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假如你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长 假如你是李明， 写一封信。内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价 写一封信。内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、 格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批 环境、服务等，可以是表扬， 评建议，也可以兼而有之。 评建议，也可以兼而有之。
Reference: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus
Hale Waihona Puke 信内地址(inside address)
• 这一部分只应用于正式的商业书信，私 这一部分只应用于正式的商业书信，
人信件则可以省去这一部分。包括收信 人信件则可以省去这一部分。 人的姓名、职位和单位地址等。写法也 人的姓名、职位和单位地址等。 遵守“由小到大”的原则。 遵守“由小到大”的原则。
称呼(salutation)
结束语和签名(complimentary
• 结束语写在与正文最后一行相隔一行的右下方，第一个 结束语写在与正文最后一行相隔一行的右下方，
close & signature)
字母大写，末尾要加逗号。 字母大写，末尾要加逗号。 • 商务信件常用的结束语有： 商务信件常用的结束语有：
• • • • • • • • • • Yours sincerely, Sincerely yours, Yours faithfully, Faithfully yours,
Reference: An Application Letter
January 19th, 2008 Dear Sir or Madam, I am Wang Yang, a would-be graduate from Sanjiang University. I am majoring in English. From your job advertisement in the newspaper, I have learned that the human resources department of your company is hunting a qualified individual for a personal secretary to the General Manager. I am fully convinced that I am the right person for the post. I am aware of that the position of the secretary to the General Manager is a demanding profession. However, it is exactly the challenge of the position that attracts me. I’m a lively, responsible and patient person. I have cooperative and initiative spirit. What’s more, I have over two years of secretarial experience. These qualities together with my enthusiasm and devotion to the job will qualify me to be a secretary.
Dec. 25, 2001 Dear Mr. President, I’m Li Ming from the English Department. I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the canteen service on our campus. Generally speaking, the canteen stuff are warmhearted and patient. But there is still some room for improvement. To begin with, the most urgent problem is that the canteen should provide more kinds of dishes. I have noticed that most of our students come from various places and they may not be accustomed to the local food. In addition, the price is a bit higher than we can afford. My proposal is to reduce the price properly. Moreover, since the canteen is extremely crowded at lunchtime, more seats are needed. There should be more service windows to be open to students. Only by doing so, can we save much time in line.
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值得提醒的是，除了最后一种情况，一般在写信使用称谓时， 值得提醒的是，除了最后一种情况，一般在写信使用称谓时， 不管是否写给陌生人或熟人，一定要加Dear。 不管是否写给陌生人或熟人，
正文(body)
• 四级考试中考虑到答卷预留的空间
有限，一般采用缩进式，即：每个 有限，一般采用缩进式， 段落的开头空两格，段落之间没有 段落的开头空两格， 空行。（另一种叫齐头式，指每段 空行。（另一种叫齐头式， 。（另一种叫齐头式 顶格写，段落之间空一行。） 顶格写，段落之间空一行。） • 内容参照题目中所给提纲书写。一 内容参照题目中所给提纲书写。 般来说是3段。不要自己随便发挥。 不要自己随便发挥。
执照） 执照） • 如写完信后，又有补充内容，可 如写完信后，又有补充内容， 以在下方写上 P.S.(postscript)。但正式的 信件应该避免使用这种附言。 信件应该避免使用这种附言。
格式范例
Direction:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
私人信件按与收信人亲疏程度可选用： 私人信件按与收信人亲疏程度可选用：
Affectionately, Fondly, Love, Yours,
签名则位于结束语的正下方。 签名则位于结束语的正下方。
备注
• 另外，若信中还有附件，则要在 另外，若信中还有附件， 信的左下角注明Encl.（ enclosure）或Enc.如： Enc. Drive License（附驾驶
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write An Application Letter. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given below: （Suppose you were Wang Yang. You want to apply for a job as a personal secretary to the General Manager of a trading company. ） 1. 简要介绍自己并提出应征该职位； 简要介绍自己并提出应征该职位； 2. 说明申请该职位的原因； 说明申请该职位的原因； 3. 表达希望被录取的心愿及资质证明。 表达希望被录取的心愿及资质证明。
Jan. 6th, 2002 Dear Mr. President, My name is Li Ming. I am a junior from the Civil Engineering School. I venture to write you a letter about the canteen service on campus. The focus of the complaint is the poor quality and high price of the food. For one thing, the rice is so hard, the steam bread too cold, and vegetables overcooked. For another, the price of the food is so high that many of us go out to dine. Honestly speaking, the canteen service is a little better than before. But the cooking staff need to do the cooking more carefully. Besides, the cost needs to be reduced to lower the price. All in all, there are still much room for improvement. I do hope the service will be much improved very soon. Thank you for your time and kind consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Ming