考研英语-高分写作范例

Writing A

I have to complain about (make a complaint about) the poor quality of the e-dictionaries sold by your online stores during the double 11, which can't be charged at all. I don't think it's the damage caused by my use (I don’t think it’s my faulty to break it when using). It should be the product quality problem and you should be responsible for it.

Here I have two appeals: one is to repair it and mail it to me within 7 days; the other is to replace it with a new one or refund it to me. I reserve the right to sue.

In addition, don't explain too much if you don't have a better solution. Please dispose it as soon as possible.

我不得不抱怨你们网上商店在“双11”期间销售的电子词典质量不好，根本不能充电。我不认为是我的使用造成的损害。这应该是产品质量问题，你应该对此负责。

这里我有两个诉求：一个是修好后7天内寄给我；另一个是换新的或者退给我。我保留起诉的权利。

另外，如果没有更好的解决方案，不要解释太多。请尽快处理。

Dear john,

I would like to study aboard in your country next month, but an apartment has not been found. May you share your apartment with me?

As you known, my old friend, I am an optimistic person without any bad habits. Usually, I will get up earlier and do some morning exercise outdoor when it is a studying day. Don’t be worried it disturb you if you want to enjoy a good morning sleep without course.

If impossible, please give me some help to find a proper residence no matter how much it would be paid, because you are better familiar with this city than a new man. I’m sure you will sent me some advices based on study conveniently and live comfortably.

Thanks a lot.

Sincerely LiMing 亲爱的约翰，

我想下个月在贵国留学，但还没有找到公寓。你能和我合租你的公寓吗？

如你所知，我的老朋友，我是一个乐观的人，没有任何坏习惯。通常，在学习日，我会早起在户外做早操。如果你想在没有课程的情况下睡个好觉，不要担心它会打扰你。

如果不可能的话，请帮我找一个合适的住处，不管要付多少钱，因为你对这个城市比一个新人更熟悉。我相信你会在方便学习和舒适生活的基础上给我一些建议。

谢谢。

诚恳的李明

Notice

The student union of our university will organize a camping activity for all students, aiming to broaden their horizons and enhance their practical experience. The camping destination is Butterfly Valley in the countryside, which starts on June 15 and ends on June 20, and the theme of this activity is Loving Nature and Life.

In the activity, different kinds of subprojects, such as group competition, singing and dancing performance, reading meeting and so on, will be arranged. Due to the large scale of the activity, there will be students from other universities and even foreign students, so we hope that students will actively sign up for volunteer service, especially those who are good at English interpretation and have a lively and cheerful personality.

If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.

我校学生会将为全体学生组织一次野营活动，旨在开阔视野，提高实践经验。野营目的地为乡村蝴蝶谷，6月15日开始，6月20日结束，活动主题为热爱自然、热爱生活。

在活动中，将安排不同种类的子项目，如团体比赛、歌舞表演、读书会等。由于活动规模较大，会有其他高校的学生，甚至有留学生，因此希望学生积极报名志愿服务，特别是那些擅长英语口译、性格活泼开朗的学生。

如果您有任何问题，请立即联系我们。

Writing B

More and more Chinese people immigrate from villages, where they live for generations, to cities, which is considered as a promising new way of life.

According to the chart,the urban population is close to the agricultural population in 2010, compared with the number, 20 years ago, the rural population was nearly three times of the urban population. Meanwhile, it is obvious that the urban population has grown rapidly from 300 million to 600 million in 20 years, but little growth in rural population.

Obviously, the whole country is modernizing through rapid urbanization. One reasons is that those who want to live a better life rather than live in poverty are constantly pursuing their dreams. At the same time, with the change of the social population structure in our country, important issues such as population crowding, insufficient health and education are also placed in front of the urban managers.

Finally, the growth rate of urban population is expected to slow down in future.

越来越多的中国人从世代居住的村庄移民到城市，这被认为是一种有前途的新生活方式。

从图表上看，2010年城镇人口接近农业人口，与之相比，20年前，农村人口是城镇人口的近3倍。同时，20年来，我国城镇人口从3亿迅速增长到6亿，但农村人口增长缓慢。

很明显，整个国家正在通过快速城市化实现现代化。一个原因是，那些想要过上更好生活而不是生活在贫困中的人不断追求自己的梦想。同时，随着我国社会人口结构的变化，人口拥挤、健康和教育不足等重要问题也摆在城市管理者面前。

最后，未来城市人口增长速度有望放缓。

The above pie chart provides some interesting data regarding the family expense of urban residents during Spring Festival in our country. As is shown above, during the festival, families spend 40% of their total spending on gifts, which is equal to the sum of the spending on Party meals and transportation, which are the same proportion.The remaining 20% is spent on other aspects, such as travel and daily expenses.

Obviously, three reasons led to the most expense used for buying presents. First, Chinese people are changing their lifestyle and more likely to enjoy a lifestyle of communication during holidays. What’s more, in many people’s eyes, giving others gifts is a necessary way for emotional expression. In addition,thanks to the rapid development of the economy, Chinese families have more disposable income and spend more on gifts.

Of course, there are still many families who follow the tradition: They prefer to return home during the Spring Festival, reunite with their families and spend dinner together, so that the proportion of them in transportation, party and dinner is still large.

In short, the above data, like a mirror, almost truly reflects the changes of household consumption structure after the increase of residents' income, which is also a miniature of China's economic development.

上面的饼图提供了一些关于我国城市居民在春节期间家庭支出的有趣数据。如上图所示，节日期间，家庭花在礼物上的费用占总开支的40%，这相当于花在宴会和交通上的费用之和，两者的比例相同。剩下的20%用于其他方面，如旅费和日常开支。

显然，有三个原因导致了花在买礼物上的花费最多。首先，中国人正在改变他们的生活方式，而且更有可能通过交流去享受生活方式。其次，在很多人看来，送礼是表达情感的一种必要方式。此外，由于经济的快速发展，中国家庭有更多的可支配收入，可在送礼上花费更多。

当然，仍有许多家庭遵循这一传统。他们更愿意春节回家，与家人团聚，一起吃饭，这就导致在交通、聚会、晚餐上的比例依然很大。

总之，上述数据如同一面镜子，几乎真实地反映了居民收入增加后家庭消费结构的变化，这也是中国经济发展的一个缩影。