雅思作文笔记

In sum, the first chart implies that the worldwide land declination majorly resulted from over-grazing while the second one depicts that Europe suffered most from this effect. Spending/ expenditure/ budget

It is noted that ….

It is also worth mentioning that …

Interestingly,…有特征的其他数据

Turning to glass and paper, both experience a rising tendency during the 10-year period. To be more precise, glass recycled 13%, which was equal to that of paper in 1992. Then there was a sudden increasing trend in the former to approximately 50%, which overtook/ outnumbered the latter, with roughly 40%.

There are some reasons for the phenomenon. To begin with, lacking sense of protecting our setting serves as the major factor. For most ordinary people, they are convinced that it is government’s responsibility to take action to preserve the earth and the environment. Moreover, government in most countries focuses too much on economic development instead of paying enough attention to the environment. That is to say, people are busy making money with the scarify of destroying the setting.

China serves as a typical example in point.

It is admitted that modern people are living under great stress and a fierce competitive world than they used to be. Some people hold that it is a motivation of social development while others believe it makes no benefits to individuals and family life.

1.Increase productivity 提高生产力

2.Motivate people to move forward

3.More talented people are able to be employed into cities and

even countries. A typical example in point is that America attracts many outstanding/competent people every year. 4.In order to make you competitive, you have to continually

learn through work and experience.

5.People tend to keep energetic and positive attitudes toward

work

Negative effects:

1.Mental health / it hurts people mentally →psychological

diseases → upset and depressed → commit suicide

2.In order to keep their job and make a promotion, people

sacrifice their spare time in work, or even work overtime for

a long time. Consequently/ as a result/, resulting in the fact

that

3.Side effects along with the toxic competition among peers

and colleagues, → unease and uncomfortable work place →turnover rate increase

其他的一些可以高分的表达

Rat race

Gaokao – university entry examination

Chinese students spend over 10 years working on their preparation of the exhausted 3-day Gaokao merely for entering a university, which largely determine their future.

Keep alarm in their job and professional

Secondary school education

1.The function of education is not only focused on/limited on

job hunting, but also for a better development.

2.In a country which suffer high unemployment rate, a high

demand of talented people are required. In this case, teenagers should further receive secondary education/ have access to secondary learning at schools. Oppositely, a teenager who just finishes primary education can only find labor job, which can be done by a machine.

3.Do a favor to personal quality, enhance/ boost/ promote/

drive/ fuel the quality of the labor force, thereby increasing production efficiency

4.In a long run, if pupils could receive better education, they

are able to/ more likely to have far more job opportunities to find a decent job.

5.People with higher education qualification are more easier to

establish a company/ run their own business, which tend to offer more job vacancies/ positions. (which would help to improve the unemployed situation in a society)

Teachers vs other resources (e.g computers and Internet resources)

老师的重要性不如以前了

1.Teach students according to their characteristics and

personalities

2.Offer feedback immediately

3.Observe the classroom learning

4.Cultivate other abilities such as interpersonal skills and

teamwork spirit.

Other resources:

1.Distance-learning makes it possible for learners from remote

area to have access to advanced courses

2.The advancement of Internet, people are able to share and

acquire knowledge and information to large extent.

3.Be able to repeat the course and take note during the

online-learning

4.People who are not available for classroom learning are

more likely to gain what they want to learn without paying a large amount of money to learn what they do not want.

5.Full discussion with learners in the same course. These

learners are from all over the world, which lead to a wide range of exchange of knowledge and culture.

6.Enlarge one’s social circle

General education 全面教育specialized or vocational education 专业学习

1.Under less/slighter stress

2.Focus more on their profession, which is beneficial for the

academic research and personal growth as a whole. More academic achievement could be produced/ created/ born 3.Be more competitive in a job market due to that fact that

they fully understand their profession. This is possible to

make great effort/ contribution to the companies compared with those who have access to a general understanding.

4.Overall education seems to cultivate an overall-developed

student. However, it could only foster a normal and ordinary graduate.

5.It is not beneficial for a student to have wide range of jobs to

choose when he or she just acquires a particular subject or major. For example, history students are reported to be the majority of unemployed graduates every year.

6.Creativity and imagination

7.Interdisciplinary study 跨专业/学科学习