黄涛_-_传奇作文框架

第九节传奇作文框架

第一段模板

开头1：

Whoever in front of this cartoon/drawing/picture will be greatly shocked/impressed. How

amusing and interesting it is! What is vividly illustrated in the painting above is that _____(对漫画

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笼统地描述)。(从微观上再描述一下) Odd and funny though it looks, such happenings are far

from being rare and we cannot afford to ignore them. 或者Odd and funny as it seems to be, such

stories (stories)/events/happenings/cases/phenomena/practices are so pervasive that we cannot

afford to ignore them.

第一段开头2：

What an interesting and enlightening painting it is! It is indicative of a serious yet common

social phenomenon: (对漫画笼统地描述), (然后从微观上再描述一下) However ridiculous and

farfetched it looks (seems to be); the drawer intends far deeper meanings than what is shown

superficially.

第一段开头3：

How amusing and enlightening the above illustration is! It is so funny that whoever sees it

cannot help laughing: (对漫画笼统地描述)。(从微观上再描述一下) Simple as it looks, its

intended (implied) meaning goes much deeper .What on earth does the drawer really aim to

convey? ….while (完全相反时用in contrary)（描述两个方面）

第二段模板

模板1：

Obviously we can easily define what the painter subtly intends to reflect (communicate) to us.

The strong and clear message suggested is that + 图画主旨. According to recent survey conducted

by CCTV(Chinese Academy of Social Sciences/Xinhua News/China Daily/People’s Daily/Fud an

University/Peking University /Tsinghua University) 28.6%(自己随便写) people ______主旨

__________（或用一种笼统地切题方法如are following this tide）It is alarming that a growing

number of similar events are occurring .

Nowhere in history has the issue of ______主旨_____ been concerned so much as in our society

today. (史上任何时候都比不上今天我们的时代这样更加关切这样的事情，此句由历年真题阅

读部分改变而来)

“______见下面的例句________”直接引语__职务____，Says Dr. Sun Dong,

职务有：(用副职免得阅卷老师认识) V ice-president of Xiamen University；Vice-director of the Sociological Research Center attached to Chinese Academy of social Sciences；V ice-dean of

Sociology Depart of Fudan University

例句：Nowhere says Dr. Sun Dong, __职务_, “It is alarming such stories/upsetting/parallels are

available in nearly all walks of life(各行各业) in our contemporary communit y.”Failure to realize

the severity of the grim situation may significantly decrease our chances of success.

It is hard to imagine what our society would be like years later provided such practices go

unchallenged. Indeed, the whole society should be made aware that any prompt actions are of great

benefit to all.

第二段模板2：

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What the drawing conspicuously mirrors/illustrates goes far beyond/more than a simple drawing,

instead, it carries thought-provoking/important /striking implications.

举例子：The cartoon reminds me of a few interesting stories. A good case in point is an

acquaintance of mine who _______________. Another telling example is one of my former

colleagues, who ______________. An acquaintance of mine may well serve as a good example.

(补充细节内容).

表原因：What brings about/accounts for this strange phenomenon? I am strongly convinced that

this is partly because ___________________, and this is partly because ___________________.

What has brought about this strange phenomenon？Some may claim that this phenomenon results

from ____________, while I am strongly convinced that the primary reason goes much deeper: +补

充具体原因.

第三段模板

模板1：

Much can be done. What tops the agenda, I deem, is to help/encourage people to develop

positive and wholesome outlook on life as well as the world. Besides/what’s more, noble and

worthy values and qualities such as courage, honesty, diligence and perseverance should be

encouraged/fostered and cherished.

Additionally, we should appeal to the government to make sustained and concerted efforts to

reverse/curb/promote the worsening trend. Only in these ways can we maintain a happy, healthy

and harmonious society as we all wish.

Although it is easier said than done, there are god reasons to expect that such a phenomenon can

be terminally ended or at least reduced.

第三段模板2：

To solve the problem, I am strongly convinced that all of us should make sustained and concert

efforts. For one thing, school and the mass media should serve as a counterbalance to this grim

trend, doing their utmost to develop noble worthy values and qualities among people and

awakening people to the growing threat of the worsening situation. For another, the administration

should play a dominant role in taking nationwide prompt actions.

Fortunately, due attention has been paid and effective measures have been taken. Although we

still have a long way to go, this, I believe, is a promising start. A campaign to +主题词汇has begun,

a happy, healthy and harmonious society may not be far behind .(历年真题阅读句子改写)

第三段模板3：

To paraphrase an 18th-century statesman, “All that is needed for the prevalence of a misdeed is

that good people do nothing.”

或：Just as an ancient Chines e philosophical book concludes, “All that is needed for the prevalence

of a misdeed is that good people do nothing.”

The authorities, schools and mass media should forcefully and actively communicate their

instructive and positive message to the public, lest similar misdeeds go unchallenged. If positive

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and effective measures can be well under way, it may not be long for us to get an easy breath and healthy society we all wish.

If good people do nothing, there is a real possibility that that such misdeeds turn into a dreadful handicap, thus posing a threat to the rapid growth of our society.

作文全文框架初级版一(消极类)

How vivid and thought-provoking the above cartoon/drawing is. What is clearly described in it is….. In contrast….

What on earth can we draw from the interesting as well as instructive drawing? It goes without saying that /There is no denying the fact that)/ what the painter actually aims to convey in the picture is profound. It is obvious that such cases are far from being rare. And upsetting parallels can be readily found anywhere from our neighborhood and all over the country.

What’s more, there is a growing concern currently over the worsening phenomenon. It is hard to imagine what our society would be like years later if this pervasive trend goes unchallenged. Additionally, to reverse this serious situation, effective and efficient measures should be taken by all parties concerned. The authorities, the mass media and everyone are on the list. Enhancing people’s awareness of such practices and setting up relevant rules and regulations are top priorities of the agenda.

Considering what has presented above, we may safely come to the conclusion that it is high time that such things should disappear. Only in this way can we maintain a happy, healthy and harmonious society as we all wish.

作文全文框架初级版二(积极类)

What a vivid and thought-provoking drawing it is! As is vividly depicted in the interesting and instructive cartoon above…..In con trast, what on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey? Undoubtedly, the cartoon conveys the meaning that ______. Nowhere in history has the issue of (考试主题名词) been talked about so much as in our society today. (历史上任何时期都比不上我们今天时代这样如此关注…这种事情) Wh at’s more, the painting reveals a happy phenomenon and a growing number of similar events have been heard and reported in nearly all aspects of our society.

Hence, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these drawings. On the one hand, we should often use it to enlighten the young to ____. On the other hand, we should be sensible enough to treat this. Only by doing so can we become winners in the competitive world.

To conclude, it is about time that much importance should be attached to such cases. There is every reason to believe that as long as the whole society, the authorities, the mass media and each individual involved strive to make joint efforts, our world will be made dimensional, colorful and vigorous.

作文全文框架中级版三

开头段 1

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What an amusing and interesting painting it is! It is indicative of common yet serious social

phenomenon concerning+考试主题. However ridiculous and farfetched as the above picture seems to be, the drawer obviously intends for deeper meanings than what is shown superficially.

开头段 2

How interesting and instructive the above drawing is. It is so funny that whoever reads this cartoon can’t help laughing:描述主题。Simple as the cartoon seems to be, the meaning goes for deeper. What on earth does the cartoon really aims to mirror?

第二段

There is no denying the fact that…/Obviously, we can easily define what the drawer intends to convey to us, and the strong and clear message presented above is that +后接从句即考试的主题。This drawing goes far more than a simple one. Instead, it carries an important implication of +考试主题名词.

论据句子

It is alarming that similar events are available in nearly all walks of life. One of my former colleagues can serve as a good example. 后面接几个例子。

It should be observed that upsetting parallels can be readily found in nearly all walks of life. A good case in point(一个好的恰当的例子) is an acquaintance of mine, who+具体实例. According to a survey conducted by CCTV or China Daily last October, 78 percent of people follow the tide. Failure to realize the severity of this grim situation will inevitably decrease our chances of success. And failure to come up with countermeasures will do more harm to our society. Provided such practices go unchallenged, it is hard to imagine what our society will be like years later. Indeed it is imperative that the whole society should be aware that any prompt action can be of great benefit to all.

第三段

Much can be done. What tops the agenda, I deem, is to help people develop a position and wholesome outlook on life as well as the world and to cultivate noble and worthy values and qualities among them. Moreover, we should appeal to the government to take nationwide prompt actions. The whole society should make sustained and concerted efforts to curb such practices. Only in this fashion can we maintain a happy, healthy and harmonious society as we all wish. Although it is easier said than done, there are good reasons to expect that such a case will be partly reduced or at last terminally ended.

I am strongly convinced that the authorities, mass media and schools should communicate their positive and instructive messages to the public actively and forcefully, lest this grim situation goes unchallenged. If positive and effective measures can be well under way, it may not be long for us to change this. If good people do nothing, there is real possibility that such a trend will turn to a dreadful handicap, thus posing a threat to the solid growth of our society.

作文全文框架中级版四（讽刺或否定的话题）

What impresses me most deeply in the first cartoon is that +图画最直接的内容(用句子表达),

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which seems to be humorous as well as ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts. The most striking feature in the second cartoon is that +图画最直接的内容(用句子表达), which seems to be a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. It goes without saying that no phenomenon has characterized the past few years and aroused our more serious concerns than +主

题名词.

Several points analyzed below can help us gain a better insight into what has happened. To begin

with, situating under the shadow of +主题名词, its consequences not only do harm to our physical

health but also undermine our moral values and world outlook such as +主题名词.

Undoubtedly, this phenomenon of +主题名词should be condemned severely or made illegal. In

addition, we must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by this, because once the harmful

influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely contradict with our efforts

to build up a harmonious society and cause social disturbance and deterioration.

From what has been discussed above, what really counts is not the danger of +主题名词, but

how we can prevent it from getting worse.

On the one hand, we should be sensible enough to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to

protect +主题名词. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the

importance of saving us from the evil effects. Although the fight against it is a long-standing and

tremendous one, our efforts will eventually pay off.

作文全文框架高级版五（批评坏现象或消极的方面）

How impressive the cartoon is in describing one of the most widespread/ prevalent social phenomenon/problem concerning + 考试主题名词. As is vividly depicted in the drawing, 介词+ 名词+ 动词谓语+名词主语，动词-ing或-ed形式+名词，with +名词+ in or on (介词)+名词. Simply designed as the drawing seems to be, the symbolic meaning is as deep as oceans. The author’s real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.

The picture is indicative of a serious problem with regard to + 考试主题. It is universally acknowledged that 主题名词is a controversial topic, which is widely talked about in our community. In recent years this phenomenon/problem has aroused increasing concern in all walks

of life and should be taken into serious account. Therefore, our individuals should attach great significance to solving this problem.

（说明段）I can think of no better reasons for the phenomenon other than the following two. It is no simple job to induce reasons for this complicated phenomenon. To begin with, 原因一. In addition, 原因二. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. According to a recent survey made by China Daily, 编一个与考试有关的例子，应该是个主谓宾结构. If we can’t take useful measures, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future in the area concerned.

（措施段）It is, therefore, necessary that some effective measures should be taken to prevent such a phenomenon. On the one hand, we should be sensible enough to resist this trend. On the other hand, it is important to keep people aware of the serious consequences of + 消极方面的主题名词. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when we attach importance to it can we see a colorful and harmonious future sooner or later.

作文全文框架高级版六（弘扬积极的一面）

How impressive the cartoon is in describing one of the most widespread social phenomenon concerning + 考试主题名词. As is vividly depicted in the drawing, 介词+ 名词+ 动词谓语+名

词主语，动词-ing或-ed形式+名词，with + 名词+ in or on(介词)+名词. Simply designed as the drawing seems to be, the symbolic meaning is as deep as oceans. The author’s real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.

The cartoon is indicative of a positive phenomenon with regard to + 考试主题名词. When it comes to (一谈到) （照抄考试作文题，但必须是名词），different people, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people maintain that this is really the case. According to them, all of us should follow this. Others argue that it is not necessarily the case. In their eyes, nobody can

fulfill this without constant efforts. There is no doubt that every coin has two sides.

（说明段）I can think of no better reasons for the phenomenon other than the following two. It is no simple job to induce reasons for this complicated phenomenon. To begin with, （原因一）. In addition, （原因二）. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. According to a survey made by China Daily, （编一个与考试有关的例子，应该是个主谓宾结构）. If we follow these trends, we are bound to improve ourselves gradually, and we will see the promising future in the area concerned.

（措施段）It is, therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make ourselves more competitive in the society. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to enrich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more persistent. Only when we pay attention to it can we make it better sooner or later.