北京2017中考英语专项考点第三部分书面表达

第三部分书面表达

北京2014—2016命题规律总结

命题思路

书面表达旨在测试考生的英语书面表达能力，考查学生是否能够运用所学过的语言知识和语言技能进行思想表达和交流。试题对写作的目的、对象、题材、体裁及词数都有明确的要求，提供给学生的提示性材料包含文字、图画或者图表等。

《北京市中考说明》对于学生“写”的能力做了如下要求：

1. 能正确使用大小写字母和标点符号。

2. 能够运用所学词汇、语法和所学句型，按照题目要求写出一篇不少于50词的文章。能够简单描述人物、场所、活动或事件。

3. 能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。

4. 能就常见话题陈述事实，表达观点、情感和态度等。

5. 能正确使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。

解题思路

写作前

1. 认真读题，正确选题；

自2016年，北京市中考英语作文出现了比较大的变化：学生可以从命题者所出的两道题目中任选一个来写作。两道题目出题形式基本上与往年一样，要求考生根据题目所提供的信息、提示语和三个问题来完成写作任务。那么，考生应该怎样来选题，以促使测试成绩达到最优化呢？一般来讲，做好书面表达需要两个条件：考生对该话题内容的熟悉程度（背景知识）和相对应的英语知识和技能（语言支持）。鉴于此，考生应根据自身对相关话题的熟悉程度（比如以前是否写过类似作文）、对与该话题有关的英语知识的积累的多少（对于该话题能够拟出多少个重要句型、短语和谚语）以及能够利用本题目提供的语言支持的程度（在多大程度上能够利用题目所给的英语提示语）来选择。

2. 认真审题，审体裁（记叙文?说明文?应用文?议论文?）、审主题（抓住要点，切忌跑题）、审题型;

3. 审时态和人称;

4. 根据中文提示，找出要点，判断功能，确定该功能所对应的时态、重要句型、

短语或者谚语、格言等。

写作中

1. 充分利用拟好的提纲，开始写作；

2. 每个要点最好分解成两个分要点，以免太单薄；

3. 尽量使用比较复杂的句子结构，比如并列句和复合句等；

4. 尽量使用比较丰富的词汇和表达方式；

5. 使用自己最有把握、最熟悉的词句；

6. 充分利用提示语和自己拟出的句型、短语、谚语等来完整地回答三个问题，避

免跑题。

写作后

1. 通读全文，从句子的结构、时态的使用、句中两个或多个动词关系的处理来检

查有无错误；

2. 从上下文逻辑关系、通顺与否等来检查文章；

3. 检查冠词、代词等的使用和单词大小写等有无错误。

附：文段表达评分标准

北京2014—2016真题训练

Writing 1

（2016·北京）从下面两个题目中任选一题

，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少

．．．．

于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①

假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办长跑接力赛，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter 参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他比赛的时间和地点，报名方式，以及需要做什么准备。

提示词语：sign up（报名）, on the school website, sports shoes

提示问题：·When and where will you have the race?

·How can Peter sign up for the race?

·What do you advise Peter to prepare for the race?

假如你是李华，为了帮助洪灾地区的小朋友渡过难关，你们学校上周组织了以“友爱、互助”为主题的献爱心捐赠活动。请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈你在这次活动中捐赠了什么，为什么捐赠这些物品，以及你的感受。

提示词语：donate（捐赠）, book, schoolbag, clothes, toy, help, proud

提示问题：·What did you donate?

·Why did you donate the things?

·How do you feel?

At my school, we made donations to children in the flooded areas last week. Almost all my classmates and teachers took part in the donation. I donated some used textbooks, a schoolbag, some clothes and many toys. I did this because I wanted to help the children out of their difficulties, and show my love to them. I’m very proud of what I have done.

Writing 2

（2015·北京）假如你叫李华，你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会，倡导人人都做文明中学生。请你根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Peter写一封邮件，告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受。

提示词语：think, smile, respect, say hello to, wait in line, on time, happy

Dear Peter，

How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student. I think it is important to be polite to others. I say hello to my teachers and classmates. I smile to everyone I talk to. Following rules is also very important. I wait in line at the bus stop and go to school on time. I feel happy for doing all this because it is right for a student to do so.

Anything new at your school?

Yours，

Li Hua

Writing 3

（2014·北京）假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom 上周刚过完生日。他想知道你经常和谁一起过生日，怎么过的，你收到的最喜欢的礼物是什么，以及你喜欢它的原因。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：cake, noodles, sing songs, make a wish, get presents

To Tom

北京2014—2016模拟题分组训练

A组

Writing 1

（2016·石景山一模）假如你是李华，暑假快到了，你打算邀请你的美国笔友Peter来北京游玩。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们准备去哪里玩，都会做些什么，以及需要Peter准备什么。

提示词语：the Great Wall, Bird’s Nest, Beijing Opera, Beijing duck, delicious, traditional, camera

提示问题：·Where are you going?

·What are you going to do?

·What do you advise Peter to prepare for thevisit?

Dear Peter，

How is it going?

I’m writing to invite you to come to visit Beijing this summer.

I have made a plan for us. First, we can visit some places of interest, like the Great Wall. You will get some feelings about Chinese history there. And I will also take you to watch Beijing Opera because it’s a traditional Chinese art. Of course, we are going to Quanjude, a famous Chinese restaurant, to enjoy Beijing duck. It’s delicious!

As for the weather, it’s hot in Beijing in summer, so please bri ng some light clothes. And don’t forget to take your camera. We are sure to take a lot of photos!

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

Writing 2

（2016·石景山二模）端午节快到了，假如你是李华，打算邀请你校的美国交换生Peter来家里过端午节。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他过节的时间和地点，庆祝端午节的意义，以及你们准备怎么庆祝。

提示词语：May 5th, traditional, remember/honour, ancient poet, Qu Yuan, Dragon Boat Race

提示问题：·When and where are you going to celebrate Dragon Boat Festival?

·Why do you celebrate it?

·What are you going to do on the festival?

Dear Peter，

How is it going?

Dragon Boat Festival is coming. I am writing to invite you to celebrate it with my family.

Would you please come at 10 am on May 5th?We are going to celebrate it at home. Dragon Boat Festival is an important traditional Chinese festival. It is celebrated to remember/honour a famous ancient poet, Qu Yuan. In many places, there will be Dragon Boat Race. It’s so exciting!We can watch the race on TV together!Of course, we are going to eat zongzi, which is a special food for that day. My mum will cook lots of delicious food as well!I can’t wait to celebrate it with you!

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

Writing 3

（2015·石景山一模）假如你叫李平，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论有关阅读的话题，他想了解你读书的情况，请根据他的问题回复邮件（书名可用拼音）。

提示词语：called, at first, finally, brave, difficulty, share

提示问题：·What’s your favorite book?

·Which person do you like best in the book?

·What can you learn from him/her?

To Jim

（2015·东城一模）假如你叫Lily，你的一位美国网友Helen在她的博客里提到了

最近她和她的好朋友之间产生了矛盾。她不知道自己是否做错了什么。她该怎么做才

能与这位朋友重归于好？请你给她一些建议，并谈谈你对于“好朋友”的理解。

Writing 5

（2015·朝阳一模）假设你叫李华，最近和英国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自的梦想，他想了解你的职业梦想。请根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语:want to be, reason, think, work hard, practise

提示问题：·What’s your dream?

·Why do you have that dream?

·What will you do to realize your dream?

B组（文段写作）

Writing 1

（2016·石景山一模）某英文报社正就“社会大课堂（field learning）”这一话题展开讨论。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿，谈谈你想去什么地方参观，希望在那里做些什么，以及你对“社会大课堂”的看法。

提示词语：do some field learning, take part in, science, knowledge, try, interesting, chance, useful

提示问题：·Where would you like to visit?Museum?Park?...

·What do you want to do there?

·What do you think of field learning?

At my school, we are also talking about field learning. We have many chances to do some field learning and there are lots of places waiting for us to explore. But I prefer museums to others, especially science museums.

I want to learn more science knowledge there and get to know more about some famous scientists. What’s more, I really want to try some scientific experiments there. It must be very interesting.

In my opinion, field learning gives us great chances to learn and try some useful things which we cannot do at school. It can help us learn to think and work with others. I love it!

Writing 2

（2016·石景山二模）某英文报社正就“我和父母”这一话题展开讨论。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿，简单介绍一下你的父母，谈谈你和父母之间发生的最难忘的一件事，以及你对这件事的感受。

提示词语：nice, responsible, kind, prepare for, encourage, confident, proud, love

提示问题：·What are your parents like?

·What was the most unforgettable thing between you and your parents?

·How did you feel?

At my school, we are also talking about the relationship between parents and us.

I have a happy family. My parents, in my heart, are the most responsible and kindest persons in the world.

Last year, I was chosen to take part in a speech competition. I felt very nervous. My parents tried hard to help me prepare for it. They encouraged me to be confident and told me not to care much about the result. They said the process of learning was more meaningful.

With their help, I did very well that time. And I’ve learned that confidence is the mother of success. I love my parents!

Writing 3

（2015·朝阳二模改编）校园安全一直是很重要的话题。假如你叫李华，请以“School Safety”为题，向一家英语报纸投稿，谈谈校园安全是否重要，你为什么这样看，我们应该怎样做。

提示词语:study, help, sports, make sure

提示问题：·Is it important to keep safe at school?

·Why do you think so?

·What should we do to keep safe?

School Safety

In my opinion, it’s important for us to keep safe at school. There are two main reasons for it. School safety helps us not only study well but also live happily.

In order to keep safe at school, we should do like these. First, be in order when we are going upstairs or downstairs. Second, make sure to be safe when we are doing sports. Try not to get hurt. Third, learn about some knowledge of safety. It’s helpful to us.

In short, as teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind and try our best to be safe.

Writing 4

（2015·石景山二模改编）人人都有梦想。假如你叫李平，请以“My Dream”为题，向一家英语报纸投稿，谈谈你的梦想是什么，为什么你有这样的梦想，以及你打算怎

样实现你的梦想。

提示词语： visit, know, understand, different, freely, culture

提示问题：·What’s your dream in your life?

·Why do you have such a dream?

·What are you going to do to realize your dream?

My Dream

My dream is to travel all over the world because I love traveling.

I think traveling is really a good way to know about different people and different cultures from different countries. It can not only help me get more information and widen my eyes, but also let me feel relaxed.

To realize my dream, I think it’s important to work hard with all my subjects, such as history, English and geography. Thus when I visit other countries, I can understand their cultures better, and talk with the local people more freely.

Writing 5

（2015·丰台二模改编）爱好可以让人放松、可以陶冶情操。假如你叫王红，请以“My Hobby”为题，向一家英语报纸投稿，谈谈你的爱好是什么，你是怎样坚持它的，它给你带来什么好处。

提示词语：interesting, buy, borrow, learn, improve

提示问题：·What is your hobby?Reading?Playing sports?Listening to

music?Or... ?

·How do you keep doing it?

·What benefits does it bring you?

My Hobby

I have a lot of hobbies, such as playing sports, listening to music, surfing the Internet and so on, but I like reading best.

I have kept reading in my spare time since I was a little girl. I go to the school library to borrow books once a week and sometimes I buy some books from the bookstore. It takes me about an hour to read books every day and I think reading has been a part of my life.

Reading is very interesting and important because it not only brings me a lot of knowledge but also keeps me relaxed.

北京原创题模拟训练

A组（邮件回复）

Writing 1

假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论有关零花钱的话题，他想了解你花费零花钱的一些具体情况，请根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：parents, housework, restaurant, books, traveling, knowledge, relaxed

提示问题：·How do you get your pocket money?

·How do you usually spend your pocket money?

·Why do you spend it in this way?

To John

假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论兴趣小组的话题，他想了解你参加兴趣小组的一些具体情况，请根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：interest groups, model, movies, open, improve

提示问题：·What interest groups do you join?

·What do you usually do in it?

·Why do you join the groups?

To John

假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友Mike通过邮件谈论成长过程中对自己产生过重要影响的老师，他想了解你生命中最重要的老师，请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：caring, helpful, patient, brave, love

提示问题：·Who is the most important teacher in your school life?

·Why is he/she so important?Give an example.

·What can you learn from him/her?

To Mike

假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论有关友谊的话题，请根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：important, life, sun, help, encourage, caring, listen, study,fun

提示问题：·Why is friendship important?

·What is your best friend like?

·What do you usually do together?

假如你是李华，你校的美国笔友Peter发来邮件和你讨论你最喜欢的学科。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，回答他的问题。

提示词语：English, spend, knowledge, widen, tool, movie, radio

提示问题：·What is your favorite subject?

·Why do you like it?

·How do you learn it so well?

Dear Peter，

How is it going?

I am writing to you to talk about my favorite subject. My favorite subject is English and I am really good at it. I spend most of my free time reading English books and magazines.

I like English because it can widen my eyes and provide me a lot of knowledge. It is also a tool that can help me communicate with foreigners.

As well as by reading English books and magazines, I also learn English in many other ways such as listening to radio and watching TV in English. I also keep reading English news on the websites of VOA and BBC. I think that is why I can improve my English so quickly.

How about your favorite subject?

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

B组（文段写作）

Writing 1

人人都想成为一名优秀生。假如你叫李华，请以“How to Be a Good Learner?”为题，向一家英语报纸投稿，谈谈至少三条你在学习方法或者习惯方面的建议。

提示词语:get ready for, carefully, in class, go over, help, each other, do sports

How to Be a Good Learner?

To be a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning.

First, it’s important to get ready for our lessons before class and listen carefully

in class. After class, we’d better go over the lessons and finish our homework on time.

Second, we need to help each other and study in groups. It can not only help us solve problems but also provide us the opportunities to learn to cooperate with others.

Above all, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. I hope all of us will become good learners.

Writing 2

书中自有黄金屋，书中自有颜如玉。假如你叫李平，请以“My Favorite Book”为题，向一家英语报纸投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的书是什么，它的主要内容是什么，以及你为什

么喜欢这本书。

提示词语：favorite, times, about, finally, because, encourage, bravely

提示问题：·What’s your favorite book?

·What is it mainly about?

·Why do you like it best?

My Favorite Book

My favorite book is The Adventure of Tom Sawyer which was written by Mark Twain and I have already read it at least ten times. It mainly talks about how a boy called Tom Sawyer grows up and his adventure to an island. I like this book best not only because it is very funny and easy to understand, but also because it always encourages me to face difficulties bravely in our daily life, just like Tom—the boy in the book.

Writing 3

对于中学生来说，保持身心健康非常重要。假如你叫李平，请以“How to Keep Healthy?”为题，向一家英语报纸投稿，谈谈健康的重要性，你是如何保持健康的，以

及你对如何保持健康的建议。

提示词语：health,physically,mentally,sports,books,food,difficulties

提示问题：·Why is health important?

·What do you do to keep healthy?

·What advice on keeping healthy can you give to others?

How to Keep Healthy?

In my opinion, health is very important now that you can do nothing if you are too weak, either physically or mentally.

In order to stay physically fit, I spend much time on sports such as basketball, football and tennis. And I also read great books and talk to my close friends who are very excellent students so as to keep mentally healthy.

Here’s some advice on how to keep healthy:

Eat healthy food such as fruit and vegetables and do as much sports as you can to stay physically healthy.

Ask your parents, friends or teachers for help when you get into trouble. Just talking to them can make you relaxed and encourage you to face difficulties bravely.

I hope what I say can help.

Writing 4

“中小学阅读工程”在我区已经开展两年了。请根据你自己的亲身体会，谈一谈你读书的情况，读书的好处，以及应该读哪些种类的书籍。

提示词语： English books, important, pleasure, learn, suggest, open

提示问题：·How do you take part in the reading project?

·Why must we read books?

·What kinds of books can we read and why?

I’ve read at least 15 English books since two years ago the reading proj ect began.

I think reading is very important in our life. When I read for pleasure, I can learn how English speakers use English；I also find examples of good writing in English；I can learn new words and learn about the western cultures.

When it comes to types of books, I strongly suggest we read all kinds of good books because they can open our mind and we need all kinds of knowledge when we grow up.

Let’s start reading now!

Writing 5

《二十一世纪英语报》针对如何提高英语口语技能进行专题征文。请你向该报投稿，稿件内容包括：你对英语口语（spoken English）的认识、你是如何练习的以及你今后的打算。

提示词语：important, talk, foreigner, by, speak, pronunciation

提示问题：·What do you think of spoken English?

·How do you usually practise it?

·What’s your plan for developing it?

Spoken English is very important. We often talk with foreigners by spoken English. It is one way to express our ideas.

I like to speak English as much as possible. I often talk in English with people around me. I have recited most of the texts in our English books. Besides, in the morning I read Englis h aloud or listen to radio to practice my pronunciation. I’m happy that the teacher says

my pronunciation is good.

In the future, I’ll listen to more tapes and do more speaking. If I have a chance, I’ll go to England to learn spoken English.

英语写作参考模板

模板1：英语信件 / 邮件写作参考模板

开头部分

Thank you for your letter/email of ... （date）

I am replying to your letter/email of... （date）

I’m glad to have received your letter/email of... （date）

I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in/at... （place）

结尾部分

Thank you for your attention/interest/help. I look forward to hearing from you.

If you need any further information, please contact me.

I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

With best wishes.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

模板2：口头通知写作参考模板

开场白部分

Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please?I have an announcement to make.

结束语部分

Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope you’ll have a nice time here. That’s all. Thank you!

范文

May I have your attention, please?I have an announcement to make. The student union is going to hold a party on Sunday evening, on 1st of December, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the Lecture Room on the main campus. It will begin at 6:30 pm. There will be singing, dancing, martial arts （kung fu）, Beijing Opera performance, comic kits （小品）, and exchange of gifts.

Please be there on time. We hope you’ll have a lot of fun!That’s all. Thank you!

模板3：邀请函写作参考模板

开头部分

邀请理由（可以提及活动时间）

例如：birthday party, graduation ceremony, pass an important exam, celebration of a festival （Mother’s Day, Father’s Day, Teachers’ Day， Christmas, Chinese New Year, etc. ）

参考用语

I’m writing to invite you to ...

It’s nearly... We’d like you to come an d celebrate... with us.

Would you like to come to...

It would be great if you could come to...

正文部分：时间（也可以放开头部分）、地点、活动内容

参考用语（根据具体活动内容选择）

The party/event is going to be held at/in ... （地点）

Activities：pick flowers and decorate the house,get together and have a dinner,give presents/cards/flowers, exchange gifts,listen to live music, sing songs, go

to a club/dance hall, have fun, cut the birthday cake， give a speech, play games, watch a movie, visit an amusement park, etc.

结尾部分（请求回复）

参考用语

I hope you can come.

I can’t wait to see you.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

范文

Dear Jane，

I’m writing to invite you to my birthday party on the 6th of December.

I’m going to be fifteen and my parents allow me to go out with some of my friends. We are going to Beijing Amusement Park. We can go there for the rides and watch some performances. That will be great fun!Then we’ll go to Quanjude Beijing Roast Duck Restaurant for dinner. Finally, we are going to my house for the cake. I’m going to order one in the shape of a guitar.

I really hope you can come. I’m sure we’ll have a great time together. I’m looking forward to seeing you.

Yours,

Li Hua

模板4：咨询/询问信息信件

信件开头：称呼对方并简短自我介绍（1~2句）和说明写信的目的

例如:

Dear Sir/Madam，

I’m a middle school student. I saw your advertisement and I’m interested in... 或I’m writing for more information about ... （要询问的大致内容）

中间段：要询问的具体信息

参考词句

Firstly, in your advertisement, you mention that... I would like to know

when/what/how... Furthermore, I would like to ask you about... Finally/Lastly, let me know about ...

结尾段落：表示期待对方尽快回复你的询问

参考词句

Thank you for your time and assistance.

I would like to thank you in advance.

I look forward to hearing from you.

范文

Dear Sir/Madam，

I’m a midd le school student. I saw your advertisement in the English journal Today’s Youth, and I’m writing to ask if you could give me some extra information about your summer language courses at your institute.

Firstly, I would like to know what kind of accommodation is offered and the cost of the accommodation.

Furthermore, I’m interested in the number of students you normally have in each class and which countries they are from.

Lastly, I would like to know what out-of-school activities you organize for the students.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

模板5：给出建议的信件

给出建议的信件一般首先概括咨询人的咨询内容，接着给出建议。

起始句:

It was really nice to hear from you.

I was glad to get a letter from you.

Sorry to hear about your trouble/problem.

正文：

I hope the following advice will be of some help to you.

In my opinion, you should/ought to...

How about... ?

Why don’t you... ?

It’s a good idea to...

Try not to...

I advise you to...

I think you should...

结尾:

I hope my advice will help you.

Well, that’s what I think you should do. Keep in touch.

I really think everything goes well.

范文1：假如你是李华的外国笔友 Mike，李华向你询问如何才能学好英语。请你给他回信，提出建议。

Dear Li Hua，

It was really nice to hear from you. In your letter, you asked me about how you can improve your English. Well, it’s difficult to say exactly what will work for you, but here are some suggestions that may be helpful.

One way to improve your English is to speak English with your English teacher or classmates whenever you can. Also, I would advise you to start reading English magazines, newspapers for middle school students and even simplified（简化的）novels. In that way, you’ll learn things about foreign culture and at the s ame time, you’ll improve your English skills. You can also watch some movies in English with Chinese subtitles.

Well, that’s what I think you should do. Keep in touch.

With best wishes.

Mike

范文2：你（李华）考试前总是紧张，不能正常发挥，你的英国笔友 Jane 写信给你提出建议。

Dear Li Hua，

Sorry to hear about your trouble. I used to have the same problem but now I’m getting better. The best I can suggest is that you listen to some music and read an interesting book before the exam. Watching a funny movie is also a good idea. And when you take exams, take a deep breath to relax yourself. I would also advise you to do the easier questions first. In that way, you will feel more confident.

I hope these suggestions could be of some help to you.

Yours,

Jane