中考满分作文

1.Dreams and Reality

When we talk about dreams, we are so excited, we have many dreams, such as being a famous person, traveling around the world and so on. Dreams are what we pursue for a lifetime, with many dreams, we have motivation to fight for our life. The opposite side of dream is reality, we have to face reality everyday, reality is what we perceive in our life. Reality always frustrates us to be successful. We need to balance them. First, we need to face reality, though it is not ideal, we live in a world, we have to know exactly who we are. Second, to make our dreams come true, we need to adjust our dreams according to the reality。

译文：

梦想与现实

当我们谈到梦想的时候，会感到很兴奋，我们有很多理想，比如成为一个出名的人，环游世界等等。梦想是我们一生所追求的，拥有梦想，我们才有动力为生活奋斗。与梦想相反的另一面就是现实，我们不得不每天面对现实，现实是我们生活中所觉察到的。现实总是让我们在成功的路上受挫。我们需要平衡他们。第一，我们需要面对现实，虽然不理想，但是我们是生活在世界上，需要清楚地知道自己是谁。第二，为了实现我们的梦想，我们需要根据现实调整梦想。

2.How to Improve Memory?

Memory is important for everyone in all ages. How to improve it? It is a complex question. I have several suggestions. Firstly, have enough rest. Enough sleep can make sure brain works normally, because when people sleep, their brain and other organs also can rest. Enough rest can provide enough energy. Secondly, keep always thinking. Do not get used to the current situation. Keeping thinking when meets things can exercise brain. Thirdly, eat some healthy food that is good for memory, such as, radish, cabbage and spinach. I think these are helpful to improve memory。

译文：

如何提高记忆力？

记忆力对于每个年龄段的人都是很重要的。如何提高记忆力呢？这是一个复杂的问题。我有几个建议。首先，充足的休息。充足的睡眠可以保证大脑正常运作，因为人在睡觉的时候，他们的大脑和其他器官也得到了休息。足够的休息可以为它们提供充足的能量。其次，保持思考。不要安于现状。遇到的事情时要坚持思考可以锻炼大脑。第三，吃一些健康的、对记忆力有好处的食物，例如，萝卜，白菜，菠菜。我觉得这些都是有助于提高记忆力的。

3.My Favorite Subject---English

I like English most, because English is so popular these days. As far as I’m concerned, English is a well-known international language. If I could speak English well, I would be able to communicate with the people all over the world。

Nowadays, English is widely used in news, business, communication and tourism. Especially after China enters WTO, our country needs more genius who is good at English. Mastering English can help us find more job opportunities。

What’s more, some English speaking countries like Australia, New Zealand, America and Canada are very beautiful. I want to travel to these countries very much. So I must learn English well。

译文

我最喜欢的课程——英语

我最喜欢英语，因为英语在这段时间很流行。我觉得英语是总所周知的国际语言。如果我能说好英语，我就可以和世界各地的人交流了。

如今，英语在新闻，商务，通信和旅游上被广泛使用。尤其是在中国加入WTO之后，我国需要更多擅长英语的人才。掌握英语能帮助我们找到更多的就业机会。

更重要的是，一些说英语的国家如澳大利亚，新西兰，美国和加拿大都很漂亮。我非常想去那些国家旅行。所以我必须学好英语。

4.Plan for English Learning

I’m a middle school student. I love English, but it’s hard for me. Now I have a good plan to learn English。

I have a pronunciation problem. I can’t pronounce so well. So I plan to listen to the tape and read after it. I can’t read English passages quickly and can’t write a passage clearly. Now I plan to read more and practice writing often. As for listening, sometimes I can’t understand what others are saying. So I plan to improve myself by listening to the radio and TV. Grammar is the most difficult for me. I have no idea of it, but I think my English teacher can help me with it。

With this English-learning plan, I’m hoping for great progress。

译文：

英语学习计划

我是一名中学生。我喜欢英语，但是对我来说却很难。现在我有一个很好的英语学习计划。

我的发音有点问题。我发音不好。所以我打算听磁带并跟读。我不能快速地阅读英语文章，也不能清清楚楚地写文章。现在我计划看多些书，经常练习写作。至于听力，有时候我无法理解其他人在说什么。所以我打算通过听收音机和电视来提高我自己。对我来说语法是最难的。我都不知道怎么办，不过我觉得我的英语老师能够帮助我。

有了这个英语学习计划，我希望能取得很大的进步。

5.Enjoy the Match

Once I saw the TV show, it was about the fathers and their kids having the match, they were separated by five groups and compete for the match. At first, they were competing happily, but as the game came to the end, the last group was so worried. The father inspired his kid to stick on and finish the match, while the kid was crying because he knew he must be the last. After the match, the father told his kid that winning was not the most important thing for the match, the first thing was to enjoy the game and finish it, the result was not that important. I agree with the father, the child must be endowed with the consciousness that to enjoy the game is more important than to win. Every match can only have one win, but we can enjoy every match。

享受比赛

曾经我看到一个电视节目，那是关于爸爸和孩子在比赛，他们分成五个组，在进行比赛。一开始，他们比得很开心，但是随着比赛来到结尾，最后的那组显得很着急。爸爸鼓励他的孩子坚持完成比赛，然而孩子却在哭泣，因为他知道他肯定是最后一名。比赛过后，爸爸告诉孩子，对于比赛来说，赢不是最重要的，最重要的是享受比赛，并且完成它，结果也不是那么的重要。我同意那位爸爸的话，孩子必须要有这样的意识，享受比赛比赢得比赛更为重要。每个比赛只有一个赢家，但是我们可以享受每场比赛。

6.The Advantages of Express Dilivery

As the development of computer, people count on computer so much, now most businesses are done online, trading online saves people a lot of time and it is very convenient. As more and more people choose to shop online, there comes the relative services, the most important one is express deliver. Many years ago, express deliver is not that popular, now it becomes the main tool for people to receive online products. Express deliver is very fast, the companies make the promise that the customers can get their products in three days. Many years ago, people can get their

things in a week, now express deliver shorten the time. What’s more, the express deliver can deliver the products to the customers’ homes, people don’t have to go out, how convenient it is. I like to use express deliver, it facilitates my life and saves me a lot of time。

快递的优势

随着电脑的发展，人们很依赖电脑，现在大部分的生意都在网上成交，网上交易节省了人们很多时间，也很方便。随着越来越多的人选择网上购物，相应的服务应运而生，其中最重要的就是快递。很多年以前，快递并不是那么的受欢迎，现在它成为了人们接收网上产品的主要交通工具。快递很快速，公司承诺顾客可以在三天内收到他们的产品。很多年以前，人们能在一周内收到他们的产品，现在快递缩短了时间。而且，快递能把产品送到客人的家里，人们不用走出去，这是多么方便啊。我喜欢使用快递，它方便了我的生活，节省了时间。When I chose to study further, it is because I want to avoid the job pressure, now three years will pass, I come to my cross road again, at this time, I must make my choice, I can’t avoid the pressure anymore. I have already made my future plan, it has two parts。

7.My Future Plan

当我选择深造的时候，是因为我想要避开工作的压力，如今三年即将过去，我又来到了十字路口，这一次，我必须做出决定，我再也不能逃避压力了。我已经制定了将来的计划，那有两部分。

One part of my future plan is that I want to be a teacher. This is my career plan, being a teacher is always my dream, I can pass my knowledge to students, I like to talk to them, I want to lead them to the successful road. So now I must pay attention to the recruit message, I should seize every chance to be a teacher。

我将来计划的其中一部分就是我想要成为一名教师。这是我的职业计划，成为一名教师一直以来都是我的梦想，我能把我的知识传递给我的学生，我喜欢和他们聊天，我想要把他们引导到成功的路上。所以现在我必须要关注招聘信息，应该抓住每一个成为教师的机遇。

The other part of my future plan is that I want to travel around the world. Being a teacher can make me have many vacations, so I can make used of these vacations and to carry out my travel plan. I have heard about many interesting foreign things, so I want to go out and have a look at the world。

我将来计划的另一部分就是我想要环游世界。成为一位教师能让我有多点假期，这样我就可以充分利用这些假期来实现我的旅游计划。我已经听说了很多国外有趣的东西，我想要走出去看一看这个世界

8.My Pen Friend

Now it has come to the new age, the age belongs to the information world, everybody has access to high technology, they use computer and cell phone everywhere. But for me, I miss the original communication media, I still like to write to my friends. I have a pen friend, we have kept in touch with each other for many years, compare with the new high technology, such as cell phone and computer, I would rather to write. My pen friend also like to write, we share happiness and sorrow by the letter. I enjoy writing, I put much emotion in it, the letter makes me feel the real world. Though the communication tool improves, I still love writing。

我的笔友

现在已经来到了新的世纪，这是世纪属于信息的世界，每个人都接触到高科技，他们随处使用电脑和手机。但是对于我来说，我想念最初的交通方式，我仍然喜欢写信给我的朋友。我有一个笔友，我们已经保持联系很多年了，和新兴的高科技相比，比如电脑和手机，我更喜欢写信。我的笔友也喜欢写信，我们通过信件来分享喜怒和哀乐。我享受写信，我投入了很多的感情，信件让我感受到真实的世界。虽然交流的工具一直在提升，但是我仍然喜欢写信。

9.Put an End toWaste

When I was small, I like to eat a lot of food, but I have a habit, I will not eat up all the food, I just like to taste all of it. When my mother saw this, she felt bad for me, she told me that all the food was the farmers’ hard work, I should not waste it. Thinking about this, I felt so shameful about my bad behavior, I decided to eat up the food. Wasting the food should be condemned, especially in the cities, people like to waste the food, they want to keep thin and only eat small portion. Now, the government advocates people clean the plate, this movement is welcomed by the public, more and more people have the idea not to waste the food。

杜绝浪费

在我小的时候，我喜欢吃很多东西，但是我有一个习惯，我不会把东西吃完，我喜欢浪费食物。当我的妈妈看到这些，她对我感觉不好，她告诉我所有的食物都是农民辛勤劳作的，我不应该浪费食物。想到这些，我对自己的坏习惯感到惭愧，我决定吃完所有的食物。浪费食物应该受到谴责，特别是在大城市，人们喜欢浪费食物，他们想要保持苗条，只吃小部分。现在，政府提倡人们光盘，这个做法得到了大众的肯定，越来越多的人意识到不浪费食物。

10.Be Yourself

I believe that everyone will have the moment that they envy others, they want to be others. It is so common, people will see other people’s advantages easily, while at the same time, they feel they are not equal with the others. Actually, everyone has something special, there is no need to envy others, we might be envied by others. We can just be ourselves, just do what we want to do. Today, more and more people are doing plastic surgery, because they are not confident with themselves, they think the beautiful face makes them outstand, this is wrong idea. Just be yourself, you have the shinning point that makes you outstand. Don’t be jealous other blindly。

做你自己

我相信每个人都会有这样的时刻，他们嫉妒别人，想要成为别人。这样很正常的，人们很容易看到别人的长处，但是同时，他们觉得自己比不上别人。事实上，每个人都有特别之处，没有必要去羡慕别人，我们可能也是受到别人的羡慕。我们做自己，做我们自己想做的。今天，越来越多的人都说整容手术，因为他们对自己不自信，他们觉得美丽的脸庞让他们出众，这是错误的想法。做自己，你有闪光点，那才是让你出众的地方。不要盲目羡慕别人。

11.Study and Play

Everyone has to study, going to school occupies a lot of people’s time, before they go to work, they need to study in the school. In China, students work very hard, for they have a lot of pressure, they have many exams to take, so students are immerged into the books all the time. While studying all the time is not good for students, they need to go out of the classroom and take in some fresh air. The outside world is beautiful, they can play with their friends, watching movies, taking a break now and then. Play can make study better, students can have new idea, so they won’t stuck in the unsolved problem. Study needs to combine with play。

学习和玩耍

每个人都要学习，上学占据了很多人的时间，在他们工作前，他们需要在学校上学。在中国，学生很努力学习，因为他们有很大的压力，他们有很多的考试，因此学生整天埋头苦读。然而整天学习并不利于学生，他们需要走出教室，呼吸新鲜的空气。外面的世界很美，他们可以和朋友玩，看看电影，时而不时的休息下。玩耍能让学习更有效率，学生可以有新的注意，这样他们就不会被无法解决的难题困住。学习要和玩耍结合起来。

12.About Friendship

In our daily life, if we get on harmoniously with our friends, we’ll feel more joyous. But we’ll feel lonely without friends.When our friends feel upset or get ill, we shouldn’t ignore them or look down upon them. On the contrary, we ought

to calm them down, show our love and concern to them and try our best to help them overcome the hardships. Sometimes we may have some misunderstandings or disagreements with our friends, thus we had better have a discussion with them and try to accept their good ideas instead of quarreling with them. As long as we can follow these good suggestions, we’ll find it easy to make more friends。

关于友谊

在日常生活中，如果我们跟朋友相处融洽，我们的心情也会更加愉悦。然而若是没有朋友则会觉得孤单。当我们的朋友忧伤或是生病时，我们不应冷落或轻起他们，相反地，我们要帮他们平抚心情，尽自己最大的努力关心他，帮助他渡过难关。有时候我们会与朋友产生误会，发生分歧，这时我们最好是跟朋友好好谈谈而不要争吵，尽量理解他的好的想法。只要我们遵循这些建议，我们会发现想要结交更多的朋友很简单。

13.Introduce Our School

Welcome to our school! Our school is the key middle school in this city. Now we are in the front gate. Entry in this school, you can see there is a big football playground on the left and a big resturant on the right. If you’re hungry, you can have something good in there. The grand teaching building is right behind the football playground. We spend most time in the classrooms. Behind the teaching building, there is a little lake with many fish in it. Oh, there is also a nice library next to the lake. After the class, we can entry the library freely to read the books we like. This is our school. Don’t you think it’s great?

介绍我们的学校

欢迎来到我们学校！我们中学是这所城市的重点中学。现在我们来到了学校的正大门。进入到这所学校，你可以看到在校园的左边有个很大的足球场，右边有个很大的餐厅。如果你饿了，你可以去餐厅吃些好吃的东西。巨大的教学楼就在足球场后面。我们的大多数时间都待在教室里。在教学楼后面，有个小小的湖泊，很多鱼在水里游。噢，对了，小湖泊的旁边还有个图书馆。下课的时候，我们可以进去读自己喜欢的书籍。这就是我们的学校。你不认为这很棒吗？

14.My Favorite Present

I have received many presents when I have my eleven birthday party. My parents give me a teddy bear, my uncle gives me a book. My best friend gives me a goldfish. Among all the gifts, I love the goldfish the most. I always want to have a pet in the family, but my parents don’t allow me to keep one. Now I have my own goldfish. I will keep it and take good care of it. This goldfish is very beautiful. Its colour is pink.

I love watching it swimming in the water. Sometimes, I will feed it. I wish it can grow up with me. This is the best birthday present ever!

我最喜欢的礼物

在我11岁的生日聚会上，我收到了很多礼物。我的父母送给我一个泰迪熊，我的叔叔送我一本书。我最好的朋友送了我一条金鱼。在这些礼物中，我最喜欢的是金鱼。我一直想在家里面养只宠物，但是我父母不允许。现在，我有了自己的宠物鱼。我会好好照顾它的。这条金鱼非常美丽，它是粉色的。我很喜欢看它在水里面游来游去。有时候，我会喂它。我希望它能和我一起长大。这是我收到最好的生日礼物！

15.How to Keep Healthy

As we all know, healthy is very important to everybody.But do you really know how to stay healthy? Here are some useful tips. First, we should do exercise if we have time.For example, we can go to swim in the summer holiday. Or we can take a walk after supper.Doing exercise makes us healthy and strong. Second, we should take more vegetables and fruit and less candies. Stop eating junk food and drinking beers. Last but not least, we should go to bed early and wake up early. We should have enough sleep, or we will get sleepy in the day time. If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will have healthier body. I wish everybody has a strong and healthy body。

怎样保持健康

我们都知道，健康对每个人来说都很重要。但是你知道该如何保持健康吗？这里有一些实用的建议。首先，我们应该做运动，如果有时间的话。例如，我们可以在暑假的时候去游泳，或者晚饭后去散步。做运动让我们的身体更强壮更健康。第二，我们应该吃更多的蔬菜和水果，少吃糖果。不吃垃圾食品和啤酒。最后，我们应该早睡早起。如果睡不够，第二天就会很疲倦。如果我们都能按照以上的建议注意自己的健康，我们的身体会更棒。我希望每个人都有个强壮和健康的身体。

中考指导：五个步骤写好中考英语作文

一、认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式

时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。

说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。

根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。

如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。

如ago，last…——过去时

next，in…——将来时等

人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。

例如：Thanks to the teachers， we have improved our English。

其中we和our就是人称的统一。

格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。

二、找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点

切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。

根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。

特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。

三、成文时表述正确，文字流畅

切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。

首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。

同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。

四、文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次

考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。

常用连接词：

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…

And then，Finally，In the end，At last

2.表并列补充关系的：What ismore，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，Inaddition

3.表转折对比关系的：However，On the contrary，but

Although+clause( 从句)，In spite of+n/doing

On the one hand…

On the other hand…

Some…，while others…

4.表因果关系的：Because，As

So，Thus，Therefore，As a result

5.表换一种方式表达：In other words

6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子；For instance，句子；suchas+n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact

8.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion

9.表总结：In short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary

文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。

宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous。

状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment， ourhometown will become clean and beautiful。

动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes。

It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun。

常用状语从句句型：

1)时间when，not…until，as soon as

2)目的so that+clause；to do( 为了)

3)结果so…that+clause，too…to do(太……以至于……)

4)条件if，unless(除非)，as long as(只要)

5)让步though，although，even though，even if

no matter what/when/where/who/which/how

6)比较as…as…，not so…as…，than

五、认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。

检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。

下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：

1.We live more and more comfortable。

改正：comfortably(副词修饰动词)

2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers。

改正：much information

(不可数名词由much修饰)

3.There has many programs in TV。

改正：There are many programs on TV。

(There be句型和介词短语)

4.I think ride a bike can keep our health。

改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy。(动名词作主语)

建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章，特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法，适当运用于自己的文章中。

备考指导：中考英语满分作文应该这样写

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如何才可以在短时间内提高自己的写作水平呢？其实，中考英语写作是很容易提高的。以下总结了以下写作文时需要注意的四个方面，希望对大家有所启发。

第一，词汇量要充足。

词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去，很多时候想到一个很好的句子或文字，但一下子词汇不记得了，没法写。词汇量不足的学生，建议使用“奇迹英语背单词8.0”软件，这套软件可以从 https://www.360docs.net/doc/6112207520.html, 下载，能够在较短时间内迅速提高词汇量。

第二，审题要充分。

我所教的学生中在写英语作文时，普遍存在这样一个情况：看完作文题，就开始写，想到哪写到哪，只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章，看起来就像在记流水帐，没有任何逻辑，杂乱无章，毫无条理，同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想，如果你是试卷的命题人，你出作文题的时候，肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面，确保第一遍审题

就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态，因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的，时态的要求也非常重要。

第三，提纲要详细。

审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为，中考英语作文译成中文，最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平，所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实，这种想法是非常错误的，因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰，还有很重要的一点：防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求：要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容，即使文章写得再优美，用词再准确，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持卷面整洁。

第四，文化差异要注意

我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。

最后，细节错误要摒弃。

很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好，用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语，以为可以得高分，但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数，名词的单复数，大小写，甚至标点、书写、段落安排等，这些细节问题也很重要。

中考英语：阅读理解和作文拉分要领

1、首字母填空熟记单词是王道，分析语法很重要

近几年中考英语“首字母填空”出现的单词全部在考纲范围内，所以单词要“滚瓜烂熟”。另外，七个填空单词的词性很少重复，“山穷水尽疑无路”时如果能结合语法分析，或许会灵光乍现，“柳暗花明又一村”。

2、回答问题找到答案别得意，细节到位才稀奇

很多学生自认“回答问题”部分做得不错，可得分却不高。原因往往在于细节上失分，比如人称时态变化、语法使用上的忽略。因此，一定要周密思考、谨慎落笔。

3、作文主旨立意有新意，好词佳句需累积

中考英语作文，8分内容、8分结构、4分文采。前两项得高分才可能揽进文采分。英语写作要打开思路，如果一提到“难忘的事”就是爬长城时在爸爸的鼓励下到达终点；一提到“难忘的人”就是我爱妈妈、妈妈爱我的“陈词滥调”，难得高分。可收集好词好句、名

人名言，或与时俱进的话题，如感恩、环保、志愿者。写作时夹叙夹议、摆数据讲道理，成为让中考阅卷老师眼前一亮的点睛之笔。