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一、托福写作让步段写作技巧

1. 写出反方观点

这一步大多数同学都做得不错，但是在提出反方观点之前，可再加上一些连接词，例如admittedly, nevertheless等等。还拿之前拿到题目做例子，For further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 总观点是同意，让步段写学习好也挺重要的。第一步引出反方观点时，应写：Admittedly, acquiring an excellent GPA is one significant proof of your ability, for "study" is one of the major tasks that students are supposed to fulfill in school.

2. 进行一定程度的削弱

这是大多数同学会忽略的一步。很多同学在写让步段的时候，喜欢跳过第二步，直接重申自己的观点，然而这样的写法会显得逻辑上牵强，行文也显得生硬。因此，在提出反方观点时要进行一定的削弱。例如在写完上文那句话之后，应加上：However, the outstanding scores only prove the intelligence of the student, while the EQ, largely reflected by how well you relate with others, plays an utmost significant role in the future career success.

3. 重申自己的观点

这一步非常重要，因为让步段的提出仅仅是小插曲，重要的还是自己的观点。切不可写了让步段，就忘了自己的立场，那样就是得不偿失了。因此，在写完上面两句话之后，需要再加上一句，therefore, I still hold the opinion that relate well with others is more important than acquiring high scores in school.

在让步段的写作当中，尤其需要注意两点：一是削弱过程的讲述，这样可使文章看起来不那么唐突，更为流畅。二是注意字数的控制，让步段切不可写得超过之前的论述段的长度，否则就有观点不明确的嫌疑了。

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思路一：措施解决法

比如我们经常会遇到A好还是B好，或者A到底好不好之类的话题，这时我们的让步段可以写成这样的模式：我承认B好，但是A通过采取措施，也可

以达到类似的效果。或者，我知道A有不好的地方，但是通过采取措施，A的负面影响可以克服或者消除。

这种方法的经典句式为：

Admittedly, a minority of individuals tend to believe that … inevitably has several drawbacks, one of which is … because… However, those people have oversimplified the real situations as some effective measures have been taken by sb. such as doing … Therefore, … will not cause serious problems to …

思路二：转换角度法

俗话说，Every sword has two edges，凡事总有两面。所以当我们承认B好，或者A好的时候，肯定换一个角度就可以得到不同的答案了。就比如说题目里问看电视对孩子是好是坏，我们如果想论证看电视不好，那么我们的让步段就可以写：

姑且承认看电视也有好的地方，比如说孩子可以接触很多即时的信息。但是，在接触到好的信息的同时，那些暴力色情之类的信息也同样会影响到孩子的成长。

这种方法的经典句式为：

Admittedly, … However, if we can view such a situation from a different perspective, we can find that those people oversimplified the real situations…

思路三：更好替代法

这种模式主要用于论证A好不好，我们如果想表明觉得A不好的时候，让步段就可以采用这个形式：诚然，A也有好的地方，但是有更为经济和有效的替代方法，而且这种替代方法自身也存在优势，所以我们不想要A。

这种方法的经典句式为：

Admittedly, … However, we can find better choices to achieve such a goal. For example, … can be easily achieved by …, which has the competition advantage of … compared with …

以上为大家介绍的是托福写作让步段写作技巧及思路的有关内容，其实让步段形成套路以后很容易，只需要我们有一点辩证的思维。最后祝大家考试顺利，圆满实现自己的出国留学之梦！

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