表达观点类作文点拨

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表达观点类作文点拨

作者：廖英

来源：《高中生·高考指导》2015年第10期

【试题呈现】

《爸爸去哪儿》的大热引发了人们对于亲子话题的关注。孩子的教育在古今中外都是一个永恒的话题。英语中有句谚语：“Spare the rod，spoil your child.”意思是“孩子不打不成器”。请就此说法，结合生活中的事例，写一篇120词左右的文章，谈谈你对家庭教育的看法。

【审题点拨】

此题将时下流行的话题与学生的具体生活连接在一起，具有很强的时效性和生活气息。对于“孩子不打不成器”这一观点同学们可赞成亦可反对，只要结合具体的事例加上言之有理的论述即可。在具体行文中，同学们可在第一段引入话题并直接阐明自己的观点，第二段结合事例论证观点，最后一段总结全文并再次重申自己的观点。行文中一定要确保观点清晰明确。

表达观点类作文常用句型：

Opinions are divided on the question.

Some are in favor of it.（be for / approve of / agree / support ...）

In their opinion，... / They hold the view that...

Others hold the opposite opinion（be against / disagree ...）. They argue that ...

Every coin has two sides.

As far as I am concerned ... / In my opinion ...

【习作一】

As the saying goes，“Spare the rod，spoil your child.”Most parents think it is a privilege to punish a child，but it is harmful to children’s health. Family education should be given rice to concern.

When I was a child，I was too active to do something terrible. First of all，my mother often talked with me，but I didn’t attach importance to it. Then I made the same mistake again. My father was so angry that he punished me severely. I was very sad and crying for a long time. Then I refuse