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英语读写任务写作的步骤
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二、概括原文观点:转述作者的论点,论据和结论;
三、提出自己观点:赞成或反对,观点要鲜明,不能自相矛盾;
四、论证自己观点:用事例论证自己的观点;
五、得出结论:
表示时间顺序的:First,later,next,then,finally,before,after,soon,previously,immediately,formerly原来,subsequently随后,meanwhile,presently目前,initially最初,ultimately最后,
表示举例的:Forexample,forinstance,suchas,
表示列举的':And,firstly,second,third,last,another,next,finally,furthermore
表示补充的:Also,inaddition,and,further,another,aswellas,besides,too,either,
表示比较或反差的:比较类like,likewise,similarly,as,atthesametime,aswellas,incomparison,both,all
反差类ontheotherhand,incontrast,however,but,inspiteof,despite,nevertheless,onthecontrary,instead,rather,though,yet,regardless,although,unlike,eventhough,whereas,
表示强调的:Importanttonote,most,aboveall,especiallyvaluable,acentralissue,especiallyrelevant,shouldbenoted,themostsubstantialissue,rememberthat,amajorevent,theprincipalitem,payparticularattentionto,
thechieffactor,mostofall,asignificantfactor,aprimaryconcern,akeyfeature,themainvalue,
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