写作训练---建议信
写作练习---如何写建议信
一．技巧点拨
1. 概念：建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。
2. 分类：
1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；
2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。
3．内容安排：
1）开门见山地写出写信的原因、背景；
2）建议的内容及提出建议的理由
4. 语言特征：
1）建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
2）提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。
5. 注意事项
1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力
2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。
3）符合英文信件的基本格式
4）语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。
二、常用写作句型
1. 表对对方的情况表示理解，并乐意帮忙：
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to …
I’m very glad to hear that you want to… and give you some suggestions on how to…
It is my pleasure to do…
I’m willing to give a hand to you.
After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that …
I know you have trouble in…a fter reading your letter
I am writing to you for the purpose of -----
I am writing to share some advice with you.
I am writing to express my views concerning…
You have asked me for my advice on…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions.
Than ks for trusting me. Regarding…, I’d like to make some suggestions.
2. 提建议的句式
It is useful / helpful / important / necessary…for you to do…
It should be a good idea for you to do…
It will certainly help a lot to do sth / It also helps to do sth
It d oes harm to sb / sth = It is harmful to…
…benefits … = … be beneficial to …= …do good to…
I think it would be more beneficial if you could …
In my opinion, it would be better if you do…
As far as I’m concerned/As for me, it would be wise to take th e following action.
I would like to suggest/recommend that…
If I were you, I would…
I wonder if you have considered the following tips.
I feel that it would be more beneficial if you could …
When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should…
You may consider doing…
3. 表意见并列的连词
表先后次序：
First, second, third….Finally
Firstly, secondly，…eventually
to begin with/ to start with, at last
递进关系：
furthermore; moreover; besides; meanwhile; in other words; at the same time
4.建议信结尾常用句式
I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
I hope you will find these proposal/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful.
I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
I would be ready to discuss this matter in further details.
I will be more than happy to see improvements in this matter.
If you have any more problems, please feel free to contact me at any time. I’m willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need.
三、写作模板
写作模板一
Dear …,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to …Then, it also helps to …. Besides, it should be a good idea to …. You can also ( 提出建议)
As to …, I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).
I'm looking forward to (表达愿望).
Sincerely yours, Li Hua
写作模板二
Dear …,
You have asked me for my tips concerning_____(问题), and I will try to make some suggestions here. As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions:First,
_______(建议一); in addition_____(建议二); what’s more _____(建议三). I hope you’ll find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.
Good luck with you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
四、课堂练习
在紧张的高三备考阶段，各校为了确保教学质量，除了早读和晚自习以外，每天至少要上9节课，甚至周末都要上课，学生们有大量的作业要完成，感到非常疲倦。为此，校学生会根据学生的实际情况，给校长写了封信，表达你们的需求和建议。
五．实战演练
由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存为鼓励大家节能环保,学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动, 假设你是高三6班的一名学生, 将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容：
1. 尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式;
2. 少喝一次瓶装水；
3. 尽量不用一次性制品,如一次性木筷子和塑料袋；
4. 每周至少手洗衣服一次；
5. 每周少开手机、电视一天。
参考范文
Reference I
Dear Principal，
We are writing to say out what we are thinking about the preparation for the entrance examination in Senior Three.
In order to guarantee the teaching quality in the course of the general revision, we Senior Three students at least have 9 periods each day apart from morning and evening classes.We even have classes on Saturday. Besides, we have got a lot of homework to do, which makes us exhausted. According to the real situation of us students, we think that it is necessary to reduce the amount of periods and leave us time to think by ourselves. Meanwhile, give us more practice on those important and confusing points to cultivate our ability to deal with problems. Furthermore, reduce daily homework to assure the quality and give us less criticism but more encouragement, which we think will be beneficial to us all. We do hope that you can take our opinions into consideration. Thanks.
Yours
Students’ Union Reference II
I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. We human beings are seriously threatened by the environmental pollution, such as waste gases, dirty water and white pollution. In order to encourage all of us to save energy and protect our environment, I am going to make the following suggestions. It is suggested that we should walk or take bikes if we go out. To avoid white pollution，we can reduce the use of bottled water and unrecyclable items such as disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. What’s more, if we can wash clothes by ourselves at least once a week as well as turn off our TVs and mobile phones for one day every week, it will be of great benefit to saving energy. I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign!
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暑期小学三年级作文基本功训练(课外辅导班用)
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（1）读一读下面这些句子。想一想，句子之间有什么联系，怎样排列才能使这段话通顺、连贯。（在括号里写上序号。）（）整个大地好像盖上了一条白绒毯。 （）雪停了、小青和小刚拿着扫帚去扫雪。 （）雪花像鹅毛纷纷扬扬地飘落下来。 （）北风吹，雪化飘。 （）慢慢地，树变白了，房子变白了，马路也变白了。 （2）下面这段话没有按顺序写，请仔细读一读，应按怎样的顺序修改，才符合木棉树四季生长变化的特点？（可在文中标上序号。）我们学校门前有一棵木棉树，挺拔屹立，气势雄伟，就像一个神采奕奕的巨人。秋天，树木落叶了，木棉树也脱去了绿色的外衣，现出了粗壮的骨骼。它顶天立地，枝条直指蓝天，全身长钉，像一位披甲的武将，好不威武！夏天，木棉树枝叶繁茂，叶大如扇，远远望去，像一把绿色的大伞。春天，木棉树开出鲜红的花，缀满枝头，像一团团烈火。一年四季，上学放学，一看到它，就想起那守卫在边防前哨的钢铁战士…… （3）按时间顺序写一篇日记。用上“早晨、中午、晚上”这些表示时间的词语。
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I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients. 第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议 套语： 我建议…… I’d like to suggest that …… May I suggest that…… In my opinion …… I would like to make a recommendation that … I am writing to advise you of …… If I were you, I would …… 第三部分：提出希望采纳建议，盼望回复 套语： (1) 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。 Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks. 三、示例 Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese. 1、表示欢迎。 2、提出对度假安排的建议。 3、祝愿 建议信模板 Dear , ① I am very ______ to know that . ①写信的原因 ② I'm looking forward to . ②表示欢迎 ③ I'm afraid that . ③表述建议理由 ④ I'd like to suggest that first……then _ . ④提出建议 ⑤ I believe this kind of arrangement will________________ ⑤有说服力 ⑥ Moreover，if _____________ , ⑥补充建议 ⑦ It is necessary for you to . ⑦提出建议 ⑧ With_______________you will . ⑧建议理由 ⑨ Wish_____________________________ ⑨祝愿
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2009年高考英语作文专项训练：任务型写作（11） 1. 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Doctors say anger can be an extremely harmful emotion, unless you learn how to deal with it. They warn that angry feelings can lead to heart disease, stomach problems, headaches, emotional problems and possibly cancer. Anger is a normal emotion that we all feel from time to time. Some people express anger openly in a calm, reasonable way. Others burst with anger, losing control of themselves. But still other people control their anger. They cannot or will not express it. Recently some doctors have found that people who express anger too often and violently become, in fact, more and not less angry. This can cause medical problems. Some doctors say that both controlling and expressing anger can be dangerous. They believe that those who express anger strongly may be more likely to develop heart disease, and they believe that those who deep their anger inside may face a greater danger of high blood pressure. Doctors say the solution is learning how to deal with anger. They say the first step is to admit that you are angry and to recognize the real cause of the anger, then decide if the cause is serious enough to get angry about. If it is, they say, “Do not express your anger while angry. Wait until your anger has cooled down and you are able to express yourself calmly and reasonably. ” [写作内容] 1）概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右； 2）就“要不要生气”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分字数大约120词左右； a)发脾气不但不利于健康，而且对人际关系有影响； b)避免因误解而造成的生气； c)理性的对待别人的错误。 [写作要求] 你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
写作四项基本功
只要练好这四项写作基本功，语文成绩稳步往上升！ 很多孩子都不会写作文，一到要写作文的时候就发愁，不知道如何下笔。家长们也很苦恼，不知道怎么帮助孩子。本文总结了小学生作文基本功的训练方法，爸爸妈妈们收藏着教孩子吧。 其实，要写好作文，首先要让孩子练好写句子的基本功。家长如何训练孩子写好句子呢？要从把句子写完整、具体、通顺、连贯这几方面做起。 一、把句子写完整 怎样的句子才算是完整的呢？读读下面的句子： 1.我们劳动。(谁，干什么) 2.小蚂蚁运送食物。(什么，干什么) 3.哥哥是一名少先队员。(谁，是什么) 不难看出：在一般情况下，句子是由两部分组成的，前半部分交代“谁”或“什么”，后半部分交代“做什么”“怎么样”或者“是什么”。前后两部分说全了，句子才算是一句完整的话。 需要强调说明的是：让孩子知道什么是完整句，怎样的句子才算完整，这只是一个知识性的问题；落实在行动上，即孩子平日在说每一句话，在写每一句话时，都要认真思考，反复斟酌，提高“完整”意识，不写残缺不全的句子，这才是最重要的。 二、把句子写具体 句子要完整，这是首要的。但在许多时候，句子只做到“完整”是不能准确表达意思的，还要做到“具体”。怎样的句子才算是具体的呢？读读下面这几组句子，体会一下： 第一组：
1、爸爸做工。 2.爸爸在工厂里做工。 分析：第二句写清了爸爸在哪儿做工。 第二组： 1.小蜜蜂飞来。 2.夏日，一只金色的小蜜蜂从远处嗡嗡地飞来。 分析：第二句写清什么时候，有多少，什么样，从哪儿，怎么样。 由上面这两组句子可以看出：在句子主要成分的前面或后面，写清什么时候(时间)、有多少(数量)、在什么地方或从哪儿(地点)、什么样(形状或颜色)、怎么样(态势)、达到什么程度(情境)等，就写清了事物外形特点、活动特点，就把自己要准确表达的意思写出来了，这就叫做把句子写具体。这样的句子就算是完整、具体的句子。 学习把句子写具体，这是一项极为重要的技能，需要孩子们抓住人物或事物的特点，准确运用词语，进行持久练习。 三、把句子写通顺 句子通顺，就是句意明白，读得顺口。具体来说，句子通顺包括以下几个方面： 1.用词要准确，经得起推敲。例如：我们把门口的泥土消除掉了。句中，“泥土”不能“消除”，只能“清除”掉。 2.句中词语排列的顺序要合理。例如：正在花上，有几只漂亮的蝴蝶翩翩起舞。这句话改成“有几只漂亮的蝴蝶，正在花上翩翩起舞”，句子就通顺了。 3.词语使用搭配要得当。例如：公园里生长着各种树木和五颜六色的鲜花。句中“生长”和“鲜花”两词搭配不当，应改为“公园里生长着各种树木，盛开着五颜六色的鲜花”。