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2017年6月英语四级写作真题及参考范文

写作一：

Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

写作二：to sell a bicycle you used at college.

写作三：to sell a you used at college.

看到这次的作文题，就问你——惊不惊喜？意不意外？

这次的作文不是大家最熟悉的议论文，而是大家本就不是很熟练的应用文！而且是应用文体里面最没有存在感的——广告！

其实大家也没必要因为没有写过广告类的文章而慌了神。―应用―文体，重点在于―应用‖，所以写作的时候，实实在在的―按需而写‖就可以了；Step 1:

其实作文的题目已经把要写的―需求‖都写得很清楚了，大家考场上需要做的，就是先仔细审题，把下面这些关键字先圈出来：

Sell a computer: used（所以不是新的电脑）, brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information

Sell a bike: used（所以不是新的电脑）, brand, features, condition and price, and your contact information

Sell course books: a brief description of their content, their condition and price, and your contact information.

注意：虽然题目中说的是―you may include …‖, 但是作为卖二手货的―广告‖，有些必要的信息是一定不能漏的——condition, price and contact information——所以这三个信息在三套写作题里都出现了，说明十分重要！这次很多考生，因为害怕涉及个人信息泄露，就自动忽略了―contact

information‖，亦或是写到最后，就忘记附上这一点了。这样没有个人联系方式的广告，本就违背了―应用‖文的写作目的，所以最后写作分数上也一定会受到一些影响。

Step 2:

按照最舒服的―三段式‖，安排广告信息，做一个简单的草稿；草稿就是―结构+ 关键词‖就可以了。大家可以参考一下下面这个格式：

P 1: 自我介绍+ 背景原因（我是谁，我要干什么，我为什么要卖这个电脑）

P 2: 所卖东西的细节信息：brand – XXX; features —fast, reliable, suitable seat, strong tires …; price —以前多少钱，现在多少钱；

P 3: 如何练联系我…

Step 3

按照自己写的大纲，完成文章即可！

注意，遇到和单车，电脑有关的专有名词不会写怎么办？—— condition不需要写太详细，挑自己会写的大方向写就好了；比如单车很舒服啊（suitable），电脑还很新啊（brand new），就可以了；总之，写作尽量减少自己的语言错误！应用文的用语不需要太高端大气上档次的！

1.Well-maintained MacBook on sale

I'm Wang Ming, a senior from College of Mathematics and Computer Science. I want to sell my used Apple MacBook Air for I’ve j ust got a new one recently.

With a simple and neat design, the Apple MacBook Air weighs only 2.9 pounds. The attractive silver color has an appeal that's perfect for college students. With mac OS 10 operating system installed, its components are in good condition as well. The motherboard owns Intel Core i5 processor, and a 4GB RAM with 128G hard drives, which works very efficiently.

Considering all this, 2000 RMB is a truly fair price for you to own it!

If you are interested in my computer, please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions. I can be reached at phone 87654321. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

https://www.360docs.net/doc/e716428836.html,ed bicycle on sale

A used Canyon bike is (available) on sale! Though used, it’s still a fast and reli able road bike, for it is well maintained and in good condition (which is) perfect for any standard of riders (beginner right through to competitive club cyclists) with suitable seat and strong tires.

The bike was bought two years ago for 1000 yuan, and it is now sold at only 388 yuan (so it is a real bargain! Besides, the price is negotiable)!

I want this bike to be sold as quickly as possible, for I am a senior student who is about to graduate and leave the campus in the near future. Please feel free to contact me if you are interested in this bike. I can be reached at phone 87654321 or by my e-mail 123@https://www.360docs.net/doc/e716428836.html,.

3.Advertisement

I’m Li Hua, a senior student who is about to graduate and leave the campus, so I have three used course books about Engl ish learning to sell at a fairly low price!

These books could be beneficial to anyone who decides to buy them. First, the books provide many practical skills on the following three aspects of English learning: how to improve listening, speaking and writing. Second, the books are still well-maintained with seemingly brand new covers. Third, each book contains a delicate bookmark with the writer’s signature as a souvenir!

If you are interested in my book, please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions. I can be reached at phone 87654321. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

4. As I am about to graduate and leave the campus, I am going to sell my personal laptop at a low price.

It is a Lenovo ThinkPad that I bought in June, 2015. It is not big, but very functional. It has a four-core CPU, an independent display card of 2G, a hard disk of 500G and a screen of 15.6 inches.

For the last two years, the laptop has served as my faithful aid and helped me finish most of my assignments and my thesis. There has appeared no fault in the process. I owe so much to it. But as my workplace has already offered me a more advanced working laptop, I find there is no necessity for me to have two. And I know that there must be some of my schoolmates who are more in need of the ThinkPad. Therefore, I determined to sell it.

I bought the laptop as the price of 3500 yuan. Now I will sell it at 1500 yuan or less. Anyone interested can contact me via email, and my mailbox is ***@https://www.360docs.net/doc/e716428836.html,.

2016年6月英语四级写作及范文

写作题目：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to

1. write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any other family member upon making a memorable achievement.

2. write a letter to express your thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college

3. write a letter to express your thanks to one of your friends who helped you most when you were in difficulty.

1.一封信表达对于家庭成员在你取得好成绩的感谢

2.一封信表达对于你进入大学以后的老师的感谢

3.一份信表达对于在你困难时候帮助你的朋友感谢

书信本身难度不大，但是需要特别注意英文书信的书写格式。

一、四级书信格式要求

1、抬头：收件人的姓名

2、正文：三段式

3、落款：祝福(yours sincerely)+写信人名

二、感谢信格式模板:

Dear ______,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for __________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in

__________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been___________________(没有对方帮助时的后果).

No one would disagree that it was you who___________________________(给出细节).

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Best wishes.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

(注意：抬头的Dear+人名顶格靠左写，后面一定要加逗号!落款yours sincerely和写信人名顶格靠右写，yours sincerely后面也一定要加逗号!Yours sincerely为书信的惯用套话，这个必须得有!)

三、真题解析

再来看看今天第三套试卷的写作。写作要求让自己写一封感谢信来表达你对帮助自己克服困难的朋友的感谢。书信其实只要抓住了书信的基本格式，即多了抬头和落款，正文的写作应该较为简单，尤其是第二段，大家可以按照熟悉的原因分析段的方式来写。

1、写作思路：

第一段：表明对朋友的感谢并点题;

第二段：朋友用哪些方式帮我在哪些方面克服了困难

第三段：再次表示对朋友诚挚的感谢并祝愿朋友身体健康。

注意：第一，不能出现格式错误。与其他应用文写作一样，书信体裁需要在正文的前面加上称呼，在正文的末尾加上结束语，落款和署名。

1.感谢我的妈妈---因为她教会了我如何去读书，博览群书让我取得好成绩

2.感谢王老师---因为他教会了我如何读书

3.感谢朋友King---因为他在我困难时，教会我如何读书，让我度过孤独寂寞的时光

然后可以加上读书的好处

1.套路句子1 读书会扩大我们的视野，丰富我们的经验，（这个你们都懂的，哈哈）enlarge our horizon and enrich our experience

2.套路句子2 读书会给我们知识，Knowledge is a kind of power, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes

3.套路句子3 读书会培养我们的兴趣Reading can cultivate our interests in diverse aspects

第二，考生需要根据题目要求完成写作。在这一部分，考生需要对字数的要求及署名部分关注到位，不能出现字数不够的现象及出现题目明确要求不能出现的人名、地名和学校名。虽然题目中并未作过多要求，考生还是有必要把敏感的人名、地名和学校名去掉，以防作弊嫌疑。

2、范文：

Dear Tom,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your great help when I failed that vital English interview. If it had not been for your assistance in giving me those brilliant suggestions and warm encouragement, I fear that I would have lost my way.

No one would disagree that it was you who stayed with me and pulled me through the hard time. First and foremost, you told me it is the priority for me to calm down. This is due to the fact that the ability to stay sober and positive made me come up with quite a few ideas to cope with the consequence that failure triggered. Furthermore, you made me learn to analyze my lack of interview skills and find solutions. Plenty of evidence has shown that this work played an indispensable role in my success the next year. Last but not the least, you helped to build my confidence.

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Dear Sister,

I am writing this letter to extend my heartfelt appreciation to you for memorable achievement in the National Oral English Contest in 2005.

The main reasons for this are as follows. To begin with, everything you did in the contest inspire me for a really long time. Because of your encouragement and achievement, I made my decision to take the Contest in 2005. In addition, all the books and suggestions you gave me during my preparation help me a lot. Without your help, how could it be possible for me to won the contest? Last but not least, everything you taught me encourages me to be an English teacher and influence an increasing number of college students.

I would like to take this great opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you render me.

Yours sincerely,

Yun Pan

卷二：

感谢信：对于进入大学，感谢学校老师。

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【参考范文】

Dear Professor XX,

I am writing this letter to extend my heartfelt appreciation to you for your help with my preparation for entering college.

The main reasons for this are as follows. To begin with, everything you did in school inspire me for a really long time. Because of your encouragement and achievement, I never give up after several failure. In addition, all the books and suggestions you gave me during my preparation

help me a lot. Without your help, how could it be possible for me to crack down all the difficulty in my study? Last but not least, everything you taught me encourages me to be a persistent student.

I would like to take this great opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you render me.

Yours sincerely,

XXXX

卷三：

感谢信：感谢在你困境中（困难时）帮助过你的一个朋友。

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your friends who helped you most when you were in difficulty. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【参考范文】

Dear Walt,

I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help. I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.

Most importantly, if it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome. Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach. If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.

My thanks to you for the help you render me are beyond words.

Yours faithfully,

XXXX 2016年12月英语四级作文题目：

写作一(国企还是合资/外企?)

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture. You are to make a choice between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

第一段：话题描述。

第二段：表明观点+阐述原因。

第三段：观点结论。

Stated-owned Business or Joint Venture

Upon graduation, virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice，which is truly a tough choice. Students' opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some hold that there is no better way to get a decent job than working in a stated-owned business which will guarantee my life after retirement, but others take the attitude that a joint venture outweighs any other jobs as it may provide higher income for employees.

As to myself, I prefer the latter view. A joint venture, especially a high-salary joint venture, exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people, with no exception to me. Although it might be impossible to make sure my retirement pension is good enough, high-salary is exactly what I need just now. In my view, our career choices largely depend on where we want to stay for the rest of life. For me, metropolis is the place where I can

grasp loads of opportunities and achieve my personal dreams. As I hold the view that live in the moment, not the future, and also in order to finance myself in some aspects such as the transportation, the house-renting, or social activities, a joint venture can satisfy my needs for the consumption I mentioned above.

In short, a joint venture is the first and only consideration in my choice of career.

写作二(就业还是创业?)

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Upon graduation, virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice，which is truly a tough choice. Students' opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some hold that priority should be given to start a business of your own, but others take the attitude that finding a job is the best choice influencing their future.

As to myself, I prefer the latter view. An opportunity to start a business exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people, with no exception to me. In my view, With the competition in the job market becoming increasingly fierce for college graduates，some ambitious students have tried their hands at launching their own businesses. Over the years，there have been many successful cases of student entrepreneurship and such attempts should be encouraged and promoted by both the universities and the society at large. What’s more ,College students w ho start businesses are pioneers，among whom will be born China’s future business leaders. Faced with unknown challenges，they are audacious enough to embark on a perilous journey while most of their peers enjoy stable salaries by working as white-collars at high-end office buildings.

All in all, the essential difference between the students who find a job or those students who create their own businesses is that the former are docile followers whereas the latter are aggressive trailblazers. For this reason，business-launching college graduates are more admirable，and thus they command our deep respect.

写作三(就业还是考研/读书?)

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to take a job in a company and the other to go to a graduate school. You are to make a choice between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Upon graduation, virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice，which is truly a tough choice. Students' opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some hold that priority should be given to take a job, but others take the attitude that going to a graduate school is the most critical factor influencing their future career choices.

As to myself, I prefer the latter view. A higher educational background exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people, with no exception to me. This phenomenon that the graduates have difficulties in finding job after their graduation can easily be found anywhere in our daily life, especially on campus. On the one hand, with the improved high education of Chinese college students which directly brought the result that there are more and more graduates every year. On the contrary, job vacancies don’t increase that fast. More people, less food, whic h is the exact description of the hard condition. On the other hand, more and more people go on to pursue their master and doctor degree; more and more Chinese oversea students come back to China to hunt better working chances. It is sure that the competition is more and more fierce.

Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve our own competitiveness. That is the secret of success in the future employment market after our graduation.