高中英语2020届二轮复习 书面表达高分必备：2.1 高考应用文写作高分技巧 学案

2020

届二轮复习书面表达高分必备：

2.1 高考应用文写作高分技巧学案

二、高考必须掌握的3类写作技巧

1. 高考应用文写作高分技巧

类型一邀请信

(2019·全国卷Ⅲ改编) 假如你是李华, 你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的朋友Allen参加, 内容包括:

1. 时间;

2. 活动安排;

3. 欢迎他表演节目。

注意:1. 词数80左右

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

练考场审题

Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局

人称I (Li Hua), You(Allen)

时态一般现在时, 一般将来时

段落布局开头点题:点明写作目的, 并表达问候

主题段落:此次活动的内容和目的, 并希望Allen表演节目结尾:再一次真诚邀请

Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉

(1)美词:aim at, enrich, promote, be involved in, issue the certificate, highlight, confirm

(2)佳句:①Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized, such as National Costume Show, Chinese Traditional Instrument display and Classical Chinese Plays Performing, and so on.

②I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival.

Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花

要点1:音乐节安排在下周的周一到周五, 在礼堂举行。

一般表达:The festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium.

词汇或句式升级:(分词作状语以及定语从句)

旨在丰富学生的学校生活, 促进传统文化, 我们将举办音乐节, 节

日安排在下周一到周五的礼堂举行, 届时将组织各种各样的活动。Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized.

要点2:音乐节的末尾, 我们希望您能表演节目, 并为获奖者颁发证书。

一般表达:At the end of the festival, we’d like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates

to the winners.

升级表达:音乐节的末尾, 我们希望您能表演节目, 并为获奖者颁发

证书。相信您的到场和参与将会成为音乐节最精彩的部分。

At the end of the festival, we’d like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival.

Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇

Dear Allen,

How are you doing? I’m writing to invite you to join us

in the Music Festival to be held in our school. I feel honored

if you are present.

Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized, such as National Costume Show, Chinese Traditional Instrument

display and Classical Chinese Plays Performing, and so on. At the end of the festival, we’d like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners.

I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival.

Would you please confirm your participation at your convenience? I genuinely hope that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us.

Yours,

Li Hua

假定你是李华, 想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸

(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括:

1. 展览时间、地点;

2. 展览内容。

注意:1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

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Dear Henry

I’m Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.

The exhibition, whose theme is “beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club’s works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.

I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I’m sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

类型二建议信

(2018·全国卷Ⅰ) 假定你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,

发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括:

1. 到达时间;

2. 合适的礼物;

3. 餐桌礼仪。

注意:1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

练考场审题

Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局

类型建议信

人称第二人称(you)

时态一般现在时

要点①欢迎到中国做客, 愿意提供建议

②到访(朋友家)时间

③餐桌礼仪

Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉

(1)美词:the time to arrive, the appointed time, the suitable presents, table manners.

(2)佳句:I am very glad to hear that you will come to China for

a visit.

It’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on the Chinese customs about visiting.

Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花

要点1:得知你要来中国朋友家做客, 真是太好了。

一般表达:It’s great to hear you’re invited to a Chinese friend’s home.

→很高兴得知你将来中国朋友家做客, 并且想了解有关访友的中国

习俗。(增加细节)

It’s so great to hear you’re invited to a Chinese friend’s home and want to know the Chinese custom about visiting. →很荣幸可以与你分享我的经历和介绍相关的中国传统与风俗。(高级句型)

It is a great honor to share my experience and introduce the relevant Chinese custom and tradition to you.

要点2:首先, 到达时间要准时或稍微早一点。

一般表达:Firstly, make sure to arrive on time, or a bit earlier.

→根据中国传统, 比约定时间早到5至10分钟比较好, 准时到达也可以。(高级句型)

According to Chinese tradition, it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on time.

要点3:希望你在中国玩得愉快.

I hope you can enjoy your stay in China.

Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇

Dear Terry,

It’s so great to hear you’re invited to a Chinese friend’s home and want to know something about Chinese customs.

Firstly, according to Chinese tradition, it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on time. If you’d like to bring a gift, fruit is usually a good choice. At the dinner table, it is appropriate to wait for the elderly people in the family to start eating. But if they insist that you start first, just go ahead. Sometimes the host offers guests more food than they need. In that case, it’s OK to let them know you are full.

I hope you can enjoy your stay in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

假定你是李华, 你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信, 内容主要包括:

1. 说明你是该报的忠实读者;

2. 赞赏该报优点:兼顾国内外新闻, 介绍名人成功故事;

3. 提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章。

注意:

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

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【参考范文】

Dear editor-in-chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.

As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

类型三道歉信

(2016·全国卷Ⅲ改编) 假定你是李华, 与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店, 因故不能

赴约。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括:

1. 表示歉意;

2. 说明原因;

3. 另约时间。

注意:1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局

人称I (Li Hua), You(Bob)

时态一般现在时, 一般将来时

段落布局开头点题:点明写作目的, 并表达歉意主题段落:说明致歉的原因

结尾:再次致歉, 并另约时间

Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉

(1)美词:express my heartfelt apology;represent our school to do;available;as a result

(2)佳句:①I can’t go with you as planned.

②I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.

③How about going to the bookstore this Sunday.

Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花

要点1:很抱歉无法跟你一起去书店。

一般表达:I’m sorry that I can’t go with you to the bookstore.

句式升级(高级词汇, 名词性从句, 分词作状语)

我诚挚地向你道歉, 这周五不能按计划和你去书店了。

I have to express my heartfelt apology to you that I can’t go with you to the bookstore this Friday as planned.

要点2:我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛。

一般表达:I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition.

句式升级(定语从句, for引导的并列句)

我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛, 这对我非常重要, 因为我一直梦

想有这样的机会代表我校参赛, 展示我们的实力。

I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school.

要点3:这个周的周日如何?那时你是否有时间呢?

一般表达:How about going to the bookstore this Sunday? Will you be available then?

句式升级(高级词汇, 意趣盎然)

Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?

Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇

Dear Bob,

How are you doing? I’m indeed very sorry that I can’t go to the bookstore with you this Friday as planned.

How I wish I could go with you! However, I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of great importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school. As a result, I have to miss our appointment.

Please accept my sincere apology from the bottom of my heart. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

假如你是育才中学的学生李华, 昨天你在英语课上做数学作业

被英语老师Miss Cheng发现了, 你的数学书被英语老师收走了。请

用英语给英语老师写一封道歉信, 内容应包括以下要点:

1. 向老师道歉;

2. 解释上课为什么做数学作业;

3. 提出自己的请求并作出保证。

注意:

1. 词数80左右, 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

Dear Miss Cheng,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua 【参考范文】

Dear Miss Cheng,

I sincerely apologize to you for doing maths homework in your class. I would appreciate it if you could forgive me.

Having been caught doing other things in your class, I know any excuse may be meaningless. However, I did so because

my mother happened to fall ill yesterday and I had to send her to hospital and look after her by myself, for my father is a migrant worker working far away. As you know, the next class would be maths. If I couldn’t finish my maths homework before it, I would be severely punished.

Anyway doing other things in class is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will never happen again. But I do need my maths book back.

Will you be so kind as to give it back to me? Thanks a lot.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

类型四感谢信

(2019·浙江高考改编) 假定你是李华, 经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己

的国家。请你写一封邮件, 内容包括:

1. 表示感谢;

2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;

3. 临别祝愿。

注意:

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

练考场审题

Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局

人称I(Li Hua), You(Alex)

时态一般过去时, 一般现在时

段落布局开头点题:点明写作目的, 感谢对方帮助主题段落:具体指出曾经的帮助

结尾:再次表达感谢, 给出临别祝愿

Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉

(1)美词: have difficulty in, under your patient guidance, not only. . . but also. . . , generous

(2)佳句

①I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English.

②It is you who taught me how to learn English well.

③Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning.

Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花

要点1:你教给我如何学英语。

一般表达:You taught me how to learn English.

句式升级 (强调句)

是你教给我如何学英语。

It is you who taught me how to learn English.

要点2:你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。

一般表达:You helped improve my English and gave me more confidence in learning.

句式升级 (倒装句)

你不但帮助我提高了英语, 并且给了我更多学习的自信。

Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning.

Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇

Dear Alex,

I’ve heard that you’re leaving China soon, so I’m writing to express my sincere blessing and thanks.

I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty

in learning English. It is you who taught me how to learn English. Under your patient guidance, I gradually made progress and began interested in English. Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning. Thanks again for your generous help.

Wish you a pleasant journey home.

Yours,

Li Hua

假设你是李华, 梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造, 现在

你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取, 请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。

1. 表示感谢;

2. 感谢原因;

3. 如何回报。

注意:1. 词数80左右;

2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

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【参考范文】

Dear Professor Liang,

I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.

Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. Not only did you write commendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University, but also gave me careful

and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters.

It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.

Yours,

Li Hua

类型五申请信

(2019·全国卷Ⅰ) 假定你是李华, 暑假在伦敦学习, 得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者, 内容包括:

1. 写信目的;

2. 个人优势;

3. 能做的事情。

注意:1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

练考场审题

Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局

人称I(Li Hua), Sir/Madam

时态一般现在时, 一般将来时

开头点题:问候并说明写信的原因及目的

段落布局

主题段落:分两点阐述为什么申请做志愿者:个人优势;能做的事

情

结尾:衷心的祝愿

Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉

(1)美词:apply for position, be qualified for, as follows, specific introduction, furthermore, share. . . with. . .

(2)佳句

①I have heard the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held, and I’m writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position.

②The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows.

③Furthermore, I can speak fluent Chinese and English at the same time, which makes it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world.

④If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.

Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花

要点1:我有一些胜任这份工作的原因。

一般表达:I have some reasons to be qualified for the job.

句式升级(定语从句)

我胜任这份工作的原因如下。

The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows.

要点2:如果你们给我这份工作, 我将尽最大努力去帮助参观者。

一般表达:If you give me this job, I will do my best to help the visitors.

句式升级(被动语态, 虚拟语气)

如果我能被选为志愿者, 我有能力去帮助参观者理解绘画作品, 并

与他们分享在绘画后面的历史。

If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.

Step 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇

Dear sir/ Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student having education in London now. I have heard the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held, and I’m writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position.

The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows. Firstly, I have had an interest in Chinese painting ever since

I was a child. As a result, I am familiar with this art form and can give very specific introduction to the visitors. Furthermore, I can speak fluent Chinese and English at the same time, which makes it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world.

If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history