牛津高中英语漫画类作文----父母对孩子影响parents' influences on children

江苏省溧阳中学高二10班英语个性化练习3 edited by Jayne

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Parents’ influences on children

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Actually, what the comic mirrors(反映)/reflect/conveys is a phenomenon which has triggered many social concerns. Parents tend to exert a subtle but strong influence on（产生微妙但强烈的影响）children. As an old say goes, “Parents are the first teachers of kids.” Kids unconsciously copy whatever their parents do, thus forming(结果状语)the same daily habits. For instance, an alcohol may cultivate a son addicted to wine, while a gentleman might have a daughter who is always polite and elegant. (通过举例子来深入阐述父母是孩子榜样的观点)Similar things can be seen throughout our life.

From my perspective, it is high time that we attached more importance to family education and made joint efforts to improve it. On one hand, parents themselves should set a positive example so that they are likely to impact their children by their pleasant and reasonable manners and characters. On the other hand, it is crucial for teenagers to distinguish right from wrong, getting rid of bad habits and adopting optimistic attitudes. Only by doing this can parents and children create a more harmonious family environment, make progress and embrace a more promising future.

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The comic seems ridiculous, been learning from parents since we are born. And we have got accustomed to following in the steps of our parents. Nevertheless, parents sometimes fail to set a good example, letting the bad habits take their toll on us. For instance, if parents cross the road before the traffic lights turn green, we will tend to violate the traffic laws when faced with the same situation. In a word, p arents’ behavior has significant effects on us, and it is high time that parents paid attention to their manners.