2018考研英语【写作押题】第3篇：保护名胜古迹

2018考研英语【写作押题】第3篇：保护名胜古迹

Directions:

Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1. describe the picture briefly,

2. interpret its intended meaning, and then

3. give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

审题与提纲

图画较为复杂，但是各处所传达的信息具有一致性，所以在描述时应先找出主要信息和它们之间的共性，以免描述过于冗杂或者偏离主题。具体而言，图中出现了把双臂吊在树枝上以及坐在树上看风景的行为，也描绘了骑在塑像上拍照玩耍等行为。另外，图中也不乏挥舞折断的树枝、用刀在树上及塑像上刻字等恶劣行为。根据背景信息推断，此处应为观光游览区，而古树和塑像均属历史遗迹。很显然，这些孩子的行为对古迹已然造成了破坏。至此本图的寓意已经清晰可见：控诉人们对旅游景点以及名胜古迹不加爱护和肆意破坏的行为。

第一段：描述图画。图画的细节信息有：孩子们的各种破坏行为以及古树和塑像上的累累伤痕。虽然图中人物行为不一，但性质相同，行文时可重点描述一两个行为，其余简要概括即可。

第二段：揭示寓意，充分延展。首先可点明图画寓意；然后联系实际，以人们熟知的事件为例，论证观点；最后可深层分析现象的原因，为末段的呼吁作铺垫。第三段：总结评论。批判破坏遗迹的行为，呼吁培养保护名胜古迹的意识。

经典模板范文

A couple of young children are playing around a vigorous old tree. One of them is hanging his arms on the tree’s branch, another is sitting on the tree, and someone is even carving it with a knife. Lots of characters are marked on the statue as well. Undoubtedly, what these kids do provides a scene of disharmony, being one of a number of threats to the ancient tree and the statue.

The picture clearly warns us of the problem that many irreplaceable historical relics are damaged by individuals, whether children or adults. Such unpleasant scenes are not uncommon in many tourist attractions nowadays. Two scandals recently made headlines nationwide: a widely publicized case is the graffiti—“Ding Jinhao was here”—etched into Egypt’s ancient Luxor temple; the other is that the copper urn of 300 years in the Forbidden City was carved a heart by a couple to show their affection. Why do such unhappy events continue despite repeated prohibition? One explanation is the lax management and ineffective supervision of the related departments. However, the one deserving special mention is the lack of preservation awareness.

It is a contemptible action to damage the historical relics at the expense of our cultural heritage. For the sake of ourselves and our descendents, relics preservation consciousness must be cultivated and moral education must be promoted.

几个小孩正在围着一棵遒劲的古树玩耍。有人把双臂吊在树枝上，有人坐在树上，

更有甚者拿了一把小刀在树上刻刻画画。旁边的塑像也布满刻痕。毫无疑问，这些小孩的所作所为呈现了一幅非常不和谐的画面，同时也是对古树和雕塑造成的诸多威胁之一。

这幅图清楚地提醒我们注意一个问题：许多无可替代的历史遗迹正被人们（无论小孩或成人）所破坏。如今，此类令人不悦的场景在许多旅游景点屡见不鲜。最近就有两个丑闻登上了报纸头条：一个广为人知的事例是在埃及卢克索神庙里刻着“丁锦昊到此一游”的涂鸦；另一个则是故宫三百年的铜缸被情侣画心刻字“秀恩爱”一事。为什么这样令人不快的事情会屡禁不止呢？一个原因是相关部门管理松懈，监督不力。但是，最值得提及的一点应该是保护意识的缺失。

以文化传承为代价毁坏历史古迹是一种卑劣的行为。为了自己和后代，我们应该培养保护意识，并推行德育。

靓词靓语

relic n.遗迹; 遗物

graffiti n.涂鸦；涂画

etch v.蚀刻；凿出

lax a.松懈的；不严格的

scandal n.丑闻；流言蜚语

at the expense of 以……为代价

disharmony n.不和谐；不一致

attraction n.游览胜地；吸引

contemptible a.卑劣的；可鄙的

for the sake of 为了；为了……的利益

靓句分析

①Undoubtedly, what these kids do provides a scene of disharmony, being one of a number of threats to the ancient tree and the statue.

本句可用来对较多的图画信息进行总结概括。其两大亮点：（1）采用what引导的主语从句，对kids的行为所造成的危害进行了描述，同时使文章句式富于变化；（2）现在分词短语“being one of a number of threats…”作伴随状语置于句末，补充说明kids所做之事的危害。

②Such unpleasant scenes are not uncommon in many tourist attractions nowadays. 本句可用于举例论证，常见的手法是在该句后，辅以具体的事例。下文便以“丁锦昊”和“故宫秀恩爱”两则新闻为例，证明越来越多的人在破坏名胜古迹。本句主语“Such unpleasant scenes”指代上句中的“many irreplaceable historical relics are damaged”，既避免用词重复，又使行文连贯紧凑。同时，not与uncommon 形成双重否定，为简短的表述加强了语气。在举例较多的段落中，使用简短的句子反而能起到意想不到的效果，值得考生借鉴和学习。

③Two scandals recently made headlines nationwide: a widely publicized case is the graffiti—“Ding Jinhao was here”—etched into Egypt’s ancient Luxor temple; the other is that the copper urn of 300 years in the Forbidden City was carved a heart by a couple to show their affection.

本句可用于论证观点时，对两个或多个具有共性的事例进行描述。本句以“Two scandals”开头，同时句中使用分号，将两个事例合并描述，事例一中，作者通过破折号巧妙地引出“graffiti”的具体内容，起到加分效果；事例二中，作者运用被动语态描述动作，并以动词不定式短语“to show their affection”引出动作

的目的，完整地描述事件的同时，又避免了与事例一在句式结构上的重复。

源自《写作160篇》

19考研第一阶段必备书单：

单词：

学渣专用的词汇书：《非常词汇》（660句搞定考研词汇）

如果你不想花太多时间去背单词：那就用《必考词应用全书》（2周就能搞定必考词）

长难句：

闪过英语《长难句闪过》——长难句破解神器

真题：

英语渣渣专用的真题——《考研真相》基础加强版（英语二：考研圣经）