2017四六级必备之作文模板及范文

（一）信件的基本格式

December 12, 2006Date

My dear friend,

Recently I have noticed a habit of yours that is becoming a serious problem. It is your smoking. As long as you are in, our bedroom is filled with the terrible smell, just like a birdcage. The ashtray already overflows with cigarette butts.

You are ruining your health, destroying brain cells which can never be replaced, not to mention the damage to your lungs and windpipes. Smoking, especially heavy smoking, correlates highly with cancer. It is quite possible that you’ll be caught up with it. I am not scaring you.

Smoking harms not only your health but also that of others around you. The roommates avoid being in the bedroom for fear of being polluted. As a result, the brotherhood among roommates is gradually fading. So you see the bad effects of smoking outweigh the “good effects ”。

It is not difficult to break the habit if you are really determined to quit. Where there is a will, there is a way. I’ll always be there to help, if you need. Take it easy!

Y ours sincerely,

Li Ming

（二）电子邮件的格式与写作方法

To: bjrv@https://www.360docs.net/doc/f315239425.html,

From: reader@https://www.360docs.net/doc/f315239425.html,

Subject: China Recommendation System 注意，这四行都是格式

Data: October 10, 2001

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Dear Editor:

As is fairly well-known to anyone, particularly the young, Recommendation Admission System has been in practice in China over the past 20 years. There is no denying that the System has benefited a large number of senior middle school graduates. But in my point of view, the System does more harm and should be completely denied as soon as possible.

In support of my view, the very first point I would like to touch upon is concerned with equality among the candidates, which I regard as a basic right to each student. The System offers opportunity to quite a few lucky ones while the majority of students have to compete fiercely for this opportunity. As it is, most candidates are actually discriminated against in one way or the other. What’s more, the System often works in the interest of those people who can manage to get favorable recommendation from the senior middle school. There are already quite a few reports in various media of such abuse of the System. As a result, the System can not ensure that the most outstanding students are admitted. To make things worse, the whole society may lose its confidence in this test system.

Accordingly, I strongly believe it meaningful and significant to suspend the Recommendation Admission System. It is also my hope that every candidate can realize his dream through equal competition.

Sincerely yours,

Wang Hai

（三）求职信模板

Nov. 30. 2001

Dear Sir/Madam，

The enclosed resume shows some of the reasons why I believe I am qualified to assume the position of assistant product manager, listed in the October issue of American Marketing（这个是广告登在何处，求职信必须写消息来源）magazine. Would you please consider me an applicant for the job?

As my resume shows, I received my BA in Marketing（这里改成你自己的专业）from Marquette University last month. For the past four years, I have worked for the Wisconsin Metals Company, part time while school was in session and full time in summers. During these four years, I have performed various duties in the marketing department, including consumer research work for the product managers. In addition, my minor in Marquette was in Chemistry（改成辅修专业）, and I received A or B+ grades in all my chemistry courses.

What my resume does not show is that I am an ambitious, hard working person who enjoys the challenges of product development and marketing , challenges which I know Deka Chemicals has met so well for so many years. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss with you my qualifications for the position of assistant product manager for Deka(应聘的职位). I understand from your ad. that an interview can be arranged in the Milwaukee area in early December. Please write or call me to arrange an interview at you convenience. My telephone number is 555-7875.

Sincerely yours,

Alfred H.Yellen

Dear Sir or Madam,

I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in____________(报纸名称)of________(广告发布时间).

Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a __________(工作名称). In the one hand,_______________________________(第一个原因). On the other hand, __________________________________(另一个原因).

Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at _______________(电话号码).

Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

Dear_____________ ,

I am applying for the position of _____________(想申请的职务) advertised in_____________.I majored in_____________(专业). My training in _____________(接受过的培训) definitely meets your qualifications. My complete resume is attached.

I will graduate on _____________(毕业时间)from _____________(毕业院校). In addition to the

required courses of my major, I have_____________(除专业外，选修的课程). I also have some experience in_____________(曾有过的社会工作经验). You will find me to be_____________(请对方对自己有信心).

May I have a personal interview at your convenience? I can be reached by telephone.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

（四）慰问信模板

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter of Consolation. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你是李明，给地震灾区的学生写一封慰问信，鼓励他们树立生活的信心，努力学习，好好活下去。

思路一：

第一段对地震灾区学生的遭遇表示同情和慰问；

第二段重点提出政府将克服重重困难帮助他们，同时鼓励他们；

第三段表达自己对他们所能给予的帮助。

May 26, 2016

Dear friends:

I am deeply saddened to learn of the great loss of lives and extensive damage caused by the sudden and deadly（灾害名称）earthquake in your province. As for what you have encountered in the earthquake, I would like to extend my sympathies to all of you who are affected by earthquake, and my condolences to the families of the victims.

Although you’ve lost your home and your parents, you still have another mother—China. Our motherland has mounted swift relief and rescue efforts. And I am confident that our motherland will be able to tackle the challenges ahead and that all of you will return to schools in the shortest possible time. As a result, please don’t worry about your future very much and just focus on your study. And I’m sure a bright future will wait for you.

My other classmates and I have donated some money to assist you in reconstructing your homes. However hard it is, we will still stay with you and help you.

Best regards!

Yours,

Li Ming

（五）感谢信模板

Dear______,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for __________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in __________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been___________________(没有对方帮助时的后果).

Every one agrees that it was you who___________________________(给出细节).

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

Dear _____________,

I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for _____________(感谢事由). I’d like you to know how much your meant to me. You have a positive genius for_____________(对收信人某一方面的赞美).I not only enjoyed _____________, but also_____________. I shall ever remember _____________as one of the most _____________in my life.

I hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating. I will feel very honored and pleased if you_____________(表达自己回报的心愿). I am looking forward to seeing you next time!

I repeat my thanks again for your_____. Please give my kind regards to your________.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

（六）建议信模板

Dear ___________,

You have asked me for my advice with regard to _______, and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:_________________(建议的内容).

I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.

Good Luck with your_______(祝愿).

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

Dear_____________,

I am delighted to learn that _____________(写信的原因). In my opinion, _____________(表述建议内容). On the one hand, _____________(提出建议的理由一). On the other hand, _____________ (建议的理由二).

As to _____________(具体到某一方面的建议)，I suggest_____________(建议内容). If _____________(供被建议人选择的条件). It is unnecessary for you to _____________(建议内容的另一方面). In addition, _____________(其他的建议)，I am sure_____________ (对建议内容所作的承诺).

Please inform me_____________( 期望被建议人作出的回应).

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

Part I Writing

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then the kid’s

understanding of going to school.

You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”

①（第一句主要将图画中的直接引语转述成间接引语）What the drawing vividly depicts is that a student asks

his mother why he is going to school since his phone already knows everything. ②（第二句为可以参照题目中对于图画的解释）The picture illustrates that some students are highly dependent on their phones, overlooking the importance of traditional school learning. ③（第三句为自已对图画涵义的总结，为本文的中心句）As far as I am concerned, cell phones cannot replace schooling.

（主体段落像普通的议论文一样，解释这种现象产生的原因）There are a number of reasons behind my belief. First of all, students can develop their own way and habit of learning under the guidance of teachers, which can benefit their life-long learning. Secondly, every subject of education in school is systematic, and education should not be considered as information fragments that are randomly collected on mobile phones. Last but not the least, students can have exact face-to-face communication with their teachers and classmates, which will help to cultivate their interpersonal communication skills.

（结尾段重述主体）In conclusion, mobile phone use is a convenient way of obtaining information, but it is still necessary that we attend school to get formal education.

thought-provoking发人深省的

enlightening 有启迪作用/使人感悟的

compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣

profound含义深刻=far-reaching implications

instructive有益的（=informative）（搭配ADV: extremely, highly, most, particularly, very/quite ）

amusing 令人发笑的，ridiculous 荒谬可笑的

illuminating (particularly revealing or helpful) 富有启发性的；很有助益的；

impressive 印象深刻的，exaggerative 夸张的

①As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, 描述图画.

②The cartoon subtly 巧妙地and symbolically 象征性地depicts a thought-provoking scenario 场景in which + 描述图画.

③What is clearly illustrated/ presented /portrayed/described in the drawing above is that + 描述图画.

④It is symbolically/ explicitly明白地/ vividly illustrated/ demonstrated in the drawing that + 描述图画

图画类第一段：①As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, the boy expresses his worries about the disposal of nuclear wastes, however, his father asks him to empty the dustbin in the room first.②Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking big.③The unique metaphor in this enlightening drawing endows us with the notion that it is necessary to deal with trivial things.

Anti-Corruption Campaign（反腐运动）

Corruption cases are frequently reported by news media. For example, some high ranking officials

滥用权力).

贿赂) and other corrupt behaviour do much harm.

As a result, the healthy development of the economy is seriously affected.

As China continues its reforms and opens wider to the outside world, anti corruption is a question of priorities. Our government has realized the seriousness of corruption problems. Corruption presents a dreadful threat to state interests. Corruption cases seriously damage efforts to build a clean and honest

government, undoubtedly people’s enthusiasm(热情) and heavily affect stability(稳定).

In the future, to cement (巩固) the fruits that reform has borne, an even greater effort is needed in the battle against corrupt behaviour. Governments at all levels should take more effective measures to combat corruption. Laws already in effect must be strictly enforced (执行). The implementation (实施) of anti corruption programs should target every part of China. Anti corruption agencies should intensify crackdown (增强打击力度) on bribery, attach greater importance to the anti corruption campaign.

why do we advocate anti-graft（反贪）campaign?

The style in which you work is no small matter, and if we don't redress unhealthy tendencies and allow them to develop, it will be like putting up a wall between our party and the people, and we will lose our roots, our lifeblood and our strength.（工作作风上的问题绝对不是小事，如果不坚决纠正不良风气，任其发展下去，就会像一座无形的墙把我们党和人民群众隔开，我们党就会失去根基、失去血脉、失去力量。）

How do we take measures to combat corruption and uphold integrity(反腐倡廉)?

We must have the resolution to fight every corrupt phenomenon, punish every corrupt official and constantly eradicate the soil which breeds corruption, so as to earn people's trust with actual results.（我们要坚定决心，有腐必反、有贪必肃，不断铲除腐败现象滋生蔓延的土壤，以实际成效取信于民。）

We must uphold the fighting of tigers and flies at the same time, resolutely investigating law-breaking cases of leading officials and also earnestly resolving the unhealthy tendencies and corruption problems which happen all around people.（要坚持“老虎”、“苍蝇”一起打，既坚决查处领导干部违纪违法案件，又切实解决发生在群众身边的不正之风和腐败问题。）

Low-carbon Lifestyle

Ever since, the World Climate Conference was held in Copenhagen, the term “low-carbon lifestyle” has become a buzzword in our daily life. Everyone ,old or young ,is talking about it and exerting himself to achieve the low-carbon goal of low-carbon lifestyle.

What on earth is low-carbon lifestyle? Low-carbon lifestyle means to lower the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, by reducing the energy we use in our daily life. For common people like us, this is an attitude rather than a capacity .Low-carbon lifestyle calls for the active participation of all the people in the process of saving electricity and gas, as well as recycling the useful materials.

As college students, we should contribute to the revolution of low-carbon lifestyle by all means. Firstly, we should avoid using disposable products to reduce the emission of carbon dioxide. Secondly, taking public transport rather than driving is another effective way. Last but not least, both we and the earth will benefit enormously if we eat green food instead of junk food.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Air Pollution following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

1. 近年来空气污染严重

2. 空气污染引发的危害

3. 有什么解决办法

Air Pollution

It is reported that thick fog and haze surround many parts of China. People have to wear masks when they go out. As air pollution is getting increasingly worse, it has become the main concern of people.

Air pollution can have serious consequences for human’s health and also severely affects natural ecosystems. Millions of people die of illnesses related to air pollution every year. Due to particles from exhaust emissions, green house effects result in warmer weather, acid rains corrode the earth, and frequent haze causes traffic problems.

Confronted with such situation, positive measures should be adopted. The government should keep its regulatory role for properly supervision. Related rules should be made out for reducing emissions of new vehicles and limiting high-emission vehicles. Factories should meet standards for curbing emissions of pollutants in surrounding cities. Meanwhile, provinces and municipalities in each target region should set up a mechanism for the joint prevention and control of air pollution.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Listening is more important than talking.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of listening. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Listening Is More Important Than Talking

①（第一句话引出引言）It is no exaggeration to say that listening is more important than talking. ②（第二句话开始举出一些简单的例子，一句话一个例子，不用展开）For instance, without listening, a baby won’t know how to speak; without enough listening, we cannot speak English fluently; without listening carefully in classroom, we cannot follow our teachers.

（第二段跟传统的议论文写法一样，阐明原因）There are several reasons to account for the

importance of paying attention to others' opinions.To start with, listening shows your respect for others. In such a competitive society, willingness to listen can make you gain trust and friendship, which is the basic rule of socialization. A talkative person without ear is doomed to be alienated. Furthermore, listening can really benefit yourself. There is no denying that you are the one to make choices in your life. However, a variety of ideas from others will definitely enrich your mind and present some enlightenment to your future actions.

（最后一段发表自己的观点，重述主题）According to what is said above, listening truly outweighs talking on many occasions. In modern society, we need to master some communication skills. Only when we realize the importance of listening can we lead a better life.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying …Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

（引出话语）When hearing the saying “Leaning is a daily experience and a life time mission.” we can easily perceive its connotation. （话语联系主题）Apparently, this saying can be naturally associated with the significance of lifelong learning.

（现象概述）In our daily life, it is a common phenomenon for us to learn something for a variety of purposes.（相关人+感受）Meanwhile, a host of intelligent people find it less likely to succeed, if they just study one subject for a limited time.(万能举例)Taking a look around, we can notice a great many examples like this: college students only usually spend two weeks learning all the subjects to pass final exams. They usually learn knowledge in a short time for a practical purpose, while ignoring the essence of learning. (强调句式：意义) However,it is lifelong learning that enables people to accumulate adequate knowledge, skills and experience for their future life.（万能总结）As a matter of fact, wise people in large numbers have come to realize the importance of life long learning.

（观点）As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to cultivate the awareness of lifelong learning. (建议)If young people try their best to enhance their various abilities in their whole life, the future of their work and study will be hopeful and promising.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Popularity of Micro-message based on the statistics provided in the chart below. Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Popularity of Micro-message

Micro-message, also called Wechat, is a chat software for mobile phones which enables users to communicate with each other through voice messages, videos, pictures and texts for free. Since it was launched in January 2011, it took more than a year to draw 100 million users. By September 2012, the number of users doubled and it hit 300 million in January 2013（第一段描述图表，只需用一句话概括总的变化趋势，然后选取一到两个有代表性的数字即可，切忌把图表的数字全部罗列出来）. Why does Wechat become so popular in such a short time? Firstly, most mobile phones lack the function of voicemail, Wechat's voice message function overcomes this obstacle. Secondly, typing Chinese characters is a troublesome process since users have to type Pinyin from the Roman alphabet and then choose the Chinese character from a list of options. What ’s more, Wechat can help users save money cost on making voice phone calls.

All in all, Wechat, a popular smartphone application which combines messaging with social networking tools, has became a trend for its convenience and low cost.

It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of _______(多少).

What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are_____ (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all _____(第一个原因).

More importantly, ____(第二个原因). Most important of all, _______(第三个原因).

From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken 括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).

As the bar chart shows, _______ during the years of ____ to ______. As early as _________. Then ____ years later, ________________________. And arriving in the year _____, ________________.（第一段：说明图标）

Several factors contribute to __________________. (原因1 and 原因2). Furthermore, (原因3). All

these result in ___________. （第二段：解释图表变化原因）

However, _________________________ is faced with some problems. With ________, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay due attention to _____________, but not just to ________________.（第三段：解决方法）

模板套用：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic People below Poverty Line.

1.下图所示为1978年，1985年1997年中国贫困线以下人口的变化情况，请先描述其变化。

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从改革开放、高科技在生产中的应用等）

3.你认为解决目前中国贫困人口还有什么困难或者问题。

Poverty line (million)

As the bar chart shows, the number of people below the poverty line decreased dramatically during the years of 1978 to 1997. As early as 1978, about 250 million people were under the poverty line. Then seven years later, the number became three fifths that of 1978. And arriving in the year1997, the number was reduced to 50 millions.

Several factors contribute to the sharp decrease of the below-poverty population. The reform and opening following 1978 enabled the peasants to become much better off. And with the development of Chinese economy, that policy also improved city dwe llers’ lives greatly. Furthermore, the high-tech introduced made it possible for the country’s economy as a whole to take off. All these result in the great fall of the Chinese population below the poverty line.

However, a further decrease in the number of poverty-stricken people is faced with some problems. With quite a few employees being laid off, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay due attention to the “newcomers”, but not just to care for the poor, say, in remote mountain areas.

表示举例关系的衔接词

这一类的衔接词是我们最常见的，主要是通过举一系列的论据对主题句中提出的观点进行论证或解释。如下：

for example, for instance, to illustrate,

as follows, in one instance, as an example

thus, that is, suppose,

such as, as an illustration, take＿＿for example

consider＿＿for example, in the case,

a case in point, in other words, especially,

namely

例如：

The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. Only sitting at the desk cannot lead to the mastery of English.

表示因果关系的衔接词

因果关系的衔接词主要用于探讨问题的原因及解决问题的办法，常见的表示因果关系的衔接词有：

because, because of, as a result,

so, thus, consequently,

therefore, for this reason, owing to,

hence, since, due to,

for, thanks to, now that,

result from, contribute to, and result in,

in order to/that in view of, out of,

the cause of, seeing that

例如：

As far as I am concerned, I am really in favor of the test, because it can encourage students to try every means to improve their spoken English, which will benefit them forever. So I decide to make use of every opportunity to practice my spoken English, and I am sure it will do me much good.

表示列举关系的衔接词

这一类的衔接词是四级写作中使用频率很高。不管是要分析原因还是解决问题，都需要有清晰的条理，用一类的衔接词可以使文章更有条理性，使读者更容易理解文章的内容，其相关的衔接词列举如下：

first, second, third,

last, firstly, secondly

thirdly, finally, in addition,

besides, moreover, furthermore,

what is more, then, first and foremost，

to start with, to begin with, first of all,

most importance of all,

例如：

To be successful in a job interview, the interviewee should care about following things. First of all, the applicant ought to be careful of his appearance. His dress should be neat, formal and proper for the occasion. Secondly, he is supposed to display his ability, especially his grasp of professional knowledge required by the position for which he is applying. Last

but not the least important, he must convey a sense of self-confidence in the cause concerned.

表示时间关系的衔接词

这一类的衔接词主要用于记叙文中，按照事情发展的时间顺序进行描写，使文章清晰，明确，表示时间关系的衔接词如下：

at first, then, soon,

later, before, next,

meanwhile, immediately, in the meantime,

finally, former, latter,

afterward, during, until,

subsequently, now, nowadays

earlier, previous, in the end

例如：

Hearing this, we really felt sorry for her. After class, we first bought her some fresh fruits and beautiful flowers, and then went to her dormitory. When we opened the door, we found her asleep, so we just sat around her silently. After a while, our teacher came with a bowl of chicken soup. Just then, Liu jia woke up, after knowing all these, tears came into her eyes.

表示转折关系的衔接词

这一类的衔接词一般用在提出相对立的观点，或者表示强调某一观点。相对应的衔接词如下：

however, in comparison with, nevertheless,

yet, in spite of, while,

on the contrary, in contrast, whereas,

conversely, but,

例如：

Some people, however, regard the test as being unnecessary. Fluent spoken English, they argue, does not necessarily mean a better job; sometimes, opportunity plays a more important role. Many people do not use English at all in their work...

表示比较关系的衔接词

我们可以通过这一类型的衔接词，比较出两个事物的差异和相似点，通过比较，使读者更加明确所介绍之物。表示对比关系的衔接词如下：

although, in contrast, otherwise,

but, nonetheless, instead,

different from, on the contrary, unlike,

meanwhile, even so, less than,

more than, on the other hand, in opposition to

表示类比关系的衔接词如下：

similarly, both…and, as…..as Not only…..but also…，

as if，as though，in the same way,

equally, likewise, similar to

just as, correspond to, both, in like manner

例如：

A job interview is indispensable in the process of job hunting. If a job hunter can make the best use of the interview and leave a good impression on the mind of the interviewer, he may be lucky enough to get the job. If, on the other hand, the job seeker gives a poor performance during the interview, he is unlikely to stand a chance.

表示总结的衔接词

这一类的词语一般用在结尾段落，起到一承上启下的作用。比如：

in brief, in short, in summary,

to sum up, in conclusion, on the whole,

in a word all in all, above all,

generally speaking

例如：

In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest.