托福写作考试时这三点考生一定要注意

托福写作考试时这三点考生一定要注意
托福写作考试时这三点考生一定要注意

托福写作考试时这三点考生一定要注意托福考试,很多学生在出国留学前都要必考的一项考试。在托福写作备考过程中,有三点是考生备考时需要特别注意的,今天文都国际小编就为大家详细介绍托福写作考试时这三点考生一定要注意,希望对大家有帮助。

1.托福写作考些什么?

托福写作包括两部分,需在50分钟的时间内完成。

第一部分是综合写作,以阅读和听力材料为基础的写作试题,写作时间为20分钟。考生首先需要阅读一篇学术篇章,阅读的时间是3分钟。然后文章隐去,考生需要听一段大约为2分钟左右的与阅读主题相关的演讲。之后考生需要针对阅读和演讲中的观点作文,总结并说明演讲的内容与阅读中观点的关系,在20分钟的时间内完成一篇150~225字的文章。

第二部分是独立写作,需要考生根据自己的知识和经验陈述、解释并支持对待某一问题的某个看法,考查综合语言技能的作文题目的评分以回答的质量、完整性和准确性为依据。在30分钟内完成一篇300字以上的文章。

一般情况下如果你的时间充裕,小编建议大家能多写尽量多写,并不是网上有些人说的多写怕出错,小编认为的多写并不是没话找话,这里讲的多写是要考生让文章更加完整的情况下去填充内容,让写作文章更加的丰富。

2.托福写作的评分标准是怎样的?

托福写作评分包括机器评分以及人工评分两部分。

机器评分主要通过E-rater,对考生文章的语法是否正确、用词是否得当、以及单词拼写及大小写是否准确等方面进行评分;一篇考生的文章会经过两台机器评分。

人工评分通过ETS阅卷人评分,综合写作和独立写作分别有两位阅卷人给出分数。

托福写作原始分数为0-5分,考生得分分为三个level(如下图所示):GOOD(4.0-5.0),FAIR(2.5-3.5),LIMITED(1.0-2.0),最终成绩通过两个科目的分数取平均分,再换算为30分制的分数。

3.托福写作评分0-5分的依据是什么?

托福5分作文

文章切题,阐说充分,文章有说服力;段落组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有很强的逻辑性;段落内句与句连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活,娴熟;用词确切,得体。文章中有个别语法拼写错误,但不影响内容表达。

托福4分作文

文章切题,阐说基本充分,在某些细节上有缺陷。段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,逻辑性强;句间连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活;用词基本得体。文章中有少量用词不当和语法拼写错误。

托福3分作文

文章切题,阐说尚可,展开不够。段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有逻辑性;句间连接基本顺畅;有部分句法错误;用词一般,有时不得体。词性区分和拼写等有若干错误。

托福2分作文

文章切题,段落组织基本合理,有逻辑性,但只存在于语义层次上,语言表达上未能体现;句子框架结构基本成立,但有许多语法错误,句间联系不顺畅,往往是不善于使用逻辑连词,显得幼稚,生硬。词汇方面拼写错误多,常有用词不得体现象。

托福1分作文

文章切题。阐说没有展开,只限于三言两语地回答问题;没有段落组织,很乱,长度很短,只有一段;句子排列有一定的逻辑关系,能看出各句基本框架,但结构或语法错误较多;用词不得体,拼写错误多。

托福0分作文

文章各方面都有严重错误,句子不像句子。总体印象是根本没有写作能力,英语(精品课)水平太低,达不到一分标准,只能打最低分。

以上就是小编分享的托福写作考试时这三点考生一定要注意的详细内容,大家备考时一定要谨记,这样才能更加充分的备考托福写作,获得更高的托福分数,希望这些对大家托福写作备考都有帮助。

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