅都比较短的情况下，考生写出的内容几乎是一样的，唯一的判断标准几乎就是语言的质量。要首先保证语法和拼写正确，哪怕用小词、短句也可以。有能力的话再追求闪光的词句。例如，有考生在写2009年6月的作文时，写出了这样的开头句：There is no denying the fact that the vital of name has been a hotly debated topic in China. 这句话是套用我以往范文给过的句子，基本结构是对的，但有两处明显的错误。一处为vital，是个形容词，而这里应该用名词。作者可能想用一个牛词来替换importance以显示用词多样，结果弄巧成拙。另外一处错误为name之前应该有冠词a，其实题目中都给了，结果这位同学忽略了，缺乏基本的语法意识。其实作文中常犯的语法错误除了冠词错误，还包括时态错误、名词和动词单复数错误、代词不一致错误、词性错误以及句子主谓不完整错误。下笔时一定要谨慎。篇幅关系这里不能赘述。

4、先总后分，连词用上(coherent)：这里说的是段落的结构和连贯性的问题。英语文章特别喜欢先总后分或开门见山的格局，另外，段落之间和句子之间的形式连接手段特别明显，即关联词用的很多。在写作的时候，几乎就是把给出的三点提纲作为每段的开头句，然后再

加上两三个扩展句即理由或例证句就可以了。当然有时候为了论证自然或扩展字数也可以加上一点铺垫的句子。如2009年6月真题作文开头一句既可以是Some people claim that na mes are of great importance. 也可以是There is no denying the fact that it is a controvers ial topic whether names are important or not. 然后再说Some hold the positive view.后面再加上两三句论证的话。论证句或扩展句之间最好有连接词，如First, Second, Besides, Al so, Similarly, In the same way, However等等。

5、语言简练，论据得当(concise)：不要啰嗦，不要过于重复和堆砌。有些考生背诵了一些经典的句型，为了凑字就全用上了，给人低层次的感觉。如最后一段用同学写道：As far as I am concerned, weighing the pros and cons of the arguments, I am inclined to ag ree with the latter point of view. 其实As far as I am concerned和weighing the pros and cons of the arguments用一个就行了。另外，尽管内容不及语言重要，但也肯定会影响分数的。考生应尽量平时多练，以期在考场上也能很快想到一些有力的理由和贴切的例证。另外，要敢于表达自己的思想，不要一味地为了保证语言正确而裹步不前，只说一些小学生的话。如有同学写09年真题第一段时写道：Some people think that names are important. Th ey say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him. If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him. 这样的作文倒是没有语言错误，但肯定也得不了高分。

2011年12月CET6作文预测及范文：创业或就业

Should College Graduates Start Their Own Business?

1.目前大学毕业生就业竞争非常激烈

2.有人认为去找工作不如自己创业

3.我的看法……

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Should College Graduates Start Their Own Business?

With the competition in the job market becoming increasingly fierce for college graduates, some ambitious students have tried their hands at launching their own businesses. Over the years, there have been many successful cases of student entrepreneurship and such attempts should be encouraged and promoted by both the universities and the society at large.

College students who start businesses are pioneers, among whom will be born China’s future business leaders. Faced with unknown challenges, they are audacious enough to embark on a perilous journey while most of their peers enjoy stable salaries by working as white-collars at high-end office buildings. Nevertheless, they are the masters of their own destiny and, exposed to many more uncertainties and setbacks, they develop perseverance, stamina and the indomitable spirit that are indispensible to all the great entrepreneurs. Even if they fail, they are not down; they keep exploring for new business opportunities and work tirelessly until they succeed. As people of vision, of individual initiative, of leadership, and of creativity and innovation, they represent the future and the hope of a nation.

Not all college graduates are suitable for undertaking entrepreneurial projects. To launch a business, one needs to have a sound business idea, a viable business plan, the charisma to create a cohesive team where members make concerted efforts for a common objective, effective managerial skills, and above all, the courage to compete against powerful rivals and ultimately to prevail. The essential difference between the students who become civic servants in government organizations or employees at leading domestic or multinational companies and those who create theirown businesses is that the former are docile followers whereas the latter are aggressive trailblazers. For this reason, business-launching college graduates are more admirable, and thus they command our deep respect.

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大学毕业生应否自己创业

对于大学毕业生来说，随着就业市场上的竞争日趋白热化，某些雄心勃勃的学生已开始尝试着去自己创业。在过去几年中，已出现了诸多学生创业的成功案例，因此，此类尝试理应获得学校和整个社会的鼓励与推动。

那些自己进行创业的大学生可被视为先驱，在他们之中，将会诞生中国未来的商界领袖。尽管面对着许多未知的挑战，他们仍无所畏惧地踏上一条充斥着艰难险阻的征程。与此形成对比的是，他们的大多数同龄人却作为白领，在高端写字楼里上班，拿着稳定的薪水。但是，创业的学生才是其命运真正的主人。由于接触到更多的不确定性与挫折，他们形成了锲而不舍、坚忍不拔、顽强不屈的精神，所有这些品质都是杰出企业家所不可或缺的。即使他们失败，他们不会垮掉，他们会不断探索，寻找新的商机，不知疲倦地努力，直至成功。作为一个具有远见卓识、个人进取性、领导力、创造力和创新精神的群体，他们代表着一个国家的未来与希望。并非所有的大学毕业生都适合去从事创业项目。要想创业，必须要有一个好的商业点子，一个可行的商业规划，非凡的个人魅力以形成一个有凝聚力的团队，使团队成员们步调一致地去奋力实现共同的目标，以及有效的管理才华；尤其是，需要有敢于与最强劲对手展开竞争、并最终取得胜利的勇气。那些成为政府机构里的公务员的学生，或

者那些成为本土大企业或跨国公司的雇员的学生，与那些自己进行创业的学生相比，最本质的差别在于，前者是温顺的追随者，而后者则是奋发进取的探路者。正是基于这一原因，创业的大学毕业生们更令人钦佩，也因而赢得了我们深深的敬意。

Part I Writing

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled College Students on the Job Market. You should write at least 150 words following the o utline given below.

1、目前网络教育形成热潮。

2、我认为这股热潮的原因是.....

3、我对网络教育的评价

the newly-coined word“online education”may by no means（不）sou nd strange to most people. During the past several years, hundreds of o nline education colleges have sprung up (涌现)around China.

Why could online education be so popular in such a short period of time?（短时间内）For one thing, If we want to catch up with the develo pment and the great pace of (快的步伐) modern society, we all should p ossess an urgent and strong desire （急切而强烈的欲望）to study, while most people nowadays are under so enormous pressures that (处在如此大的压力下以至于) they can hardly have time and energy （时间和精力）t o study full time at school. Furthermore, online education enables them to save a great deal of time on the way spent on the way between ho me and school. Last but not least, the quick （快速的）development of i nternet，which makes possible （使之成为可能）all our dreams of attendi ng class on the net，should also be another critical（关键的）reason.

Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It’s indeed a hel pful complement （补充）to the traditional educational means（方式，方法）. It can provide different learners with more flexible and various（灵活多样的）ways to learn. Most of all, through online education, we can stick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest kno wledge.

The Craze of Pursuing Graduate Studies

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The Craze of Pursuing Graduate Studies

Each year, millions of Chinese college students sit for qualifying examinations for gra duate studies, primarily in Master’s programs. Students prepare for those examinations eith er through years of arduous self-education or by spending large sums of money attending local training schools. The publishing of examinations-related study materials and the traini ng programs offered, both online and offline, have combined to form a sizable industry.

An alarming fact about this craze is that most students pursue graduate studies not o ut of their voluntary will. Faced with the harsh reality in the employment market, which i s forever looking for graduates with higher degrees, many college graduates find going to graduate schools is a good way to avoid unemployment and to enhance one’s competitiv eness in future job hunting.

However, without that voluntary initiative, most students who do enter graduate schoo ls are not motivated. For them, the only thing that ultimately counts is the degree or the diploma which they expect could give them an upper hand against other job hunters. As t

o the actual substance of their graduate studies, it’s not a big deal for them, as long as it leads to that degree or diploma. It is really pathetic to see that students undertake gradu ate studies with an ulterior motive—not for the sake of loving what they study, but for th e sake of merely landing a job, which in many cases might be unrelated to what they ha ve studied.

The chill truth is that students soon find their anticipations are a mere dream. As so many undergraduates proceed onto graduate studies, the employment situation remains as s evere as ever. Instead of bringing about apparent competitive edges, two or three years of additional academic training is simply a waste of time and energy. They need to reflect on this craze and would have been better off distinguishing themselves with outstanding k nowledge and skills when they were undergraduates.

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考研热

每年，数以百万计的中国大学生参加研究生入学资格考试，主要是攻读硕士学位课程。学生们要么通过数年艰辛的自学，要么通过花上不菲的一笔钱参加当地培训学校的课程，来准备这些资格考试。与考试相关的学习材料的出版，以及网上和网下所提供的培训课程，一起构成了一个规模可观的产业。

关于这股热潮，一个触目惊心的事实是，大多数学生并不是出于他们自主的意愿而去追求研究生阶段的学习的。面对着就业市场上严峻的现实，看着雇主们永远将目光投向那些学历更高的毕业生，许多大学生发现，进入研究生院去攻读硕士学位不失为一个良策，一方面避免了失业，另一方面可以提升未来求职过程中的竞争力。

然则，没有了那份由衷而发的积极性，最终得以进入研究生院的学生，其中大多数缺乏自我上进的动力。对于他们而言，最终而言，唯有其文凭或学位事关重大。他们希望，这个学位或文凭能提升其优势，战胜其他求职者。至于他们研究生课程实际学习什么内容，于他们而言并非关键所在，只要所学的东西能带来一纸学位或文凭即可。看着学生们并非怀着一种真实的意图去攻读研究生课程，实在令人感到悲哀：学生们并不真正热爱其所学的内容，而只是为了找到一份工作，并且这份工作在很多情形中可能与其所学专业毫不相关。

一个令人心寒的事实真相是，学生们很快就会发现，他们的期望纯粹是一种幻想。由于本科之后继续读研的学生如此之众，就业形势一如既往地严峻。二至三年额外的学术训练没能给学生带来显著的竞争优势，而是令他们白白地浪费了时光与精力，大学生们有必要对此热潮展开反思。如果他们早在本科期间就以优异的学识与能力脱颖而出的话，他们的处境肯定会来的好得多。

1、近几年兴起了一股报考国家公务员的热潮

2、分析产生这一现象的原因

3、你对此的看法是……

There is a growing tendency (越来越多的趋势) nowadays that people in mounting nu mbers have participated in (参加)the test for national civil servants. Millions of students a re full of enthusiasm about (热衷于)working as a civil servant.

The following reasons can account for this kind of craze. Above all, One of the tradi tional notions in China is that(中国的传统观念之一是)the more stable the work is，the ha ppier the will be. (工作越稳定，生活越幸福). Civil servant, as one of the most stable pro fessions in today’s China, becomes their preferable (更合意的)choice. Moreover, in recent years, the salary and welfare(收入和福利)of civil servants also ranks high (排名靠前) amo

ng various professions, which undoubtedly (毫无疑问地)attracts many graduates. Besides, t he high social status of civil servants is also a factor that can’t be negle cted (不容忽视的).

the craze for civil servant is a phenomenon that requires objective recognition. Gradu ates should not regard being a civil servant as their only choice, It is difficult to say whi ch is the better trade(行业). one can become the master of his trade provided he is dilige nt and tries hard(只要肯努力，行业无贵贱，行行出状元). Moreover, If most of high quali ty talents gather in the government departments，it will be a waste of talents and resource s and it will exert a negative impact on the (产生消极影响) long-term development of a nation.

1. 很多大学生毕业后从事的工作与所学专业关系不大，原因是……

2. 有人认为应该找与专业相关的工作,也有人认为无关紧要

3. 我的看法……

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Landing a Job Related to One’s Major or Not

That every college graduate lands a job perfectly geared to his major depends on a s eries of prerequisite conditions—that there are sufficient job opportunities, every graduate l oves his major, the pay is satisfactory, and the location of the workplace is ideal, etc.

All those conditions render a perfect match between one’s specialty and one’s job a mere wish. In reality, such correspondence is possible only for a few fortunate students. F

or most students, some of whom cannot even find a job, they should be prepared for jobs only partially or even tangentially related to their major.

As a matter of fact, college education does not seek to produce students who only e ngage in careers based on their major. More and more universities now emphasize foundat ional and interdisciplinary education to develop broad-caliber students capable of coping wi th diverse challenges in a rapidly changing world. An important function of university edu cation is just to expand students’ intellectual capacity and enhance their emotional maturity. Students must realize that studying a particular major does not automatically guarantee a ready career in that major.

Of course, students embarking on graduate studies should pursue careers related to th eir major. A student prepared to spend two or three years on a Master’s program and ano ther three or five years on a Ph.D. program must have an intense and genuine interest in a particular subject. The failure to work in a related field would be a huge waste of the time and energy, and of the in-depth knowledge acquired.

In seeking a job, a student should opt for the job that accords with his interest and allows him to best exploit his talents. One’s career success depends not necessarily on on e’s specialized knowledge, but on how one updates the existing knowledge and fits into a new environment.

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工作是否应与专业相匹配

每个大学毕业生要找到与其专业完全契合的工作，这取决于一系列先决条件：工作机会足够的多，每个毕业生热爱其专业，薪酬令人满意，工作单位的地理位置也甚为理想……

所有这些条件，使工作与专业之间的完美匹配成为一种奢望。在现实中，这种对应只可能出现在为数不多的幸运儿身上。对于大多数甚至连工作都难于找到的学生来说，他们必须准备着去接受那些与其专业只是部分相关、甚至几乎毫不相关的工作。

事实上，大学教育所试图培养的学生，并非仅限于去从事那些基于其专业的工作。现在，越来越多的大学注重基础性教育或交叉学科教育，就是为了培养宽口径的学生，能够应对一个快速变化的社会中不尽相同的挑战。大学教育的一个重要功能是，拓展学生的智力，提高其情感成熟度。学生们应该意识到，从事某个专业的学习，并不自然而然地保证该专业领域中有一个现成的职业在等待着你。

当然，进行研究生学习的学生，应尽量去从事与其专业相关的职业。一个愿意花上二至三年去攻读硕士学位，再花上三至五年去攻读博士学位的学生，必定对某一特定科目有着强烈而诚挚的兴趣。不去从事相关领域中的工作，这是对其青春年华、精力、以及业已获得的深厚学识的一阵巨大浪费。

在寻找工作的过程中，学生应选择那种既合乎其兴趣、又能最充分地使其发挥才华的工作。一个人职业生涯的成功，并非必定取决于其专业知识，而是取决于他如何去更新现有知识，并适应一个全新的环境。

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Economic Development and Environmental Protection

Economic development and environmental protection are a pressing issue primarily for developing countries where, in trying to catch up with developed countries, they have to consume natural resources on an unprecedented scale. This has seriously polluted our envir onment and, with the global environmental campaign gaining momentum, many people in China call for the precedence of environmental protection over economic development.

Any attempt to pose economic development and environmental protection as diametric ally contradictory is simple-minded. Since no country is willing to stop its economic devel opment, the best way is to strike a balance between the two and to heighten the environ mental awareness of those solely concerned with economic development.

European countries both economically developed and environmentally friendly can serv e as perfect examples for China. Their success story in both undertakings illustrates that e nvironmental protection does not mean a complete standstill of economic activities or expl oitation of natural resources, but rather an active development and application of effective technologies to minimize environmental consequences. In Germany, environmental protectio n has become part of economic development as it boasts the world’s most successful envi ronmental industry. With a developed economy, we are well equipped to develop sophistic ated technologies that can effectively safeguard our environment.

The relationship between economic development and environment protection is a comp lex one. For modern men, neither a primitive society which is perfectly ecologically friend ly nor an industrial civilization which is ecologically hostile is what we want. Environmen tal problems arise as a result of industrialization and only technologies can deliver solutio ns to those problems. Rather than simply returning to the past of non-human activity, we can seek active technological solutions in solar energy and wind energy to replace fossil f uels. By the time this key contributor to environmental deterioration is eradicated, man wil l achieve a win-win result between economic development and environmental protection.

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经济发展与环境保护

经济发展与环境保护构成了一个迫在眉睫的问题，这主要发生在发展中国家，因为在这些国家，在不遗余力追赶发达国家的过程中，人们不得不以史无前例的规模去消耗自然资源。这便严重地污染了我们的环境。随着全球范围内的环保运动势头日趋强劲，中国国内的许多人便大声疾呼，相对于经济发展，环境保护应被摆在首要位置。

任何将经济发展与环境保护绝然对立起来的做法，都显得头脑简单。既然没有哪个国家会愿意让其经济发展停滞下来，最好的方法就是在两者之间达成一种平衡;对于那些只关注经济发展的人，应努力提高其环保意识。

那些既经济发达又环境友好的欧洲国家，可以为中国充当一种完美的典范。它们在这两项事业中的成功故事，例证着这样一个道理，即环境保护并非意味着经济活动或自然资源的开发利用彻底陷入停顿，而是意味着积极主动地去研发并应用有效的技术，以便将环境后果降至最低限度。在德国，环保已变成经济发展的一个部分，因为该国拥有世界上最成功的环保产业。拥有了发达的经济，我们才有充分的条件去研发尖端的技术，才能真正有效地保护我们的环境。

经济发展与环境保护之间的关系甚为复杂。对于现代人而言，完全环境友好型的原始社会，或者是充满生态敌意的工业文明，二者中没有哪个是我们所要的。环境问题因工业化过程而产生，但也只能经由工业技术才能对这些问题带来解决之道。我们不应该简单地回归过去，让人类陷入无为的状态，而是要在太阳能、风能等能源中寻找积极主动的技术解决方案，来替代化石燃料。当化石燃料这个环境恶化的主要推手被铲除之际，人类在经济发展与环境保护之间，就能实现一种双赢的格局。