对比选择-分析利弊型

对比选择之分析利弊

分析利弊作文适用的提纲一般是先要求分析某一事物“利”的一面（如优点、好处、作用或目的），然后要求分析该事物“弊”的一面（如缺点、害处、副作用或问题），最后还会要求谈谈个人对该事物的看法。

行文思路：

第一段：分析优点或好处。首先总体描述一下要谈论的中心事物，然后引出对其“利”的分析，一般写两到三点。分析时要注意客观性。

第二段：分析缺点或危害。首句注意承上启下，转到对“弊”的分析。分析“弊”时注意客观性，一般写两点，不要写太多，最好不要超过优点。

第三段：说明个人看法或提出建议。一般先总体上肯定该事物，然后提醒注意事项，最后还可提出建议或希望。也可谈谈个人亲身体会，这时也要注意总体上对该事物的肯定。

模板学习：

模板示例:

Direction：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a

short easy entitled Online

Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: (2011-06)

1) 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚；

2）网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题；

3）我的建议

Online Shopping

Nowadays, shopping on the Internet has become a fashion in many cities, and it is especially among college students and white-collars. There is no doubt that online shopping has many advantages. Above all, it can save time for those busy with their work or studies. With a few clicks （鼠标点击几下）, they can get whatever they want without stepping out of the room. In addition, many online stores give discounts, so we can save much money. (说明优点段)

As every coin has two sides, online shopping also has some disadvantages. For one thing, customers can’t touch, smell or taste what they want, so they don’t feel certain about their choice. Even worse, it is less reliable and trustworthy（可靠可信）compared with face-to-face shopping.（说明缺点段）

Weighing the advantages and disadvantages, I think related laws should be regulated（制定相关法律）to prohibit cheating. Undoubtedly, online shopping has become an irresistible trend（不可阻挡的潮流）in our society. But it is worth noting that some unscrupulous（不讲道德的）merchants provide fake commodities（假冒伪劣商品）to cheat us of money. To conclude, we

（提出建议段）

模板范文2 ：

1. Direction：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short easy entitled Advantages and Disadvantages of Cell Phone. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: (2011-06)

1) 手机的好处；

2）手机的弊端；

3）我的看法。

范文：

Nowadays, with the rapid development of IT, cell phones play a more and more important role in people’s life. But, like everything else, they have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. First, it’s useful. As a wireless mobile telephone, it’s easy and handy to carry it wherever one goes and call the person however far away he is. Therefore, it greatly facilitates people’s life. Second, it’s convenient. Whenever one meets trouble or something urgent, one can make a call immediately. Most important of all, it’s a very helpful companion. With a multifunction cell phone in hand, one can easily get on the net, browsing the useful information, conducting e-commerce and doing whatever one can do via Internet.

However, just as everything has two sides, the cell phone also has many disadvantages. To begin with, it’s expensive to buy and costly to pay the bills, especially that of global service. To make matter worse, it’s also easy to lose and costly to get it repaired. Worst of all, it’s not as clear as a family telephone and sometimes the number dialed is often not available. Last but not least, it’s alleged（被指称的）that the micro-waves in it might do harm to people’s health.

In my opinion, with its expenses greatly reduced after China’s entry into the WTO（中国加入世贸组织）, someday most of them will be developed into new Internet-enabled mobile phones, which will be as useful as pocket computers. And I believe its advantages will not only offset（抵消）its disadvantages, but also far outweigh them.

作业：

Direction：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short easy entitled Advantages and

Disadvantages of Electronic Dictionaries. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

作文号：408914

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