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短文改错
英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
(一)
Friendship is importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we can’t live without
friendship just like we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well
with one another to go ahead under different kinds of difficulties in front of us. But real
friendship is easy to come by, true friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand
each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us.
By his advice we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the
better we can improve ourself. （选）
(二)
Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world men and
woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since many years ago, many adults and children called
their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of reasons why people like to
play is that sports help them to live happily. In other words, they help to keep people strong and
health. If people are playing games, they move a lot of. That is why sports are good activities
for their health. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by
watch others play.（选）
(三)（选）
I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we’re going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test.
(四)（选）
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．
(五)
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds
view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their
lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and
forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her
ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.
Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus,
we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.（选）
(六)
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager
to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the
Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of
Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies
and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.
Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that
your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number
is 027-********．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.（选）
(七)
Dear Robert,
Thank for your letter of May 12th . How glad I was when I get it. I’d be very happy
to be your pen friends. Now allow me introduce myself to you. I’m a bo y student aged
seventeen, study in Senior Three of Hongqi High School. I’m a monitor of my class. I am
about to take the National Matriculation Entrance Test after twenty days, that is, between June
7 and 8．You know, I want very much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that I try to
make fully use of every hour and study far into the night every day.
Best wishes！
Yours truly,
Li Hua
(八)
One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back to her but she couldn’t read his writing because the letters were written carele ss. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he couldn’t read it, too. Then her husband got an idea. He told her that a chemist might be able read the doctor’s letter. So the woman went to chemist’s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her a large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she would eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not.
(九)
Have you ever heard the saying: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy? What this
means is if you study all the times you will become a boring person．You must go out and have a fun with your friends, otherwise you’ll lose them．No one wants to be friends with anyone who only talks work and study．Perhaps you have a confidence problem．Please try remember what the work you do is for yourself but no one else．You don’t have to compete for your
classmates．No one could be happier in studying seven days and seven nights.
(十)
Our class held a discussion about that whether music should be played during the break or
not .The opinions are divided. Most of students think that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. However, after hard study music can bring us relaxation, which reduce the tiredness. This can help us make full preparations for the next class. Listen to music also makes us feel happy. On the other hand, so me students didn’t think so. In their opinion, they can’t get the expecting effect from playing music, for the class break time is too short. What is needed most during the class break is peace instead noise produced by music. In my opinion, it is good to play some soft and peace music during the class break. In this way students can enjoy music as good as have a good rest.
(十一)（选）
One day some people on the shore heard the cry for help. They ran up to the sea. A soldier jumped into the water and swim to the man who was calling for helps. The young soldier was a good swimmer and soon pulled the man back the shore. He took the man in the arms and
carried him out water. All the people there admired to the young man. Now everyone saw what
the man was a very wealth man in the city. Then he went up the soldier and gave the soldier
one pound for save his life.
(十二)（选）
Jim arrived at home and discovered that he has forgotten his door key. He rang the bell, but nobody came to open the door. He rang again and waiting, but still there was not reply. He walked round the house to see if he could find a open window, but they were all locked. It was beginning to rain, he did not know how to do. Kate, his wife, had obvious gone out. He didn’t know where she had been or when she’d return. Finally, he picked up a stone and threw them at the kitchen window. Just then, his wife came back.
(十三)
I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I’m sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn his radio down. When she gave a party she isn’t have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down almost paralyze(瘫)with their legs trembled . Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder that the same thing will happen to my neighbor someday.
(十四) 选
A few days ago I saw a interesting program on TV. There was about the problem of traffic. It seems that a great deal damage is done by traffic. All our cities are suffered from this. Some buildings are falling to piece. It’s often faster to walk than to go by car and by bus. The problem has been getting bad for a long time. This was only one among thousands of other problems in our cities. All of sorts of bad things are happening to our cities. Our roads are never designed for so heavy traffic. It takes longer and longer to move from one place to another.
(十五)（选）
In the past my hometown was the most beautiful place. Thick trees and green grass could
be seen anywhere. In order to build more house and grow more crops, people cut down much more trees. As time went on, the whole forest was almost destroyed. Gradually, the green hills turn wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from which we were suffered lot. But I do wish all the people could realize the terribly disaster caused from man. What’s more, we should take good care of our nature and punish those who against the law.
短文改错参考答案:
(一) 1. important 或importance前加of 2. like--as 3. getting----get
4. kind---kinds
5. easy前加not
6. sincere
7. understanding
8. persuaded 9. more前加the 10. ourselves
(二) 1. and --- but 2. woman --- women 3. called前加have 4. play --- playing
5. of 后加the
6.health --- healthy
7. If --- When
8. of划掉
9. make---makes 10.watch--- watching
(三) 1．sure --- sure about 2．exact --- exactly 3．has --- have;
4．a 去掉5．去掉it 6．had --- have 7．review --- reviewing．
8. practice --- practicing 9．problem--- problems 10. will 后加be
(四) 1. in---on 2. while---when 3. sides---side 4. made---make
5. she---he
6. drive---drove
7. young前加a
8. wore---wearing
9. later 去掉10. passed---passing
(五) 1.about---with 2.view前加the 3.fully---full 4.me---her
5.I’ll后加be
6.eye---eyes
7.watch---watching
8. works---work
9.had---has 10.and后at划掉
(六) 1. wanting---wan ted 2. being---be 3. Hebei前the划掉4. the前in---from
5. good---well
6. special---specially
7. doing---do
8. Beside---Besides
9. As---at 10. I’ll后加be
(七) 1. Thank---Thanks; 或for 前加you 2. get---got 3.friends---friend 4. me后加to
5. study---studying
6. a划掉
7. about划掉
8. after---in
9. very---so 10. fully---full
(八) 1. invite---inviting 2. families---family 3. careless---carelessly 4. the help---help
5. too---either
6. able---able to
7. chemist’s---a chemist’s
8. but---and 9. eat---take 10. will---would
(九) 1．heard--- heard of 2．is --- that 3．Times --- time
4．a 去掉 5. anyone --- someone 6. Talk --- Talk about 7. try --- try to
8．What--- that 9．For---with/against 10．Happier--- happy
(十) 1. that划掉 2. students --- the students 3. However --- Besides
4. reduce --- reduces
5. Listen --- Listening
6. didn’t --- don’t
7. expecting --- expected 8. instead--- instead of
9. peace---peaceful 10. good---well
(十一) 1. the cry---a cry 2. swim---swam 3. helps---help 4. back--- to
5. out---out of
6. admired to --- admired
7. what --- that
8. wealth --- wealthy 9.up --- up to 10. save --- saving
(十二) 1. at home---home 2. has --- had 3. waiting --- waited
4. not --- no 或not --- not any
5. find a --- find an
6. he ---and he
7. how --- what 8. obvious ---obviously 9. been --- gone
10. them --- it
(十三) 1. recent --- recently 2. been 划掉 3. his --- her 4. gave---gives
5. isn’t --- doesn’t
6. in her --- to her
7. a certain --- certain
8. trembled--- trembling 9. tail --- tails 10. that --- if
(十四) 1. a --- an 2. There --- It 3. deal --- deal of
4. suffered --- suffering
5. piece --- pieces
6. and --- or
7. bad --- worse 8. was --- is 9.All of --- All 10. so --- such
(十五) 1. the --- a 2. anywhere--- everywhere 3. house --- houses
4. much ---many
5. turn --- turned
6. we were --- we
7. And --- So
8. terribly --- terrible 9. from man --- by man 10. who --- who are