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全套必备句型语法请参考《最简化》P186 句型点睛 3. The average income of the staff increased by 50 percent compared with last year. 4. During this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. collectively, in total
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G：书信作文 1. 编造时间、地点、人物、事件和原因 2. 要符合常识和逻辑，合情合理 3. 内容平衡，主体为3段，每段视句子的复杂性写3-4 句话 4. 注意词汇和语法从句的多样性 5. 正确的书信体格式
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Dear Taufik and Lina, I am writing this letter to thank you for sending me these beautiful photos. They are so vivid and remind me of those exciting days and nights with you guys in Sydney. I would say that it was the most wonderful holiday I’ve ever had thanks to your hospitality.
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线性图 特点：单曲线和多曲线，趋势明显。 解题思路：各曲线起点、终点、拐点数值，变化趋势。 两曲线交点说明。描述对比结果。 surpassed, took over, caught up with
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Thanks for your kindness and I’m looking forward for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Victor
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Score 5 The examiner’s comment: This answer does not cover the bullets well because there are no thanks for the holiday and giving the address is not logical in the context. The second bullet is given rather too much focus, so the purpose of this letter is less clear, and the tone is inappropriate at the end of the letter…
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《剑6》p98 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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A: 图表作文 Bar graph Line graph Pie graph Table Mixed graphs Flowchart Map
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The graph shows/illustrates the changes of …
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IELTS Writing Lecture 3
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《剑7》 P53 The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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全套必备句型语法请参考《最简化》P186 句型点睛 5. In the first quarter of this year Apple witnessed an increase of 30 per cent in net profit. 6. … saw an upward/downward/opposite trend, (increasing) from… to… （showed/saw/witnessed）
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图表作文五大忌 • • • • • 没有数字极值 没有趋势对比 没有结论 议论因果 没有从句
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全套必备句型语法请参考《最简化》P186 复杂句点睛 1. According to the table which clearly highlights the difference conditions between 1990 and 1995, … 2. Compared with A that…, B… 3. While/Although A…, …. 4. …, (which was) flowed by B which accounted for 25%. 5. It is clear that…
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全套必备句型语法请参考《最简化》P186 句型点睛 1. The number of male smokers decreased from 21% in 1960 to 17% in 2000. 2. The number of A skyrocketed, reaching the peak at 100 in1998. 改写：
According to the graph, …
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As can be seen from the graph which clearly highlights…, … In conclusion, …
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全套必备句型语法请参考《最简化》P186 词汇点睛 illustrate Likewise, Conversely By comparison, Increased, decreased, fluctuated, remained stable
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Dear Taufik and Lina, I’m so glad receiving your photos when we were in Singapore. The photos are so nice and bright. They remind me for my special holiday with you. I’m sorry because I don’t write a letter to you as soon as possible. After I came back to Melbourne, my boss asked me to had two weeks training in wellington, New Zealand. I don’t have any time to tell you because it happened suddenly.
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Lecture 1 : Task 1, G & A
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G：书信作文 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter • Thank them for the photos and for the holiday • Explain why you didn’t write earlier • Invite them to come and stay with you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………,
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My company wants to change the system of the computer into the online system. All of the staffs must have training first, before the system running. I hope you can come and stray with me during next holiday. My address is: 888 Little Collins Street, Melbourne, Victoria, 3000. You can contact me first if you have a plan to visit.
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全套必备句型语法请参考《最简化》P186 句型点睛 7. There was a downward trend of male smokers, from 21% in 1960 to 17% in 2000. 8. Male smokers accounted for 21% of American adults in 1960.